Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
NAKED / DESNUDOS
sorenbarrett said:
This ghostly poem of passion is cloaked in sensuality and sexuality that are mortal yet this is spiritual and so is it the memory of mortality and its passions that we hold as spirits? Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
This ghostly poem of passion is cloaked in sensuality and sexuality that are mortal yet this is spiritual and so is it the memory of mortality and its passions that we hold as spirits? Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 13:43
INNER WATERS / AGUAS INTERIORES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, flowing quality that never stops moving. Water, bodies, dreams, distance…everything blends together into something sensual and deeply atmospheric. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, flowing quality that never stops moving. Water, bodies, dreams, distance…everything blends together into something sensual and deeply atmospheric. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:13
INNER WATERS / AGUAS INTERIORES
sorenbarrett said:
Water one of the basic elements, water a holy substance covering the earth before land, baptizing it, In the Tao it is something to be emulated. A metaphor of being. Nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Water one of the basic elements, water a holy substance covering the earth before land, baptizing it, In the Tao it is something to be emulated. A metaphor of being. Nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:11
Baila conmigo ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminded me of those rare moments where music, closeness, and the night seem to blur together into something almost timeless. The poem carries that feeling beautifully…simple, romantic, and sincere. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminded me of those rare moments where music, closeness, and the night seem to blur together into something almost timeless. The poem carries that feeling beautifully…simple, romantic, and sincere. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:53
Baila conmigo ♬
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and cheerful poem that reads better in the original Spanish than in translated \'English
May 9th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and cheerful poem that reads better in the original Spanish than in translated \'English
May 9th, 2026 04:55
DANCE WITH ME / Baila conmigo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back the feeling of those rare moments where music and closeness make the rest of the world disappear for a while. There’s such sincerity here...nothing flashy, just pure affection and presence. I loved the atmosphere you created, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back the feeling of those rare moments where music and closeness make the rest of the world disappear for a while. There’s such sincerity here...nothing flashy, just pure affection and presence. I loved the atmosphere you created, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:14
DANCE WITH ME / Baila conmigo
sorenbarrett said:
Musical, poetic and romantic. Nicely expressed in this poem are all the elements of a romantic night. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Musical, poetic and romantic. Nicely expressed in this poem are all the elements of a romantic night. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:03
WITH TASTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reads like a hymn to living fully…to art, touch, music, tenderness, pleasure, and presence. The repetition of savoring, tasting, and giving yourself to life gives the whole poem such rich emotional texture. And that final idea of making “the small immense” lands beautifully. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reads like a hymn to living fully…to art, touch, music, tenderness, pleasure, and presence. The repetition of savoring, tasting, and giving yourself to life gives the whole poem such rich emotional texture. And that final idea of making “the small immense” lands beautifully. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:16
NET / RED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really pulled me in…humid, tangled, dreamlike. It feels like getting caught inside thought itself, where language and life become the same net. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really pulled me in…humid, tangled, dreamlike. It feels like getting caught inside thought itself, where language and life become the same net. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:59
WITH TASTE
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of those things that bring pleasure a carpe diem vision of life. Nicely written
May 7th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of those things that bring pleasure a carpe diem vision of life. Nicely written
May 7th, 2026 13:22
WITH TASTE
Katie B. said:
Excellent piece of poetry! Wonderful images and descriptions. Well done!
May 7th, 2026 12:03
Katie B. said:
Excellent piece of poetry! Wonderful images and descriptions. Well done!
May 7th, 2026 12:03
WITH TASTE
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your story revolves around the sensory experiences of eating, drinking, and enjoying life. It highlights themes of luxury, pleasure, and the act of savoring both the physical and emotional aspects of existence.
May 7th, 2026 09:19
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your story revolves around the sensory experiences of eating, drinking, and enjoying life. It highlights themes of luxury, pleasure, and the act of savoring both the physical and emotional aspects of existence.
May 7th, 2026 09:19
NET / RED
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
May 6th, 2026 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
May 6th, 2026 20:32
PRECIPICIO / PRECIPICIO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve felt that tension before…looking at the world and sensing something slipping, something out of alignment. That pull between ruin and something deeper…you captured that clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve felt that tension before…looking at the world and sensing something slipping, something out of alignment. That pull between ruin and something deeper…you captured that clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:14
PRECIPICIO / PRECIPICIO
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely crafted the interplay of good and evil and the coming of times. Well done Carlos
May 5th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely crafted the interplay of good and evil and the coming of times. Well done Carlos
May 5th, 2026 03:58
HALO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a softness here that just drifts and settles in quietly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a softness here that just drifts and settles in quietly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:48
HALO
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of light or knowledge or truth or glory as if lifted above the earthly sphere. Nicely done my friend
May 4th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
An angelic poem of light or knowledge or truth or glory as if lifted above the earthly sphere. Nicely done my friend
May 4th, 2026 09:06
HALO
Friendship said:
Nicely done. A self-reflection, and the interplay between inner light and external reality. It delves into the paradox of being alive while feeling a sense of detachment or invisibility, symbolized by the halo—a representation of purity, enlightenment, or a protective aura.
May 4th, 2026 08:56
Friendship said:
Nicely done. A self-reflection, and the interplay between inner light and external reality. It delves into the paradox of being alive while feeling a sense of detachment or invisibility, symbolized by the halo—a representation of purity, enlightenment, or a protective aura.
May 4th, 2026 08:56
Duck
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real… stripped down and honest. The simplicity lets the feeling speak without anything getting in the way. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real… stripped down and honest. The simplicity lets the feeling speak without anything getting in the way. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:51
Duck
sorenbarrett said:
Never thought of a duck as famished. Metaphoric perhaps. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Never thought of a duck as famished. Metaphoric perhaps. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:33
VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one way love and a plea to make it last a little longer. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one way love and a plea to make it last a little longer. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 12:44
VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both tender and a little heartbreaking. It holds onto a moment that’s already slipping away. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both tender and a little heartbreaking. It holds onto a moment that’s already slipping away. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:21
I, SLAVE
sorenbarrett said:
Death the great leveler and emancipator of all brings peace and love. A wonderful write
May 1st, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Death the great leveler and emancipator of all brings peace and love. A wonderful write
May 1st, 2026 16:39
I, SLAVE
Cerise456 said:
This is so beautiful, it\'s crazy the fact that some are treated so poorly and seen as less than for just being different (:
May 1st, 2026 12:24
Cerise456 said:
This is so beautiful, it\'s crazy the fact that some are treated so poorly and seen as less than for just being different (:
May 1st, 2026 12:24
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