Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
BEHIND CLOSED DOORS
sorenbarrett said:
We all sit behind doors sometimes open sometimes closed some open and some closed even from ourselves. a lovely write
January 10th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
We all sit behind doors sometimes open sometimes closed some open and some closed even from ourselves. a lovely write
January 10th, 2026 12:34
COLD FIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A warm soul is what characterizes us as living beings in a cold world. A lovely write Carlos
January 9th, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A warm soul is what characterizes us as living beings in a cold world. A lovely write Carlos
January 9th, 2026 10:28
FAR FROM EVERYTHING
xTattooingPaperx said:
Ordinary life is quite mundane and can be vulgar at times too. This has a realistic spin to it as metaphors lead the way downward throughout stanzas into a place of love, dreams and poetry. If only there were a yellow brick road, I\'d hop to it. This really drew me to a place of nostalgia, and that is quite difficult for me.
January 5th, 2026 18:31
xTattooingPaperx said:
Ordinary life is quite mundane and can be vulgar at times too. This has a realistic spin to it as metaphors lead the way downward throughout stanzas into a place of love, dreams and poetry. If only there were a yellow brick road, I\'d hop to it. This really drew me to a place of nostalgia, and that is quite difficult for me.
January 5th, 2026 18:31
FAR FROM EVERYTHING
sorenbarrett said:
A separation of worlds in this poem. Nicely written about an idyllic world and that of reality. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
A separation of worlds in this poem. Nicely written about an idyllic world and that of reality. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 15:03
NECTAR
sorenbarrett said:
Life goes home early from the dance with death often leaving new growth behind. A lovely poem Carlos
January 4th, 2026 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Life goes home early from the dance with death often leaving new growth behind. A lovely poem Carlos
January 4th, 2026 15:07
TIRED OF THE MOON
Lorenz said:
On Pluto lunatics are always safe ...But unwelcoming !
January 3rd, 2026 09:47
Lorenz said:
On Pluto lunatics are always safe ...But unwelcoming !
January 3rd, 2026 09:47
TIRED OF THE MOON
Friendship said:
The poet expresses a sense of fatigue from the isolation of being on the moon, symbolizing a detachment from reality and the chaos of life on Earth. It conveys a longing for a more grounded existence and highlights the struggle against overwhelming societal pressures.
January 3rd, 2026 09:31
Friendship said:
The poet expresses a sense of fatigue from the isolation of being on the moon, symbolizing a detachment from reality and the chaos of life on Earth. It conveys a longing for a more grounded existence and highlights the struggle against overwhelming societal pressures.
January 3rd, 2026 09:31
TIRED OF THE MOON
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with us poet lunatics that live in the space beyond the earth and its realities. Mad men rule the earth and lunatics above it. Where is one to rest their head? A lovely write.
January 3rd, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with us poet lunatics that live in the space beyond the earth and its realities. Mad men rule the earth and lunatics above it. Where is one to rest their head? A lovely write.
January 3rd, 2026 08:29
SORDINA
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and cold this poem tells of a world wracked with war and destruction. Well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and cold this poem tells of a world wracked with war and destruction. Well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:43
CHRISTMAS SONG 𝄞
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and hope that the spirit remain not as a seasonal hypocrisy but as an incorporation of who we are at all times. A lovely write
December 28th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and hope that the spirit remain not as a seasonal hypocrisy but as an incorporation of who we are at all times. A lovely write
December 28th, 2025 06:58
Strength / Fortaleza
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
μ / μ（ミュー）
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
AMONG FEATHERS / ENTRE PLUMAS
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
BLUE TIME / TIEMPO AZUL
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
One Day Closer
sorenbarrett said:
A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and all that has been in it and a readiness to move on. Very nice my friend
December 15th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and all that has been in it and a readiness to move on. Very nice my friend
December 15th, 2025 05:47
Matters of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic poem that goes right in for the kiss. It explores this topic until the end. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic poem that goes right in for the kiss. It explores this topic until the end. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:17
Caressing Breeze / BRISA ACARICIADORA
sorenbarrett said:
This porn feels light and area. It has a flow almost tropical to it very enjoyable.
December 10th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This porn feels light and area. It has a flow almost tropical to it very enjoyable.
December 10th, 2025 14:32
Caressing Breeze / BRISA ACARICIADORA
Katie B. said:
Peaceful and tender. Just lovely!
December 10th, 2025 14:30
Katie B. said:
Peaceful and tender. Just lovely!
December 10th, 2025 14:30
CHRISTMAS SONG
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas poem of peace and good will and may it continue through the New Year and forever. Loved it Carlos
December 9th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas poem of peace and good will and may it continue through the New Year and forever. Loved it Carlos
December 9th, 2025 08:59
Tears of the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Condemned by love seems the theme of this poem. A write of some darkness and weight. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
Condemned by love seems the theme of this poem. A write of some darkness and weight. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 17:41
Between Sheets
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so classic. Adonis, Zeus, Aphrodite all come to mind. A romantic and lustful write.
December 8th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so classic. Adonis, Zeus, Aphrodite all come to mind. A romantic and lustful write.
December 8th, 2025 08:15
LIGHT / LUZ
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem equating light and love. Nicely written in short lines that allow the flow to move on from one thought to the next. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem equating light and love. Nicely written in short lines that allow the flow to move on from one thought to the next. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:05
LIGHTNINGS / Relámpagos
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather haunting poem with deep feeling from awakened memories. it seems to arise out of the shadows of slumber now turned an emotional flame. Very nicely written my friend
December 5th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather haunting poem with deep feeling from awakened memories. it seems to arise out of the shadows of slumber now turned an emotional flame. Very nicely written my friend
December 5th, 2025 04:31
Kisses
sorenbarrett said:
Here kisses take precedence and flow over the body like water in a shower. Lovely
December 2nd, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
Here kisses take precedence and flow over the body like water in a shower. Lovely
December 2nd, 2025 20:03
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