Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
FINAL ACT / ACTO FINAL
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of being and with metaphor of nature tells its story. Very nice images used
February 5th, 2026 19:28
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of being and with metaphor of nature tells its story. Very nice images used
February 5th, 2026 19:28
WATERS / AGUAS / 水たち
sorenbarrett said:
There must be a metaphoric meaning to ducks that I am missing for the tears show sadness so laughter does not go well with this. Possibly spiritual growth for with it there can be pain. A lovely write
January 30th, 2026 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
There must be a metaphoric meaning to ducks that I am missing for the tears show sadness so laughter does not go well with this. Possibly spiritual growth for with it there can be pain. A lovely write
January 30th, 2026 12:18
LETTERS / LETRAS
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic, this one utilizes wonderful images
January 29th, 2026 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Most poetic, this one utilizes wonderful images
January 29th, 2026 17:01
LETTERS / LETRAS
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores the transient nature of words and expressions, reflecting on the ephemeral quality of thoughts and emotions. It suggests a sense of loss and emptiness in the act of creation, where the poet grapples with the mortality of stories and the struggle to capture meaning.
January 29th, 2026 16:40
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your poem explores the transient nature of words and expressions, reflecting on the ephemeral quality of thoughts and emotions. It suggests a sense of loss and emptiness in the act of creation, where the poet grapples with the mortality of stories and the struggle to capture meaning.
January 29th, 2026 16:40
MY SPARROWS / MIS GORRIONES
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful symbol of joy and happiness in the birds. Literally a beautiful picture of nature, metaphorically how joy resides all around one if one will only see it. Lovely
January 28th, 2026 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful symbol of joy and happiness in the birds. Literally a beautiful picture of nature, metaphorically how joy resides all around one if one will only see it. Lovely
January 28th, 2026 10:35
MY SPARROWS / MIS GORRIONES
Friendship said:
Well written. Your revolves around the theme of joy and connection with nature. It highlights the simple pleasures derived from observing sparrows in one\'s garden, symbolizing freedom, happiness, and the beauty of everyday moments.
January 28th, 2026 08:03
Friendship said:
Well written. Your revolves around the theme of joy and connection with nature. It highlights the simple pleasures derived from observing sparrows in one\'s garden, symbolizing freedom, happiness, and the beauty of everyday moments.
January 28th, 2026 08:03
THE NEW PROMETHEUSES
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice in title so closely related to Mary Shelly\'s title. This poem is a patchwork and piecing so nicely worked a fave
January 24th, 2026 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice in title so closely related to Mary Shelly\'s title. This poem is a patchwork and piecing so nicely worked a fave
January 24th, 2026 12:26
SILENCES OF NOISE
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the gradual fading of life, expressed through the imagery of silence, noise, and air, suggesting a struggle against the passage of time and the ultimate acceptance of mortality. Well done, my friend
January 19th, 2026 09:57
Friendship said:
Your poem reflects on the gradual fading of life, expressed through the imagery of silence, noise, and air, suggesting a struggle against the passage of time and the ultimate acceptance of mortality. Well done, my friend
January 19th, 2026 09:57
SILENCES OF NOISE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is one of an accepted deterioration and loss. It is sad and there is a feeling of hopelessness that accompanies it. Well done my friend
January 19th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is one of an accepted deterioration and loss. It is sad and there is a feeling of hopelessness that accompanies it. Well done my friend
January 19th, 2026 09:01
SAD FLOWER / 悲しい花
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where one needs to sell oneself to hold onto dreams. A poem of metaphor with wilting flowers like wilting hope. A dying sense of hope. Nicely done Carlos
January 17th, 2026 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sad poem where one needs to sell oneself to hold onto dreams. A poem of metaphor with wilting flowers like wilting hope. A dying sense of hope. Nicely done Carlos
January 17th, 2026 11:39
DYING EACH DAY
sorenbarrett said:
We seldom think of the truth that we are in a continual process of death with each second one less that we have. This seems to be reflected in this poem of dying. Well written my friend.
