Comments received on poems by Friendship
Silent Scrolls\" I don\'t care, I\'m always gonna shine.
orchidee said:
And some don\'t even allow comments from us. Let them get on with it, I say!
Meanwhile, I\'m too busy on my ego trip, \'Liking\' my own poems. Am I really?! lol. We can do it if we must, but can only do it one time per poem. We get caught out, as if we try to \'like\' a poem twice, it deletes one of the \'likes\' - if you follow all this waffle?!
January 4th, 2026 09:45
orchidee said:
And some don\'t even allow comments from us. Let them get on with it, I say!
Meanwhile, I\'m too busy on my ego trip, \'Liking\' my own poems. Am I really?! lol. We can do it if we must, but can only do it one time per poem. We get caught out, as if we try to \'like\' a poem twice, it deletes one of the \'likes\' - if you follow all this waffle?!
January 4th, 2026 09:45
Silent Scrolls\" I don\'t care, I\'m always gonna shine.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s strength in how calmly you name this and move on. Good for you. This brought a major smile to my face. I have been blocked in the past as well. It happens and, honestly, I love that you chose to be curious, name it, wipe it off your shoulders, and creatively express your moving on from it. And yes, this poem will be here year after year LOVE IT! The poem speaks for itself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, there’s strength in how calmly you name this and move on. Good for you. This brought a major smile to my face. I have been blocked in the past as well. It happens and, honestly, I love that you chose to be curious, name it, wipe it off your shoulders, and creatively express your moving on from it. And yes, this poem will be here year after year LOVE IT! The poem speaks for itself. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:44
Silent Scrolls\" I don\'t care, I\'m always gonna shine.
Thomas W Case said:
I felt this. The mix of admiration and exasperation lands hard—real talk about the walls we build.
January 4th, 2026 09:30
Thomas W Case said:
I felt this. The mix of admiration and exasperation lands hard—real talk about the walls we build.
January 4th, 2026 09:30
Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is absurd, affectionate, and surprisingly well-crafted. I absolutely love it and I love you the pic you paired with it. You balance wit and warmth so the joke lands without cheapness, and the closing line seals it perfectly. Thank you for the grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is absurd, affectionate, and surprisingly well-crafted. I absolutely love it and I love you the pic you paired with it. You balance wit and warmth so the joke lands without cheapness, and the closing line seals it perfectly. Thank you for the grin. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 4th, 2026 09:21
Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear.
Neville said:
This is far more than just festive fun .. it\'s actually 100% true & ticks all the write boxes from one pertinent end to the long pointy one at the other .. Neville
January 4th, 2026 06:02
Neville said:
This is far more than just festive fun .. it\'s actually 100% true & ticks all the write boxes from one pertinent end to the long pointy one at the other .. Neville
January 4th, 2026 06:02
Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear.
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem has a beautifully crafted tone—lighthearted, whimsical, and poetic—blending admiration, humor, and a delightful touch of absurdity.
January 3rd, 2026 13:00
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem has a beautifully crafted tone—lighthearted, whimsical, and poetic—blending admiration, humor, and a delightful touch of absurdity.
January 3rd, 2026 13:00
Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear.
orchidee said:
Good write F. There\'s a joke I can\'t repeat in public nor in polite company. Oops!
January 3rd, 2026 11:59
orchidee said:
Good write F. There\'s a joke I can\'t repeat in public nor in polite company. Oops!
January 3rd, 2026 11:59
Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear.
sorenbarrett said:
The donkey an intelligent animal, symbol of stubbornness. A democrat\'s mark but really a libertarian at heart. The backside a subject of humor. His name applied to any that are deemed worthy of an insult or a fool. And orders to kiss his back side a call to arms. Defiance can be heard in this write and to stand one\'s ground and be who one is. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings out as a challenge.
January 3rd, 2026 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
The donkey an intelligent animal, symbol of stubbornness. A democrat\'s mark but really a libertarian at heart. The backside a subject of humor. His name applied to any that are deemed worthy of an insult or a fool. And orders to kiss his back side a call to arms. Defiance can be heard in this write and to stand one\'s ground and be who one is. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings out as a challenge.
