Comments received on poems by Friendship
The unkown letter.
Neville said:
Filled with feeling .. this is a song of longing .. a true mourning song .. and so sadly enjoyed .. Neville
August 7th, 2025 05:41
Neville said:
Filled with feeling .. this is a song of longing .. a true mourning song .. and so sadly enjoyed .. Neville
August 7th, 2025 05:41
The unkown letter.
Cheeky Missy said:
Rhymed couplets with a choppy rhythm which some editing could perfect in a trice. An idea which doubtless must resonate with many as mothers are an integral part of every last one of us. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a mournful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 20:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Rhymed couplets with a choppy rhythm which some editing could perfect in a trice. An idea which doubtless must resonate with many as mothers are an integral part of every last one of us. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and a mournful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 20:03
The unkown letter.
peto said:
A tremendous tribute to a much loved mum
Poetically it is bang on rhyme flow etc
But
It\'s the feeling that sets it apart
You did her proud
August 5th, 2025 12:13
peto said:
A tremendous tribute to a much loved mum
Poetically it is bang on rhyme flow etc
But
It\'s the feeling that sets it apart
You did her proud
August 5th, 2025 12:13
The unkown letter.
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest, touching and heartfelt write over the strong feeling of loss that cannot be regained. The pain and hurt still haunt the vivid memories of the past, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest, touching and heartfelt write over the strong feeling of loss that cannot be regained. The pain and hurt still haunt the vivid memories of the past, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 10:26
The unkown letter.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a loss felt set so well in poetic rhyme and meter. A travail of pain and hurt that resurrects from the memories of the past. Shadows haunt this poem and leave only lost echoes of the familiar. A sad cry for return to the familiar. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a loss felt set so well in poetic rhyme and meter. A travail of pain and hurt that resurrects from the memories of the past. Shadows haunt this poem and leave only lost echoes of the familiar. A sad cry for return to the familiar. Nicely written
August 5th, 2025 09:56
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
What a beautiful declaration of love for a kindhearted, patient and loving gentleman. You reminisce eloquently in the language of poetry. Gladdens the heart, such an outpouring of affection. It was an honour to read and a joy to wallow in. Beautiful.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:45
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
What a beautiful declaration of love for a kindhearted, patient and loving gentleman. You reminisce eloquently in the language of poetry. Gladdens the heart, such an outpouring of affection. It was an honour to read and a joy to wallow in. Beautiful.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:45
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
Dan Williams said:
What a tribute to our humans sometimes forgotten true legacy. \"A faultless stone, a strong and quiet scene.\' brings to mind my brother, also wonderful friend. Thanks for this.
August 5th, 2025 01:56
Dan Williams said:
What a tribute to our humans sometimes forgotten true legacy. \"A faultless stone, a strong and quiet scene.\' brings to mind my brother, also wonderful friend. Thanks for this.
August 5th, 2025 01:56
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
Neville said:
this felt so real I\'m pretty sure it must be .. having said that, I don\'t think because I instinctively know you are both lucky to have each other ..
August 4th, 2025 13:19
Neville said:
this felt so real I\'m pretty sure it must be .. having said that, I don\'t think because I instinctively know you are both lucky to have each other ..
August 4th, 2025 13:19
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
peto said:
An epic write
Loved the rhyme message and gratitude flowing from it
Your brother from another mother is also lucky to have his sis
August 4th, 2025 12:46
peto said:
An epic write
Loved the rhyme message and gratitude flowing from it
Your brother from another mother is also lucky to have his sis
August 4th, 2025 12:46
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and almost intoxicatingly so, rendered with a haunting suggestion of rhythm and rhyming, yet so deliciously burdened with a passionate sense of closeness and love, it seems practically hallowed. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 10:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and almost intoxicatingly so, rendered with a haunting suggestion of rhythm and rhyming, yet so deliciously burdened with a passionate sense of closeness and love, it seems practically hallowed. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 10:32
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of appreciation and love for a sibling who has always been there for them, I love the fixing of the doll section, that says so much, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of appreciation and love for a sibling who has always been there for them, I love the fixing of the doll section, that says so much, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:25
He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of gratitude so well set in verse and meter. It speaks in softness and recognition of caring in the human condition. Words of peace from a wounded heart mended by the glue of someone that just wants to see a smile on a child\'s face. Recognition that one is not alone is the first step to growth. A wonderful poem and a fave.
August 4th, 2025 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of gratitude so well set in verse and meter. It speaks in softness and recognition of caring in the human condition. Words of peace from a wounded heart mended by the glue of someone that just wants to see a smile on a child\'s face. Recognition that one is not alone is the first step to growth. A wonderful poem and a fave.
August 4th, 2025 06:13
I am who I am!
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The fear of the unknown behind a powerful smile, as if the Joan of Arc of poetry, herself was smiling at you. Exceedingly formidable and yet charming at the same time. I love it, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:23
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The fear of the unknown behind a powerful smile, as if the Joan of Arc of poetry, herself was smiling at you. Exceedingly formidable and yet charming at the same time. I love it, truly.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:23
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
Kayla Jackson said:
Powerful and Beautiful, I love it!!
August 3rd, 2025 20:58
Kayla Jackson said:
Powerful and Beautiful, I love it!!
August 3rd, 2025 20:58
trust !
