Comments received on poems by Friendship
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every gesture, every stroke. It reads like building a soul from the earth itself. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every gesture, every stroke. It reads like building a soul from the earth itself. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 11th, 2025 10:16
\"Woven of Earth and Heart\"
sorenbarrett said:
A truly lovely poem that applies to the art but more so to the act of creation itself. Your use of images of nature woven into a creation mimics that of God, whether literal or in mythology creates man from dust of the earth. Very nicely done and a fave
December 11th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
A truly lovely poem that applies to the art but more so to the act of creation itself. Your use of images of nature woven into a creation mimics that of God, whether literal or in mythology creates man from dust of the earth. Very nicely done and a fave
December 11th, 2025 08:48
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, I was at the hairdressers today.
The stories you get there are brilliant.
I once cut my hair myself, a sort of emergency cut, you might say, to impress this girl.
She sure was impressed as she backed out the bar at a rate of knots.
December 10th, 2025 13:20
Paul Bell said:
Strangely enough, I was at the hairdressers today.
The stories you get there are brilliant.
I once cut my hair myself, a sort of emergency cut, you might say, to impress this girl.
She sure was impressed as she backed out the bar at a rate of knots.
December 10th, 2025 13:20
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and starlit map of who you’ve been. The poem holds both softness and defiance, ending with that radiant image of a galaxy that refuses to dim. Truly beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and starlit map of who you’ve been. The poem holds both softness and defiance, ending with that radiant image of a galaxy that refuses to dim. Truly beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 10th, 2025 09:53
Ode to the Wild Tresses
sorenbarrett said:
Memories in locks, remembrances in curls, tresses of the past, a history in hair. Lovely write my friend
December 10th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Memories in locks, remembrances in curls, tresses of the past, a history in hair. Lovely write my friend
December 10th, 2025 07:33
Ode to the Wild Tresses
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read, clever write. We women are particular about our hair.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
Katie B. said:
Enjoyable read, clever write. We women are particular about our hair.
December 10th, 2025 05:54
True Tenderness,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the hand like mist…the candle burning because darkness welcomes its light. You captured the kind of tenderness that heals without trying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 11:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the hand like mist…the candle burning because darkness welcomes its light. You captured the kind of tenderness that heals without trying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 9th, 2025 11:30
True Tenderness,
Evie Baker said:
absolutely beautiful! I love the gentle personification. The calm, genuine care that radiates from this poem is incredible!
December 9th, 2025 08:22
Evie Baker said:
absolutely beautiful! I love the gentle personification. The calm, genuine care that radiates from this poem is incredible!
December 9th, 2025 08:22
True Tenderness,
Paul Bell said:
Epic poem with a lot of dimensions running through it.
Could even be a trip through life.
When darkness becomes light we awaken.
Great poem.
December 9th, 2025 08:22
Paul Bell said:
Epic poem with a lot of dimensions running through it.
Could even be a trip through life.
When darkness becomes light we awaken.
Great poem.
December 9th, 2025 08:22
True Tenderness,
Katie B. said:
Truly amazing poem on tenderness! You are so well written and an inspiration to me. I want to write like you!!
December 9th, 2025 07:42
Katie B. said:
Truly amazing poem on tenderness! You are so well written and an inspiration to me. I want to write like you!!
December 9th, 2025 07:42
True Tenderness,
sorenbarrett said:
I think this is my favorite of your poems. It speaks with great depth of understanding to the point of not assuming but just observing. The metaphors are wonderful and give great strength to the piece. It speaks with a calmness and the very tenderness of its title. A definite fave
December 9th, 2025 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I think this is my favorite of your poems. It speaks with great depth of understanding to the point of not assuming but just observing. The metaphors are wonderful and give great strength to the piece. It speaks with a calmness and the very tenderness of its title. A definite fave
December 9th, 2025 07:19
Mama\'s nasal hair,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it reads like a love note wrapped in a grin. A quirky subject with a heartfelt pulse. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it reads like a love note wrapped in a grin. A quirky subject with a heartfelt pulse. Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 20:52
Mama\'s nasal hair,
arqios said:
For me it was Nan’s. Mum’s were an inordinate number of moles which she one day had cauterised. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 08:24
arqios said:
For me it was Nan’s. Mum’s were an inordinate number of moles which she one day had cauterised. 🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 08:24
Mama\'s nasal hair,
sorenbarrett said:
Ah so true what one attempts to extricate, or hide is often the marker of who one is and the strengths of a life well lived. Nicely written my friend
December 8th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Ah so true what one attempts to extricate, or hide is often the marker of who one is and the strengths of a life well lived. Nicely written my friend
December 8th, 2025 06:26
Mama\'s nasal hair,
Paul Bell said:
Here\'s to mama\'s nasal hair, she\'s done her time and deserves to show it off.
Plus, she\'s got to a time in her life when she\'s thought to herself, Brad Pitt isn\'t coming.
