Comments received on poems by Friendship
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
Cerise456 said:
Beautifully written Friendship
June 2nd, 2026 00:18
Cerise456 said:
Beautifully written Friendship
June 2nd, 2026 00:18
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey here.From hope thinning to blurry Love. Some wisdom here as well.Some important advice.Namely Don\'t turn your back on the Light of Love.A deep poem well written.I actually learned somethings here.Well done
June 2nd, 2026 00:18
David Wakeling said:
A wonderful journey here.From hope thinning to blurry Love. Some wisdom here as well.Some important advice.Namely Don\'t turn your back on the Light of Love.A deep poem well written.I actually learned somethings here.Well done
June 2nd, 2026 00:18
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
cellinic said:
A wonderful poetic statement, in which almost every line is perceived as aphoristic, best wishes, my fave!
June 1st, 2026 20:59
cellinic said:
A wonderful poetic statement, in which almost every line is perceived as aphoristic, best wishes, my fave!
June 1st, 2026 20:59
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
antra.coree said:
Mindset is def a power and colourful world gives good mind!! Great write ✍🏻
June 1st, 2026 20:37
antra.coree said:
Mindset is def a power and colourful world gives good mind!! Great write ✍🏻
June 1st, 2026 20:37
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought most poetically stated. it strikes at the heart of the modern world that pulls everyone apart. Loved it
June 1st, 2026 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought most poetically stated. it strikes at the heart of the modern world that pulls everyone apart. Loved it
June 1st, 2026 20:12
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now, who was it who said, \"Let there be light\"?!
June 1st, 2026 19:18
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now, who was it who said, \"Let there be light\"?!
June 1st, 2026 19:18
Refuse to let your heart dwell in darkness.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is the sense of invitation running through this piece. Even when it speaks hard truths, it never feels condemning. The movement from darkness toward light and color gives the poem a hopeful heartbeat. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 18:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, what struck me most is the sense of invitation running through this piece. Even when it speaks hard truths, it never feels condemning. The movement from darkness toward light and color gives the poem a hopeful heartbeat. Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 18:30
Am I a bad friend?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hell no. ❤️ Grief does strange things to memory. Sometimes our minds focus so hard on surviving a moment that entire pieces of it get tucked away for years before resurfacing. Reading this, what struck me wasn\'t a bad friend...it was someone remembering an act of love that mattered enough to come back all these years later. And for what it\'s worth, you rock...No bad friend to be found in you...and so does that picture you paired with this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, hell no. ❤️ Grief does strange things to memory. Sometimes our minds focus so hard on surviving a moment that entire pieces of it get tucked away for years before resurfacing. Reading this, what struck me wasn\'t a bad friend...it was someone remembering an act of love that mattered enough to come back all these years later. And for what it\'s worth, you rock...No bad friend to be found in you...and so does that picture you paired with this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:23
Tried.
mylastwrites said:
Struggles. No matter how hard we try we all have them. Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2026 12:16
mylastwrites said:
Struggles. No matter how hard we try we all have them. Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2026 12:16
Am I a bad friend?
arqios said:
I\'ve had a couple of run ins wherein I questioned my qualifications as a friend. Very relatable. Hard not to empathise with this. 🙏🕊️
June 1st, 2026 05:07
arqios said:
I\'ve had a couple of run ins wherein I questioned my qualifications as a friend. Very relatable. Hard not to empathise with this. 🙏🕊️
June 1st, 2026 05:07
Am I a bad friend?
orchidee said:
I suppose we can\'t, or don\'t always think of everything or everyone, when we have our own emotional times and a lot on our own minds.
I can do similar in sometimes only contacting folk in emergencies or needing something of them, though genuine needs.
June 1st, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
I suppose we can\'t, or don\'t always think of everything or everyone, when we have our own emotional times and a lot on our own minds.
I can do similar in sometimes only contacting folk in emergencies or needing something of them, though genuine needs.
June 1st, 2026 02:22
Am I a bad friend?
David Wakeling said:
No I can\'t believe you are a bad friend.A wondeful thoughtful poem from being lost to being a bad friend. Some deep introspection going on here.Made me think
May 31st, 2026 22:56
David Wakeling said:
No I can\'t believe you are a bad friend.A wondeful thoughtful poem from being lost to being a bad friend. Some deep introspection going on here.Made me think
May 31st, 2026 22:56
Am I a bad friend?
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and very emotional. A loss that is hard to reconcile. Well written
May 31st, 2026 22:02
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and very emotional. A loss that is hard to reconcile. Well written
May 31st, 2026 22:02
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
cellinic said:
A wonderful deep write, definitely a fave! Best wishes,
May 31st, 2026 04:27
cellinic said:
A wonderful deep write, definitely a fave! Best wishes,
May 31st, 2026 04:27
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
rhmn_7 said:
Great words and never lose hope, dear poet!
