Comments received on poems by Friendship
My tools speak to me.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of what one loves to do and the treasure one creates from raw materials found. A mine from people\'s discards. Artfully done.
October 10th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of what one loves to do and the treasure one creates from raw materials found. A mine from people\'s discards. Artfully done.
October 10th, 2025 10:55
I couldn’t save you.
Neville said:
This reads like a mourning song .. a very good mourning song I might add .. and filled to the point of overflow with regret .. Neville 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:23
Neville said:
This reads like a mourning song .. a very good mourning song I might add .. and filled to the point of overflow with regret .. Neville 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:23
I couldn’t save you.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts deep…the grief is palpable, the love unhealed but eternal. You’ve turned heartbreak into something sacred. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️ Very well done!
October 8th, 2025 14:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one cuts deep…the grief is palpable, the love unhealed but eternal. You’ve turned heartbreak into something sacred. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️ Very well done!
October 8th, 2025 14:34
I couldn’t save you.
sorenbarrett said:
I could see deep emotion and pain in this poem of loss. A sense of despair and continued regret even a sense of blame. It cries with remorse of a most helpless nature where one questions if they had done something different would things have been different. An after the fact questioning that only serves to fuel the fire of self condemnation the (what if) question we all ask ourselves afterwards. But a question that serves no purpose and keeps us in this never ending circle of thought. Very nicely composed and felt.
October 8th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
I could see deep emotion and pain in this poem of loss. A sense of despair and continued regret even a sense of blame. It cries with remorse of a most helpless nature where one questions if they had done something different would things have been different. An after the fact questioning that only serves to fuel the fire of self condemnation the (what if) question we all ask ourselves afterwards. But a question that serves no purpose and keeps us in this never ending circle of thought. Very nicely composed and felt.
October 8th, 2025 09:40
Thankyou for understanding.
Doggerel Dave said:
If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a requirement to reveal yourself to them, I\'m afraid...
Smooth read.
October 6th, 2025 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a requirement to reveal yourself to them, I\'m afraid...
Smooth read.
October 6th, 2025 18:25
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Paul Bell said:
You won\'t be saying that when I chap your door demanding KitKats.
The costumes are getting better mind you, I never recoginise any of the kids who chap my door demanding goodies now.
October 6th, 2025 13:28
Paul Bell said:
You won\'t be saying that when I chap your door demanding KitKats.
The costumes are getting better mind you, I never recoginise any of the kids who chap my door demanding goodies now.
October 6th, 2025 13:28
Thankyou for understanding.
Neville said:
What an absolutely delightful poem you have given us today .. The depiction of love, trust and associated unconditionality permeate throughout .. exquisite aint just a word .. this whole page is a fine example of it .. Neville 😎🌻🌹🥀👍
October 6th, 2025 10:50
Neville said:
What an absolutely delightful poem you have given us today .. The depiction of love, trust and associated unconditionality permeate throughout .. exquisite aint just a word .. this whole page is a fine example of it .. Neville 😎🌻🌹🥀👍
October 6th, 2025 10:50
Thankyou for understanding.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of friendship and reliance. When one is small or weak when relies on someone big or strong, but as we grow, we learn to rely upon our self and then no matter how many leave us or if we are alone, we always have our own company For that will never leave us a lovely poem
October 6th, 2025 09:48
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of friendship and reliance. When one is small or weak when relies on someone big or strong, but as we grow, we learn to rely upon our self and then no matter how many leave us or if we are alone, we always have our own company For that will never leave us a lovely poem
October 6th, 2025 09:48
The Church of depopulation,
Doggerel Dave said:
So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above (Too Hard?)
With limited resources this Earth cannot sustain a healthy population where every child born has the chance to develop their full potential….at least under current economic arrangements where too much wealth is accumulated into too few hands.
Your fanciful church (which is not a church at all) Is a straw man argument positing some authoritarian form of depopulation, which would under current social circumstances prove impossible to achieve.
October 5th, 2025 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above (Too Hard?)
With limited resources this Earth cannot sustain a healthy population where every child born has the chance to develop their full potential….at least under current economic arrangements where too much wealth is accumulated into too few hands.