Cheeky Missy said:
The title inherent to your chosen username baffles me now since I fail to see how it played out in the piece which took me down fantasy lane to drop me off theoretically in a field of wildflowers. Fascinating. Prettily rendered with curious imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:27
Cheeky Missy said:
The title inherent to your chosen username baffles me now since I fail to see how it played out in the piece which took me down fantasy lane to drop me off theoretically in a field of wildflowers. Fascinating. Prettily rendered with curious imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:27
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
Bella Shepard said:
She is the Woman of the Modern Era, and you capture her brilliantly in these wondrfully, flowing lines, along with sculpted head. Outstanding work!
August 3rd, 2025 11:09
Bella Shepard said:
She is the Woman of the Modern Era, and you capture her brilliantly in these wondrfully, flowing lines, along with sculpted head. Outstanding work!
August 3rd, 2025 11:09
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of statement if strength , I feel the title tells you all you need to know, beware, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:04
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write of statement if strength , I feel the title tells you all you need to know, beware, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:04
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of resilience and determination. A statement of strength. Words well chosen that convey the steadfastness of experience tempered in the fires of adversity. Some great lines here: (She’s stitched her wounds in silence, She’s fluent in absence, Validation? She grew it in her garden, watered it with patience, harvested it with her own hands0 Very nicely stated. The theme of the poem as I read it is one of independence and an unyielding sense of not being willing to change to accommodate others. I would not say contentment in isolation but rather acceptance and an unwillingness to bend. A fave
August 3rd, 2025 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem of resilience and determination. A statement of strength. Words well chosen that convey the steadfastness of experience tempered in the fires of adversity. Some great lines here: (She’s stitched her wounds in silence, She’s fluent in absence, Validation? She grew it in her garden, watered it with patience, harvested it with her own hands0 Very nicely stated. The theme of the poem as I read it is one of independence and an unyielding sense of not being willing to change to accommodate others. I would not say contentment in isolation but rather acceptance and an unwillingness to bend. A fave
August 3rd, 2025 07:40
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
peto said:
You are a great writer
The strength in this is inspiring
This woman knows herself inside out
And wont suffer fools gladly
\"And walk soft and sure back to herself \" superb line among many
Yet somehow I see her softer side in this as well
Another fave
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
peto said:
You are a great writer
The strength in this is inspiring
This woman knows herself inside out
And wont suffer fools gladly
\"And walk soft and sure back to herself \" superb line among many
Yet somehow I see her softer side in this as well
Another fave
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
RSM0812 said:
A well written piece. The words were poetical and chosen well. I think there is definitely advice here. Great job.
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
RSM0812 said:
A well written piece. The words were poetical and chosen well. I think there is definitely advice here. Great job.
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
I am who I am!
Poetic Licence said:
That is to the point and beautiful, and just the way it should be, leaving them wandering what\'s behind the smile,enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 12:30
Poetic Licence said:
That is to the point and beautiful, and just the way it should be, leaving them wandering what\'s behind the smile,enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 12:30
I am who I am!
Neville said:
This is a proper little gem ma\'am if you don\'t mind me saying so .. it shines .. Neville
August 2nd, 2025 09:37
Neville said:
This is a proper little gem ma\'am if you don\'t mind me saying so .. it shines .. Neville
August 2nd, 2025 09:37
I am who I am!
Salvia.S said:
This is so relatable... Very nicely expressed!!!
August 2nd, 2025 08:36
Salvia.S said:
This is so relatable... Very nicely expressed!!!
August 2nd, 2025 08:36
I am who I am!
peto said:
Made me smile reading
A bit different from what I expected from you
Every bit as good
Dangerous and talented
August 2nd, 2025 08:06
peto said:
Made me smile reading
A bit different from what I expected from you
Every bit as good
Dangerous and talented
August 2nd, 2025 08:06
I am who I am!
sorenbarrett said:
Short and pointed.A great poem that leaves a question. Ah! What\'s behind that smile?
August 2nd, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
Short and pointed.A great poem that leaves a question. Ah! What\'s behind that smile?
August 2nd, 2025 07:57
Going home soon.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The pangs of hunger, so, too, loneliness, to suffer and yet, head held high with neither let nor hinder. The power of the feminine heart can at times be overwhelming as is the case with this special lady as she graces herself with dignity to meet her maker. A heart touching tale composed with compassion and admiration. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 2nd, 2025 05:21
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The pangs of hunger, so, too, loneliness, to suffer and yet, head held high with neither let nor hinder. The power of the feminine heart can at times be overwhelming as is the case with this special lady as she graces herself with dignity to meet her maker. A heart touching tale composed with compassion and admiration. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 2nd, 2025 05:21
Going home soon.
orchidee said:
Godo write F.
If it had been about you, I would have said, being daft: You gone home yet? lol.
August 2nd, 2025 02:25
orchidee said:
Godo write F.
If it had been about you, I would have said, being daft: You gone home yet? lol.
August 2nd, 2025 02:25
Going home soon.
Poetic Licence said:
This is a really beautiful heart touching write of the internal suffering and sacrifices many make even in today\'s world, in order to survive.a person of immense strength and resilliance on the outside, while on the inside hurting and wishing it was different, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 00:49
Poetic Licence said:
This is a really beautiful heart touching write of the internal suffering and sacrifices many make even in today\'s world, in order to survive.a person of immense strength and resilliance on the outside, while on the inside hurting and wishing it was different, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 00:49
Going home soon.
peto said:
I love how you can see passed what is presented in front of you
And get to what is really going on
That is the artist in you
Beautifully delivered
Stunning writing
August 1st, 2025 19:10
peto said:
I love how you can see passed what is presented in front of you
And get to what is really going on
That is the artist in you
Beautifully delivered
Stunning writing
August 1st, 2025 19:10
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