Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
FRAGILE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, the crystal imagery really stayed with me. Something transparent and beautiful, yet capable of fracturing under pressure. That image echoes throughout the poem and gives it such a haunting quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, the crystal imagery really stayed with me. Something transparent and beautiful, yet capable of fracturing under pressure. That image echoes throughout the poem and gives it such a haunting quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:32
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminds me of people who have touched my life and are no longer physically present, yet somehow remain part of it all the same. The impact of genuine kindness has a way of lingering. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminds me of people who have touched my life and are no longer physically present, yet somehow remain part of it all the same. The impact of genuine kindness has a way of lingering. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:05
FRAGILE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. There is such a deep weariness running through it, yet it never feels theatrical. It feels like someone holding up their inner world and refusing to hide the cracks. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 21:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. There is such a deep weariness running through it, yet it never feels theatrical. It feels like someone holding up their inner world and refusing to hide the cracks. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 21:54
FRAGILE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor speaks of fragility and transparency in a modern world and the end to a life. Well said
June 23rd, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor speaks of fragility and transparency in a modern world and the end to a life. Well said
June 23rd, 2026 04:39
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that transcends time and space. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that transcends time and space. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:07
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
ms.divine said:
So touching I needed that 🫂🤗 nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 13:31
ms.divine said:
So touching I needed that 🫂🤗 nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 13:31
Sighs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow...this feels like pure celebration. There is so much warmth and joy flowing through it that I couldn\'t help but smile as I read. It feels completely immersed in wonder and affection from beginning to end. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow...this feels like pure celebration. There is so much warmth and joy flowing through it that I couldn\'t help but smile as I read. It feels completely immersed in wonder and affection from beginning to end. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:04
Sighs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
ANIMAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:34
ANIMAL
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
BUBBLES OF HAPPINESS
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
The Luxury of Living
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
The Luxury of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:52
The Luxury of Living
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Frio sueño
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
Frio sueño
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
Only love / Solo amor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Only love / Solo amor
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
Only love / Solo amor
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:26
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