Comments received on poems by Friendship
My passion for beauty.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Friendship! I think we\'ve become so accustomed to manufactured beauty that we sometimes forget how extraordinary the natural world already is. And unlike most galleries, the forest doesn\'t charge admission! LOL! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 16th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, Friendship! I think we\'ve become so accustomed to manufactured beauty that we sometimes forget how extraordinary the natural world already is. And unlike most galleries, the forest doesn\'t charge admission! LOL! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 16th, 2026 11:14
My passion for beauty.
Paul Bell said:
Is this nature day, are we all embracing autumn in all its colour and splendour.
Though I hibernate with the bears in winter, you can\'t beat a fur coat.
The leaves are falling, the nights grow dark, winter is coming in, snow on the bark.
October 16th, 2026 10:07
Paul Bell said:
Is this nature day, are we all embracing autumn in all its colour and splendour.
Though I hibernate with the bears in winter, you can\'t beat a fur coat.
The leaves are falling, the nights grow dark, winter is coming in, snow on the bark.
October 16th, 2026 10:07
My passion for beauty.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of taking nature\'s beauty and forming it into a new beauty your own. Well written in good rhyme and meter it flows all the way to the end. Nicely done Friendship
October 16th, 2026 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of taking nature\'s beauty and forming it into a new beauty your own. Well written in good rhyme and meter it flows all the way to the end. Nicely done Friendship
October 16th, 2026 09:24
When words hurt.
RSM0812 said:
Wow. Your words echo in this one. A women, even in pain while she slept and a man whom she thought she loved not giving one care or embrace from his heart. Nicely done.
October 13th, 2026 13:38
RSM0812 said:
Wow. Your words echo in this one. A women, even in pain while she slept and a man whom she thought she loved not giving one care or embrace from his heart. Nicely done.
October 13th, 2026 13:38
Reality
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty blown away by your poetry Friendship. :). You have better then this one, but this one has some great lines. Beutiful in prose as always. :)
October 13th, 2026 13:34
RSM0812 said:
Im pretty blown away by your poetry Friendship. :). You have better then this one, but this one has some great lines. Beutiful in prose as always. :)
October 13th, 2026 13:34
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
NafisaSB said:
For sure victory is yours and you are well rid of this vicious person
October 13th, 2026 10:51
NafisaSB said:
For sure victory is yours and you are well rid of this vicious person
October 13th, 2026 10:51
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
Dan Williams said:
What a nice description of a voyage, a struggle. \"I donβt care if I offended or upset, I am wiping clean the ledger of regret\" is a place I have not gotten to just yet; thank you for marking the path.
October 12th, 2026 21:15
Dan Williams said:
What a nice description of a voyage, a struggle. \"I donβt care if I offended or upset, I am wiping clean the ledger of regret\" is a place I have not gotten to just yet; thank you for marking the path.
October 12th, 2026 21:15
I have no words just now.
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. Good point. People get lost too easy. The system can swallow them whole.
October 12th, 2026 16:47
RSM0812 said:
Nice write. Good point. People get lost too easy. The system can swallow them whole.
October 12th, 2026 16:47
The monsters that live among us.
RSM0812 said:
Crightful with an in depth philosophy of imagry and imagination. Quite scary actually. A great Halloween poem.
October 12th, 2026 16:39
RSM0812 said:
Crightful with an in depth philosophy of imagry and imagination. Quite scary actually. A great Halloween poem.
October 12th, 2026 16:39
When Anger Shadows the Light
RSM0812 said:
Holy fuck i wish i could write like u.
October 12th, 2026 13:16
RSM0812 said:
Holy fuck i wish i could write like u.
October 12th, 2026 13:16
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it takes awhile to realise you\'ve been manipulated.
Though when the penny drops, it\'s amazing how quickly that anger can finally break you free.
October 12th, 2026 05:29
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it takes awhile to realise you\'ve been manipulated.
Though when the penny drops, it\'s amazing how quickly that anger can finally break you free.
October 12th, 2026 05:29
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the part about apologizing really got to me. I\'ve known people who could make me feel guilty for things I hadn\'t even done. Eventually, enough is enough! Excellent expression, dear friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 11th, 2026 23:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, the part about apologizing really got to me. I\'ve known people who could make me feel guilty for things I hadn\'t even done. Eventually, enough is enough! Excellent expression, dear friend.πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 11th, 2026 23:25
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Friendship,
This reads like an eureka moment. The realisation of the power of the self, the underdog, as it were, to leading the pack, a pack of energy, spirit, grace and self worth leaving the ghosts in your wake. A beautiful passage of poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 15:14
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Friendship,
This reads like an eureka moment. The realisation of the power of the self, the underdog, as it were, to leading the pack, a pack of energy, spirit, grace and self worth leaving the ghosts in your wake. A beautiful passage of poetry.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 11th, 2026 15:14
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, one day I got an old garment (not a new one!) and wrote names on it - things others or I myself degraded myself with; names, comments of shame, blame, derogatory things, etc; then burnt the whole thing in the garden. Therapeutic!
