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rrodriguez said:
I loved reading your poem. Its rhythm and cadence are beautiful—natural and flowing, carrying the reader effortlessly from one image to the next.
August 29th, 2026 16:24
rrodriguez said:
I loved reading your poem. Its rhythm and cadence are beautiful—natural and flowing, carrying the reader effortlessly from one image to the next.
August 29th, 2026 16:24
Grieving a friendship that once was!
Neville said:
what you so eloquently describe happens more often than one might imagine & even if one could see or sense it happening over time, I do believe the impact can still be devastating and leave one feeling both bereaved and bereft .. Neville 🌻
August 29th, 2026 13:16
Neville said:
what you so eloquently describe happens more often than one might imagine & even if one could see or sense it happening over time, I do believe the impact can still be devastating and leave one feeling both bereaved and bereft .. Neville 🌻
August 29th, 2026 13:16
Grieving a friendship that once was!
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write of someone that you thought you once knew but now seems changed. Well written with good wording and rhyme it speaks to the question of whether they or oneself has changed. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
A strong write of someone that you thought you once knew but now seems changed. Well written with good wording and rhyme it speaks to the question of whether they or oneself has changed. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 08:44
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a painfully powerful piece, my friend. You capture the impossible struggle of seeking forgiveness for an unnamed offense while the mind keeps imposing punishment. I know something of that merciless inner judgment...and this gives it a haunting form. Wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a painfully powerful piece, my friend. You capture the impossible struggle of seeking forgiveness for an unnamed offense while the mind keeps imposing punishment. I know something of that merciless inner judgment...and this gives it a haunting form. Wonderfully written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:50
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
arqios said:
A very moving read 🙏🏻🕊️
August 29th, 2026 06:38
arqios said:
A very moving read 🙏🏻🕊️
August 29th, 2026 06:38
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
orchidee said:
Good write F. I never knew I was punishing you. What have I done? lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:29
orchidee said:
Good write F. I never knew I was punishing you. What have I done? lol.
August 29th, 2026 02:29
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
soheil khodaparasti said:
Haunting and deeply moving.
August 29th, 2026 00:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
Haunting and deeply moving.
August 29th, 2026 00:57
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
sorenbarrett said:
Often the worst punishment is what we give ourselves. Believing that no one would punish us unless we deserved it we invent reasons. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow it reads well. A sad poem where punishment seems read into every action.
August 28th, 2026 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
Often the worst punishment is what we give ourselves. Believing that no one would punish us unless we deserved it we invent reasons. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow it reads well. A sad poem where punishment seems read into every action.
August 28th, 2026 20:25
How can I forgive if you keep Punishing me?
peto said:
Love how you write friendship
Great rhyme and flow but so much more
So vivid and personal
Forgiveness is never easy, esp with ongoing hostility
I struggle even to forgive myself
I mentioned this to someone once who replied \" have you ever asked God to forgive you? Maybe I said
Why should he if you wont
Anyway
I am in awe of the feeling your writing produces
August 28th, 2026 19:57
peto said:
Love how you write friendship
Great rhyme and flow but so much more
So vivid and personal
Forgiveness is never easy, esp with ongoing hostility
I struggle even to forgive myself
I mentioned this to someone once who replied \" have you ever asked God to forgive you? Maybe I said
Why should he if you wont
Anyway
I am in awe of the feeling your writing produces
August 28th, 2026 19:57
I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why?
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving expression of giving everything and still feeling that it was not enough. Sometimes the most painful question is not what more I could have done but “Why wasn’t my best enough?” Powerful and beautifully written.
August 28th, 2026 07:57
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving expression of giving everything and still feeling that it was not enough. Sometimes the most painful question is not what more I could have done but “Why wasn’t my best enough?” Powerful and beautifully written.
August 28th, 2026 07:57
I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a psalm of lament in its rawest form. The prayer remains unresolved because the wound remains unresolved...faith survives here as the courage to bring devastation before God and demand that the silence answer. Powerful work, Friendship. A fave. I can relate to this deeply.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 08:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a psalm of lament in its rawest form. The prayer remains unresolved because the wound remains unresolved...faith survives here as the courage to bring devastation before God and demand that the silence answer. Powerful work, Friendship. A fave. I can relate to this deeply.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 27th, 2026 08:34
I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why?
Syd said:
Hi Friendship, God sure can be cruel sometimes.
Nicely written - Syd 🍄
August 27th, 2026 04:15
Syd said:
Hi Friendship, God sure can be cruel sometimes.
