Comments received on poems by Friendship
Perseverance in My Life
Paul Bell said:
Always think if you\'re true to yourself, perseverance will pay off.
Maybe not right away, the journey might be long, but worth the wait.
January 20th, 2026 15:02
Paul Bell said:
Always think if you\'re true to yourself, perseverance will pay off.
Maybe not right away, the journey might be long, but worth the wait.
January 20th, 2026 15:02
Perseverance in My Life
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. One step at a time, just one more step. If one focuses on just the next step one will get there. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
A good write. One step at a time, just one more step. If one focuses on just the next step one will get there. Nicely done
January 20th, 2026 07:59
Echoes of a Fading Light
Paul Bell said:
Tried the garden today, it was calling for help.
Managed an hour before I gave up.
Life in winter is definitely for hibernating.
January 19th, 2026 11:30
Paul Bell said:
Tried the garden today, it was calling for help.
Managed an hour before I gave up.
Life in winter is definitely for hibernating.
January 19th, 2026 11:30
Crow\'s Gambit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is rich and mesmerizing. It feels intelligent, patient, and deeply attentive to the world it’s watching. The reverence you give the crows never slips into myth-making…it stays grounded and earned. Wonderful write, my dear friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this is rich and mesmerizing. It feels intelligent, patient, and deeply attentive to the world it’s watching. The reverence you give the crows never slips into myth-making…it stays grounded and earned. Wonderful write, my dear friend!🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 19th, 2026 10:51
Crow\'s Gambit
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts slow and builds to a wonderful ending. The crow long maligned now realized to be far wiser than thought and a harbinger of not just evil but of seeing into a soul. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem starts slow and builds to a wonderful ending. The crow long maligned now realized to be far wiser than thought and a harbinger of not just evil but of seeing into a soul. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:53
Echoes of a Fading Light
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark feeling of sadness and lack of hope. It sees a world that is infertile and painful leaving a sad feeling. Nicely crafted it casts a shadow without promise of a new sunrise. Well done
January 18th, 2026 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark feeling of sadness and lack of hope. It sees a world that is infertile and painful leaving a sad feeling. Nicely crafted it casts a shadow without promise of a new sunrise. Well done
January 18th, 2026 20:05
Echoes of a Fading Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I connect deeply with this landscape you’ve drawn. That feeling of being surrounded by color others can still see, while you stand somewhere muted and cold, feels painfully familiar. Thank you for this, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 19:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, I connect deeply with this landscape you’ve drawn. That feeling of being surrounded by color others can still see, while you stand somewhere muted and cold, feels painfully familiar. Thank you for this, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 18th, 2026 19:38
\"It\'s Okay to Love Yourself\"
xTattooingPaperx said:
This is honestly the most suitable piece I could have came across this morning. Thank you for writing this.
January 9th, 2026 07:50
xTattooingPaperx said:
This is honestly the most suitable piece I could have came across this morning. Thank you for writing this.
January 9th, 2026 07:50
I am so psychotic
NafisaSB said:
yes you are truly alive to all that is going in and around you..
wishing you a blessed and beautiful year ahead...
January 9th, 2026 00:16
NafisaSB said:
yes you are truly alive to all that is going in and around you..
wishing you a blessed and beautiful year ahead...
January 9th, 2026 00:16
The Magic of Santa, Seen Through My Father\'s Eyes
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful metaphorical language deployed here which creates so many vivid impressions in my mind...another fave of mine.
January 7th, 2026 07:38
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful metaphorical language deployed here which creates so many vivid impressions in my mind...another fave of mine.
January 7th, 2026 07:38
Totally Free
orchidee said:
We are \'free\' too, not to comment on poet\'s poems where they NEVER reply! I\'m not saying that we need to confirm a comment every time by saying \'You\'re welcome\', etc. though that\'s encouraging.
January 7th, 2026 03:21
orchidee said:
We are \'free\' too, not to comment on poet\'s poems where they NEVER reply! I\'m not saying that we need to confirm a comment every time by saying \'You\'re welcome\', etc. though that\'s encouraging.
January 7th, 2026 03:21
Totally Free
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem moves with grace. You strip away obligation and noise, then let presence take its place. The ending doesn’t shout liberation…it settles into it, and that’s what makes it convincing. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem moves with grace. You strip away obligation and noise, then let presence take its place. The ending doesn’t shout liberation…it settles into it, and that’s what makes it convincing. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 6th, 2026 13:43
Totally Free
orchidee said:
Good write F. I was free as The Birdman, until me wings snapped after about 7 seconds. lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write F. I was free as The Birdman, until me wings snapped after about 7 seconds. lol.
January 6th, 2026 09:48
Totally Free
Katie B. said:
Always beautiful, always lovely Friendship. Thanks for sharing your talent.
