Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Late glow
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a send off from life and this earth. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a send off from life and this earth. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:28
Late glow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries a cold, final stillness…like everything winding down without resistance. It feels stark and deliberate, and it lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries a cold, final stillness…like everything winding down without resistance. It feels stark and deliberate, and it lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:11
Late glow
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into the emotional turmoil of leaving behind love and connection, presenting a stark contrast between the organic human experience and the encroaching robotic or artificial presence that dominates existence. It speaks to feelings of isolation, fear, and the search for meaning in a world that appears to be moving towards a cold, mechanized future.
April 13th, 2026 08:58
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into the emotional turmoil of leaving behind love and connection, presenting a stark contrast between the organic human experience and the encroaching robotic or artificial presence that dominates existence. It speaks to feelings of isolation, fear, and the search for meaning in a world that appears to be moving towards a cold, mechanized future.
April 13th, 2026 08:58
Late glow
2781 said:
There\'s a lot in that. I had a very deep conversation with a google AI. My wife thinks I\'m mad, but google understands
April 13th, 2026 08:57
2781 said:
There\'s a lot in that. I had a very deep conversation with a google AI. My wife thinks I\'m mad, but google understands
April 13th, 2026 08:57
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries that flowing, almost dreamlike quality…where everything is sensation and contrast, heat and softness, light and shadow. It doesn’t rush, it just lets the moment unfold and dissolve as it goes. That immersive feel really works. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries that flowing, almost dreamlike quality…where everything is sensation and contrast, heat and softness, light and shadow. It doesn’t rush, it just lets the moment unfold and dissolve as it goes. That immersive feel really works. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:20
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
2781 said:
My lust has so vanished that even the thought would be folly!
April 11th, 2026 08:07
2781 said:
My lust has so vanished that even the thought would be folly!
April 11th, 2026 08:07
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, seductive, sexual, passionate, burning desire, lust all encompass this poem
April 11th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, seductive, sexual, passionate, burning desire, lust all encompass this poem
April 11th, 2026 07:06
WHEN LOVE ILLUMINATES EVERYTHING - Operetta
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is overflowing…in the best way. It just keeps pouring forward without holding back, and that kind of sincerity really lands. You mean every word of it, and it shows. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is overflowing…in the best way. It just keeps pouring forward without holding back, and that kind of sincerity really lands. You mean every word of it, and it shows. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:49
WHEN LOVE ILLUMINATES EVERYTHING - Operetta
sorenbarrett said:
If there could be so much love shown in todays world. It is a beautiful wish and desire. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
If there could be so much love shown in todays world. It is a beautiful wish and desire. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:09
PENDING / PENDIENTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really lands…that transition from the climb into the descent, especially in that image of setting the suitcases down. It feels like release, but not without weight. There’s something grounded in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really lands…that transition from the climb into the descent, especially in that image of setting the suitcases down. It feels like release, but not without weight. There’s something grounded in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:51
PENDING / PENDIENTE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to action. It creates great scenes with wonderful imagery. Well done
April 7th, 2026 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to action. It creates great scenes with wonderful imagery. Well done
April 7th, 2026 07:49
Flowers for Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a quiet, enduring sorrow here…returning again and again with flowers, holding love even in absence. That image of bringing flowers to someone who is both gone and still with you…that anchors everything. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a quiet, enduring sorrow here…returning again and again with flowers, holding love even in absence. That image of bringing flowers to someone who is both gone and still with you…that anchors everything. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:39
Flowers for Love
Teddy.15 said:
Grief is something that stays always even beneath the stone of those who have left, a beautiful piece of poetry so very relatable to me. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 10:19
Teddy.15 said:
Grief is something that stays always even beneath the stone of those who have left, a beautiful piece of poetry so very relatable to me. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 10:19
Flowers for Love
sorenbarrett said:
Mournful and melancholic this poem of a lost love speaks of clinging to memories and hopes for reunion. A sad poem a lacrimosa dedicated to one loved.
April 5th, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Mournful and melancholic this poem of a lost love speaks of clinging to memories and hopes for reunion. A sad poem a lacrimosa dedicated to one loved.
April 5th, 2026 05:32
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve been there…missing what was right beside me while thinking it was absent. That kind of blindness isn’t loud, it’s quiet…and you captured that clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve been there…missing what was right beside me while thinking it was absent. That kind of blindness isn’t loud, it’s quiet…and you captured that clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:12
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Friendship said:
nicely done. Your poem explores the theme of unrecognized love and the blindness that often comes with being preoccupied with one\'s own life.
April 3rd, 2026 07:16
Friendship said:
nicely done. Your poem explores the theme of unrecognized love and the blindness that often comes with being preoccupied with one\'s own life.
April 3rd, 2026 07:16
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is such a lovely write that turns the tables and puts the responsibility right back where it belongs on our shoulders. Well written
April 3rd, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is such a lovely write that turns the tables and puts the responsibility right back where it belongs on our shoulders. Well written
April 3rd, 2026 07:13
REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady sense of light moving through darkness that never fades. It doesn’t deny the weight of life…it just keeps returning to that glow within it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady sense of light moving through darkness that never fades. It doesn’t deny the weight of life…it just keeps returning to that glow within it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:27
REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
sorenbarrett said:
What a spiritual and lovely write that touches the soul and mind with possibilities and probabilities of hope and love in the infinite. Well written a fave
April 1st, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
What a spiritual and lovely write that touches the soul and mind with possibilities and probabilities of hope and love in the infinite. Well written a fave
April 1st, 2026 08:34
GIVE US YOUR LIGHT, MY LORD / DONNE-NOUS TA LUMIÈRE, MON SEIGNEUR ( ♪ Operetta 5 ♪ )
orchidee said:
Good write C.
March 31st, 2026 09:55
orchidee said:
Good write C.
March 31st, 2026 09:55
GIVE US YOUR LIGHT, MY LORD / DONNE-NOUS TA LUMIÈRE, MON SEIGNEUR ( ♪ Operetta 5 ♪ )
sorenbarrett said:
This a poetic prayer set in prayer form. Nicely written
March 31st, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
This a poetic prayer set in prayer form. Nicely written
March 31st, 2026 09:40
WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a continuous flow here that really lands…moving from city to body to sea without breaking stride. The repetition of waves ties everything together into one living current of love and motion. It feels expansive and alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a continuous flow here that really lands…moving from city to body to sea without breaking stride. The repetition of waves ties everything together into one living current of love and motion. It feels expansive and alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:03
WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes the waves of the sea and sets them to verse that comes wave after wave as a baptism of love. Each wave reassuring of another to follow. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes the waves of the sea and sets them to verse that comes wave after wave as a baptism of love. Each wave reassuring of another to follow. Nicely written
March 30th, 2026 06:06
WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and its fluidity, using the metaphor of water to symbolize the ebb and flow of emotions, experiences, and relationships. The poem encapsulates the notion that love is essential, transformative, and omnipresent, much like waves in the sea that carry the essence of life.
March 30th, 2026 05:53
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around love and its fluidity, using the metaphor of water to symbolize the ebb and flow of emotions, experiences, and relationships. The poem encapsulates the notion that love is essential, transformative, and omnipresent, much like waves in the sea that carry the essence of life.
March 30th, 2026 05:53
AILES DE L’ÂME 𝄞 Operetta
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, uplifting current running through it that just carries the reader along. It feels gentle but steady all the way through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, uplifting current running through it that just carries the reader along. It feels gentle but steady all the way through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 29th, 2026 09:43
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