Your fanciful church (which is not a church at all) Is a straw man argument positing some authoritarian form of depopulation, which would under current social circumstances prove impossible to achieve.
October 5th, 2025 17:04
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful energetic, fun packed nostalgic write of the scary day.a very enjoyable read for a lazy Sunday, thank you
October 5th, 2025 13:06
Poetic Licence said:
This is a wonderful energetic, fun packed nostalgic write of the scary day.a very enjoyable read for a lazy Sunday, thank you
October 5th, 2025 13:06
The Church of depopulation,
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is revelation through shadow...ritual and ruin intertwined. Every line feels carved in marble and bone. A masterful, haunting piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is revelation through shadow...ritual and ruin intertwined. Every line feels carved in marble and bone. A masterful, haunting piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 5th, 2025 08:01
The Church of depopulation,
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write Friendship where churches already preach of salvation only in a life beyond, where the only thing that matters is the life after this why not take the short cut and get there first. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the write Friendship where churches already preach of salvation only in a life beyond, where the only thing that matters is the life after this why not take the short cut and get there first. Well done my friend
October 5th, 2025 07:33
The Church of depopulation,
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people go to church, does the church not offer anything anymore.
Does religion get a bad rap with all the negativity that surrounds it.
Is there room for religion in the 21st century, or has hell taken us all.
October 5th, 2025 06:34
Paul Bell said:
Why don\'t people go to church, does the church not offer anything anymore.
Does religion get a bad rap with all the negativity that surrounds it.
Is there room for religion in the 21st century, or has hell taken us all.
October 5th, 2025 06:34
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about the season and the day. With good rhyme it rides the broomstick of terror for children. I find it most interesting how children love to be scared and then we pair terror with candy to sweeten the pot. A fun read of memories and manipulation.
October 4th, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about the season and the day. With good rhyme it rides the broomstick of terror for children. I find it most interesting how children love to be scared and then we pair terror with candy to sweeten the pot. A fun read of memories and manipulation.
October 4th, 2025 09:30
Halloween is in the air and if you dare!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a ride of memory and mayhem. That counter stacked high…the masks…the cobwebs. All of it captures the thrill of chaos and the sweetness of fear and the season of Halloween. Nostalgic and alive. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 09:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a ride of memory and mayhem. That counter stacked high…the masks…the cobwebs. All of it captures the thrill of chaos and the sweetness of fear and the season of Halloween. Nostalgic and alive. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 4th, 2025 09:02
Words define your actions.
Poetic Licence said:
This was a lovely inspiring write to read, many wise words handed over. Foundations of anything worthwhile is trust, and if you give your word do your upmost to honour it, thank you for sharing
October 4th, 2025 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
This was a lovely inspiring write to read, many wise words handed over. Foundations of anything worthwhile is trust, and if you give your word do your upmost to honour it, thank you for sharing
October 4th, 2025 08:44
Words define your actions.
Mike Prestridge said:
Great writing. This is a quality thats very rare and hard to find. To keep one\'s word is essential.
October 3rd, 2025 09:13
Mike Prestridge said:
Great writing. This is a quality thats very rare and hard to find. To keep one\'s word is essential.
October 3rd, 2025 09:13
Words define your actions.
Doggerel Dave said:
Still not absolutely sure who you are or how you do it - but you can turn out some interesting stuff..... sometimes!😜
October 2nd, 2025 23:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Still not absolutely sure who you are or how you do it - but you can turn out some interesting stuff..... sometimes!😜
October 2nd, 2025 23:19
Words define your actions.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in good rhyme and meter sends a message that every word is taken as a promise made. Each word a vow to judge character by. Any deviation an undermining of trust. Relationships to be built on the concrete of words. Well said my friend
October 2nd, 2025 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in good rhyme and meter sends a message that every word is taken as a promise made. Each word a vow to judge character by. Any deviation an undermining of trust. Relationships to be built on the concrete of words. Well said my friend
October 2nd, 2025 20:54
Mother Nature tends to her own.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful work, my friend…autumn’s cycle told with grace and weight. The ending line seals it perfectly, reminding us that nature always knows her way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a beautiful work, my friend…autumn’s cycle told with grace and weight. The ending line seals it perfectly, reminding us that nature always knows her way. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 1st, 2025 20:01
Mother Nature tends to her own.
