Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Strength / Fortaleza
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of freedom and bursting free of what constrains us. Nicely written
December 22nd, 2025 05:42
μ / μ（ミュー）
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of infinity and this poem puts things in perspective. Amazed at the fluency of both languages in words so complex. A wonderful view of our position in the universe and metaphorically of our importance in all things promoting humility in a season that call for such
December 21st, 2025 05:56
AMONG FEATHERS / ENTRE PLUMAS
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely written with a sense of faith. Well done
December 19th, 2025 16:18
BLUE TIME / TIEMPO AZUL
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of sadness as well as the color. Well done my friend
December 18th, 2025 10:02
One Day Closer
sorenbarrett said:
A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and all that has been in it and a readiness to move on. Very nice my friend
December 15th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
A backward count in this poem of thanks. Full of love, love for life and all that has been in it and a readiness to move on. Very nice my friend
December 15th, 2025 05:47
Matters of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic poem that goes right in for the kiss. It explores this topic until the end. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A romantic poem that goes right in for the kiss. It explores this topic until the end. Well done
December 13th, 2025 04:17
Caressing Breeze / BRISA ACARICIADORA
sorenbarrett said:
This porn feels light and area. It has a flow almost tropical to it very enjoyable.
December 10th, 2025 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This porn feels light and area. It has a flow almost tropical to it very enjoyable.
December 10th, 2025 14:32
Caressing Breeze / BRISA ACARICIADORA
Katie B. said:
Peaceful and tender. Just lovely!
December 10th, 2025 14:30
Katie B. said:
Peaceful and tender. Just lovely!
December 10th, 2025 14:30
CHRISTMAS SONG
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas poem of peace and good will and may it continue through the New Year and forever. Loved it Carlos
December 9th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful Christmas poem of peace and good will and may it continue through the New Year and forever. Loved it Carlos
December 9th, 2025 08:59
Tears of the Sea
sorenbarrett said:
Condemned by love seems the theme of this poem. A write of some darkness and weight. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 17:41
sorenbarrett said:
Condemned by love seems the theme of this poem. A write of some darkness and weight. Lovely
December 8th, 2025 17:41
Between Sheets
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so classic. Adonis, Zeus, Aphrodite all come to mind. A romantic and lustful write.
December 8th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so classic. Adonis, Zeus, Aphrodite all come to mind. A romantic and lustful write.
December 8th, 2025 08:15
LIGHT / LUZ
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem equating light and love. Nicely written in short lines that allow the flow to move on from one thought to the next. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem equating light and love. Nicely written in short lines that allow the flow to move on from one thought to the next. Well done
December 7th, 2025 04:05
LIGHTNINGS / Relámpagos
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather haunting poem with deep feeling from awakened memories. it seems to arise out of the shadows of slumber now turned an emotional flame. Very nicely written my friend
December 5th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather haunting poem with deep feeling from awakened memories. it seems to arise out of the shadows of slumber now turned an emotional flame. Very nicely written my friend
December 5th, 2025 04:31
Kisses
sorenbarrett said:
Here kisses take precedence and flow over the body like water in a shower. Lovely
December 2nd, 2025 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
Here kisses take precedence and flow over the body like water in a shower. Lovely
December 2nd, 2025 20:03
Kisses
Katie B. said:
Lovely, wonderful. Very pleasant enjoyable read. Well written.
December 2nd, 2025 18:41
Katie B. said:
Lovely, wonderful. Very pleasant enjoyable read. Well written.
December 2nd, 2025 18:41
BEAUTY / BELLEZA / 美しさ（びしさ）
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of memories those pastels of the past and paint the present in brilliant colors. A wonderful poem my friend. I was caught by the difference in format between the languages that leaves the Spanish in shorter lines. There is a different feel from this somehow.
December 2nd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of memories those pastels of the past and paint the present in brilliant colors. A wonderful poem my friend. I was caught by the difference in format between the languages that leaves the Spanish in shorter lines. There is a different feel from this somehow.
December 2nd, 2025 06:44
Sparrow that flies /Gorrión que vuela
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very well done, my friend! Joy is endless for those who have it, despite surroundings or circumstances.This poem expresses freedom and joy found even in places that feel claustrophobic, anxious, and fast-paced. Loved this a lot! I also love birds...so a double fave for me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very well done, my friend! Joy is endless for those who have it, despite surroundings or circumstances.This poem expresses freedom and joy found even in places that feel claustrophobic, anxious, and fast-paced. Loved this a lot! I also love birds...so a double fave for me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 1st, 2025 18:04
Sparrow that flies /Gorrión que vuela
sorenbarrett said:
Although this can be taken literally, I believe it is a metaphor. A metaphor for those people who can live amongst others even in crowded or dirty situations and still express joy. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2025 11:17
sorenbarrett said:
Although this can be taken literally, I believe it is a metaphor. A metaphor for those people who can live amongst others even in crowded or dirty situations and still express joy. Very nicely written.
December 1st, 2025 11:17
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sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of hiding from pain and putting on a mask and living in a disintegrating house. Difficult times well expressed
November 30th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of hiding from pain and putting on a mask and living in a disintegrating house. Difficult times well expressed
November 30th, 2025 07:03
ROT AND DECAY / PODREDUMBRE /腐敗
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos a touching poem of loss and the passage of time that brings decay to all. Sad and painful
November 29th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos a touching poem of loss and the passage of time that brings decay to all. Sad and painful
November 29th, 2025 07:58
ABRAZADO
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem nicely expressed. Romantic and sensual
November 28th, 2025 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem nicely expressed. Romantic and sensual
November 28th, 2025 13:50
RESPLANDECE R
sorenbarrett said:
Do not be ashamed of who you are seems to be the point of this poem. Nicely written
November 28th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Do not be ashamed of who you are seems to be the point of this poem. Nicely written
November 28th, 2025 09:55
ORGASM O
Paul Bell said:
I need the address of this garden.
Just for studying so to speak, get an in depth feel for the place.
November 26th, 2025 09:38
Paul Bell said:
I need the address of this garden.
Just for studying so to speak, get an in depth feel for the place.
November 26th, 2025 09:38
ORGASM O
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite sensual, erotic, sexual and animalistic. Well done loved it
November 26th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is quite sensual, erotic, sexual and animalistic. Well done loved it
November 26th, 2025 09:17
SIGNALS / Señales
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is a great poem describing that feeling of sliding away that is out of our control. Very nicely worded it encompasses the feeling of many. Well done
November 25th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is a great poem describing that feeling of sliding away that is out of our control. Very nicely worded it encompasses the feeling of many. Well done
November 25th, 2025 08:50
MUNDOS SECRETOS / SECRET WORDS
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful poem Poetic secrets in words that fade with time. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
Another beautiful poem Poetic secrets in words that fade with time. Nicely written
November 24th, 2025 17:49
WHISPERS / SUSURROS
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet and tender love poem, whether in English of Spanish it remains the same in feeling. Well done
November 24th, 2025 15:41
sorenbarrett said:
A sweet and tender love poem, whether in English of Spanish it remains the same in feeling. Well done
November 24th, 2025 15:41
FLOATING / FLOTAR
sorenbarrett said:
A charming poem of the beach and it\'s lazy joyfulness. Loved its warmth
November 23rd, 2025 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
A charming poem of the beach and it\'s lazy joyfulness. Loved its warmth
November 23rd, 2025 07:10
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