Comments received on poems by Friendship
Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone.
RSM0812 said:
A well written piece. The words were poetical and chosen well. I think there is definitely advice here. Great job.
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
RSM0812 said:
A well written piece. The words were poetical and chosen well. I think there is definitely advice here. Great job.
August 3rd, 2025 07:23
I am who I am!
Poetic Licence said:
That is to the point and beautiful, and just the way it should be, leaving them wandering what\'s behind the smile,enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 12:30
Poetic Licence said:
That is to the point and beautiful, and just the way it should be, leaving them wandering what\'s behind the smile,enjoyed the read
August 2nd, 2025 12:30
I am who I am!
Neville said:
This is a proper little gem ma\'am if you don\'t mind me saying so .. it shines .. Neville
August 2nd, 2025 09:37
Neville said:
This is a proper little gem ma\'am if you don\'t mind me saying so .. it shines .. Neville
August 2nd, 2025 09:37
I am who I am!
Salvia.S said:
This is so relatable... Very nicely expressed!!!
August 2nd, 2025 08:36
Salvia.S said:
This is so relatable... Very nicely expressed!!!
August 2nd, 2025 08:36
I am who I am!
peto said:
Made me smile reading
A bit different from what I expected from you
Every bit as good
Dangerous and talented
August 2nd, 2025 08:06
peto said:
Made me smile reading
A bit different from what I expected from you
Every bit as good
Dangerous and talented
August 2nd, 2025 08:06
I am who I am!
sorenbarrett said:
Short and pointed.A great poem that leaves a question. Ah! What\'s behind that smile?
August 2nd, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
Short and pointed.A great poem that leaves a question. Ah! What\'s behind that smile?
August 2nd, 2025 07:57
Going home soon.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The pangs of hunger, so, too, loneliness, to suffer and yet, head held high with neither let nor hinder. The power of the feminine heart can at times be overwhelming as is the case with this special lady as she graces herself with dignity to meet her maker. A heart touching tale composed with compassion and admiration. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 2nd, 2025 05:21
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The pangs of hunger, so, too, loneliness, to suffer and yet, head held high with neither let nor hinder. The power of the feminine heart can at times be overwhelming as is the case with this special lady as she graces herself with dignity to meet her maker. A heart touching tale composed with compassion and admiration. Accolades galore.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 2nd, 2025 05:21
Going home soon.
orchidee said:
Godo write F.
If it had been about you, I would have said, being daft: You gone home yet? lol.
August 2nd, 2025 02:25
orchidee said:
Godo write F.
If it had been about you, I would have said, being daft: You gone home yet? lol.
August 2nd, 2025 02:25
Going home soon.
Poetic Licence said:
This is a really beautiful heart touching write of the internal suffering and sacrifices many make even in today\'s world, in order to survive.a person of immense strength and resilliance on the outside, while on the inside hurting and wishing it was different, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 00:49
Poetic Licence said:
This is a really beautiful heart touching write of the internal suffering and sacrifices many make even in today\'s world, in order to survive.a person of immense strength and resilliance on the outside, while on the inside hurting and wishing it was different, wonderful write
August 2nd, 2025 00:49
Going home soon.
peto said:
I love how you can see passed what is presented in front of you
And get to what is really going on
That is the artist in you
Beautifully delivered
Stunning writing
August 1st, 2025 19:10
peto said:
I love how you can see passed what is presented in front of you
And get to what is really going on
That is the artist in you
Beautifully delivered
Stunning writing
August 1st, 2025 19:10
Going home soon.
sorenbarrett said:
Hard to read about anyone with hunger in a land that has plenty. Hard to hear of loneliness when there are so many people on earth. A difficult poem to read and know that there are many, too many that go through this. A world too busy to listen, people too calloused to hear. Pride and dignity a noble thing but speaking out can be noble as well. Speak out and reach out to others. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 17:25
sorenbarrett said:
Hard to read about anyone with hunger in a land that has plenty. Hard to hear of loneliness when there are so many people on earth. A difficult poem to read and know that there are many, too many that go through this. A world too busy to listen, people too calloused to hear. Pride and dignity a noble thing but speaking out can be noble as well. Speak out and reach out to others. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 17:25
My words on deaf ears.
