Comments received on poems by Friendship



Happy Birthday, my brother from another mother.❀️
mylastwrites said:

What a beautifully well written poem. You touched the heart of what true friendship is all about. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.

June 27th, 2026 17:51

Mother nature, give me a break, it\'s too damn hot.
spilleronsheet said:

Truly agree with your words that rhyme, painting an image of recent times, may Lord relieve us from this damn summer of worst times…very well penned dear poet

June 27th, 2026 15:58

Mother nature, give me a break, it\'s too damn hot.
orchidee said:

Good write F.

June 27th, 2026 10:31

Mother nature, give me a break, it\'s too damn hot.
sorenbarrett said:

So well written in wonderful rhyme and good meter it speaks of too much heat, relentless and merciless hot weather. Nicely imaged in words.

June 27th, 2026 08:47

A strong woman.🌹
arqios said:

Superb read Friendship.πŸ•ŠοΈ πŸ™

June 26th, 2026 21:25

A strong woman.🌹
orchidee said:

Good write F. Aww, I never threw any bricks at ya! (heehee).
With the BS poem - when it hits the fan, be sure to be facing the other way - so Confucius said (probably). lol.

June 26th, 2026 11:11

A strong woman.🌹
ms.divine said:

Good read πŸ«‚πŸ«ΆπŸΏ

June 26th, 2026 10:35

A strong woman.🌹
ms.divine said:

Needed them words you spoke thank you

June 26th, 2026 10:34

A strong woman.🌹
sorenbarrett said:

The description of a strong woman as the titile states. Well described and worded. A strong work.

June 26th, 2026 09:38

A strong woman.🌹
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, this is a heartfelt celebration of quiet strength. The imagery of roots, mountains, willows, and gentle fire all comes together to honor resilience without ever confusing it with force. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 26th, 2026 09:34

Just Bullshit.
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:

I absolutely loved these words

June 26th, 2026 07:58

Just Bullshit.
mylastwrites said:

Your words painted a very wonderful picture. Great write. Thank you for sharing.

June 25th, 2026 15:36

Just Bullshit.
sorenbarrett said:

I have heard the story many times from different people and myself as well. People wanting double pay for work not done. The audacity. Well written my friend and I would say the same \"I owe no debt to you\"

June 25th, 2026 14:22

Just Bullshit.
orchidee said:

I never knew one could get BS remover. lol.

June 25th, 2026 13:52

Just Bullshit.
peto said:

Reminds me of an addict on the prowl
Almost make you feel obliged to cough up

The 1st verse suggests a legal agreement was reached
But now emotions seem to be at play
An artist with a pen

June 25th, 2026 13:28

Just Bullshit.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, what struck me most is how steadily the poem builds its case...from the settled ledger and paid debt to the repeated denial of reality, each stanza raises the emotional stakes without losing control. By the time the final line arrives, it feels earned, resolute, and deeply satisfying. Beautifully written, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 25th, 2026 10:54

Just Bullshit.
ms.divine said:

Great read πŸ«ΆπŸΏπŸ˜‰

June 25th, 2026 10:42

Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, you ain\'t kidding, my friend. What struck me most is how relentlessly the metaphors build upon one another. From whisper...to shadow...to anchor...to slow-burning house...to hollowed tree, each image deepens the emotional landscape without feeling repetitive. It\'s a sobering and beautifully crafted reflection on an often unseen struggle. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈ

June 25th, 2026 10:38

Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
orchidee said:

Good write F. There must be something of good, of use, in each of us, or else we would be completely useless, worthless, a waste of space. And probably more than one good thing, several in fact, for each person.

June 25th, 2026 02:45

Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
sorenbarrett said:

A good description cast in allegory nicely written with rhyme. A fave

June 24th, 2026 21:00

Low self-esteem can literally destroy a human being.
arqios said:

It\'s only too easy and too comfortable to wallow. Know it all too well. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

June 24th, 2026 20:20

I’m tired, Mama
rgm441 said:

I love it, especially the rhythm beautifully written, Thanks.

June 24th, 2026 06:40


You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
arqios said:

How absolutely freeing. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

June 23rd, 2026 05:40

Farts 🀣
cully45 said:

Brilliant piece. Well put together - Liked it alot

June 23rd, 2026 05:06

You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
cellinic said:

A good write. thanks)

June 22nd, 2026 20:14

You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Syd said:

Amen to that!

Brilliantly written πŸ‘

- Syd

June 22nd, 2026 13:39


You\'re allowed to outgrow the person you used to be.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, this really moved me. There is such a deep sense of permission and grace woven through it. So many people need to hear exactly this message at exactly the right moment. Beautiful poem, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 22nd, 2026 10:29

Always proud to call you my Dad.❀️
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Friendship, this really moved me. Reading your note alongside the poem made it hit even harder. What a beautiful tribute to a father whose lessons clearly continue to travel with you every day. Loved this, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

June 22nd, 2026 10:06



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