Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS



SEDUCTION
sorenbarrett said:

Seductive and sensual a poem of tender desire

April 6th, 2026 18:59

Flowers for Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, there’s a quiet, enduring sorrow here…returning again and again with flowers, holding love even in absence. That image of bringing flowers to someone who is both gone and still with you…that anchors everything. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 5th, 2026 10:39

Flowers for Love
Teddy.15 said:

Grief is something that stays always even beneath the stone of those who have left, a beautiful piece of poetry so very relatable to me. 🌹

April 5th, 2026 10:19

Flowers for Love
sorenbarrett said:

Mournful and melancholic this poem of a lost love speaks of clinging to memories and hopes for reunion. A sad poem a lacrimosa dedicated to one loved.

April 5th, 2026 05:32

Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, I’ve been there…missing what was right beside me while thinking it was absent. That kind of blindness isn’t loud, it’s quiet…and you captured that clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 3rd, 2026 08:12

Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Friendship said:

nicely done. Your poem explores the theme of unrecognized love and the blindness that often comes with being preoccupied with one\'s own life.

April 3rd, 2026 07:16

Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
sorenbarrett said:

Carlos this is such a lovely write that turns the tables and puts the responsibility right back where it belongs on our shoulders. Well written

April 3rd, 2026 07:13

REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady sense of light moving through darkness that never fades. It doesn’t deny the weight of life…it just keeps returning to that glow within it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

April 1st, 2026 17:27

REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
Lorenz said:

Jolie composition !

April 1st, 2026 12:51

REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
sorenbarrett said:

What a spiritual and lovely write that touches the soul and mind with possibilities and probabilities of hope and love in the infinite. Well written a fave

April 1st, 2026 08:34


GIVE US YOUR LIGHT, MY LORD / DONNE-NOUS TA LUMIÈRE, MON SEIGNEUR ( ♪ Operetta 5 ♪ )
sorenbarrett said:

This a poetic prayer set in prayer form. Nicely written

March 31st, 2026 09:40

WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, there’s a continuous flow here that really lands…moving from city to body to sea without breaking stride. The repetition of waves ties everything together into one living current of love and motion. It feels expansive and alive. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 30th, 2026 10:03

WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
sorenbarrett said:

This poem takes the waves of the sea and sets them to verse that comes wave after wave as a baptism of love. Each wave reassuring of another to follow. Nicely written

March 30th, 2026 06:06

WAVES / OLAS ♪ (Operetta 5)
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem revolves around love and its fluidity, using the metaphor of water to symbolize the ebb and flow of emotions, experiences, and relationships. The poem encapsulates the notion that love is essential, transformative, and omnipresent, much like waves in the sea that carry the essence of life.


March 30th, 2026 05:53

AILES DE L’ÂME 𝄞 Operetta
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, uplifting current running through it that just carries the reader along. It feels gentle but steady all the way through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 29th, 2026 09:43

AILES DE L’ÂME 𝄞 Operetta
Lorenz said:

Remaquable interprétation musical de l\'intelligence !

March 29th, 2026 06:48

AILES DE L’ÂME 𝄞 Operetta
sorenbarrett said:

Carlos I had to translate this poem to understand it and don\'t know how much was lost in the translation but it is beautiful none the less. A beautiful image in wings of the soul captured traditionally as angel wings I see it much more metaphorically. Very nicely written

March 29th, 2026 05:40

WINGS OF THE SOUL - Operetta ♬
orchidee said:

Good write C.

March 28th, 2026 11:49

WINGS OF THE SOUL - Operetta ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, this feels expansive…like something meant to be breathed in slowly. There’s a calm, almost guiding presence here that carries through each version, and that sense of inner rising never feels forced. It settles into something peaceful and assured. Beautifully done and the music you shared is beautiful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 28th, 2026 11:35

WINGS OF THE SOUL - Operetta ♬
Friendship said:

Well written

March 28th, 2026 07:30

WINGS OF THE SOUL - Operetta ♬
sorenbarrett said:

Spiritually romantic this poem speaks of freedom from a terrestrial world and carries the reader on a journey toward a final destination. Lovely write

March 28th, 2026 07:04

Sensual
sorenbarrett said:

This poem itself feels wild and free with its sensual drive energetically proposed from the beginning. Well written my friend

March 23rd, 2026 12:06

Sensual
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:

Takes a lot of work to translate… respect

March 23rd, 2026 10:00

Sensual
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Carlos, “that wild scent / of a creature galloping through the air” is the line that stands out for me. It gives the piece a raw, untamed energy that lifts it beyond just softness. That image really carries, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

March 23rd, 2026 09:34

Amour inconnu (Operetta)
sorenbarrett said:

So glad that you included an English version although I understand Spanish my French is pathetic. A sad write of loving the wrong person and exhausting oneself in a battle that is doomed. Well done

March 16th, 2026 16:25

Light
sorenbarrett said:

You are right living is a luxury that most take for granted and few appreciate. A lovely write

March 14th, 2026 04:03

Light
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

I love this message in the poem

March 14th, 2026 03:36

Light
Carmen Luca said:

I love the message, thanks for sharing.

March 14th, 2026 02:58

ONE MORE DAY
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that characterizes dreams so well from gentleness of dreams to the colors of bubbles that shift with light. It is the last two lines that make this poem for me. Sometimes dreams should remain dreams and why so we can believe in a Paradise that is like the rainbow on the bubble. A fave

March 13th, 2026 09:14

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