Comments received on poems by Friendship
Hidden Like Rubbish
arqios said:
A theme that has hovered about my writing for some time. Glad to see it being voiced from other springs. Most enjoyed dear Friendship 🙏🕊️
May 14th, 2026 16:39
arqios said:
A theme that has hovered about my writing for some time. Glad to see it being voiced from other springs. Most enjoyed dear Friendship 🙏🕊️
May 14th, 2026 16:39
Obligation.
Paul Bell said:
The givers and the takers.
When that reality hits home it sure can be painful.
I suppose it\'s also a way to get rid of dead wood, though for some reason they tend to come back.
May 12th, 2026 13:55
Paul Bell said:
The givers and the takers.
When that reality hits home it sure can be painful.
I suppose it\'s also a way to get rid of dead wood, though for some reason they tend to come back.
May 12th, 2026 13:55
Existing
FrasMac said:
Trips along perfectly metred. Solid message. Good writing!
May 11th, 2026 12:25
FrasMac said:
Trips along perfectly metred. Solid message. Good writing!
May 11th, 2026 12:25
I’m tired, Mama
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
A very thoughtful piece of writing, which cannot be grasped with ordinary thought. I liked the prose poem arranged with similes, metaphors and imagery. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:48
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
A very thoughtful piece of writing, which cannot be grasped with ordinary thought. I liked the prose poem arranged with similes, metaphors and imagery. good luck
May 10th, 2026 12:48
Existing
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Excellent, realistic and empathetic exposition. That encourages the mind to think and feel. thank you
May 10th, 2026 12:42
Zafor Pathan { Poetry Writer } said:
Excellent, realistic and empathetic exposition. That encourages the mind to think and feel. thank you
May 10th, 2026 12:42
Obligation.
Thomas W Case said:
This lands like a slow-burning reckoning—grief wrapped in disappointment, and the moment someone realizes they were giving warmth into a place that only took.
There’s a steady, bitter clarity in it, like watching a contract you thought was love finally reveal itself as paper thin.
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Thomas W Case said:
This lands like a slow-burning reckoning—grief wrapped in disappointment, and the moment someone realizes they were giving warmth into a place that only took.
There’s a steady, bitter clarity in it, like watching a contract you thought was love finally reveal itself as paper thin.
May 10th, 2026 07:39
Obligation.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written with good rhyme and meter. It speaks to feeling abandoned from those that turned their backs after you had given all you had to give. It speaks of a false friendship based on using someone. A sad write indeed.
May 9th, 2026 18:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem well written with good rhyme and meter. It speaks to feeling abandoned from those that turned their backs after you had given all you had to give. It speaks of a false friendship based on using someone. A sad write indeed.
May 9th, 2026 18:40
Obligation.
David Wakeling said:
Wow a wonderful poem on ingratitude.Nothing more saddening than ingratitude.Enjoyable well constructed poem
May 9th, 2026 17:41
David Wakeling said:
Wow a wonderful poem on ingratitude.Nothing more saddening than ingratitude.Enjoyable well constructed poem
May 9th, 2026 17:41
Obligation.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I think many people who naturally give of themselves will recognize this feeling…the painful moment where relationships start to feel conditional only after your strength begins to fail. That realization can cut deeply. This really stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I think many people who naturally give of themselves will recognize this feeling…the painful moment where relationships start to feel conditional only after your strength begins to fail. That realization can cut deeply. This really stayed with me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:59
Lust
Neville said:
I am mightily impressed with these words .. excellent ink in my opinion and not a single drop wasted .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 08:47
Neville said:
I am mightily impressed with these words .. excellent ink in my opinion and not a single drop wasted .. Neville
May 9th, 2026 08:47
Obligation.
2781 said:
From the uttermost parts of the earth have we heard songs, even glory to the righteous. But I said, My leanness, my leanness, woe unto me!
May 9th, 2026 08:37
2781 said:
From the uttermost parts of the earth have we heard songs, even glory to the righteous. But I said, My leanness, my leanness, woe unto me!
May 9th, 2026 08:37
Who I truly am 🌹
Salvia.S said:
Dignity outranks love. Energy redirected. No going back. I was always me. Highly relatable.Clearly written 🌹🌹
May 8th, 2026 21:12
Salvia.S said:
Dignity outranks love. Energy redirected. No going back. I was always me. Highly relatable.Clearly written 🌹🌹
May 8th, 2026 21:12
Who I truly am 🌹
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Very clever understanding of the hypersensitive person.They make good poets
May 7th, 2026 19:49
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.Very clever understanding of the hypersensitive person.They make good poets
May 7th, 2026 19:49
Who I truly am 🌹
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries a lot of emotional truth in it…especially that slow retreat when someone realizes they’re pouring into a space that no longer pours back. “I was always me” lands with real dignity at the end. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 7th, 2026 18:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries a lot of emotional truth in it…especially that slow retreat when someone realizes they’re pouring into a space that no longer pours back. “I was always me” lands with real dignity at the end. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 7th, 2026 18:19
Who I truly am 🌹
Paul Bell said:
Quite an interesting piece.
