Comments received on poems by Friendship
Lost time!
Bella Shepard said:
I truly get your sentiment here. Sometimes you just have to walk away, have a good scream, let it go, and feel better for it. So sorry about the watch, it probably misses you to. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
I truly get your sentiment here. Sometimes you just have to walk away, have a good scream, let it go, and feel better for it. So sorry about the watch, it probably misses you to. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 11:19
Lost time!
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Friendship,
Toying with one\'s patience to the point of exhaustion. It\'s a form of torture, especially so in this poem, ironic that the culprit is the watchman, the repairer of time, as it were and here he is waisting your time. The poem in itself is excellent, rhythms and rhymes perfected throughout give the poem a motion that welcomes the reader to each line as it drifts above the mockery of its subject. Superb!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 09:09
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Friendship,
Toying with one\'s patience to the point of exhaustion. It\'s a form of torture, especially so in this poem, ironic that the culprit is the watchman, the repairer of time, as it were and here he is waisting your time. The poem in itself is excellent, rhythms and rhymes perfected throughout give the poem a motion that welcomes the reader to each line as it drifts above the mockery of its subject. Superb!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 09:09
Lost time!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like Aesop had a nervous breakdown in a watch shop and came back with a moral and a grudge. I LOVE IT! The rhyme keeps it steady...but beneath it, there’s that ticking tension, waiting to break. I love suspense. The bitterness is honest, earned, and quietly devastating. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like Aesop had a nervous breakdown in a watch shop and came back with a moral and a grudge. I LOVE IT! The rhyme keeps it steady...but beneath it, there’s that ticking tension, waiting to break. I love suspense. The bitterness is honest, earned, and quietly devastating. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:40
trust !
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical woven into this, like a fable wrapped in summer sunlight. The metaphor of choice—between watermelon and ice cream—feels playful at first, but then deepens into something far more spiritual: the power of intuition, agency, and self-trust. You craft a journey from craving to clarity, and I felt it. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical woven into this, like a fable wrapped in summer sunlight. The metaphor of choice—between watermelon and ice cream—feels playful at first, but then deepens into something far more spiritual: the power of intuition, agency, and self-trust. You craft a journey from craving to clarity, and I felt it. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:52
Lost time!
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of dreams and promises not met and broken, some very poignant lines, very nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of dreams and promises not met and broken, some very poignant lines, very nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 07:50
Lost time!
sorenbarrett said:
Frustration comes to mind in this poem of promises not kept. There seems a hidden motive in the watchmakers delay. A pity to loose the watch. I would have taken it back. A sad write of dreams unmet.
July 16th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Frustration comes to mind in this poem of promises not kept. There seems a hidden motive in the watchmakers delay. A pity to loose the watch. I would have taken it back. A sad write of dreams unmet.
July 16th, 2025 07:18
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
NafisaSB said:
a message straight from the heart so eloquently expressed - just beautiful
July 16th, 2025 00:22
NafisaSB said:
a message straight from the heart so eloquently expressed - just beautiful
July 16th, 2025 00:22
trust !
Priya Tomar said:
Clever rhyming scheme , beautiful metaphors, deep meaning
Nice poetry.....
July 15th, 2025 23:24
Priya Tomar said:
Clever rhyming scheme , beautiful metaphors, deep meaning
Nice poetry.....
July 15th, 2025 23:24
trust !
sorenbarrett said:
The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate pleasures that tempt and then there are those that provide a longer lasting enjoyment. Nicely worded with great rhyme and meter this poem presents the issue of trust and in the end the only one that we can trust for sure is ourselves. All else we can try if we have the desire and courage but trust itself only us. Well done
July 15th, 2025 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate pleasures that tempt and then there are those that provide a longer lasting enjoyment. Nicely worded with great rhyme and meter this poem presents the issue of trust and in the end the only one that we can trust for sure is ourselves. All else we can try if we have the desire and courage but trust itself only us. Well done
July 15th, 2025 18:13
Love yourself,
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you sorta remind me of my best friend\'s writing where she wills her body and etc to better than now. There is a sense of redemption in the seeming call to leave wallowing in misery off and go forth into a sunny new day. Lovely and sweetly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a hauntingly warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2025 12:43
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you sorta remind me of my best friend\'s writing where she wills her body and etc to better than now. There is a sense of redemption in the seeming call to leave wallowing in misery off and go forth into a sunny new day. Lovely and sweetly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a hauntingly warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2025 12:43
Memories of childhood.
