Comments received on poems by Friendship
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
arqios said:
My childhood imagination was too much to cohabit with. Probably a big factor why poetry took me in and gave me my sanity back 🙏🏻🕊️
April 24th, 2026 08:11
arqios said:
My childhood imagination was too much to cohabit with. Probably a big factor why poetry took me in and gave me my sanity back 🙏🏻🕊️
April 24th, 2026 08:11
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful and a fave
April 24th, 2026 08:01
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
beautiful and a fave
April 24th, 2026 08:01
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
orchidee said:
Erm, well face the other way to the fan if s*** is hitting the fan! heehee.
April 24th, 2026 02:24
orchidee said:
Erm, well face the other way to the fan if s*** is hitting the fan! heehee.
April 24th, 2026 02:24
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
Paul Bell said:
I\'m liking this to missing the bus that crashed.
Some days are for staying in bed, thinking to ones self, they\'ll figure it out for themselves.
April 23rd, 2026 14:18
Paul Bell said:
I\'m liking this to missing the bus that crashed.
Some days are for staying in bed, thinking to ones self, they\'ll figure it out for themselves.
April 23rd, 2026 14:18
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
sorenbarrett said:
In every problem there is a bright side. This is a great write turning lemonade our of lemons. Very nicely written.
April 23rd, 2026 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
In every problem there is a bright side. This is a great write turning lemonade our of lemons. Very nicely written.
April 23rd, 2026 11:09
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this captures that rare kind of day where disorder becomes something freeing…plans fall apart, expectations drop, and something better slips in. That movement from frustration to unexpected grace feels honest and earned. I’ve lived those flips before too…where the mess becomes the gift. You carried that beautifully. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this captures that rare kind of day where disorder becomes something freeing…plans fall apart, expectations drop, and something better slips in. That movement from frustration to unexpected grace feels honest and earned. I’ve lived those flips before too…where the mess becomes the gift. You carried that beautifully. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:57
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
Katie B. said:
Excellent, the joy is in the journey no matter what tries to derail us .
April 23rd, 2026 08:30
Katie B. said:
Excellent, the joy is in the journey no matter what tries to derail us .
April 23rd, 2026 08:30
This time......everything changes.
RSM0812 said:
Every line in this poem was breathtaking. The way u use your words and imagery u capture moves me to amazement. BEAUTIFUL!!!
April 23rd, 2026 07:34
RSM0812 said:
Every line in this poem was breathtaking. The way u use your words and imagery u capture moves me to amazement. BEAUTIFUL!!!
April 23rd, 2026 07:34
This time......everything changes.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Changes for sure! Let \"me\" shed this old, worn out skin of assumptions.
Beautifully written, Friendship.
April 22nd, 2026 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Changes for sure! Let \"me\" shed this old, worn out skin of assumptions.
Beautifully written, Friendship.
April 22nd, 2026 18:58
This time......everything changes.
sorenbarrett said:
This is beautiful my friend it reads as the beginning of a new book, the dawning not just of a new day or season but a new eon. So nicely written with wonderful poetic images and metaphor it beams and glistens. A fave
April 22nd, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
This is beautiful my friend it reads as the beginning of a new book, the dawning not just of a new day or season but a new eon. So nicely written with wonderful poetic images and metaphor it beams and glistens. A fave
April 22nd, 2026 15:54
This time......everything changes.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of crossing over…not just change, but something final and irreversible. That idea of the bridge being gone entirely stayed with me…no return, no fallback. I’ve felt that kind of shift too, where everything is suddenly different. This lands as certain, grounded, and powerful. Strong write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a real sense of crossing over…not just change, but something final and irreversible. That idea of the bridge being gone entirely stayed with me…no return, no fallback. I’ve felt that kind of shift too, where everything is suddenly different. This lands as certain, grounded, and powerful. Strong write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 22nd, 2026 09:32
So now you call me grossly insulting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries both restraint and bite…you hold onto clarity while everything else is being redefined around you. The tension between truth and perception runs through the whole piece, and you never let it slip. Strong, grounded, and unyielding, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries both restraint and bite…you hold onto clarity while everything else is being redefined around you. The tension between truth and perception runs through the whole piece, and you never let it slip. Strong, grounded, and unyielding, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:12
So now you call me grossly insulting
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and controlled—this reads like a measured confrontation where language itself becomes the battleground.
