Comments received on poems by Friendship
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
turningpoint said:
very heartfelt sad could happen
August 7th, 2026 16:37
turningpoint said:
very heartfelt sad could happen
August 7th, 2026 16:37
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
2781 said:
: be ye transformed by the renewing of your mind, that ye may prove what is that good, and acceptable, and perfect, will of God.
August 6th, 2026 02:37
2781 said:
: be ye transformed by the renewing of your mind, that ye may prove what is that good, and acceptable, and perfect, will of God.
August 6th, 2026 02:37
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that never lets up. What stays with me most is the tragedy of believing we have to carry our deepest wounds alone until the silence becomes its own prison. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that never lets up. What stays with me most is the tragedy of believing we have to carry our deepest wounds alone until the silence becomes its own prison. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 20:16
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Neville said:
Secrets are like the spice box of earth .. a compelling read throughout Friendship .. p.s. the image you used to head the page on which your offering sits is the spit image of a guy I regularly see at the gym .. head tats n all .. Neville
August 5th, 2026 02:10
Neville said:
Secrets are like the spice box of earth .. a compelling read throughout Friendship .. p.s. the image you used to head the page on which your offering sits is the spit image of a guy I regularly see at the gym .. head tats n all .. Neville
August 5th, 2026 02:10
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poetry. Secrets of the mind that we carry with us through life, along the hard road of destiny. We look back and recall all of the sadness and joy. Loved your poem.- Phil A.
August 4th, 2026 22:28
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful poetry. Secrets of the mind that we carry with us through life, along the hard road of destiny. We look back and recall all of the sadness and joy. Loved your poem.- Phil A.
August 4th, 2026 22:28
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
peto said:
Your pen is like a wand friendship
This is magical
Particularly enjoyed 2nd verse
An outstanding talent
August 4th, 2026 11:52
peto said:
Your pen is like a wand friendship
This is magical
Particularly enjoyed 2nd verse
An outstanding talent
August 4th, 2026 11:52
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic isolation in this poem bring darkness and resignation. Very well written and most compelling.
August 4th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and tragic isolation in this poem bring darkness and resignation. Very well written and most compelling.
August 4th, 2026 09:31
God, can you hear me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a heartfelt prayer. The vulnerability throughout is matched by a quiet trust that keeps reaching toward God, even in the darkest moments. That combination of honesty and hope is something I deeply appreciate and relate to. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a heartfelt prayer. The vulnerability throughout is matched by a quiet trust that keeps reaching toward God, even in the darkest moments. That combination of honesty and hope is something I deeply appreciate and relate to. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 16:57
God, can you hear me?
soheil khodaparasti said:
This moving, sincere, and relatable poem reminds us that even in life\'s darkest moments, faith can provide strength, comfort, and hope.
August 3rd, 2026 02:52
soheil khodaparasti said:
This moving, sincere, and relatable poem reminds us that even in life\'s darkest moments, faith can provide strength, comfort, and hope.
August 3rd, 2026 02:52
God, can you hear me?
arqios said:
from the very heart prayers are heard and answered 🙏🕊️
August 3rd, 2026 01:04
arqios said:
from the very heart prayers are heard and answered 🙏🕊️
August 3rd, 2026 01:04
God, can you hear me?
peto said:
I\'m pretty sure he can hear us and answers
Sometimes that answer is no
Love the rhyme and flow as always
August 2nd, 2026 18:51
peto said:
I\'m pretty sure he can hear us and answers
Sometimes that answer is no
Love the rhyme and flow as always
August 2nd, 2026 18:51
Oh God ,I tried.
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
Fly
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
Has her therapy gone wrong?
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
God, can you hear me?
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
God, can you hear me?
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is striking in its emotional intensity, capturing a deep sense of betrayal where trust was meant to be sacred. The contrast between the expectation of healing and the experience of harm gives it a sharp, painful edge, and the imagery of clinical language turned weapon makes the impact even stronger.
August 2nd, 2026 07:20
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is striking in its emotional intensity, capturing a deep sense of betrayal where trust was meant to be sacred. The contrast between the expectation of healing and the experience of harm gives it a sharp, painful edge, and the imagery of clinical language turned weapon makes the impact even stronger.
August 2nd, 2026 07:20
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to one of the hardest realities…when trust is broken by someone we’re told we can safely lean on, the damage reaches far beyond the moment itself. You captured that ache with honesty. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to one of the hardest realities…when trust is broken by someone we’re told we can safely lean on, the damage reaches far beyond the moment itself. You captured that ache with honesty. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:04
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful poem, yet heartbreaking.
August 1st, 2026 07:17
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful poem, yet heartbreaking.
August 1st, 2026 07:17
Has her therapy gone wrong?
peto said:
The/rapist
Screwing heads
Your writing friendship is something more than a read
The reader can feel it
Another fav for me
July 31st, 2026 10:14
peto said:
The/rapist
Screwing heads
Your writing friendship is something more than a read
The reader can feel it
Another fav for me
July 31st, 2026 10:14
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Paul Bell said:
Never assume the person you\'re talking to is the one to help.
I suppose in the end, no one is coming for you.
This is probably why people don\'t seek help, and why we go to the grave nuts.
July 31st, 2026 10:00
Paul Bell said:
Never assume the person you\'re talking to is the one to help.
I suppose in the end, no one is coming for you.
This is probably why people don\'t seek help, and why we go to the grave nuts.
July 31st, 2026 10:00
Has her therapy gone wrong?
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a view of treason and betrayal from the condemned. So hard to see beyond prison walls when one is kept within a stone cell. This one tears the heart. When one is hurt by what one turns to as helping hands and they only deliver pain. Very nicely written with good rhyme and meter. A deeply soul searching poem and a fave
July 31st, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a view of treason and betrayal from the condemned. So hard to see beyond prison walls when one is kept within a stone cell. This one tears the heart. When one is hurt by what one turns to as helping hands and they only deliver pain. Very nicely written with good rhyme and meter. A deeply soul searching poem and a fave
July 31st, 2026 09:34
Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me. The recurring declaration grows more resolved each time...turning sadness into decision. I know what it is to reach the point where departure stops feeling like defeat and begins to feel like self-preservation. Powerful and beautifully constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me. The recurring declaration grows more resolved each time...turning sadness into decision. I know what it is to reach the point where departure stops feeling like defeat and begins to feel like self-preservation. Powerful and beautifully constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:11
Home
soheil khodaparasti said:
The emotional depth and reflective tone reminds us that sometimes the hardest, yet healthiest, choice is to leave the past behind and embrace a new beginning.
July 31st, 2026 03:43
soheil khodaparasti said:
The emotional depth and reflective tone reminds us that sometimes the hardest, yet healthiest, choice is to leave the past behind and embrace a new beginning.
July 31st, 2026 03:43
Home
peto said:
Fantastic yet again
Each verse is at least as good as the proceeding one
Great imagery
Flowing meter and outstanding lines
Home is where the heart is
Loved it
Stunning write
July 30th, 2026 18:36
peto said:
Fantastic yet again
Each verse is at least as good as the proceeding one
Great imagery
Flowing meter and outstanding lines
Home is where the heart is
Loved it
Stunning write
July 30th, 2026 18:36
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