Bella Shepard said:
Your memories of childhood are enchanting. The picture is reminiscent of the tea parties I gave my dolls, happy little smiles frozen in time. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, it certainly stirs the emotions of long ago.
July 13th, 2025 14:20
Bella Shepard said:
Your memories of childhood are enchanting. The picture is reminiscent of the tea parties I gave my dolls, happy little smiles frozen in time. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, it certainly stirs the emotions of long ago.
July 13th, 2025 14:20
Memories of childhood.
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. The very suggestion so deliciously rendered cannot fail to dredge buried memories in all readers, myself almost unconsciously wandering down those trails, caught up short in concluding by realizing what I was doing, only by half. Excellently rendered with a casual eloquence which takes the soul on flights of fancy in a trice, laden with gorgeous imagery and haunted by a winsome, undefined poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. The very suggestion so deliciously rendered cannot fail to dredge buried memories in all readers, myself almost unconsciously wandering down those trails, caught up short in concluding by realizing what I was doing, only by half. Excellently rendered with a casual eloquence which takes the soul on flights of fancy in a trice, laden with gorgeous imagery and haunted by a winsome, undefined poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:35
Memories of childhood.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a beautiful tapestry woven with joy, imagination, and intergenerational wisdom. The fairies in the grapevines and gnomes by the cows...pure magic, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing this radiant piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a beautiful tapestry woven with joy, imagination, and intergenerational wisdom. The fairies in the grapevines and gnomes by the cows...pure magic, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing this radiant piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:20
Memories of childhood.
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely trip down their memory lane with all those wonderful memories, the write has a very loving calming feel to it, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 07:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lovely trip down their memory lane with all those wonderful memories, the write has a very loving calming feel to it, enjoyed the read
July 13th, 2025 07:19
Memories of childhood.
sorenbarrett said:
Memories well written of a past enchanted, a storybook of comfort and peace a place to retreat to under times of stress. So nicely painted and sculpted it shines and glitters taking us back to peace and safety, a warm place of nurturance. Very nicely written
July 13th, 2025 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Memories well written of a past enchanted, a storybook of comfort and peace a place to retreat to under times of stress. So nicely painted and sculpted it shines and glitters taking us back to peace and safety, a warm place of nurturance. Very nicely written
July 13th, 2025 05:35
Love yourself,
David Wakeling said:
What a wonder poem about the ultimate emotion. Live life with those you Love.I like the rhyme it is meticulous and clever.Enjoyed reading
July 12th, 2025 19:30
David Wakeling said:
What a wonder poem about the ultimate emotion. Live life with those you Love.I like the rhyme it is meticulous and clever.Enjoyed reading
July 12th, 2025 19:30
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you glued all the fragments and pieces together, creating thereby a more intricate item than existed previously, perhaps. And again, how you revive memories of personal meltdowns in front of the pc, and subsequently this device, [this handheld torture device labeled \"my cellphone\" to establish my inherent masochism, I guess] where the sprite of inspiration is extinguished in a heartbeat as what I\'d just posted is no more because...why?! Welcome Back. Glad you returned and didn\'t yield to the damning puff which extinguished all you\'d seemed to be. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a winsome, haunting poignancy.
July 12th, 2025 09:39
Cheeky Missy said:
At least you glued all the fragments and pieces together, creating thereby a more intricate item than existed previously, perhaps. And again, how you revive memories of personal meltdowns in front of the pc, and subsequently this device, [this handheld torture device labeled \"my cellphone\" to establish my inherent masochism, I guess] where the sprite of inspiration is extinguished in a heartbeat as what I\'d just posted is no more because...why?! Welcome Back. Glad you returned and didn\'t yield to the damning puff which extinguished all you\'d seemed to be. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a winsome, haunting poignancy.