January 16th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
We seldom think of the truth that we are in a continual process of death with each second one less that we have. This seems to be reflected in this poem of dying. Well written my friend.
January 16th, 2026 07:06
BEHIND CLOSED DOORS
sorenbarrett said:
We all sit behind doors sometimes open sometimes closed some open and some closed even from ourselves. a lovely write
January 10th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
We all sit behind doors sometimes open sometimes closed some open and some closed even from ourselves. a lovely write
January 10th, 2026 12:34
COLD FIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A warm soul is what characterizes us as living beings in a cold world. A lovely write Carlos
January 9th, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
A warm soul is what characterizes us as living beings in a cold world. A lovely write Carlos
January 9th, 2026 10:28
FAR FROM EVERYTHING
xTattooingPaperx said:
Ordinary life is quite mundane and can be vulgar at times too. This has a realistic spin to it as metaphors lead the way downward throughout stanzas into a place of love, dreams and poetry. If only there were a yellow brick road, I\'d hop to it. This really drew me to a place of nostalgia, and that is quite difficult for me.
January 5th, 2026 18:31
xTattooingPaperx said:
Ordinary life is quite mundane and can be vulgar at times too. This has a realistic spin to it as metaphors lead the way downward throughout stanzas into a place of love, dreams and poetry. If only there were a yellow brick road, I\'d hop to it. This really drew me to a place of nostalgia, and that is quite difficult for me.
January 5th, 2026 18:31
FAR FROM EVERYTHING
sorenbarrett said:
A separation of worlds in this poem. Nicely written about an idyllic world and that of reality. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 15:03
sorenbarrett said:
A separation of worlds in this poem. Nicely written about an idyllic world and that of reality. Nicely done
January 5th, 2026 15:03
NECTAR
sorenbarrett said:
Life goes home early from the dance with death often leaving new growth behind. A lovely poem Carlos
January 4th, 2026 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Life goes home early from the dance with death often leaving new growth behind. A lovely poem Carlos
January 4th, 2026 15:07
TIRED OF THE MOON
Lorenz said:
On Pluto lunatics are always safe ...But unwelcoming !
January 3rd, 2026 09:47
Lorenz said:
On Pluto lunatics are always safe ...But unwelcoming !
January 3rd, 2026 09:47
TIRED OF THE MOON
Friendship said:
The poet expresses a sense of fatigue from the isolation of being on the moon, symbolizing a detachment from reality and the chaos of life on Earth. It conveys a longing for a more grounded existence and highlights the struggle against overwhelming societal pressures.
January 3rd, 2026 09:31
Friendship said:
The poet expresses a sense of fatigue from the isolation of being on the moon, symbolizing a detachment from reality and the chaos of life on Earth. It conveys a longing for a more grounded existence and highlights the struggle against overwhelming societal pressures.
January 3rd, 2026 09:31
TIRED OF THE MOON
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with us poet lunatics that live in the space beyond the earth and its realities. Mad men rule the earth and lunatics above it. Where is one to rest their head? A lovely write.
January 3rd, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
And so it is with us poet lunatics that live in the space beyond the earth and its realities. Mad men rule the earth and lunatics above it. Where is one to rest their head? A lovely write.
January 3rd, 2026 08:29
SORDINA
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and cold this poem tells of a world wracked with war and destruction. Well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and cold this poem tells of a world wracked with war and destruction. Well done. Happy New Year
January 1st, 2026 11:43
CHRISTMAS SONG 𝄞
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and hope that the spirit remain not as a seasonal hypocrisy but as an incorporation of who we are at all times. A lovely write
December 28th, 2025 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful wish and hope that the spirit remain not as a seasonal hypocrisy but as an incorporation of who we are at all times. A lovely write
December 28th, 2025 06:58
Strength / Fortaleza
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
μ / μ（ミュー）
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
AMONG FEATHERS / ENTRE PLUMAS
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
BLUE TIME / TIEMPO AZUL
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
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