Comments received on poems by Friendship
Just listen and look.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a peaceful and grounding poem. It gently draws us away from constant distraction and back toward the living world around us...beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what a peaceful and grounding poem. It gently draws us away from constant distraction and back toward the living world around us...beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2026 08:14
Just listen and look.
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful, evocative poem with a strong message about slowing down and reconnecting with nature.
September 16th, 2026 02:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
A thoughtful, evocative poem with a strong message about slowing down and reconnecting with nature.
September 16th, 2026 02:29
Just listen and look.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words Friendship. So many people do mot just look and listen.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderfully true words Friendship. So many people do mot just look and listen.
Andy
September 16th, 2026 01:21
Just listen and look.
Fränz Müller said:
I love this one…beautiful imagery here!
September 15th, 2026 12:59
Fränz Müller said:
I love this one…beautiful imagery here!
September 15th, 2026 12:59
Just listen and look.
Paul Bell said:
Nature knows best, and we should heed her warnings.
September 15th, 2026 11:05
Paul Bell said:
Nature knows best, and we should heed her warnings.
September 15th, 2026 11:05
Just listen and look.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! It speaks of nature and being attuned with it. Listen to its wisdom. There are spirits in the trees and breeze. A lovely poem
September 15th, 2026 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful! It speaks of nature and being attuned with it. Listen to its wisdom. There are spirits in the trees and breeze. A lovely poem
September 15th, 2026 09:48
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
Donteatmecows said:
a poem of profound isolation and loneliness...well written...it expresses how people misunderstood you while nobody saw the real truth of you...as they were blind by their assumptions...I must say i have experienced the same thing...im very sorry you go through this, my friend, it is incredibly lonely when you don\'t truly align or belong with any family or friends
September 11th, 2026 14:18
Donteatmecows said:
a poem of profound isolation and loneliness...well written...it expresses how people misunderstood you while nobody saw the real truth of you...as they were blind by their assumptions...I must say i have experienced the same thing...im very sorry you go through this, my friend, it is incredibly lonely when you don\'t truly align or belong with any family or friends
September 11th, 2026 14:18
What if ?
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? The most unanswered question we ever ask Friendship.
Andy
September 8th, 2026 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
What if? The most unanswered question we ever ask Friendship.
Andy
September 8th, 2026 01:50
What if ?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Friendship. The ache here isn’t really about wanting to be everything to someone again...it’s wanting back the simple warmth that now seems available to everyone except you. That’s a brutal kind of distance. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful piece, Friendship. The ache here isn’t really about wanting to be everything to someone again...it’s wanting back the simple warmth that now seems available to everyone except you. That’s a brutal kind of distance. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2026 14:43
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
mylastwrites said:
What a great piece of work. Drifting in the endless sea of life. I’ve been in those waters. Thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2026 13:41
mylastwrites said:
What a great piece of work. Drifting in the endless sea of life. I’ve been in those waters. Thank you for sharing.
September 7th, 2026 13:41
What if ?
Paul Bell said:
It seems he doesn\'t need to please or flatter you.
Others may see the charactor of the man, you just see the shadow.
September 7th, 2026 13:13
Paul Bell said:
It seems he doesn\'t need to please or flatter you.
Others may see the charactor of the man, you just see the shadow.
September 7th, 2026 13:13
What if ?
orchidee said:
Good write F.
When did I not hear ya?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 7th, 2026 13:12
orchidee said:
Good write F.
When did I not hear ya?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 7th, 2026 13:12
What if ?
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant meditation on longing and distance, skillfully conveyed through vivid imagery.
September 7th, 2026 11:11
soheil khodaparasti said:
A poignant meditation on longing and distance, skillfully conveyed through vivid imagery.
September 7th, 2026 11:11
What if ?
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written as a question directed at another and now awaits its answer. Well done
September 7th, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written as a question directed at another and now awaits its answer. Well done
September 7th, 2026 10:06
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
arqios said:
It reminds me that those who do see us actually truly do.
September 6th, 2026 22:20
arqios said:
It reminds me that those who do see us actually truly do.
September 6th, 2026 22:20
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
If there is a god, my question to God is why?
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
as a unitarian (linkedin with universalist), the dogma and enigma of the many mysteries of the cosmos left to each service attendant him/herself, and generally the minister another andrew l. weber not to be confused with Andrew Lloyd Webber, Baron Lloyd-Webber (born 22 March 1948) an English composer and impresario of musical theatre. much dynamism and preparation (maybe h) invested in the sermon addresses issues that incorporates aesthetics, ethics, logic... and ofttimes allows, enables and provides the he/she (whether member or guest) who attends made to feel included, cuz truth formerly devout men and women the average age verges between thirty to forty versus years ago, but when i, (a boyish looking papa - and up to the recent present, a former long haired pencil necked geek part of that demographics) toted along then preschool age daughters (long since grown into woman and autonomy) quite a sizable number of kids attended with one or both of their parents, which aforementioned preface of sorts addresses what appears to be dissatisfaction the creed, denomination, gobbledygook - no offense, et cetera which invariably left many dissatisfactory answers to question extant among freedom of belief, and though an atheist, the historical context of organized religion appeals to my inquisitive, thus if you dare please inform this scribe from southeastern montgomery county pennsylvania the faith thee got born into.
adieu from matthew scott harris
September 6th, 2026 19:35
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
turningpoint said:
pretty good well done
September 6th, 2026 16:57
turningpoint said:
pretty good well done
September 6th, 2026 16:57
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Friendship. There’s grief here, but also that harder loneliness of being misread by the living while the people who truly knew you are gone. That leaves the speaker stranded in a very particular kind of solitude. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a poignant piece, Friendship. There’s grief here, but also that harder loneliness of being misread by the living while the people who truly knew you are gone. That leaves the speaker stranded in a very particular kind of solitude. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:18
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
Neville said:
Made me want to dive straight through the screen in front of me and give you a BIG HUG .. Neville
September 6th, 2026 12:22
Neville said:
Made me want to dive straight through the screen in front of me and give you a BIG HUG .. Neville
September 6th, 2026 12:22
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful juxtaposition of profound loneliness and a strong sense of individuality.
September 6th, 2026 10:11
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful juxtaposition of profound loneliness and a strong sense of individuality.
September 6th, 2026 10:11
We are not all the same. I was just being me.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling isolated. Nicely rhymed and metered it calls out alone and adrift on a vast sea that one can not drink. A fave
September 6th, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling isolated. Nicely rhymed and metered it calls out alone and adrift on a vast sea that one can not drink. A fave
September 6th, 2026 09:56
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