Comments received on poems by Friendship
Nature is Calling.
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with beautiful imagery of the great outdoors, when we are children the world and the outdoors is one big playground and we get out into it as often as we can, but for someone reason when we become older we ignore the beauty of it or just forget its there, waiting for our return, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write with beautiful imagery of the great outdoors, when we are children the world and the outdoors is one big playground and we get out into it as often as we can, but for someone reason when we become older we ignore the beauty of it or just forget its there, waiting for our return, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 09:50
Nature is Calling.
sorenbarrett said:
And so you are. A poem of nostalgia and seeing the world different than what it once was. A happy and glorious place full of joy so well imaged in this poem. And although the skin has changed on this world of ours the heart remains the same it is us and our blindness in growing old that has changed. Byu putting on our childhood glasses we will be able to see again the beauty that surrounds us and the joy of life.
July 23rd, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
And so you are. A poem of nostalgia and seeing the world different than what it once was. A happy and glorious place full of joy so well imaged in this poem. And although the skin has changed on this world of ours the heart remains the same it is us and our blindness in growing old that has changed. Byu putting on our childhood glasses we will be able to see again the beauty that surrounds us and the joy of life.
July 23rd, 2025 03:36
My only friend,my best friend,
Poetic Licence said:
That is a most beautiful heart touching and beautiful write to a beloved friend, expressing total appreciation and value of your friendship, nicely expressed and written
July 22nd, 2025 10:56
Poetic Licence said:
That is a most beautiful heart touching and beautiful write to a beloved friend, expressing total appreciation and value of your friendship, nicely expressed and written
July 22nd, 2025 10:56
Fly
NafisaSB said:
what a blessed relief when it finally flies away - here in the monsoons we need to swat them too - i rarely succeed, and my husband rarely fails - lol
July 22nd, 2025 00:56
NafisaSB said:
what a blessed relief when it finally flies away - here in the monsoons we need to swat them too - i rarely succeed, and my husband rarely fails - lol
July 22nd, 2025 00:56
My only friend,my best friend,
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of tribute. I\'m sure that such a soul would want you to love yourself as much. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of tribute. I\'m sure that such a soul would want you to love yourself as much. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 18:36
Fly
RSM0812 said:
The rhythm is perfect in this poem. I hate critters and crawlers. Great write.
July 18th, 2025 07:16
RSM0812 said:
The rhythm is perfect in this poem. I hate critters and crawlers. Great write.
July 18th, 2025 07:16
Fly
Tony Grannell said:
Relentless in their pursuit, to annoy and irate, could vex a bishop into profanities. A perfectly woven poem about this pesky little critter. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:05
Tony Grannell said:
Relentless in their pursuit, to annoy and irate, could vex a bishop into profanities. A perfectly woven poem about this pesky little critter. Excellent!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 14:05
Fly
Soman Ragavan said:
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July 17th, 2025 09:23
Soman Ragavan said:
Sorry to hear you lost all your postings on this site. I myself proceed as follows :
--I keep my original writings in a WORD file on the laptop; I copy from there to post on a site like this one;
--I keep a WORD file in which I write my comments to be posted and copy from there to the site; thus I always have a copy of my stuff.
--I have another file “Comments on me”
Information technology is never to be fully trusted. It can wreak havoc with you. You have to stay ahead of it all the time.
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July 17th, 2025 09:23
Fly
Poetic Licence said:
Loved it, I know they are only little but aren\'t they annoying, very entertaining and humourous read
July 17th, 2025 08:31
Poetic Licence said:
Loved it, I know they are only little but aren\'t they annoying, very entertaining and humourous read
July 17th, 2025 08:31
Fly
Soman Ragavan said:
What is remarkable is that such a tiny creature can end up annoying us, pestering us. It appears that the whole human abilities cannot be harnessed to catch that thing. It keeps darting from place to place.
July 17th, 2025 07:13
Soman Ragavan said:
What is remarkable is that such a tiny creature can end up annoying us, pestering us. It appears that the whole human abilities cannot be harnessed to catch that thing. It keeps darting from place to place.
July 17th, 2025 07:13
Fly
sorenbarrett said:
Bee of wasp or whatever I don\'t like uninvited pests inside. A metaphor per chance? I don\'t like them inside my head either. A read that explores how we react with the uninvited and how we feel relieved when they are gone. Nicely done
July 17th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Bee of wasp or whatever I don\'t like uninvited pests inside. A metaphor per chance? I don\'t like them inside my head either. A read that explores how we react with the uninvited and how we feel relieved when they are gone. Nicely done
July 17th, 2025 07:05
Lost time!
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, that\'s a rather new one, a watchmaker who can\'t repair a timepiece? Well, learn new things every day! Pity you lost a favorite jewelry piece thus. Mine didn\'t last forever either, sadly. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, that\'s a rather new one, a watchmaker who can\'t repair a timepiece? Well, learn new things every day! Pity you lost a favorite jewelry piece thus. Mine didn\'t last forever either, sadly. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 14:45
Lost time!
Bella Shepard said:
I truly get your sentiment here. Sometimes you just have to walk away, have a good scream, let it go, and feel better for it. So sorry about the watch, it probably misses you to. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
I truly get your sentiment here. Sometimes you just have to walk away, have a good scream, let it go, and feel better for it. So sorry about the watch, it probably misses you to. Good write!
July 16th, 2025 11:19
Lost time!
