Comments received on poems by Friendship
Oh God ,I tried.
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
maydanae said:
I adore the rhythm and style of your second stanza! I know it is so hard to say when you need help but the awareness is inspiring and beautifully written, very good read!
August 2nd, 2026 18:21
Fly
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
maydanae said:
Friendship, I absolutely love the whimsy combined with elegance in this piece despite the reference being perfectly ordinary ! Wonderful job I am loving your work !
August 2nd, 2026 18:12
Has her therapy gone wrong?
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
maydanae said:
I\'m sorry this happened to you. No one deserves that! As someone who also relates a lot to these words: just remember that it gets a lot better the more you meet people who actually want what\'s best for you. Remember your worth!
August 2nd, 2026 17:54
God, can you hear me?
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
maydanae said:
You got this! Sometimes it gets hard but there will always be support along the way, just keep pushing.
August 2nd, 2026 17:44
God, can you hear me?
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
There is a heart rending plea for help in this poem. It calls out of the darkness for aid. Well written with wonderful rhyme and great meter. Well done Friendship
August 2nd, 2026 17:39
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is striking in its emotional intensity, capturing a deep sense of betrayal where trust was meant to be sacred. The contrast between the expectation of healing and the experience of harm gives it a sharp, painful edge, and the imagery of clinical language turned weapon makes the impact even stronger.
August 2nd, 2026 07:20
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is striking in its emotional intensity, capturing a deep sense of betrayal where trust was meant to be sacred. The contrast between the expectation of healing and the experience of harm gives it a sharp, painful edge, and the imagery of clinical language turned weapon makes the impact even stronger.
August 2nd, 2026 07:20
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to one of the hardest realities…when trust is broken by someone we’re told we can safely lean on, the damage reaches far beyond the moment itself. You captured that ache with honesty. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to one of the hardest realities…when trust is broken by someone we’re told we can safely lean on, the damage reaches far beyond the moment itself. You captured that ache with honesty. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:04
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful poem, yet heartbreaking.
August 1st, 2026 07:17
Megan Blaney said:
Beautiful poem, yet heartbreaking.
August 1st, 2026 07:17
Has her therapy gone wrong?
peto said:
The/rapist
Screwing heads
Your writing friendship is something more than a read
The reader can feel it
Another fav for me
July 31st, 2026 10:14
peto said:
The/rapist
Screwing heads
Your writing friendship is something more than a read
The reader can feel it
Another fav for me
July 31st, 2026 10:14
Has her therapy gone wrong?
Paul Bell said:
Never assume the person you\'re talking to is the one to help.
I suppose in the end, no one is coming for you.
This is probably why people don\'t seek help, and why we go to the grave nuts.
July 31st, 2026 10:00
Paul Bell said:
Never assume the person you\'re talking to is the one to help.
I suppose in the end, no one is coming for you.
This is probably why people don\'t seek help, and why we go to the grave nuts.
July 31st, 2026 10:00
Has her therapy gone wrong?
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a view of treason and betrayal from the condemned. So hard to see beyond prison walls when one is kept within a stone cell. This one tears the heart. When one is hurt by what one turns to as helping hands and they only deliver pain. Very nicely written with good rhyme and meter. A deeply soul searching poem and a fave
July 31st, 2026 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a view of treason and betrayal from the condemned. So hard to see beyond prison walls when one is kept within a stone cell. This one tears the heart. When one is hurt by what one turns to as helping hands and they only deliver pain. Very nicely written with good rhyme and meter. A deeply soul searching poem and a fave
July 31st, 2026 09:34
Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me. The recurring declaration grows more resolved each time...turning sadness into decision. I know what it is to reach the point where departure stops feeling like defeat and begins to feel like self-preservation. Powerful and beautifully constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this really moved me. The recurring declaration grows more resolved each time...turning sadness into decision. I know what it is to reach the point where departure stops feeling like defeat and begins to feel like self-preservation. Powerful and beautifully constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:11
Home
soheil khodaparasti said:
The emotional depth and reflective tone reminds us that sometimes the hardest, yet healthiest, choice is to leave the past behind and embrace a new beginning.
July 31st, 2026 03:43
soheil khodaparasti said:
The emotional depth and reflective tone reminds us that sometimes the hardest, yet healthiest, choice is to leave the past behind and embrace a new beginning.
July 31st, 2026 03:43
Home
peto said:
Fantastic yet again
Each verse is at least as good as the proceeding one
Great imagery
Flowing meter and outstanding lines
Home is where the heart is
Loved it
Stunning write
July 30th, 2026 18:36
peto said:
Fantastic yet again
Each verse is at least as good as the proceeding one
Great imagery
Flowing meter and outstanding lines
Home is where the heart is
Loved it
Stunning write
July 30th, 2026 18:36
Oh God ,I tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this yesterday?!? My apologies. My friend, this one fucking hurt. I know this contradiction personally...when continuing to function convinces everyone that you require nothing from them. The isolation in that is brutal, and you have expressed it with devastating clarity. An incredibly powerful poem, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this yesterday?!? My apologies. My friend, this one fucking hurt. I know this contradiction personally...when continuing to function convinces everyone that you require nothing from them. The isolation in that is brutal, and you have expressed it with devastating clarity. An incredibly powerful poem, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:39
Oh God ,I tried.
peto said:
Ah I\'m running out of words
Fantastic writing
A joy to read
Thank you for sharing it
Brilliant
July 29th, 2026 13:03
peto said:
Ah I\'m running out of words
Fantastic writing
A joy to read
Thank you for sharing it
Brilliant
July 29th, 2026 13:03
Oh God ,I tried.
