Comments received on poems by Friendship
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out any of Sapien Medicine\'s audio- videos (free on Youtube)? Hope you get well soon.
March 5th, 2026 23:08
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you checked out any of Sapien Medicine\'s audio- videos (free on Youtube)? Hope you get well soon.
March 5th, 2026 23:08
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
sorenbarrett said:
As children in times of trouble we looked to our father to fix our situation now as adults we often wish we could return and have our father fix things for us. Nicely voiced in this poem that speaks out of a child like heart. Well written
March 5th, 2026 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
As children in times of trouble we looked to our father to fix our situation now as adults we often wish we could return and have our father fix things for us. Nicely voiced in this poem that speaks out of a child like heart. Well written
March 5th, 2026 19:32
Fix This, Papa—My Heart Hurts
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Filled with nostalgia.Good old Papa was able to fix most things.It could be a metaphor for JC as well.Just sayin.
March 5th, 2026 18:12
David Wakeling said:
This is quite beautiful.Filled with nostalgia.Good old Papa was able to fix most things.It could be a metaphor for JC as well.Just sayin.
March 5th, 2026 18:12
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. The motion is endless and ends with life itself.
March 5th, 2026 11:45
NafisaSB said:
Agree with you. The motion is endless and ends with life itself.
March 5th, 2026 11:45
When the Body Turns on Itself
orchidee said:
Get well soon if you are unwell :)
March 3rd, 2026 12:03
orchidee said:
Get well soon if you are unwell :)
March 3rd, 2026 12:03
When the Body Turns on Itself
sorenbarrett said:
To fight the battle against all odds, to make a last stand in defiance is what legendes are mad of. It is the resolve of the warriors that carry the battle not the numbers of the foe. To have the courage to die on one\'s feet rather than serve on one\'s knees sets the tone of victory. A lovely poem that in its reality is a metaphor for life itself. Well done and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
To fight the battle against all odds, to make a last stand in defiance is what legendes are mad of. It is the resolve of the warriors that carry the battle not the numbers of the foe. To have the courage to die on one\'s feet rather than serve on one\'s knees sets the tone of victory. A lovely poem that in its reality is a metaphor for life itself. Well done and a fave
March 3rd, 2026 06:54
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.It is a wonderful tribute to an amazing writer. An enjoyable read.
March 2nd, 2026 23:50
David Wakeling said:
A great poem.It is a wonderful tribute to an amazing writer. An enjoyable read.
March 2nd, 2026 23:50
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
sorenbarrett said:
Early exposure to Dr. Suess was some of my fond memories of my mother reading them to us at bed time. His whimsical rhymes probably started my love of poetry. Nicely done Friendship
March 2nd, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Early exposure to Dr. Suess was some of my fond memories of my mother reading them to us at bed time. His whimsical rhymes probably started my love of poetry. Nicely done Friendship
March 2nd, 2026 11:35
Happy Birthday, Dr. Seuss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Wonderful tribute and, indeed, Happy Birthday Dr. Suess! I\'m vegetarian and I still love Green Eggs and Ham! 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! Wonderful tribute and, indeed, Happy Birthday Dr. Suess! I\'m vegetarian and I still love Green Eggs and Ham! 🤣
March 2nd, 2026 10:50
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
orchidee said:
A sensitive and thoughtful write F.
March 1st, 2026 11:27
orchidee said:
A sensitive and thoughtful write F.
March 1st, 2026 11:27
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer, a wish, a hope that should be shared by all. A past rift too old for any to remember the cause led to blood feud killing the innocent and leaving the guilty to rule. A sad measure of what each believe. A wonderful write that earns a fave
March 1st, 2026 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
A prayer, a wish, a hope that should be shared by all. A past rift too old for any to remember the cause led to blood feud killing the innocent and leaving the guilty to rule. A sad measure of what each believe. A wonderful write that earns a fave
March 1st, 2026 08:57
Pray for Peace in the Middle East
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is expansive and heartfelt. The shared sky, the olive trees, the calls to prayer rising as hope…all build steadily. “for a Middle East that sings, at last, a single, peaceful hymn.” lands as both plea and promise. It feels sincere and necessary. I say, amen...it is more than just ending conflicts...but rather gaining understanding so that we avoid conflicts at all, if possible. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:43
When the Cipher Fades
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Paul Bell said:
Words are so powerful, and you\'re right, put them in the wrong order and all hell is let loose.
