Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
SOUL / ALMA
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem speaks to me of the un importance of the size of the soul. It may be small, but still large and it’s importance. Nicely set my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem speaks to me of the un importance of the size of the soul. It may be small, but still large and it’s importance. Nicely set my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:34
A DROP OF LIFE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard…there’s something quietly humbling in this. The way everything is reduced down to something so small, yet still part of something vast…it stays with you. It feels simple, but it carries weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard…there’s something quietly humbling in this. The way everything is reduced down to something so small, yet still part of something vast…it stays with you. It feels simple, but it carries weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:19
A DROP OF LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works so well for all forms of life to meld together with no real difference. So nicely done a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works so well for all forms of life to meld together with no real difference. So nicely done a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:52
A DROP OF LIFE
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I had someone at the bar told me 2+2=1 because it all comes from 1… your poem reminds me of that recent conversation. Great work
April 26th, 2026 04:37
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
I had someone at the bar told me 2+2=1 because it all comes from 1… your poem reminds me of that recent conversation. Great work
April 26th, 2026 04:37
The Little Kitten Catalina
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries such a soft, lasting love…the kind that doesn’t disappear, just changes form. From her presence to memory, to poetry…she’s still right there. A beautiful tribute, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries such a soft, lasting love…the kind that doesn’t disappear, just changes form. From her presence to memory, to poetry…she’s still right there. A beautiful tribute, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:03
The Little Kitten Catalina
sorenbarrett said:
People as if there is a dog heave, if cats go to a celestial realm. The Egyptians seemed to think so and if there is a heaven I believe any just God would all all in. After all he created them all.
April 25th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
People as if there is a dog heave, if cats go to a celestial realm. The Egyptians seemed to think so and if there is a heaven I believe any just God would all all in. After all he created them all.
April 25th, 2026 10:16
UNDEFINED
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Like \"love soothes the noise of life.\" Well done.
April 24th, 2026 14:51
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Like \"love soothes the noise of life.\" Well done.
April 24th, 2026 14:51
UNDEFINED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this moves like a meditation…light, breath, and feeling all weaving together without force. The bilingual flow adds to that sense of connection, like the same peace expressed in two voices. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this moves like a meditation…light, breath, and feeling all weaving together without force. The bilingual flow adds to that sense of connection, like the same peace expressed in two voices. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:38
THE GIFT OF THE WORD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a reverent, flowing stillness…like a meditation that keeps returning to the same sacred center. It feels full, almost overflowing with devotion. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a reverent, flowing stillness…like a meditation that keeps returning to the same sacred center. It feels full, almost overflowing with devotion. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 23rd, 2026 08:47
THE GIFT OF THE WORD
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a declaration of greatness and praising of God. Nicely written Carlos
April 23rd, 2026 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a declaration of greatness and praising of God. Nicely written Carlos
April 23rd, 2026 04:53
SEDUCTION
Paul Bell said:
These are the days you remember and everyday should be the same.
April 22nd, 2026 09:17
Paul Bell said:
These are the days you remember and everyday should be the same.
April 22nd, 2026 09:17
Sparks
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous write of love and brightness. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
This is a joyous write of love and brightness. Very nicely written
April 21st, 2026 11:41
Sparks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this lifts right away…there’s a brightness to it that feels intentional and steady. It reads like encouragement that actually believes what it’s saying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this lifts right away…there’s a brightness to it that feels intentional and steady. It reads like encouragement that actually believes what it’s saying. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 21st, 2026 09:16
FLASHES
sorenbarrett said:
Here the process of death and decomposition falls in poetic lines. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 15:08
sorenbarrett said:
Here the process of death and decomposition falls in poetic lines. Nicely written
April 19th, 2026 15:08
Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a journey from seeking to becoming…starting with small moments of rest and ending in something much bigger. There’s a calm persistence in how the light keeps appearing, even through darkness and chaos. It’s reflective, hopeful, and rooted in something deeper. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 15:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a journey from seeking to becoming…starting with small moments of rest and ending in something much bigger. There’s a calm persistence in how the light keeps appearing, even through darkness and chaos. It’s reflective, hopeful, and rooted in something deeper. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 18th, 2026 15:36
Light
sorenbarrett said:
\"In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.
The same was in the beginning with God.
All things were made by him; and without him was not any thing made that was made.
In him was life; and the life was the light of men.
And the light shineth in darkness; and the darkness comprehended it not\" John 1
A lovely recapping of the scripture. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
\"In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.
The same was in the beginning with God.
All things were made by him; and without him was not any thing made that was made.
In him was life; and the life was the light of men.
And the light shineth in darkness; and the darkness comprehended it not\" John 1
A lovely recapping of the scripture. Nicely done
April 18th, 2026 05:23
Resignation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, steady weight…not dramatic, just deeply reflective. It sits with the reality of it without trying to push it away, and that gives it real strength. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, steady weight…not dramatic, just deeply reflective. It sits with the reality of it without trying to push it away, and that gives it real strength. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:43
Resignation
sorenbarrett said:
Truth harsh but real and the recognition that we are not much to be remembered. Very powerful and most refreshing to hear. A fave
April 16th, 2026 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Truth harsh but real and the recognition that we are not much to be remembered. Very powerful and most refreshing to hear. A fave
April 16th, 2026 21:29
JEWELS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. But now about yourpoem...the way you tie jewels not just to appearance but to feeling…to moments and presence…that’s what stands out for me. It turns something material into something more personal and lived. Strong piece, my friend. Very strong and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. But now about yourpoem...the way you tie jewels not just to appearance but to feeling…to moments and presence…that’s what stands out for me. It turns something material into something more personal and lived. Strong piece, my friend. Very strong and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:53
JEWELS
sorenbarrett said:
Jewels come in many forms from mineral to special people to poems and each can be a jewel. Lovely Carlos
April 15th, 2026 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
Jewels come in many forms from mineral to special people to poems and each can be a jewel. Lovely Carlos
April 15th, 2026 18:58
JEWELS
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of jewels as representations of love and moments of happiness.
April 15th, 2026 18:31
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of jewels as representations of love and moments of happiness.
April 15th, 2026 18:31
BRILLANCE TARDIVE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries that stark, final clarity…a kind of brilliance arriving at the very end. It’s heavy, controlled, and unflinching, and it lingers in that quiet light. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 14th, 2026 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries that stark, final clarity…a kind of brilliance arriving at the very end. It’s heavy, controlled, and unflinching, and it lingers in that quiet light. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 14th, 2026 09:04
BRILLANCE TARDIVE
sorenbarrett said:
This is imaginative and in the technology of personification it becomes almost credible with today\'s AI nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
This is imaginative and in the technology of personification it becomes almost credible with today\'s AI nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:47
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