Comments received on poems by Friendship
Soon to be Home.
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Keeter C said:
Beautiful but we won’t rest for he has a job for us. He never gets tired and never stops working and we won’t as well.
August 28th, 2025 17:05
Words of destiny.
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully written —it is gentle, reflective, and full of meaning. It speaks to the idea that every encounter in life has a purpose, and it does so with grace and warmth. Lovely work. A fave ❤️
August 27th, 2025 20:58
Words of destiny.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and interconnectedness…the sense that nothing is wasted, no encounter meaningless. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2025 14:12
Words of destiny.
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, forsooth. That\'s what I\'ve cherished about the varied individuals I\'ve known through the years and circumstances in which we\'ve engaged, each giving my perspective a wealth or otherwise would have lacked enhancing my little sphere. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:31
At harmony with the rain.
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, with this beauty you recalled my joy years ago when I occasionally could be in the rain, caught accidentally. There\'s a charming beauty in this piece, though, the alteration in perspective from youth to age offering wisdom. Very lovely, excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 27th, 2025 13:28
Words of destiny.
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
For those that believe in destiny this poem speaks, telling of how everyone you encounter has a purpose and shapes you in your journey. Very nicely crafted with rhyme this poem speaks of being transformed. Well done my friend
August 27th, 2025 09:08
At harmony with the rain.
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of the hymn “All things bright and beautiful”. We need the soft refreshing rain for growth. It is indeed a blessing. A lovely poem Friendship. Have a beautiful day.
August 27th, 2025 05:50
At harmony with the rain.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking, peace in the simple act of being. A quiet joy runs through this piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 08:23
At harmony with the rain.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of seeing what was seen as adversity as necessary for life and growth. The past rush to get in out of the rain now a recognition and excitement to experience its growing power. A positive view that more people need to feel. Wonderfully written in good meter and rhyme it puts a new face on the world and life a fave
August 26th, 2025 08:04
The Crying Tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow and love meet, and memory becomes a kind of shelter. A powerful and moving piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 07:31
The Crying Tree
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of friendship. There is a feeling of loneliness and sense of a need for someone to lean on feeling lost and disoriented. There is a need for a guide. Memories may be the guide and strength to hold onto. Well written
August 24th, 2025 20:43
The Crying Tree
Cheeky Missy said:
What a very, very beautiful dedication to an unknown/unidentified friend. The conclusion alluded to divergent paths whispers of an aching wound which remains a scar, yet how gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery, a delightful waltzing rhythm and rhyming, not to mention a tender poignancy. Thank you so much for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:39
Cheeky Missy said:
What a very, very beautiful dedication to an unknown/unidentified friend. The conclusion alluded to divergent paths whispers of an aching wound which remains a scar, yet how gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery, a delightful waltzing rhythm and rhyming, not to mention a tender poignancy. Thank you so much for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:39
Trapped.
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of when people say to \"choose happiness,\" or \"happiness is a choice.\" It\'s only a choice for some people..
August 24th, 2025 01:36
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me of when people say to \"choose happiness,\" or \"happiness is a choice.\" It\'s only a choice for some people..
August 24th, 2025 01:36
Soon to be Home.
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful and comforting piece. It gently captures the journey of life and the hope of eternal peace with heartfelt grace. Wonderfully written!
August 23rd, 2025 07:20
Salvia.S said:
This is a beautiful and comforting piece. It gently captures the journey of life and the hope of eternal peace with heartfelt grace. Wonderfully written!
August 23rd, 2025 07:20
Soon to be Home.
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and soothing, albeit I must beg to differ with the first lines since Job and etc say quite the opposite and I concur with him since I\'ve known no better despite my proclivity for believing all is better than all know. Prettily rendered with seemingly delicate imagery and a poignancy which belies its weightiness. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 23:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and soothing, albeit I must beg to differ with the first lines since Job and etc say quite the opposite and I concur with him since I\'ve known no better despite my proclivity for believing all is better than all know. Prettily rendered with seemingly delicate imagery and a poignancy which belies its weightiness. Thank you for sharing.
August 22nd, 2025 23:52
Soon to be Home.
sorenbarrett said:
A long journey to a destination long anticipated. I have learned through many trips to enjoy the scenery along the way for it is often the best part. A most enchanting write my friend.
August 22nd, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
A long journey to a destination long anticipated. I have learned through many trips to enjoy the scenery along the way for it is often the best part. A most enchanting write my friend.
August 22nd, 2025 08:35
I am who I am!