Nicely written - Syd 🍄
August 27th, 2026 04:15
I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why?
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for an answer as to why there is strife, pain and struggle. If there were a God he might say read my fairytale of Job. I was betting that you were stronger than Satan thought and I always win my bets. A good read well worded and with good rhyme and flow. It tells a tough story but one that can end well if one is tough enough to stick with it. Well done
August 26th, 2026 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for an answer as to why there is strife, pain and struggle. If there were a God he might say read my fairytale of Job. I was betting that you were stronger than Satan thought and I always win my bets. A good read well worded and with good rhyme and flow. It tells a tough story but one that can end well if one is tough enough to stick with it. Well done
August 26th, 2026 20:08
I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why?
rrodriguez said:
With tears in my eyes, I read this poem because it describes who I am. I\'ve given my all, and yet I still feel lacking. I, too, ask, “God in heaven, why?”
This is a beautifully written poem. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 19:11
rrodriguez said:
With tears in my eyes, I read this poem because it describes who I am. I\'ve given my all, and yet I still feel lacking. I, too, ask, “God in heaven, why?”
This is a beautifully written poem. Be blessed!
August 26th, 2026 19:11
God, can you hear me?
Efrain Cajar said:
This is a heavy one. I believe that everyone in life had this kind of sentiment. Thank you for stand with us.
August 26th, 2026 13:30
Efrain Cajar said:
This is a heavy one. I believe that everyone in life had this kind of sentiment. Thank you for stand with us.
August 26th, 2026 13:30
Rest ,sweet child.
NafisaSB said:
a tender ode to a beautiful soul expressed in a lovely way....great write - hope she rests in peace...
August 25th, 2026 00:27
NafisaSB said:
a tender ode to a beautiful soul expressed in a lovely way....great write - hope she rests in peace...
August 25th, 2026 00:27
Rest ,sweet child.
Fränz Müller said:
What a tragedy! And what a beautiful tribute to her!
August 22nd, 2026 20:12
Fränz Müller said:
What a tragedy! And what a beautiful tribute to her!
August 22nd, 2026 20:12
Rest ,sweet child.
arqios said:
There can be some really sad times all around us and within us. Your poetry has brought us toward a more bearable pain. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2026 20:22
arqios said:
There can be some really sad times all around us and within us. Your poetry has brought us toward a more bearable pain. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2026 20:22
Rest ,sweet child.
mylastwrites said:
Sad, sweet and beautiful. This hit so close to home. Great write.
August 21st, 2026 19:10
mylastwrites said:
Sad, sweet and beautiful. This hit so close to home. Great write.
August 21st, 2026 19:10
Rest ,sweet child.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Friendship...I am so deeply sorry. Sixteen is heartbreakingly young, and the additional news about your neighbor is so much grief to receive at once. Holding you and both families in my heart. May she rest peacefully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, Friendship...I am so deeply sorry. Sixteen is heartbreakingly young, and the additional news about your neighbor is so much grief to receive at once. Holding you and both families in my heart. May she rest peacefully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:46
Rest ,sweet child.
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Always devastating when its children.
Happened to a friend of mine, his lad fell off a roof.
You never forget them.
Sorry for your neighbour too.
August 21st, 2026 11:49
Paul Bell said:
This is a sad one.
Always devastating when its children.
Happened to a friend of mine, his lad fell off a roof.
You never forget them.
Sorry for your neighbour too.
August 21st, 2026 11:49
Rest ,sweet child.
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving elegy, blending grief, tenderness, and the supernatural.
August 21st, 2026 11:42
soheil khodaparasti said:
A deeply moving elegy, blending grief, tenderness, and the supernatural.
August 21st, 2026 11:42
Rest ,sweet child.
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem and even sadder author\'s note. Very nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has good flow and the story is most engaging Well done Friendship
August 21st, 2026 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem and even sadder author\'s note. Very nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has good flow and the story is most engaging Well done Friendship
August 21st, 2026 10:34
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this.
The lines about Mother is so Touching. Heartfelt. A fave.
August 9th, 2026 14:50
Kevin Hulme said:
Can\'t tell you how much I enjoyed this.
The lines about Mother is so Touching. Heartfelt. A fave.
August 9th, 2026 14:50
Has her therapy gone wrong?
NafisaSB said:
So heart rending and relatable. Beautifully expressed 👌💅
August 9th, 2026 10:42
NafisaSB said:
So heart rending and relatable. Beautifully expressed 👌💅
August 9th, 2026 10:42
The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away.
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
August 9th, 2026 07:49
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work.
August 9th, 2026 07:49
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