I\'m now thinking, if two hypersensitive people get together, do sparks fly.
Can two hypersensitive people get together, or would that be too much.
May 7th, 2026 15:39
Paul Bell said:
Quite an interesting piece.
I\'m now thinking, if two hypersensitive people get together, do sparks fly.
Can two hypersensitive people get together, or would that be too much.
May 7th, 2026 15:39
Who I truly am 🌹
sorenbarrett said:
This is a revealing of the inner self and mechanism that drives a hypersensitive person. Well written it lays down an understanding for those that are not aware of how it functions. Nicely done Friendship
May 7th, 2026 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
This is a revealing of the inner self and mechanism that drives a hypersensitive person. Well written it lays down an understanding for those that are not aware of how it functions. Nicely done Friendship
May 7th, 2026 13:19
Who I truly am 🌹
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a clear-eyed boundary wrapped in tenderness—someone naming their emotional limits without bitterness, just truth.
There’s dignity in it, like love that finally learned where it ends and self-respect begins.
May 7th, 2026 07:52
Thomas W Case said:
This reads like a clear-eyed boundary wrapped in tenderness—someone naming their emotional limits without bitterness, just truth.
There’s dignity in it, like love that finally learned where it ends and self-respect begins.
May 7th, 2026 07:52
Lust
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful piece.The love of art both visual and written here.Exceptional rhyme and construction.A master work
May 6th, 2026 16:40
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful piece.The love of art both visual and written here.Exceptional rhyme and construction.A master work
May 6th, 2026 16:40
Lust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship...this absolutely burns with creative obsession and reverence at the same time. The whole piece feels intoxicated by beauty, creation, and the desperate need to make something lasting from feeling. Put this way, I am lustful too! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful poem, Friendship...this absolutely burns with creative obsession and reverence at the same time. The whole piece feels intoxicated by beauty, creation, and the desperate need to make something lasting from feeling. Put this way, I am lustful too! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 6th, 2026 08:09
Lust
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the deep urge within the heart and soul of the artist to create. It is like a hunger or as the title says a lust. Nicely written and imaged in strong words. Well done.
May 6th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the deep urge within the heart and soul of the artist to create. It is like a hunger or as the title says a lust. Nicely written and imaged in strong words. Well done.
May 6th, 2026 07:16
They love to judge you.
Salvia.S said:
You turned judgement into light. Incredible write!!
May 5th, 2026 12:41
Salvia.S said:
You turned judgement into light. Incredible write!!
May 5th, 2026 12:41
They love to judge you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very moving, dearest Friendship…there’s a quiet strength here that refuses to harden, even under pressure. It feels grounded and resolute without losing that softness. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very moving, dearest Friendship…there’s a quiet strength here that refuses to harden, even under pressure. It feels grounded and resolute without losing that softness. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:26
They love to judge you.
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a quiet defiance—soft-spoken, but unshakable, like someone refusing to let the world rename their wounds as weakness.
There’s a steady dignity in it, a light that stays intact even while everything around it tries to harden.
May 5th, 2026 07:44
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a quiet defiance—soft-spoken, but unshakable, like someone refusing to let the world rename their wounds as weakness.
There’s a steady dignity in it, a light that stays intact even while everything around it tries to harden.
May 5th, 2026 07:44
They love to judge you.
Neville said:
I think this is excellent .. It screams of reality & truth .. not only that but it looks pretty on the page on which it sits so comfortably .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 07:37
Neville said:
I think this is excellent .. It screams of reality & truth .. not only that but it looks pretty on the page on which it sits so comfortably .. Neville 😎🌻👍
May 5th, 2026 07:37
They love to judge you.
David Wakeling said:
Yes it is awful to be judged so much.An amazing poem.I love the rhyme.Very clever
May 5th, 2026 06:48
David Wakeling said:
Yes it is awful to be judged so much.An amazing poem.I love the rhyme.Very clever
May 5th, 2026 06:48
They love to judge you.
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of being judged by others and not understood so misjudged. It is ironic that in reading this there is a judgement made as well that may not be what was intended and therefore misjudged. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of being judged by others and not understood so misjudged. It is ironic that in reading this there is a judgement made as well that may not be what was intended and therefore misjudged. Nicely written
May 5th, 2026 06:34
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