December 8th, 2025 06:23
Paul Bell said:
Here\'s to mama\'s nasal hair, she\'s done her time and deserves to show it off.
Plus, she\'s got to a time in her life when she\'s thought to herself, Brad Pitt isn\'t coming.
December 8th, 2025 06:23
Ass liquor both ways.
NinjaGirl said:
Funny visual haha but great message. I don\'t consume alcohol either, anything that messes up your system I believe to be dangerous. Well done my friend
December 7th, 2025 20:41
NinjaGirl said:
Funny visual haha but great message. I don\'t consume alcohol either, anything that messes up your system I believe to be dangerous. Well done my friend
December 7th, 2025 20:41
Ass liquor both ways.
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write full of images and metaphor that enriches the meaning. I congratulate you on the write so well done. A fave
December 7th, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write full of images and metaphor that enriches the meaning. I congratulate you on the write so well done. A fave
December 7th, 2025 09:23
Ass liquor both ways.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love the title! Indeed! Also, the way you frame the act as a sacrament gone wrong… it lands with real weight. A remarkable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love the title! Indeed! Also, the way you frame the act as a sacrament gone wrong… it lands with real weight. A remarkable piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 7th, 2025 08:16
Christmas.
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I drift back in time to wamest memories of the Christmases you describe. Thank you for these beautiful, happy rememberances!
December 6th, 2025 12:08
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I drift back in time to wamest memories of the Christmases you describe. Thank you for these beautiful, happy rememberances!
December 6th, 2025 12:08
Christmas.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the longing, the warmth, the memory of light. You make Christmas feel like a place the heart returns to. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the longing, the warmth, the memory of light. You make Christmas feel like a place the heart returns to. Lovely work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 6th, 2025 10:55
Christmas.
orchidee said:
Good write F. A couple of Carols are a bit daft. They seem to worship the Christmas tree itself. A bit of idolatry there!
December 6th, 2025 07:48
orchidee said:
Good write F. A couple of Carols are a bit daft. They seem to worship the Christmas tree itself. A bit of idolatry there!
December 6th, 2025 07:48
Christmas.
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and symbolically a marker of all that is good about family, friends and mankind. It is an archetype of peace and harmony a safe and secure place to withdraw from a violent, cold and rejecting world. You set this so well and the picture is perfect an idealized memory. Loved it and it has such a sense of longing just as does a childhood fairytale
December 6th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Such a nostalgic poem of fond memories. Christmas literally and symbolically a marker of all that is good about family, friends and mankind. It is an archetype of peace and harmony a safe and secure place to withdraw from a violent, cold and rejecting world. You set this so well and the picture is perfect an idealized memory. Loved it and it has such a sense of longing just as does a childhood fairytale
December 6th, 2025 07:03
Christmas.
Paul Bell said:
Oh, Christmas, why am I in this women\'s shop trying to remember what size, what colour, what style she said.
What is wrong with a big flowery dress, every woman should have one. Okay, underwear department, why does she need underwear, she has millions.
Okay, my task is done, I deserve a drink.
December 6th, 2025 06:47
Paul Bell said:
Oh, Christmas, why am I in this women\'s shop trying to remember what size, what colour, what style she said.
What is wrong with a big flowery dress, every woman should have one. Okay, underwear department, why does she need underwear, she has millions.
Okay, my task is done, I deserve a drink.
December 6th, 2025 06:47
Recognize.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and reality drift apart until the voice becomes the anchor. It is tender, honest, and full of lived truth. So very well penned, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 11:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and reality drift apart until the voice becomes the anchor. It is tender, honest, and full of lived truth. So very well penned, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 5th, 2025 11:09
Recognize.
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me - Ahh, so you recognise me?! And a note to self: Do shut up sometimes Orchi. heehee.
December 5th, 2025 09:04
orchidee said:
A daft comment from me - Ahh, so you recognise me?! And a note to self: Do shut up sometimes Orchi. heehee.
December 5th, 2025 09:04
Recognize.
Paul Bell said:
Telling piece, the voice may stay the same, but time sometimes does you no favours.
Sadly we\'re all getting older, leaving the young behind us.
December 5th, 2025 08:53
Paul Bell said:
Telling piece, the voice may stay the same, but time sometimes does you no favours.
Sadly we\'re all getting older, leaving the young behind us.
December 5th, 2025 08:53
Recognize.
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the ravages of time and the decay that changes the map. Written in a most wonderful rhyme that is subtle and to some hidden. It evokes a sense of sadness and melancholy that is nostalgic at the same time. Very well done
December 5th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem that encapsulates our difficulty dealing with the ravages of time and the decay that changes the map. Written in a most wonderful rhyme that is subtle and to some hidden. It evokes a sense of sadness and melancholy that is nostalgic at the same time. Very well done
December 5th, 2025 08:41
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