Comments received on poems by Bustillos
DESIRES
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fits the season both literally in the fall and its darkening and Halloween and its dark origins and night. Well written it speaks out. Well done
October 26th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem fits the season both literally in the fall and its darkening and Halloween and its dark origins and night. Well written it speaks out. Well done
October 26th, 2025 07:09
STABBINGS
sorenbarrett said:
There is something inferred in the double spacing of the first copy, the double wording of the second copy title and it being repeated twice. A most interesting metaphor of injury to the heart and soul. Nicely done
October 25th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
There is something inferred in the double spacing of the first copy, the double wording of the second copy title and it being repeated twice. A most interesting metaphor of injury to the heart and soul. Nicely done
October 25th, 2025 09:27
SOMETHING LEFT TO FINISH - TANGO - Copyleft
sorenbarrett said:
Mui bueno, very nice. This poem seems to be an expression of feeling finished as though one is tired and has done enough in life and feels ready to go. Well said
October 21st, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Mui bueno, very nice. This poem seems to be an expression of feeling finished as though one is tired and has done enough in life and feels ready to go. Well said
October 21st, 2025 05:28
INSIDE
sorenbarrett said:
The inner and outer self in this poem. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2025 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
The inner and outer self in this poem. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2025 13:25
PURE AIR
sorenbarrett said:
The temporal to the timeless from the the physical the corporal to the spiritual to the conceptual. Deeply philosophical it speaks in beautiful poetic images. Loved it.
October 19th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
The temporal to the timeless from the the physical the corporal to the spiritual to the conceptual. Deeply philosophical it speaks in beautiful poetic images. Loved it.
October 19th, 2025 07:29
GHOSTS
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that is haunting. Ghosts are today\'s images of yesterdays existence. What was now in shadows that remain. We all have them some haunt and some warm the soul. Some are friendly and others dangerous. Very nicely written it conveys a feeling of resolution over the past. Well done
October 18th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem that is haunting. Ghosts are today\'s images of yesterdays existence. What was now in shadows that remain. We all have them some haunt and some warm the soul. Some are friendly and others dangerous. Very nicely written it conveys a feeling of resolution over the past. Well done
October 18th, 2025 06:32
That Dreamed Love
sorenbarrett said:
Passion the earthly love burns hot and fast. A great poem about this passion of sin that one searches for and finds advertised and at times for sale. Well done.
October 17th, 2025 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
Passion the earthly love burns hot and fast. A great poem about this passion of sin that one searches for and finds advertised and at times for sale. Well done.
October 17th, 2025 08:31
The secret of life
sorenbarrett said:
Such an important message sent in a lovely way. It speaks the truth. Nicely penned.
October 15th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Such an important message sent in a lovely way. It speaks the truth. Nicely penned.
October 15th, 2025 04:05
At the Water\'s Surface
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and the past where things were happier. Well written it flows well and takes one back. Nostalgic in a sad way.
October 14th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of loss and the past where things were happier. Well written it flows well and takes one back. Nostalgic in a sad way.
October 14th, 2025 13:30
AIR IN BLOOM
sorenbarrett said:
Why do I want to say that I already commented on this set of poems today. Is it deja vu or am I in a parallel universe, maybe just lost my mind. Good none the less
October 13th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
Why do I want to say that I already commented on this set of poems today. Is it deja vu or am I in a parallel universe, maybe just lost my mind. Good none the less
October 13th, 2025 13:39
TRANSITION
sorenbarrett said:
Time seems to shorten to mere instants as we approach the end. A poem to me that speaks of such brevity
October 12th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
Time seems to shorten to mere instants as we approach the end. A poem to me that speaks of such brevity
October 12th, 2025 09:49
CUTE MAN
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s quite a clever and well thought out write Cut and Cute, but no matter what happens he is a Happy man and that is what matters, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 08:08
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s quite a clever and well thought out write Cut and Cute, but no matter what happens he is a Happy man and that is what matters, enjoyed the read
October 11th, 2025 08:08
CUTE MAN
sorenbarrett said:
Is this the feminist strategy to demasculinize men so as to equal the power struggle or is there a legitimate inner belief in being who one is? A poem that stretches the brain and makes one think of what is it okay to accept and what does one want to change. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Is this the feminist strategy to demasculinize men so as to equal the power struggle or is there a legitimate inner belief in being who one is? A poem that stretches the brain and makes one think of what is it okay to accept and what does one want to change. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 06:16
FLOWERS FOR THE DEAD
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very interesting and intriguing write, associating flowers and there scents and colour\'s with different stages of life, well written
October 10th, 2025 16:55
Poetic Licence said:
This was a very interesting and intriguing write, associating flowers and there scents and colour\'s with different stages of life, well written
October 10th, 2025 16:55
FLOWERS FOR THE DEAD
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done. A poem that involves several repeated lines. Taking one through life with flowers. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done. A poem that involves several repeated lines. Taking one through life with flowers. Very nice
October 10th, 2025 15:54
FLOWERS / FLORES
sorenbarrett said:
A love song that uses the beauty of flowers to emphasize the beauty of love in all its colors. Very nicely written in both English and Spanish loved both
October 9th, 2025 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
A love song that uses the beauty of flowers to emphasize the beauty of love in all its colors. Very nicely written in both English and Spanish loved both
October 9th, 2025 09:06
ART IN ROWS (Prosimetrum)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains waves of reoccurring verses that return again and again creating the feel of the sea shore and endlessness of the sea. Well done
October 8th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem contains waves of reoccurring verses that return again and again creating the feel of the sea shore and endlessness of the sea. Well done
October 8th, 2025 04:10
WHEN NIGHT ARRIVES
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the sense of futility expressed in this poem it seems to call in desperation and without hope. Dark indeed but very well written
October 5th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the sense of futility expressed in this poem it seems to call in desperation and without hope. Dark indeed but very well written
October 5th, 2025 05:07
SONG
sorenbarrett said:
Music does effect the mood and by that the thoughts. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Music does effect the mood and by that the thoughts. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 04:22