October 11th, 2026 09:52
orchidee said:
Good write F. Yes, one day I got an old garment (not a new one!) and wrote names on it - things others or I myself degraded myself with; names, comments of shame, blame, derogatory things, etc; then burnt the whole thing in the garden. Therapeutic!
October 11th, 2026 09:52
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of emancipation from a grip felt too powerful to release. Nicely written in good rhyme and verse with meter and balance. Well done
October 11th, 2026 09:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic declaration of emancipation from a grip felt too powerful to release. Nicely written in good rhyme and verse with meter and balance. Well done
October 11th, 2026 09:44
You\'re the ghost of my past; I allowed myself to be free.
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent
October 11th, 2026 08:41
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent
October 11th, 2026 08:41
Reality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thinking of your parents\' anniversary, Friendship...I wish you had someone beside you to share those memories with. So sorry that was not the case, my friend.
Your pic did give me a smile though...Frankenstick! LOL! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 10th, 2026 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thinking of your parents\' anniversary, Friendship...I wish you had someone beside you to share those memories with. So sorry that was not the case, my friend.
Your pic did give me a smile though...Frankenstick! LOL! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 10th, 2026 18:17
Reality
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
This is about dreams or hereafter heaven, its expressed superbly in excellent rhyming flow! Kudos!!
October 10th, 2026 14:45
π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½ said:
This is about dreams or hereafter heaven, its expressed superbly in excellent rhyming flow! Kudos!!
October 10th, 2026 14:45
Reality
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The shaming, bullying and ignoring a person because of some oddity or other is vile, ignorant and downright brutal. The victim in this most splendid poem of yours is lucky to have the loving embrace of family, a haven of peace. \'They judge the shell, they miss the soul\'. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 07:20
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Friendship,
The shaming, bullying and ignoring a person because of some oddity or other is vile, ignorant and downright brutal. The victim in this most splendid poem of yours is lucky to have the loving embrace of family, a haven of peace. \'They judge the shell, they miss the soul\'. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 10th, 2026 07:20
Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Life, memories, rejection and acceptance all take the same road with the same destination. Nicely written
October 9th, 2026 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
Life, memories, rejection and acceptance all take the same road with the same destination. Nicely written
October 9th, 2026 19:48
Reality
rrodriguez said:
Your poem beautifully conveys loneliness, pain, and the longing for unconditional love. Its ending is especially poignant, leaving me wondering whether the golden dream represents hope, reunion, or a longing for peace.
October 9th, 2026 18:52
rrodriguez said:
Your poem beautifully conveys loneliness, pain, and the longing for unconditional love. Its ending is especially poignant, leaving me wondering whether the golden dream represents hope, reunion, or a longing for peace.
October 9th, 2026 18:52
DONE FEELING LIKE AN OUTCAST.
2781 said:
You can build on that rock, it\'s a sure foundation.
October 6th, 2026 09:59
2781 said:
You can build on that rock, it\'s a sure foundation.
October 6th, 2026 09:59
DONE FEELING LIKE AN OUTCAST.
orchidee said:
I never cast ya out - come in! (heehee).
October 5th, 2026 10:42
orchidee said:
I never cast ya out - come in! (heehee).
October 5th, 2026 10:42
DONE FEELING LIKE AN OUTCAST.
arqios said:
Strong expression, Friendship ππ»ποΈ
October 5th, 2026 06:30
arqios said:
Strong expression, Friendship ππ»ποΈ
October 5th, 2026 06:30
DONE FEELING LIKE AN OUTCAST.
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it\'s good to get rid of the dross out of your life and replace them with solid friends.
October 5th, 2026 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes it\'s good to get rid of the dross out of your life and replace them with solid friends.
October 5th, 2026 05:23
DONE FEELING LIKE AN OUTCAST.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sometimes walking away from people who have already made up their minds about us is the healthiest answer available. Their judgment doesn\'t have to become our identity. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 5th, 2026 00:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, sometimes walking away from people who have already made up their minds about us is the healthiest answer available. Their judgment doesn\'t have to become our identity. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
October 5th, 2026 00:16
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