Michael Edwards said:
Your kind comment on my latest post prompted me to look up your work and I\'m not dissappointed. - this is such a soper crafted piece and an enjoyable read - I\'ll look out for your future posts .
October 1st, 2025 08:28
Michael Edwards said:
Your kind comment on my latest post prompted me to look up your work and I\'m not dissappointed. - this is such a soper crafted piece and an enjoyable read - I\'ll look out for your future posts .
October 1st, 2025 08:28
Mother Nature tends to her own.
sorenbarrett said:
Yes my friend she does indeed. A most wonderful poem of nature taking care of what needs to be done. Often not what man would do she does a better job than me or you. Loved the rhyme and the unfolding of the poem in good meter and flow it speaks to the majesty of nature and her wisdom. Well written
October 1st, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Yes my friend she does indeed. A most wonderful poem of nature taking care of what needs to be done. Often not what man would do she does a better job than me or you. Loved the rhyme and the unfolding of the poem in good meter and flow it speaks to the majesty of nature and her wisdom. Well written
October 1st, 2025 08:15
Stop saying the word I can\'t.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, Friendship...the “I can’t” as a fence, the tongue retrained, the sky opening. A poem of language becoming liberation. Beautiful work, my dear friend. Very relatable. We can all plop that wall down in front of us and this is such an empowering write for people, myself included, to read. Thank you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, Friendship...the “I can’t” as a fence, the tongue retrained, the sky opening. A poem of language becoming liberation. Beautiful work, my dear friend. Very relatable. We can all plop that wall down in front of us and this is such an empowering write for people, myself included, to read. Thank you! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 30th, 2025 18:07
Stop saying the word I can\'t.
sorenbarrett said:
What an amazing poem, I think your best, not just in concept and theme which is great but in wording that indicates the understanding of the concept. Well don my friend
September 30th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
What an amazing poem, I think your best, not just in concept and theme which is great but in wording that indicates the understanding of the concept. Well don my friend
September 30th, 2025 08:59
Opened mind.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like concept and more like lived freedom. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like concept and more like lived freedom. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2025 15:21
Opened mind.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opening the mind to differences that are not part of you. This is a seeing of things from other perspectives. A freeing of the soul. Nicely written my wriend
September 29th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of opening the mind to differences that are not part of you. This is a seeing of things from other perspectives. A freeing of the soul. Nicely written my wriend
September 29th, 2025 15:18
My Mother.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine missing the one who brought me into this world and cared for me so. Friendship, this is a full heart laid open. The crafted sonnet, the 8:00 ritual, the compass spinning, the vow to carry her light. It grieves and honors at once. Beautifully written and deeply felt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Oh…and what a beautiful picture. Trust me friend, you will find your courage to create again, you already have in your poetry. Crafting will come too, and when that happens, your mother will be right their with you! Again, well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine missing the one who brought me into this world and cared for me so. Friendship, this is a full heart laid open. The crafted sonnet, the 8:00 ritual, the compass spinning, the vow to carry her light. It grieves and honors at once. Beautifully written and deeply felt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Oh…and what a beautiful picture. Trust me friend, you will find your courage to create again, you already have in your poetry. Crafting will come too, and when that happens, your mother will be right their with you! Again, well done!
September 28th, 2025 16:32
life\'s a journey.
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Extended Metaphor: The river as time is carried through consistently and beautifully. Lines like “You cannot touch the self-same stream, / Nor recreate a waking dream” echo Heraclitus’ philosophy, grounding the piece in timeless wisdom. Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:45
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Extended Metaphor: The river as time is carried through consistently and beautifully. Lines like “You cannot touch the self-same stream, / Nor recreate a waking dream” echo Heraclitus’ philosophy, grounding the piece in timeless wisdom. Nicely written.
September 28th, 2025 13:45
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