Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
MY JOURNEY / MI VIAJE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem poeses the idea that life is for living and has little other purpose but to spread a little light. Well said
July 2nd, 2026 05:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem poeses the idea that life is for living and has little other purpose but to spread a little light. Well said
July 2nd, 2026 05:18
BUTTERFLY WINGS / ALAS DE MARIPOSAS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"the treasure of being reborn as a firefly\" is the image that stayed with me. Ending with a firefly instead of the expected butterfly gave the transformation an especially beautiful and unexpected glow. Wonderfully done, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, \"the treasure of being reborn as a firefly\" is the image that stayed with me. Ending with a firefly instead of the expected butterfly gave the transformation an especially beautiful and unexpected glow. Wonderfully done, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 22:46
LOVE MUSICAL / AMOR MUSICAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is a beautiful celebration of music and love woven together. I love how the poem flows like a melody itself, reminding us that some of the deepest things we experience are felt before they’re ever explained. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is a beautiful celebration of music and love woven together. I love how the poem flows like a melody itself, reminding us that some of the deepest things we experience are felt before they’re ever explained. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 18:52
LETRAS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me. The flowing imagery of rivers, butterflies, and boats gives the poem a beautiful sense of movement, while reminding us that words often continue their journey long after we\'ve let them go. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me. The flowing imagery of rivers, butterflies, and boats gives the poem a beautiful sense of movement, while reminding us that words often continue their journey long after we\'ve let them go. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 30th, 2026 14:56
LETRAS
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem bristles with beautiful metaphors.
\"Poems so free they have no ties,\"
What about poets?
June 30th, 2026 08:44
soheil khodaparasti said:
Your poem bristles with beautiful metaphors.
\"Poems so free they have no ties,\"
What about poets?
June 30th, 2026 08:44
LETRAS
2781 said:
No careless words there Carlos - they all go into the ether, and I guess we will follow, wherever they led.
June 30th, 2026 08:18
2781 said:
No careless words there Carlos - they all go into the ether, and I guess we will follow, wherever they led.
June 30th, 2026 08:18
LETRAS
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos I love the way that you have mixed the transformation of the butterfly with the colors of their wings and the colors of the flowers the growth of these and of the growth of the person and thoughts and emotions. Nicely done
June 30th, 2026 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos I love the way that you have mixed the transformation of the butterfly with the colors of their wings and the colors of the flowers the growth of these and of the growth of the person and thoughts and emotions. Nicely done
June 30th, 2026 05:21
LOVE MUSICAL / AMOR MUSICAL
sorenbarrett said:
Quite an outpouring poetic description of love. Well said
June 30th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Quite an outpouring poetic description of love. Well said
June 30th, 2026 04:07
THE GREAT BOOK
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful poem, my friend. The image of life becoming a book written page by page is both hopeful and inspiring, and your invitation to fill those pages with love gives the whole piece a quiet warmth. Really enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a beautiful poem, my friend. The image of life becoming a book written page by page is both hopeful and inspiring, and your invitation to fill those pages with love gives the whole piece a quiet warmth. Really enjoyed this. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 09:32
THE GREAT BOOK
Lorenz said:
There is this great book in which the few lines about our visit are written...
June 29th, 2026 08:20
Lorenz said:
There is this great book in which the few lines about our visit are written...
June 29th, 2026 08:20
THE GREAT BOOK
sorenbarrett said:
Happiness a wonderful color of ink with which to write. Nicely written Carlos this poem transforms emotion into metaphor and a life becomes a book. Nicely done
June 29th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Happiness a wonderful color of ink with which to write. Nicely written Carlos this poem transforms emotion into metaphor and a life becomes a book. Nicely done
June 29th, 2026 04:36
Bubbles / Pompas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love in all its forms. I especially appreciated that you don\'t limit it to romance, but let it expand into friendship, family, kindness, and the simple act of giving ourselves to others. The whole poem overflows with hope, and that\'s a wonderful gift to leave with the reader. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love in all its forms. I especially appreciated that you don\'t limit it to romance, but let it expand into friendship, family, kindness, and the simple act of giving ourselves to others. The whole poem overflows with hope, and that\'s a wonderful gift to leave with the reader. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:10
Bubbles / Pompas
sorenbarrett said:
This poem it seems is written in the form of bubbles raising. The portrayal of love as bubbles is a good one in the they are effervescent as is love itself. Nicely done in various forms of repetition emphasizing its importance and like many bubbles each raises and pops. Well done
June 28th, 2026 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem it seems is written in the form of bubbles raising. The portrayal of love as bubbles is a good one in the they are effervescent as is love itself. Nicely done in various forms of repetition emphasizing its importance and like many bubbles each raises and pops. Well done
June 28th, 2026 07:48
ABANDONMENT / ABANDONO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really drew me in. I love the idea of poetry as a place we enter rather than something we simply write. The whole piece feels like an inward journey toward a freedom that everyday life rarely allows. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really drew me in. I love the idea of poetry as a place we enter rather than something we simply write. The whole piece feels like an inward journey toward a freedom that everyday life rarely allows. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:48
ABANDONMENT / ABANDONO
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed the description of another world maybe mental where there is such a thing as freedom. Well written
June 27th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed the description of another world maybe mental where there is such a thing as freedom. Well written
June 27th, 2026 05:06
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
Lorenz said:
Do we understand the language of mirrors ? They also lie out of compassion...
June 26th, 2026 13:02
Lorenz said:
Do we understand the language of mirrors ? They also lie out of compassion...
June 26th, 2026 13:02
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonated with me. Learning to see ourselves with grace instead of criticism is a journey, and your poem captures that quiet transformation so well. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonated with me. Learning to see ourselves with grace instead of criticism is a journey, and your poem captures that quiet transformation so well. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:34
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about embracing the person we become.
June 26th, 2026 07:55
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about embracing the person we become.
June 26th, 2026 07:55
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections both in thoughts and image a poem that sees beauty in oneself, who one is and what one has become. Continued returns to this concept throughout the poem reinforces its meaning. Nicely written.
June 26th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections both in thoughts and image a poem that sees beauty in oneself, who one is and what one has become. Continued returns to this concept throughout the poem reinforces its meaning. Nicely written.
June 26th, 2026 07:44
VITAMINS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one uplifting ride, my friend. The poem radiates encouragement from beginning to end...almost like a pep talk set to music. The energy is contagious and unwavering. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one uplifting ride, my friend. The poem radiates encouragement from beginning to end...almost like a pep talk set to music. The energy is contagious and unwavering. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:33
VITAMINS
sorenbarrett said:
Joy and happiness emotional signs of health grow off positive thinking just as a vitamin for the soul. A lovely write Carlos
June 24th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Joy and happiness emotional signs of health grow off positive thinking just as a vitamin for the soul. A lovely write Carlos
June 24th, 2026 06:50
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