July 12th, 2025 09:39
Love yourself,
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of looking beyond the war, devastation, ugliest sides of today\'s world and seeing that underneath it all, there is a chance for peace and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 09:03
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of looking beyond the war, devastation, ugliest sides of today\'s world and seeing that underneath it all, there is a chance for peace and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 09:03
Love yourself,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, this radiates with such sincere light. It reads like both a benediction and a reminder...gentle, wise, and full of soul. I especially love how you frame the present as sacred ground. Amen. It is. Thank you for this beautiful poem. 🌹👏 A fave...easily.
July 12th, 2025 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, this radiates with such sincere light. It reads like both a benediction and a reminder...gentle, wise, and full of soul. I especially love how you frame the present as sacred ground. Amen. It is. Thank you for this beautiful poem. 🌹👏 A fave...easily.
July 12th, 2025 08:27
Love yourself,
Bella Shepard said:
\"Love yourself,\" the whisper starts and ends, For life\'s a breath, a moment that extends\". The opening phrase sets the stage for a wonderful poem filled with hope and love. Each line beautifully crafted in rhyme and flow. You have a gift of words that I admire greatly, and can\'t help but fav!
July 12th, 2025 07:01
Bella Shepard said:
\"Love yourself,\" the whisper starts and ends, For life\'s a breath, a moment that extends\". The opening phrase sets the stage for a wonderful poem filled with hope and love. Each line beautifully crafted in rhyme and flow. You have a gift of words that I admire greatly, and can\'t help but fav!
July 12th, 2025 07:01
Love yourself,
arqios said:
A poem to run to when the world isn’t as it could be/should be. Comforting and inspiring 🙏🏻🕊
July 12th, 2025 06:59
arqios said:
A poem to run to when the world isn’t as it could be/should be. Comforting and inspiring 🙏🏻🕊
July 12th, 2025 06:59
Love yourself,
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message set in good rhyme and meter it reveals a secret to peace and happiness hidden by the by the ugliness of the world we live in revealing the beauty of what is really there. A lovely poem of wisdom and the meaning of life.
July 12th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the message set in good rhyme and meter it reveals a secret to peace and happiness hidden by the by the ugliness of the world we live in revealing the beauty of what is really there. A lovely poem of wisdom and the meaning of life.
July 12th, 2025 06:28
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
orchidee said:
Ohh, they just have to get on with it, if in a huff they block us! lol.
July 12th, 2025 01:42
orchidee said:
Ohh, they just have to get on with it, if in a huff they block us! lol.
July 12th, 2025 01:42
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
Poetic Licence said:
Isn\'t that what and why we put our poetry out there, a chance to be heard and to receive others views and opinions, nicely expressed write
July 12th, 2025 01:14
Poetic Licence said:
Isn\'t that what and why we put our poetry out there, a chance to be heard and to receive others views and opinions, nicely expressed write
July 12th, 2025 01:14
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
Doggerel Dave said:
Well then, someone with your alias from Italy who contributed nothing with respect to poetry but had plenty to say on others has now disappeared, at least from my pin \'Fraternity\'. An initiative of management at my request.
That must be a relief to be rid of the fraudster ..
l would be happy to hear from you if you have anything relevant to say....
July 11th, 2025 19:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Well then, someone with your alias from Italy who contributed nothing with respect to poetry but had plenty to say on others has now disappeared, at least from my pin \'Fraternity\'. An initiative of management at my request.
That must be a relief to be rid of the fraudster ..
l would be happy to hear from you if you have anything relevant to say....
July 11th, 2025 19:39
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful and well constructed poem. The author pouring the heart out on paper.Very moving.Enjoyable read
July 11th, 2025 19:19
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful and well constructed poem. The author pouring the heart out on paper.Very moving.Enjoyable read
July 11th, 2025 19:19
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. A fave friend. There’s a quiet power in this, a kind of elegy for digital presence and the strange rules that govern it. The imagery of vanishing voices and drawn lines hits hard...and the final verses linger like a pulse beneath the silence. You’ve captured something deeply human in the midst of something so virtual. Beautifully expressed. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. A fave friend. There’s a quiet power in this, a kind of elegy for digital presence and the strange rules that govern it. The imagery of vanishing voices and drawn lines hits hard...and the final verses linger like a pulse beneath the silence. You’ve captured something deeply human in the midst of something so virtual. Beautifully expressed. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:56
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