May 31st, 2026 01:15
rhmn_7 said:
Great words and never lose hope, dear poet!
May 31st, 2026 01:15
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
arqios said:
A language to be learnt and spoken fluently and effectively....🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 01:09
arqios said:
A language to be learnt and spoken fluently and effectively....🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 01:09
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Well costructed with perfect rhyme and cadence.A joy to read. The theme on the other hand is a capable person in doubt.The author is not happy with the efforts.From trying hard to plant seeds that grow tangled to watch others measure with golden scales while the author watches the wind fill the wrong sails.There is so much depth here I had to read it twice.An enjoyable read
May 30th, 2026 18:33
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing poem.Well costructed with perfect rhyme and cadence.A joy to read. The theme on the other hand is a capable person in doubt.The author is not happy with the efforts.From trying hard to plant seeds that grow tangled to watch others measure with golden scales while the author watches the wind fill the wrong sails.There is so much depth here I had to read it twice.An enjoyable read
May 30th, 2026 18:33
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
sorenbarrett said:
A well composed and rhymed poem that plants its meaning in crops that fail to thrive and course uncertain although one knows the directions. It to me reflects the uncertainties of life and the inability to depend on weather, soil, or seed as a farmer of life\'s needs for sustenance. I may well be wrong here but that is the feel I get. We are all farmers dependent on the weather, pests and our own labor. In that we have control only over the latter and that leaves us insecure and at times tired for all we did but got no compensation for. Loved it a fave
May 30th, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
A well composed and rhymed poem that plants its meaning in crops that fail to thrive and course uncertain although one knows the directions. It to me reflects the uncertainties of life and the inability to depend on weather, soil, or seed as a farmer of life\'s needs for sustenance. I may well be wrong here but that is the feel I get. We are all farmers dependent on the weather, pests and our own labor. In that we have control only over the latter and that leaves us insecure and at times tired for all we did but got no compensation for. Loved it a fave
May 30th, 2026 10:50
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one hit me hard. The tension between knowing the path others expect and finding yourself unable to walk it feels painfully honest. There is no self-pity here...only exhaustion and truth. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this one hit me hard. The tension between knowing the path others expect and finding yourself unable to walk it feels painfully honest. There is no self-pity here...only exhaustion and truth. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:26
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
orchidee said:
Good write F. You\'ll get there - whatever good place you\'re trying to get to!
May 30th, 2026 09:00
orchidee said:
Good write F. You\'ll get there - whatever good place you\'re trying to get to!
May 30th, 2026 09:00
I\'m tired, and I\'ve tried.
2781 said:
You writing is unbelievably good.
All that comes to mind: we all fall short of the glory...from glory to glory!
May 30th, 2026 08:30
2781 said:
You writing is unbelievably good.
All that comes to mind: we all fall short of the glory...from glory to glory!
May 30th, 2026 08:30
I fear you.
RSM0812 said:
An inyeresting poem about fear. Even fear has a purpose. Everyone has felt fear before and could easily relate to you prose.
May 30th, 2026 08:28
RSM0812 said:
An inyeresting poem about fear. Even fear has a purpose. Everyone has felt fear before and could easily relate to you prose.
May 30th, 2026 08:28
Aries is my soul.
mohammad ali said:
All your poems are so beautifully rhythmic, full of sense and imagery, carrying the soul to the sweet land of imagination, dear, honey and so near!
May 27th, 2026 14:34
mohammad ali said:
All your poems are so beautifully rhythmic, full of sense and imagery, carrying the soul to the sweet land of imagination, dear, honey and so near!
May 27th, 2026 14:34
He has only hate in his heart for me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me like a punch to the chest. The betrayal woven through this...someone entrusted to heal instead becoming the source of harm...is absolutely devastating. The controlled anger and grief in the poem make it even more powerful. Incredible work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Friendship, this hit me like a punch to the chest. The betrayal woven through this...someone entrusted to heal instead becoming the source of harm...is absolutely devastating. The controlled anger and grief in the poem make it even more powerful. Incredible work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:26
He has only hate in his heart for me.
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Neville said:
May I respectfully suggest you take a few deep breaths, sit back and write 500 times I will never make out with a narcissist ever again .. This is well crafted but dreadfully sad .. I additionally hope it is the product of a very gifted imagination and not autobiographical .. Neville
May 27th, 2026 01:45
Tried.
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
NafisaSB said:
this poem is so heart rending and touching - it moved me with its beautiful depiction
May 27th, 2026 00:24
He has only hate in his heart for me.
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
David Wakeling said:
Amazing.This is very well constructed.I like the rhyme.For me it is a sad reflection on a relationship that has a toxic partner.Really quite viscious.Very well written
May 27th, 2026 00:11
Lust
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
mohammad ali said:
So sweet the sleep;
And deep the creep
Of words on lip
Arranged to sip.
May 26th, 2026 12:27
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