Comments received on poems by Friendship
Come, walk in my shoes
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem wet with good rhyme of one that feels that no one can feel what they feel since no one wears their shoes. Well done my friend
July 26th, 2026 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem wet with good rhyme of one that feels that no one can feel what they feel since no one wears their shoes. Well done my friend
July 26th, 2026 11:08
You can\'t help me!
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way this is written draws a story in my mind and somebody who\'s trying so hard but still coming undone and fighting whether it\'s real or in the mind very well worded very good I\'m glad you\'re my friend
July 25th, 2026 19:40
Joseph M Marion said:
I love the way this is written draws a story in my mind and somebody who\'s trying so hard but still coming undone and fighting whether it\'s real or in the mind very well worded very good I\'m glad you\'re my friend
July 25th, 2026 19:40
You can\'t help me!
Thomas W Case said:
No explosion—just a woman coming apart grain by grain, feeling every inch of the fall.
That’s the real terror: not the end, but the long, quiet collapse you can’t outrun.
July 21st, 2026 08:11
Thomas W Case said:
No explosion—just a woman coming apart grain by grain, feeling every inch of the fall.
That’s the real terror: not the end, but the long, quiet collapse you can’t outrun.
July 21st, 2026 08:11
You can\'t help me!
NafisaSB said:
The slow but inevitable decline is well brought out in this poem. Great work 👌
July 21st, 2026 06:51
NafisaSB said:
The slow but inevitable decline is well brought out in this poem. Great work 👌
July 21st, 2026 06:51
You can\'t help me!
Neville said:
This is by far .. far more than just a little bit extra special .. & then some .. Neville 😎🌻💛👍
July 20th, 2026 07:35
Neville said:
This is by far .. far more than just a little bit extra special .. & then some .. Neville 😎🌻💛👍
July 20th, 2026 07:35
You can\'t help me!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard...the slow disintegration of a life and identity is somehow more terrifying than one sudden collapse. Absolutely devastating work. Keeping you in my prayers, dearest Friendship. If you ever need to talk, there\'s a Tristan who will listen! 👂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 07:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard...the slow disintegration of a life and identity is somehow more terrifying than one sudden collapse. Absolutely devastating work. Keeping you in my prayers, dearest Friendship. If you ever need to talk, there\'s a Tristan who will listen! 👂🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 07:16
You can\'t help me!
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a slow decline can often lead a slow rise again
July 19th, 2026 11:41
You can\'t help me!
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem reminds us that we may feel fragile, but we are stronger than the despair it describes. The very fact that you could express such vulnerability with such beauty is proof that your humanity is enduring, not broken.
July 19th, 2026 11:21
You can\'t help me!
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
peto said:
I can\'t help you
Wish I could
Your writing is phenomenal friendship
I always feel like I\'ve learned something of YOU when I read
The:deliberate \" in the last line really caught my eye.
Emotional and brilliant
July 19th, 2026 11:18
You can\'t help me!
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a personal entropy that they feel beyond the help of others to stay. Well written with good rhyme and flow it sends its sad message of demise.
July 19th, 2026 11:16
I am done.
soheil khodaparasti said:
You have expressed the cycle of a person\'s life beautifully, beginning with finding a voice, enduring hardship, facing exhaustion and surrender, letting go with dignity, and finally reaching acceptance. I like the strong opening, which immediately draws the reader into the speaker\'s struggle. I also like the powerful metaphors and vivid imagery, such as stones, shifting sands, iron tides, rusting armor, and the shore, which vividly mirror the speaker\'s emotional and spiritual journey. What makes the poem especially relatable is its realization that there comes a time when we must recognize our limits and let go with dignity.
July 19th, 2026 03:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
You have expressed the cycle of a person\'s life beautifully, beginning with finding a voice, enduring hardship, facing exhaustion and surrender, letting go with dignity, and finally reaching acceptance. I like the strong opening, which immediately draws the reader into the speaker\'s struggle. I also like the powerful metaphors and vivid imagery, such as stones, shifting sands, iron tides, rusting armor, and the shore, which vividly mirror the speaker\'s emotional and spiritual journey. What makes the poem especially relatable is its realization that there comes a time when we must recognize our limits and let go with dignity.
July 19th, 2026 03:26
I am done.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this pain...and honestly, I feel myself in a similar place lately. There comes a point when continually fighting to be understood costs more than silence. This reached me where I live. My heart and prayers are with you, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know this pain...and honestly, I feel myself in a similar place lately. There comes a point when continually fighting to be understood costs more than silence. This reached me where I live. My heart and prayers are with you, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:15
I am done.
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
mylastwrites said:
We reach a point, where we just get too tired to care anymore. In so many ways I relate to this poem. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2026 14:39
I am done.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear exhaustion in this write where good rhyme reinforces the feeling of having spent all one\'s energy and reserves to get to where one is and one is simply spent. Very well written.
July 16th, 2026 14:30
Forgiveness
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
soheil khodaparasti said:
Insightful: Forgiveness as an act of self-protection while recognizing that the pain still remains.
July 16th, 2026 10:53
Forgiveness
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
cellinic said:
Deep and integrally penned lyrics with overtones of both conflict and harmony in its meaningful basics. Best wishes, my fave.
July 16th, 2026 06:18
Forgiveness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a compelling piece, Friendship. I appreciate how you explore forgiveness through the lens of self-preservation rather than easy resolution. The emotional honesty carries the poem, and the closing leaves the reader lingering in that unresolved space. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 22:44
Forgiveness
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Kevin Hulme said:
There\'s a lot of truth in what you say.
A good Write.
July 15th, 2026 20:20
Forgiveness
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting point of view Friendship. Well written
July 15th, 2026 13:40
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
mylastwrites said:
I related to your poem very deeply. Losing someone I loved after 18 years together. The one thing I learned, the loving doesn’t stop with their passing. You wrote an absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you.
July 13th, 2026 12:11
Just Bullshit.
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
NafisaSB said:
Good decision spelt out in clear terms. Never let anyone take advantage if you are right✌️
July 12th, 2026 21:42
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Paul Bell said:
Great epitaph, maybe open a bottle and drink a toast to a fine fellow.
Thoughts with you.
July 7th, 2026 13:51
Happy Birthday in Heaven, my Love.❤️
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
Syd said:
Such a personal heartfelt piece.
Very well written 👏
- Syd 🍄
July 7th, 2026 13:32
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