Neville said:
Dear Friendship, my word my friend, you have certainly excelled with this fine example of the art I love so much .. Write on sister .. Neville
August 1st, 2025 01:33
Neville said:
Dear Friendship, my word my friend, you have certainly excelled with this fine example of the art I love so much .. Write on sister .. Neville
August 1st, 2025 01:33
My words on deaf ears.
peto said:
Hi friendship
This hits hard
I\'ve often thought of writing about the missing friends from here
Been a bit scared incase I miss anyone (from your info)
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
Glad to discover your writing
July 31st, 2025 18:05
peto said:
Hi friendship
This hits hard
I\'ve often thought of writing about the missing friends from here
Been a bit scared incase I miss anyone (from your info)
Thoroughly enjoyed reading
Glad to discover your writing
July 31st, 2025 18:05
My words on deaf ears.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
Well they should have listened because your poems, prose and reviews are loaded to the brim with wisdom, knowledge, compassion and reverence. Those of deaf ears, their loss. Now you seem to have found peace, I sincerely hope you have. Another honest passage of splendid poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 14:49
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
Well they should have listened because your poems, prose and reviews are loaded to the brim with wisdom, knowledge, compassion and reverence. Those of deaf ears, their loss. Now you seem to have found peace, I sincerely hope you have. Another honest passage of splendid poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 31st, 2025 14:49
My words on deaf ears.
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps you are one of the countless flowers which bloom in the shadows, like myself. I\'m a violet. Trampled, crushed, mowed down, but bouncing back and smiling at the heavens so quietly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 11:08
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps you are one of the countless flowers which bloom in the shadows, like myself. I\'m a violet. Trampled, crushed, mowed down, but bouncing back and smiling at the heavens so quietly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 31st, 2025 11:08
My words on deaf ears.
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write written with honesty and an open heart, hopefully now emerging from the darker days with commitment to not let the past happen again, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 10:45
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write written with honesty and an open heart, hopefully now emerging from the darker days with commitment to not let the past happen again, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 10:45
My words on deaf ears.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of honesty to others and self and a pledge to self to not allow what has happened in the past. Recognition becomes resolution. Nicely written in poetic form
July 31st, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of honesty to others and self and a pledge to self to not allow what has happened in the past. Recognition becomes resolution. Nicely written in poetic form
July 31st, 2025 10:41
My words on deaf ears.
Damaso said:
Somber and sad. Words from someone who gave everything even when no one is looking. Vital energy wasted can be thought of immediately. The pain left a mark on us and will help us next time. I enjoyed it very much. I won\'t try to explain it much; you just know what it feels like. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 10:40
Damaso said:
Somber and sad. Words from someone who gave everything even when no one is looking. Vital energy wasted can be thought of immediately. The pain left a mark on us and will help us next time. I enjoyed it very much. I won\'t try to explain it much; you just know what it feels like. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 31st, 2025 10:40
Mr. Krueger’s Porch
Neville said:
A thoroughly enjoyable read, write from one end through to t\'other .. I get the impression your dad was a decent guy who knew a thing or two .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 10:45
Neville said:
A thoroughly enjoyable read, write from one end through to t\'other .. I get the impression your dad was a decent guy who knew a thing or two .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 10:45
Nature is Calling.
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the change of seasons and your rapture in witnessing the same very vividly and beautifully
great job - keep them coming
July 29th, 2025 00:46
NafisaSB said:
you have captured the change of seasons and your rapture in witnessing the same very vividly and beautifully
great job - keep them coming
July 29th, 2025 00:46
Mosquitoes!
Neville said:
Made me smile .. maybe because I\'m here in the UK at the moment but I do remember those nasty critters from when I\'ve been your side of the Pond before .. Incidentally, I\'m back for a few days in mid November so maybe you could advise what they are like then .. pretty please .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:12
Neville said:
Made me smile .. maybe because I\'m here in the UK at the moment but I do remember those nasty critters from when I\'ve been your side of the Pond before .. Incidentally, I\'m back for a few days in mid November so maybe you could advise what they are like then .. pretty please .. Neville
July 28th, 2025 23:12
Mosquitoes!
Cheeky Missy said:
If winter offers the coolness sufficient for sweaters, I\'m guessing you\'re in the upper part nearer Pensacola where I lived for a brief spell, and where the January \'94 snowfall was a marvel. Haha for the clever image! Mosquitoes seemed to prefer me back in the day, my father protesting they didn\'t bother him nor his friend, albeit they were eating me alive. Prettily rendered with excellent feeling, great imagery, and palpable sense of the inescapable misery. I\'m sorry you\'re suffering. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:39
Cheeky Missy said:
If winter offers the coolness sufficient for sweaters, I\'m guessing you\'re in the upper part nearer Pensacola where I lived for a brief spell, and where the January \'94 snowfall was a marvel. Haha for the clever image! Mosquitoes seemed to prefer me back in the day, my father protesting they didn\'t bother him nor his friend, albeit they were eating me alive. Prettily rendered with excellent feeling, great imagery, and palpable sense of the inescapable misery. I\'m sorry you\'re suffering. Thank you for sharing.