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Friendship,
Toying with one\'s patience to the point of exhaustion. It\'s a form of torture, especially so in this poem, ironic that the culprit is the watchman, the repairer of time, as it were and here he is waisting your time. The poem in itself is excellent, rhythms and rhymes perfected throughout give the poem a motion that welcomes the reader to each line as it drifts above the mockery of its subject. Superb!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 09:09
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Friendship,
Toying with one\'s patience to the point of exhaustion. It\'s a form of torture, especially so in this poem, ironic that the culprit is the watchman, the repairer of time, as it were and here he is waisting your time. The poem in itself is excellent, rhythms and rhymes perfected throughout give the poem a motion that welcomes the reader to each line as it drifts above the mockery of its subject. Superb!
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 09:09
Lost time!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like Aesop had a nervous breakdown in a watch shop and came back with a moral and a grudge. I LOVE IT! The rhyme keeps it steady...but beneath it, there’s that ticking tension, waiting to break. I love suspense. The bitterness is honest, earned, and quietly devastating. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this reads like Aesop had a nervous breakdown in a watch shop and came back with a moral and a grudge. I LOVE IT! The rhyme keeps it steady...but beneath it, there’s that ticking tension, waiting to break. I love suspense. The bitterness is honest, earned, and quietly devastating. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 08:40
trust !
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical woven into this, like a fable wrapped in summer sunlight. The metaphor of choice—between watermelon and ice cream—feels playful at first, but then deepens into something far more spiritual: the power of intuition, agency, and self-trust. You craft a journey from craving to clarity, and I felt it. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical woven into this, like a fable wrapped in summer sunlight. The metaphor of choice—between watermelon and ice cream—feels playful at first, but then deepens into something far more spiritual: the power of intuition, agency, and self-trust. You craft a journey from craving to clarity, and I felt it. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:52
Lost time!
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of dreams and promises not met and broken, some very poignant lines, very nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 07:50
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful written write of dreams and promises not met and broken, some very poignant lines, very nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 07:50
Lost time!
sorenbarrett said:
Frustration comes to mind in this poem of promises not kept. There seems a hidden motive in the watchmakers delay. A pity to loose the watch. I would have taken it back. A sad write of dreams unmet.
July 16th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Frustration comes to mind in this poem of promises not kept. There seems a hidden motive in the watchmakers delay. A pity to loose the watch. I would have taken it back. A sad write of dreams unmet.
July 16th, 2025 07:18
I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!
NafisaSB said:
a message straight from the heart so eloquently expressed - just beautiful
July 16th, 2025 00:22
NafisaSB said:
a message straight from the heart so eloquently expressed - just beautiful
July 16th, 2025 00:22
trust !
Priya Tomar said:
Clever rhyming scheme , beautiful metaphors, deep meaning
Nice poetry.....
July 15th, 2025 23:24
Priya Tomar said:
Clever rhyming scheme , beautiful metaphors, deep meaning
Nice poetry.....
July 15th, 2025 23:24
trust !
sorenbarrett said:
The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate pleasures that tempt and then there are those that provide a longer lasting enjoyment. Nicely worded with great rhyme and meter this poem presents the issue of trust and in the end the only one that we can trust for sure is ourselves. All else we can try if we have the desire and courage but trust itself only us. Well done
July 15th, 2025 18:13
sorenbarrett said:
The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate pleasures that tempt and then there are those that provide a longer lasting enjoyment. Nicely worded with great rhyme and meter this poem presents the issue of trust and in the end the only one that we can trust for sure is ourselves. All else we can try if we have the desire and courage but trust itself only us. Well done
July 15th, 2025 18:13
Love yourself,
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you sorta remind me of my best friend\'s writing where she wills her body and etc to better than now. There is a sense of redemption in the seeming call to leave wallowing in misery off and go forth into a sunny new day. Lovely and sweetly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a hauntingly warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2025 12:43
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you sorta remind me of my best friend\'s writing where she wills her body and etc to better than now. There is a sense of redemption in the seeming call to leave wallowing in misery off and go forth into a sunny new day. Lovely and sweetly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a hauntingly warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 14th, 2025 12:43
Memories of childhood.
Bella Shepard said:
Your memories of childhood are enchanting. The picture is reminiscent of the tea parties I gave my dolls, happy little smiles frozen in time. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, it certainly stirs the emotions of long ago.
July 13th, 2025 14:20
Bella Shepard said:
Your memories of childhood are enchanting. The picture is reminiscent of the tea parties I gave my dolls, happy little smiles frozen in time. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, it certainly stirs the emotions of long ago.
July 13th, 2025 14:20
Memories of childhood.
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. The very suggestion so deliciously rendered cannot fail to dredge buried memories in all readers, myself almost unconsciously wandering down those trails, caught up short in concluding by realizing what I was doing, only by half. Excellently rendered with a casual eloquence which takes the soul on flights of fancy in a trice, laden with gorgeous imagery and haunted by a winsome, undefined poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. The very suggestion so deliciously rendered cannot fail to dredge buried memories in all readers, myself almost unconsciously wandering down those trails, caught up short in concluding by realizing what I was doing, only by half. Excellently rendered with a casual eloquence which takes the soul on flights of fancy in a trice, laden with gorgeous imagery and haunted by a winsome, undefined poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 09:35
Memories of childhood.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a beautiful tapestry woven with joy, imagination, and intergenerational wisdom. The fairies in the grapevines and gnomes by the cows...pure magic, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing this radiant piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a beautiful tapestry woven with joy, imagination, and intergenerational wisdom. The fairies in the grapevines and gnomes by the cows...pure magic, my dear friend. Thank you for sharing this radiant piece. Well done! 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:20
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