The grit is in the refusal to soften: truth held firm even as the relationship fractures around it.
April 21st, 2026 08:27
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and controlled—this reads like a measured confrontation where language itself becomes the battleground.
The grit is in the refusal to soften: truth held firm even as the relationship fractures around it.
April 21st, 2026 08:27
So now you call me grossly insulting
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is nicely rhymed and metered and sends a sharp and strong message. Poetic anger at its best. Well done my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is nicely rhymed and metered and sends a sharp and strong message. Poetic anger at its best. Well done my friend
April 21st, 2026 06:55
So now you call me grossly insulting
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“And watch how the truth keeps me tethered to the ground”… great work
April 21st, 2026 06:21
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
“And watch how the truth keeps me tethered to the ground”… great work
April 21st, 2026 06:21
So now you call me grossly insulting
Paul Bell said:
Relationships, who would have them.
The end sometimes plays out like a micro war, and the casualties can be high.
Definitely a learning curve for would be lovers.
April 21st, 2026 05:42
Paul Bell said:
Relationships, who would have them.
The end sometimes plays out like a micro war, and the casualties can be high.
Definitely a learning curve for would be lovers.
April 21st, 2026 05:42
I offered a Rose, not a Thorn!🌹
NafisaSB said:
This requires great dedication, discipline and ability to remain firm inspite of all the barbs. Inspiring write ✍️
April 21st, 2026 03:22
NafisaSB said:
This requires great dedication, discipline and ability to remain firm inspite of all the barbs. Inspiring write ✍️
April 21st, 2026 03:22
They judge me as a failure.
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Very beautiful. It breathes despair. At least for me.
April 21st, 2026 00:20
Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi said:
Very beautiful. It breathes despair. At least for me.
April 21st, 2026 00:20
They judge me as a failure.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a sharp, unflinching confrontation…like truth being held up where it can’t be ignored. That image of the canvas being struck out stays with me…creation judged, then quietly kept. I’ve felt that same tension too, where what’s rejected isn’t truly let go. This lands as bold, reflective, and deeply honest. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a sharp, unflinching confrontation…like truth being held up where it can’t be ignored. That image of the canvas being struck out stays with me…creation judged, then quietly kept. I’ve felt that same tension too, where what’s rejected isn’t truly let go. This lands as bold, reflective, and deeply honest. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 20th, 2026 10:31
Just why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries a sharp, unflinching weight…like watching something delicate get shattered piece by piece. That image of the mind as glass stays with me…how easily it can be broken when struck the wrong way. I’ve seen how words can echo like that, long after they’re spoken. This lands as both devastating and real. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this carries a sharp, unflinching weight…like watching something delicate get shattered piece by piece. That image of the mind as glass stays with me…how easily it can be broken when struck the wrong way. I’ve seen how words can echo like that, long after they’re spoken. This lands as both devastating and real. Powerful write, dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 19th, 2026 09:16
Just why?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of destruction and devastation where direction is lost fills this poem. It speaks of pain and loss. Well expressed in poetic form.
April 19th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of destruction and devastation where direction is lost fills this poem. It speaks of pain and loss. Well expressed in poetic form.
April 19th, 2026 04:40
Existing
NafisaSB said:
wow - congrats - it is such a liberating feeling that has been portrayed -
April 17th, 2026 23:34
NafisaSB said:
wow - congrats - it is such a liberating feeling that has been portrayed -
April 17th, 2026 23:34
When collaborations with a higher power fail.
arqios said:
True friends at anytime and any occasion🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 18:21
arqios said:
True friends at anytime and any occasion🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2026 18:21
When collaborations with a higher power fail.
Katie B. said:
Powerful, love it!
April 17th, 2026 17:11
Katie B. said:
Powerful, love it!
April 17th, 2026 17:11
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