January 3rd, 2026 08:52
Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down!
Dominic Windram said:
A very perceptive poem...beautifully expressed! I completely concur with you with regard to the Internet.
January 3rd, 2026 02:41
Dominic Windram said:
A very perceptive poem...beautifully expressed! I completely concur with you with regard to the Internet.
January 3rd, 2026 02:41
My Bus Ride Home to Stay
orchidee said:
Good write F. I\'m sure I saw that passenger on the bus the other day. lol.
January 2nd, 2026 10:16
orchidee said:
Good write F. I\'m sure I saw that passenger on the bus the other day. lol.
January 2nd, 2026 10:16
My Bus Ride Home to Stay
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is a poem about choosing home as an act of courage. You let the ordinary do the work…streetlights, passengers, brakes, gates. By the end, staying feels like grace rather than surrender. A beautiful, grounding piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is a poem about choosing home as an act of courage. You let the ordinary do the work…streetlights, passengers, brakes, gates. By the end, staying feels like grace rather than surrender. A beautiful, grounding piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 2nd, 2026 09:10
My Bus Ride Home to Stay
soheil khodaparasti said:
I appreciate your conscious use of the bus not merely as a means of transportation, but as a vessel for reflection—carrying both the literal and emotional weight of the journey home. The poem beautifully balances nostalgia with acceptance: old pains are revisited yet gently softened. The theme of home as a reclamation of the self is especially moving.
January 2nd, 2026 07:28
soheil khodaparasti said:
I appreciate your conscious use of the bus not merely as a means of transportation, but as a vessel for reflection—carrying both the literal and emotional weight of the journey home. The poem beautifully balances nostalgia with acceptance: old pains are revisited yet gently softened. The theme of home as a reclamation of the self is especially moving.
January 2nd, 2026 07:28
Why Do You Hate Me?
Dan Williams said:
This hits home, closely describing a twenty year relationship that turned dark without a lot of explanation. Thanks for this.
January 2nd, 2026 02:11
Dan Williams said:
This hits home, closely describing a twenty year relationship that turned dark without a lot of explanation. Thanks for this.
January 2nd, 2026 02:11
As an Artist.
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, the artist sees with different eyes. And having seen, they communicate their feelings to others. The artist is a dreamer, too. They dream of a better world.
January 1st, 2026 11:12
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, the artist sees with different eyes. And having seen, they communicate their feelings to others. The artist is a dreamer, too. They dream of a better world.
January 1st, 2026 11:12
I am so psychotic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce and luminous. It doesn’t sanitize the chaos…it stands inside it and claims breath anyway. That closing declaration feels earned. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Happy New Year, my dear friend!
January 1st, 2026 09:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce and luminous. It doesn’t sanitize the chaos…it stands inside it and claims breath anyway. That closing declaration feels earned. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Happy New Year, my dear friend!
January 1st, 2026 09:42
I am so psychotic
Thomas W Case said:
Intense, imaginative, and unexpectedly tender. I like how clarity and chaos are allowed to exist side by side here.
January 1st, 2026 09:34
Thomas W Case said:
Intense, imaginative, and unexpectedly tender. I like how clarity and chaos are allowed to exist side by side here.
January 1st, 2026 09:34
I am so psychotic
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of of blended humor and understanding of what lies inside. What is psychotic anyway but a loss of reality and we all do that as we withdraw within the mind in thought and imagination especially in fantasy. Here are so many lovely allegories and metaphors that are separate from reality yet in themselves transcend reality into illumination and as such the thin line between madness and genius. A fave Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of of blended humor and understanding of what lies inside. What is psychotic anyway but a loss of reality and we all do that as we withdraw within the mind in thought and imagination especially in fantasy. Here are so many lovely allegories and metaphors that are separate from reality yet in themselves transcend reality into illumination and as such the thin line between madness and genius. A fave Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 09:29
I am so psychotic
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like the line “the world can be a cage, but my thoughts are the key” the most because it stands out as a powerful reflection on inner freedom. By contrasting the world as a “cage” with thoughts as the “key,” your poem suggests that while external realities may constrain us, the mind remains a source of autonomy and escape, capable of reshaping confinement into meaning and possibility.