July 28th, 2025 15:39
Mosquitoes!
sorenbarrett said:
The heat can be draining and the imprisonment in one\'s own house a solitary confinement. Mosquito guards outside make escape impossible or at least uncomfortable. Hope you get a break in the heat soon. A fun read for the reader.
July 28th, 2025 15:04
sorenbarrett said:
The heat can be draining and the imprisonment in one\'s own house a solitary confinement. Mosquito guards outside make escape impossible or at least uncomfortable. Hope you get a break in the heat soon. A fun read for the reader.
July 28th, 2025 15:04
Mosquitoes!
Damaso said:
At times I could feel in my own flesh what you describe. Last summer I touched madness because of these bugs and heat together. You can feel perfectly what you feel. Excellent written! Enjoy it a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Kind regards
July 28th, 2025 11:35
Damaso said:
At times I could feel in my own flesh what you describe. Last summer I touched madness because of these bugs and heat together. You can feel perfectly what you feel. Excellent written! Enjoy it a lot. Thanks for sharing it. Kind regards
July 28th, 2025 11:35
Mr. Krueger’s Porch
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
What a beautiful tribute to a quiet and hardworking fellow in beguiling prose and instances of tender poetic charm. This was lovely to read and as for your artistic skills, the ghost and pumpkins, is art to behold, especially the ghostly sheet, it looks translucent, every crease perfectly depicted. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 09:24
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
What a beautiful tribute to a quiet and hardworking fellow in beguiling prose and instances of tender poetic charm. This was lovely to read and as for your artistic skills, the ghost and pumpkins, is art to behold, especially the ghostly sheet, it looks translucent, every crease perfectly depicted. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 28th, 2025 09:24
Mosquitoes!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures Florida summer with brutal honesty and just the right splash of humor. The humid heat is its own antagonist in Florida…but those mosquitoes? Straight-up villains. I felt the cabin fever, the slow crawl of time, and the desperate hope for winter’s mercy...which translates to winter\'s wrath up here in Eastern Pennsylvania 🤣. You nailed the atmosphere...hot, heavy, and inescapable. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
July 28th, 2025 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this captures Florida summer with brutal honesty and just the right splash of humor. The humid heat is its own antagonist in Florida…but those mosquitoes? Straight-up villains. I felt the cabin fever, the slow crawl of time, and the desperate hope for winter’s mercy...which translates to winter\'s wrath up here in Eastern Pennsylvania 🤣. You nailed the atmosphere...hot, heavy, and inescapable. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done!
July 28th, 2025 09:13
Mr. Krueger’s Porch
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is luminous. It lingers like memory...soft, specific, and quietly sacred. Mr. Krueger feels real because he is...we’ve all known a version of him, or maybe been him ourselves. This is how you write a ghost story with soul. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
P.S. I came in wondering if you were paying ol\' Wes Craven an homage, if you are familiar with him and the Nightmare on Elm Street film franchise. Anyway, as fun as that might have been, this was a better direction for Mr. Krueger indeed. Loved it!
July 28th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is luminous. It lingers like memory...soft, specific, and quietly sacred. Mr. Krueger feels real because he is...we’ve all known a version of him, or maybe been him ourselves. This is how you write a ghost story with soul. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
P.S. I came in wondering if you were paying ol\' Wes Craven an homage, if you are familiar with him and the Nightmare on Elm Street film franchise. Anyway, as fun as that might have been, this was a better direction for Mr. Krueger indeed. Loved it!
July 28th, 2025 08:47
Mosquitoes!
Poetic Licence said:
Though the write is about the author\'s discomfort of the burning sun it is written in an entertaining way, those mosquito\'s would freak me out, nicely done
July 28th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
Though the write is about the author\'s discomfort of the burning sun it is written in an entertaining way, those mosquito\'s would freak me out, nicely done
July 28th, 2025 08:23
Mosquitoes!
RSM0812 said:
I live in Canada and mosquitos can be horrible here. Ive been to Florida a few times and lucky enough mosquitos must have been hiding bc i dont remember them as a problem. Lol. Nice write. Perfect rhythm, perfect rhyming.
July 28th, 2025 07:45
RSM0812 said:
I live in Canada and mosquitos can be horrible here. Ive been to Florida a few times and lucky enough mosquitos must have been hiding bc i dont remember them as a problem. Lol. Nice write. Perfect rhythm, perfect rhyming.
July 28th, 2025 07:45
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