Comments received on poems by Friendship
My Canvas.
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing journey into the mind of the artist. An incredible poem.I like the rhyme and cadence,Exceptional.
April 30th, 2026 19:25
David Wakeling said:
What an amazing journey into the mind of the artist. An incredible poem.I like the rhyme and cadence,Exceptional.
April 30th, 2026 19:25
My Canvas.
sorenbarrett said:
My friend I see the ghost as the image of true art not just learned craft and technical ability. That is the ghost that we all search for but that illusively hides from view only to show their face on rare occasions. Nicely crafted this poem with its rhyme is a fave
April 30th, 2026 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
My friend I see the ghost as the image of true art not just learned craft and technical ability. That is the ghost that we all search for but that illusively hides from view only to show their face on rare occasions. Nicely crafted this poem with its rhyme is a fave
April 30th, 2026 05:51
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful written and expressed, finding their inner strength and standing proud and strong, a very positive write to read, enjoyed
April 29th, 2026 22:00
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful written and expressed, finding their inner strength and standing proud and strong, a very positive write to read, enjoyed
April 29th, 2026 22:00
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
arqios said:
A very fun read, Friendship🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 21:58
arqios said:
A very fun read, Friendship🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 21:58
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
sorenbarrett said:
I love mythical creatures and the story behind them. I think the Greeks were the best at it but so many others as well. Nicely written my friend
April 29th, 2026 13:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love mythical creatures and the story behind them. I think the Greeks were the best at it but so many others as well. Nicely written my friend
April 29th, 2026 13:40
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
Paul Bell said:
I wonder how humans would do if we used our whole brain.
Would that be the greatest height we could reach.
Your poem asks questions.
April 29th, 2026 13:16
Paul Bell said:
I wonder how humans would do if we used our whole brain.
Would that be the greatest height we could reach.
Your poem asks questions.
April 29th, 2026 13:16
When the mind is enhanced,it create a beautiful grome.🌹
Neville said:
I can assure you my friend there aint gonna be nobody that don\'t like this a whole lot .. nope, not a single no one .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
April 29th, 2026 12:21
Neville said:
I can assure you my friend there aint gonna be nobody that don\'t like this a whole lot .. nope, not a single no one .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
April 29th, 2026 12:21
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
David Wakeling said:
Good for you.Nice to hear positive affirmations
April 28th, 2026 17:39
David Wakeling said:
Good for you.Nice to hear positive affirmations
April 28th, 2026 17:39
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Friendship this poem show strength in its words, its rhyme and meter very well written and a fave
April 28th, 2026 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Friendship this poem show strength in its words, its rhyme and meter very well written and a fave
April 28th, 2026 14:29
S.H.I.T happens… and today it’s a good thing 😄
boot said:
Cool...I\'ve been reading some of your stuff and I find myself liking it...good words
April 28th, 2026 11:50
boot said:
Cool...I\'ve been reading some of your stuff and I find myself liking it...good words
April 28th, 2026 11:50
I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high.
orchidee said:
Good write F.
April 28th, 2026 08:52
orchidee said:
Good write F.
April 28th, 2026 08:52
Iron in the Velvet.
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem here.So many powerful lines and images.The ending is particularly good.That kindness should win in the end.An enjoyable read
April 27th, 2026 18:51
David Wakeling said:
A well constructed poem here.So many powerful lines and images.The ending is particularly good.That kindness should win in the end.An enjoyable read
April 27th, 2026 18:51
Iron in the Velvet.
Paul Bell said:
Stunning picture and the iron in velvet is very apt.
Everyday it seems is doom and gloom, and maybe this is why we need to enpower ourselves to survive it.
April 27th, 2026 15:51
Paul Bell said:
Stunning picture and the iron in velvet is very apt.
Everyday it seems is doom and gloom, and maybe this is why we need to enpower ourselves to survive it.