January 1st, 2026 09:27
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like the line “the world can be a cage, but my thoughts are the key” the most because it stands out as a powerful reflection on inner freedom. By contrasting the world as a “cage” with thoughts as the “key,” your poem suggests that while external realities may constrain us, the mind remains a source of autonomy and escape, capable of reshaping confinement into meaning and possibility.
January 1st, 2026 09:27
I am so psychotic
orchidee said:
Now - you got just three brain cells, as I have?! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:29
orchidee said:
Now - you got just three brain cells, as I have?! lol.
January 1st, 2026 08:29
I am so psychotic
2781 said:
Wow, you hooked me from the start, and took me into a wild vision.
January 1st, 2026 08:21
2781 said:
Wow, you hooked me from the start, and took me into a wild vision.
January 1st, 2026 08:21
Why Do You Hate Me?
RSM0812 said:
\"a flash that haunts the clouds, not the rain\". What a line. Beautiful. You are a great writer. :) hope 2026 is like your poetry. Lol
January 1st, 2026 06:10
RSM0812 said:
\"a flash that haunts the clouds, not the rain\". What a line. Beautiful. You are a great writer. :) hope 2026 is like your poetry. Lol
January 1st, 2026 06:10
Why Do You Hate Me?
orchidee said:
Good write F. Aww, I never said I hated you! lol.
December 31st, 2025 10:07
orchidee said:
Good write F. Aww, I never said I hated you! lol.
December 31st, 2025 10:07
Why Do You Hate Me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is a meditation on loss without blame. You let grief ask its question without forcing an answer, and that trust gives the poem its grace. By the end, the wind feels like the only honest messenger left. Beautiful work and Happy New Year to you and your family! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is a meditation on loss without blame. You let grief ask its question without forcing an answer, and that trust gives the poem its grace. By the end, the wind feels like the only honest messenger left. Beautiful work and Happy New Year to you and your family! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 31st, 2025 09:10
Why Do You Hate Me?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain felt and a question unanswered. One that is sunburned feels pain from normal sun and what we feel as hate may be nothing more that the sun\'s warmth. A lovely write of an often misunderstood word.
December 31st, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain felt and a question unanswered. One that is sunburned feels pain from normal sun and what we feel as hate may be nothing more that the sun\'s warmth. A lovely write of an often misunderstood word.
December 31st, 2025 07:47
Mood is a Bouncing Ball
Dan Williams said:
Clever and witty.
\"It defies rules, this wayward thing—
a hiccup, not a song, not a sting—
yet in its bounce, a pattern grows:
the ground it meets decides its pose.\"
brings this to vision. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2025 04:29
Dan Williams said:
Clever and witty.
\"It defies rules, this wayward thing—
a hiccup, not a song, not a sting—
yet in its bounce, a pattern grows:
the ground it meets decides its pose.\"
brings this to vision. Nicely done.
December 31st, 2025 04:29
Mood is a Bouncing Ball
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh...and good morning! Love the rabbit!
December 30th, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh...and good morning! Love the rabbit!
December 30th, 2025 10:53
Mood is a Bouncing Ball
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel this way of moving through a day where emotions aren’t fixed, just responsive. The permission to let them bounce instead of pinning them down feels gently liberating. This resonates a lot. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I feel this way of moving through a day where emotions aren’t fixed, just responsive. The permission to let them bounce instead of pinning them down feels gently liberating. This resonates a lot. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 30th, 2025 10:52
Mood is a Bouncing Ball
sorenbarrett said:
A good subliminal in the bouncing rabbit. Moods fluctuate normally and how high they bounce determined by their innate substance as in a superball vs a plastic ball and how hard they are thrown or from how high they are dropped. Nicely done my friend
December 30th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A good subliminal in the bouncing rabbit. Moods fluctuate normally and how high they bounce determined by their innate substance as in a superball vs a plastic ball and how hard they are thrown or from how high they are dropped. Nicely done my friend
December 30th, 2025 05:02
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