You can see why relationships breakdown never to be retrieved now.
Love and rage, that\'s a poem in itself.
March 1st, 2026 06:54
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Poetic Licence said:
This is very nicely written, as with all things in life,it is not the final result that really matters, it is what what we did or how we arrived at that result that matter\'s. Enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2026 06:28
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Dan Williams said:
This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge of a half‑opened door.\" and gets better. You could have stopped after \"but forgets the stones that never fell.\" and it would still shine. Then the conclusion, always leaving only to return, closes grandly Very nice.
February 28th, 2026 22:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it breathes. The movement between arrival and departure never feels rushed. It’s reflective without losing warmth. That closing sense of endless turning lingers beautifully. Well done, my friend. Happy Saturday to you! 55 here in PA, hopefully much warmer for you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:37
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
orchidee said:
I ask myself the same thing, as I met myself coming back from town while I was on the way there! Eh? Me talking rubbish again! lol.
February 28th, 2026 10:21
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of a process that has enough ambiguity that one can not tell where one is within it. There is confusion and simply the awareness that one is. Well written
February 28th, 2026 09:59
Perception – Am I Coming or Going?
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
2781 said:
As Solomon said - All is vanity
February 28th, 2026 09:58
When the Cipher Fades
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
MendedFences27 said:
The danger of vulnerability. Whether machine or human, everything has an Achilles Heel, a breaking point, or a flash point. No matter the safeguards employed someone will find the weakness. The result could be a broken mainframe or a broken heart. - Beautiful poetry. - Phil A.
February 25th, 2026 22:10
When the Cipher Fades
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels uncomfortably familiar…that moment when something slips past the interface and lands straight in the chest. The idea that no firewall can filter intent is painfully true. “a personal affront that no patch can ever truly seal.” captures that human residue so well. Fantastic job, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this feels uncomfortably familiar…that moment when something slips past the interface and lands straight in the chest. The idea that no firewall can filter intent is painfully true. “a personal affront that no patch can ever truly seal.” captures that human residue so well. Fantastic job, dearest Friendship.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 25th, 2026 19:10
When the Cipher Fades
RSM0812 said:
\"when the language of love and rage abandons the script,\". WTF. The whole poem is like this. Amazing. It remins me of Take This Waltz by Leonard Cohen. Every line a masterpiece.
February 25th, 2026 16:18
RSM0812 said:
\"when the language of love and rage abandons the script,\". WTF. The whole poem is like this. Amazing. It remins me of Take This Waltz by Leonard Cohen. Every line a masterpiece.
February 25th, 2026 16:18
When the Nickname Fades
RSM0812 said:
This is one of the best poems on the sight period. Are you ever a remarkable writer friendship. If i had half the talent i would be happy. :)
February 25th, 2026 16:15
RSM0812 said:
This is one of the best poems on the sight period. Are you ever a remarkable writer friendship. If i had half the talent i would be happy. :)
February 25th, 2026 16:15
When the Cipher Fades
Zak McKay said:
I personally agree deeply with this message. Good job :)
February 25th, 2026 14:06
Zak McKay said:
I personally agree deeply with this message. Good job :)
February 25th, 2026 14:06
Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends
Zak McKay said:
This was very nice, well written. :)
February 25th, 2026 14:04
Zak McKay said:
This was very nice, well written. :)
February 25th, 2026 14:04
Letting It All Go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this breathes. From the first candle to the final surrender, it moves with calm intention. “The water does not mourn the loss; it simply flows” feels like the quiet center of it all. There’s gentleness here without softness. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this breathes. From the first candle to the final surrender, it moves with calm intention. “The water does not mourn the loss; it simply flows” feels like the quiet center of it all. There’s gentleness here without softness. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:10
Letting It All Go
Paul Bell said:
Clear out the wardrobe, clear out your life.
Strangely enough, this usually happens on Jan 1st, every year.
It is sort of cathartic and definitely recommended.
February 24th, 2026 05:56
Paul Bell said:
Clear out the wardrobe, clear out your life.
Strangely enough, this usually happens on Jan 1st, every year.
It is sort of cathartic and definitely recommended.
February 24th, 2026 05:56
Between the Fracture and the Dawn
NafisaSB said:
so tender and lovely which conveys the longing beautifully...
February 24th, 2026 00:30
NafisaSB said:
so tender and lovely which conveys the longing beautifully...
February 24th, 2026 00:30
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