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem captures how often people mistake survival for strength, assuming that someone who keeps going does not need help.
July 29th, 2026 08:47
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem captures how often people mistake survival for strength, assuming that someone who keeps going does not need help.
July 29th, 2026 08:47
Oh God ,I tried.
arqios said:
Relatable and a common result that is regrettable 🙏🏻🕊️
July 29th, 2026 08:39
arqios said:
Relatable and a common result that is regrettable 🙏🏻🕊️
July 29th, 2026 08:39
Oh God ,I tried.
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and metered this poem speaks of others not perceiving the agony within. Nicely constructed it tells its tale well.
July 29th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed and metered this poem speaks of others not perceiving the agony within. Nicely constructed it tells its tale well.
July 29th, 2026 08:15
Come, walk in my shoes
Neville said:
to walk a mile in another\'s shoes takes more than just guts and compassion .. and it more than just hints at the desire or intention to feel another\'s pain .. I guess that\'s why not many folk volunteer to do it these days .. sadly we have a deficit of role models .. still I hope some of the old values may return eventually .. this by the way is an incredibly well composed poem that not only reads well but looks pretty on the page .. Bravo .. Neville
July 28th, 2026 23:36
Neville said:
to walk a mile in another\'s shoes takes more than just guts and compassion .. and it more than just hints at the desire or intention to feel another\'s pain .. I guess that\'s why not many folk volunteer to do it these days .. sadly we have a deficit of role models .. still I hope some of the old values may return eventually .. this by the way is an incredibly well composed poem that not only reads well but looks pretty on the page .. Bravo .. Neville
July 28th, 2026 23:36
Come, walk in my shoes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, I know what it is to have others interpret your survival from the comfort of their distance. Compassion begins when judgment ends…and this speaks that truth powerfully. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, I know what it is to have others interpret your survival from the comfort of their distance. Compassion begins when judgment ends…and this speaks that truth powerfully. Wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:13
I am done.
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described as usual and so sadly felt a similar story! Yet, never remember, dear:
O’ Joseph lost will sure return to Lone Home, grieve it not!
The hut of grief will once be flower garden, grieve it not!
O grieved the heart, you’ll soon be well,
yourself to lose, so what?
Distraught this head will once be set in order, grieve it not!
On throne of grass if spring of life is long enough, you’ll spread
The flower shade ov’r head, O sweet-voiced bird, so grieve it not!
Though turn of wheel against our wish, some two days kindly not,
The state of time will not be all the same, so grieve it not!
Of world of secrets not aware, beware and hopeless not!
Behind the scene are always hidden games, O\' grieve it not!
O heart, if flood of doom uproots the whole existence but
Yours love and hope in heart, for
storm of loneness, grieve it not!
In desert, eager if you step toward your love and much
Reproof the thorny bushes make against you, grieve it not!
The way to home though much of danger, end of path so far,
No path is there that hath no end, be hot and grieve it not!
Separated now from sweetheart, mood
against the rivals, but
Our mood-revolving God would wholly
know, O’ grieve it not!
A corner poor, alone at dim nights, Friendship! Yet, until
Your whispers lovely poems for pretty sweetheart, grieve it not!
July 26th, 2026 16:03
mohammad ali said:
So beautifully described as usual and so sadly felt a similar story! Yet, never remember, dear:
O’ Joseph lost will sure return to Lone Home, grieve it not!
The hut of grief will once be flower garden, grieve it not!
O grieved the heart, you’ll soon be well,
yourself to lose, so what?
Distraught this head will once be set in order, grieve it not!
On throne of grass if spring of life is long enough, you’ll spread
The flower shade ov’r head, O sweet-voiced bird, so grieve it not!
Though turn of wheel against our wish, some two days kindly not,
The state of time will not be all the same, so grieve it not!
Of world of secrets not aware, beware and hopeless not!
Behind the scene are always hidden games, O\' grieve it not!
O heart, if flood of doom uproots the whole existence but
Yours love and hope in heart, for
storm of loneness, grieve it not!
In desert, eager if you step toward your love and much
Reproof the thorny bushes make against you, grieve it not!
The way to home though much of danger, end of path so far,
No path is there that hath no end, be hot and grieve it not!
Separated now from sweetheart, mood
against the rivals, but
Our mood-revolving God would wholly
know, O’ grieve it not!
A corner poor, alone at dim nights, Friendship! Yet, until
Your whispers lovely poems for pretty sweetheart, grieve it not!
July 26th, 2026 16:03
Come, walk in my shoes
Paul Bell said:
Plenty out there who think they can walk the walk, talk the talk.
Then the time comes to actually do it, and they\'re left wanting.
July 26th, 2026 14:39
Paul Bell said:
Plenty out there who think they can walk the walk, talk the talk.
Then the time comes to actually do it, and they\'re left wanting.
July 26th, 2026 14:39
Come, walk in my shoes
soheil khodaparasti said:
An able poet can beautifully express the profound truth that genuine understanding begins when we stop judging others from afar and try to walk in another person’s shoes.
July 26th, 2026 11:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
An able poet can beautifully express the profound truth that genuine understanding begins when we stop judging others from afar and try to walk in another person’s shoes.
July 26th, 2026 11:57
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