January 6th, 2026 09:28
Katie B. said:
Always beautiful, always lovely Friendship. Thanks for sharing your talent.
January 6th, 2026 09:28
Totally Free
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strong sense of release here—earned, not romanticized. I like how freedom isn’t loud or flashy, just lived and observed. The imagery carries the calm confidence all the way through. Thoughtful, steady, and true.
January 6th, 2026 07:57
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a strong sense of release here—earned, not romanticized. I like how freedom isn’t loud or flashy, just lived and observed. The imagery carries the calm confidence all the way through. Thoughtful, steady, and true.
January 6th, 2026 07:57
Totally Free
sorenbarrett said:
The exhilaration of freedom that fills the breast of anyone that has ever tasted it shines in this poem. Nicely written with good measure and rhyme it shouts out its anthem. Nicely done Friendship
January 6th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
The exhilaration of freedom that fills the breast of anyone that has ever tasted it shines in this poem. Nicely written with good measure and rhyme it shouts out its anthem. Nicely done Friendship
January 6th, 2026 07:20
Self‑Portrait in Motion
Paul Bell said:
May your meter and rhyme continue.
Quite like the self reflection of yourself.
Sometimes we don\'t beat our own drum enough, and we really should, cos we\'re giving ourselves freely to critique.
January 6th, 2026 05:25
Paul Bell said:
May your meter and rhyme continue.
Quite like the self reflection of yourself.
Sometimes we don\'t beat our own drum enough, and we really should, cos we\'re giving ourselves freely to critique.
January 6th, 2026 05:25
Self‑Portrait in Motion
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful poem abounding with vivid imagery...definitely a fave!
January 6th, 2026 04:29
Dominic Windram said:
Beautiful poem abounding with vivid imagery...definitely a fave!
January 6th, 2026 04:29
Self‑Portrait in Motion
xTattooingPaperx said:
What a poetic take on philosophy! We do wear our memories and scars both through time. I truly adore this.
January 5th, 2026 21:29
xTattooingPaperx said:
What a poetic take on philosophy! We do wear our memories and scars both through time. I truly adore this.
January 5th, 2026 21:29
Self‑Portrait in Motion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem walks the line between reflection and becoming with grace. It acknowledges doubt, weight, and wear, yet never loses sight of movement. Ending with the self as both writer and written brings it full circle in a way that feels honest and grounding. Beautiful work, dearest friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this poem walks the line between reflection and becoming with grace. It acknowledges doubt, weight, and wear, yet never loses sight of movement. Ending with the self as both writer and written brings it full circle in a way that feels honest and grounding. Beautiful work, dearest friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 16:17
Self‑Portrait in Motion
orchidee said:
Good write F. So is my mind - a blank page - nothing in it! heehee.
January 5th, 2026 14:14
orchidee said:
Good write F. So is my mind - a blank page - nothing in it! heehee.
January 5th, 2026 14:14
Self‑Portrait in Motion
Neville said:
I always knew that the truth could and eventually would, be found in a poem .. Neville 💛👍
January 5th, 2026 13:49
Neville said:
I always knew that the truth could and eventually would, be found in a poem .. Neville 💛👍
January 5th, 2026 13:49
Self‑Portrait in Motion
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely and most inspiring write well couched in metaphor of great beauty it unravels and unfolds its meaning. It talks to me and I can feel its passion as I read it. There is no way not to give it a fave
January 5th, 2026 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
This is a lovely and most inspiring write well couched in metaphor of great beauty it unravels and unfolds its meaning. It talks to me and I can feel its passion as I read it. There is no way not to give it a fave
January 5th, 2026 10:01
Silent Scrolls\" I don\'t care, I\'m always gonna shine.
Neville said:
I am so glad you felt able to poem your feeling on the issue that so obviously underpins & provides the foundation for this work .. I am also full of both admiration and respect my friend .. and for what its worth, I have been blocked by so many times since I arrived here several years ago that I have lost count .. It used to bother me at first because not one of them blockers had the decency to inform me why they had blocked me .. but hey\' there\'s nowt as queer as folk so they say .. or at least used to say back in my day .. Take care, keep ya chin up and write on .. Neville 😎🌻👍
January 5th, 2026 06:16
Neville said:
I am so glad you felt able to poem your feeling on the issue that so obviously underpins & provides the foundation for this work .. I am also full of both admiration and respect my friend .. and for what its worth, I have been blocked by so many times since I arrived here several years ago that I have lost count .. It used to bother me at first because not one of them blockers had the decency to inform me why they had blocked me .. but hey\' there\'s nowt as queer as folk so they say .. or at least used to say back in my day .. Take care, keep ya chin up and write on .. Neville 😎🌻👍
January 5th, 2026 06:16
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