NafisaSB said:
way to go dear - keep the \'me\' above all else always
August 21st, 2025 00:09
NafisaSB said:
way to go dear - keep the \'me\' above all else always
August 21st, 2025 00:09
To create something from scratch.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful vision, my friend…friendship crafted like starlight, blueprint by blueprint. It reads like a dream turned into poetry. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful vision, my friend…friendship crafted like starlight, blueprint by blueprint. It reads like a dream turned into poetry. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:01
To create something from scratch.
Cheeky Missy said:
While dishes, garments, and sundries I have since my childhood crafted from scratch, friends never. The suggestion is haunted by my inability to pull off anything truly worthwhile, I guess, or else the realization drawn from the past several decades that what is far from perfect nor at all how I ordained it, yet is most perfect and exquisite as I had desired. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:44
Cheeky Missy said:
While dishes, garments, and sundries I have since my childhood crafted from scratch, friends never. The suggestion is haunted by my inability to pull off anything truly worthwhile, I guess, or else the realization drawn from the past several decades that what is far from perfect nor at all how I ordained it, yet is most perfect and exquisite as I had desired. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:44
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, I\'ll be jiggered, guess I\'m in a different universe either owing to the cruel work hours scanting me of sleep and sense, or the beauties of this medium wherein we dance, as I could have sworn this was an itty bitty piece last I perused it, and now has grown into an adult of sorts. After that, this is a downright gorgeous number. Wow. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a truly haunting poignancy. Thank for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, I\'ll be jiggered, guess I\'m in a different universe either owing to the cruel work hours scanting me of sleep and sense, or the beauties of this medium wherein we dance, as I could have sworn this was an itty bitty piece last I perused it, and now has grown into an adult of sorts. After that, this is a downright gorgeous number. Wow. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a truly haunting poignancy. Thank for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:11
To create something from scratch.
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and nicely metered poem of a dream friendship. It flows in well constructed and smooth currents. Don\'t we all wish we could find such ideal relationships?
August 20th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed and nicely metered poem of a dream friendship. It flows in well constructed and smooth currents. Don\'t we all wish we could find such ideal relationships?
August 20th, 2025 10:21
To create something from scratch.
Bella Shepard said:
True friendships are built from scratch, and your last stanza sums it all up beautifully. Wonderfully crafted in every way!
August 20th, 2025 07:55
Bella Shepard said:
True friendships are built from scratch, and your last stanza sums it all up beautifully. Wonderfully crafted in every way!
August 20th, 2025 07:55
To create something from scratch.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good erite, Friendship. I enjoyed the read.
August 20th, 2025 07:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good erite, Friendship. I enjoyed the read.
August 20th, 2025 07:48
It is What it is!
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - you are just the creation that you were meant to be - and do remember that no one in this world is perfect - so lots of hope there..
August 20th, 2025 01:28
NafisaSB said:
beautifully expressed - you are just the creation that you were meant to be - and do remember that no one in this world is perfect - so lots of hope there..
August 20th, 2025 01:28
Trapped.
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Friendship,
The dire situation of the protagonist overwhelms all advice from a friend, no matter how sincere one cannot ease the state of hopelessness, trapped indeed. A tragic verse, tough to stomach yet somewhat remedied by the poetic flair of its author. The reader is left helpless though in awe of the poem itself.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:36
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Friendship,
The dire situation of the protagonist overwhelms all advice from a friend, no matter how sincere one cannot ease the state of hopelessness, trapped indeed. A tragic verse, tough to stomach yet somewhat remedied by the poetic flair of its author. The reader is left helpless though in awe of the poem itself.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:36
Trapped.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a raw weight…the kind of truth you can’t just walk away from. The rhythm of chains and silence runs steady through each line, and it lingers long after the read. It’s not loud, but relentless…a quiet reality that feels immovable. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this carries a raw weight…the kind of truth you can’t just walk away from. The rhythm of chains and silence runs steady through each line, and it lingers long after the read. It’s not loud, but relentless…a quiet reality that feels immovable. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:05
Trapped.
arqios said:
A tough one there. And the triumph of finding articulation, small victories 🕊️🙏🏻
August 18th, 2025 20:16
arqios said:
A tough one there. And the triumph of finding articulation, small victories 🕊️🙏🏻
August 18th, 2025 20:16
It is What it is!
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta admit...AI, it seems, has some capacity to evolve itself... a wee bit frightening, actually...
August 18th, 2025 17:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotta admit...AI, it seems, has some capacity to evolve itself... a wee bit frightening, actually...
August 18th, 2025 17:30
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