April 27th, 2026 15:51
Iron in the Velvet.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, that “iron in velvet” image really stays with me…there’s weight and softness held together in a way that feels deliberate, not fragile. It defines the whole piece. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, that “iron in velvet” image really stays with me…there’s weight and softness held together in a way that feels deliberate, not fragile. It defines the whole piece. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 27th, 2026 07:53
Iron in the Velvet.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem acknowledging our own power over our feelings and being becoming what we make ourselves. A lovely and most insightful write.
April 27th, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A poem acknowledging our own power over our feelings and being becoming what we make ourselves. A lovely and most insightful write.
April 27th, 2026 07:35
Iron in the Velvet.
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed, it flows nicely
April 27th, 2026 07:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed, it flows nicely
April 27th, 2026 07:09
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
NafisaSB said:
a child\'s imagination can create wonderful stories, and their make believe world is so beautiful -
enjoyed the narration...
April 27th, 2026 06:56
NafisaSB said:
a child\'s imagination can create wonderful stories, and their make believe world is so beautiful -
enjoyed the narration...
April 27th, 2026 06:56
The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood.
Thomas W Case said:
Gentle and elegiac—you shape him like a candle held against a judging wind, steady even as others misread its light.
The grit is in that contradiction: kindness that doesn’t protect him from being rewritten by everyone else’s fear.
April 26th, 2026 10:00
Thomas W Case said:
Gentle and elegiac—you shape him like a candle held against a judging wind, steady even as others misread its light.
The grit is in that contradiction: kindness that doesn’t protect him from being rewritten by everyone else’s fear.
April 26th, 2026 10:00
The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood.
orchidee said:
A fine write F. It will take me a year, if there\'s anything cryptic to work out in poems! lol.
April 26th, 2026 02:26
orchidee said:
A fine write F. It will take me a year, if there\'s anything cryptic to work out in poems! lol.
April 26th, 2026 02:26
The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood.
RSM0812 said:
This sounds life at the end of the day the man in the poem was feared. Unfortunately we are afraid of what we do not understand. Even each other...
April 25th, 2026 15:23
RSM0812 said:
This sounds life at the end of the day the man in the poem was feared. Unfortunately we are afraid of what we do not understand. Even each other...
April 25th, 2026 15:23
The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, there’s a deep quiet in this…the kind that carries both love and ache at the same time. That image of moving unseen, misunderstood, yet still holding onto kindness…that lands hard. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Friendship, there’s a deep quiet in this…the kind that carries both love and ache at the same time. That image of moving unseen, misunderstood, yet still holding onto kindness…that lands hard. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:04
The man who loved all, ❤️but was misunderstood.
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! you have surpassed yourself on this one Friendship a true work of art in a story well rhymed and metered it is a masterpiece of an archetype that all would strive to be but are not and a type of father figure, who in fact, may be a father to us all. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:20
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! you have surpassed yourself on this one Friendship a true work of art in a story well rhymed and metered it is a masterpiece of an archetype that all would strive to be but are not and a type of father figure, who in fact, may be a father to us all. Well written
April 25th, 2026 10:20
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
Priya Tomar said:
The poem reminds me a little baby girl in my home .
Good poem about the fancy thoughts of a child .
April 24th, 2026 23:13
Priya Tomar said:
The poem reminds me a little baby girl in my home .
Good poem about the fancy thoughts of a child .
April 24th, 2026 23:13
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this takes me back to that kind of childhood thinking…where the line between real and imagined didn’t matter, it just was. You captured that incredibly well, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this takes me back to that kind of childhood thinking…where the line between real and imagined didn’t matter, it just was. You captured that incredibly well, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:35
The imagination of a child\'s mind.
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and most childlike this poem well rhymed and metered with great flow tells the fantasy of a child\'s mind. A fave
April 24th, 2026 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and most childlike this poem well rhymed and metered with great flow tells the fantasy of a child\'s mind. A fave
April 24th, 2026 08:16
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