Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
ADDED TIME
mylastwrites said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
May 31st, 2026 16:43
mylastwrites said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
May 31st, 2026 16:43
ADDED TIME
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59
ONLY SOMEONE ELSE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such quiet honesty in the way this unfolds...that feeling of standing at the edge of life, convinced everyone else has the map while you\'re left observing from afar. What I love most is that it doesn\'t stay trapped there. It grows into something gentler...something accepting. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such quiet honesty in the way this unfolds...that feeling of standing at the edge of life, convinced everyone else has the map while you\'re left observing from afar. What I love most is that it doesn\'t stay trapped there. It grows into something gentler...something accepting. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:34
ONLY SOMEONE ELSE
rhmn_7 said:
Your first poem resonates with first half of my life, nice collection dear poet!
May 31st, 2026 02:11
rhmn_7 said:
Your first poem resonates with first half of my life, nice collection dear poet!
May 31st, 2026 02:11
ONLY SOMEONE ELSE
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a most introspective and understanding poem of social nature. Well done
May 30th, 2026 17:26
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely a most introspective and understanding poem of social nature. Well done
May 30th, 2026 17:26
WITHOUT SUITCASES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a declaration of independence...not from the world itself, but from burdens that no longer belong to you. The recurring images of doors, windows, ballast, and suitcases create a powerful sense of release. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a declaration of independence...not from the world itself, but from burdens that no longer belong to you. The recurring images of doors, windows, ballast, and suitcases create a powerful sense of release. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:18
WITHOUT SUITCASES
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of carpe diem of take care of oneself a poem of freeing oneself from the burdens of the world. Well written Carlos
May 29th, 2026 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of carpe diem of take care of oneself a poem of freeing oneself from the burdens of the world. Well written Carlos
May 29th, 2026 13:01
PATH / CAMINO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow…this is one powerful piece, my friend. The poem moves like wandering itself...reminiscent of the Camino de Santiago…physical, emotional, spiritual, digital…crossing roads, networks, noise, fatigue, and inner silence all at once. I especially love how the Camino feeling hangs beneath everything without the poem ever needing to romanticize the journey. It feels raw, restless, and deeply human…people trying to make meaning while stumbling forward under the weight of life itself. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow…this is one powerful piece, my friend. The poem moves like wandering itself...reminiscent of the Camino de Santiago…physical, emotional, spiritual, digital…crossing roads, networks, noise, fatigue, and inner silence all at once. I especially love how the Camino feeling hangs beneath everything without the poem ever needing to romanticize the journey. It feels raw, restless, and deeply human…people trying to make meaning while stumbling forward under the weight of life itself. Wonderful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 16:12
AUREAL BEAUTY / MOMENTO AUREO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one beautiful poem, my friend. The way beauty and impermanence intertwine here feels timeless…like memory trying to hold flesh still before time can touch it. There’s something deeply tender in the atmosphere of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one beautiful poem, my friend. The way beauty and impermanence intertwine here feels timeless…like memory trying to hold flesh still before time can touch it. There’s something deeply tender in the atmosphere of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:56
PATH / CAMINO
sorenbarrett said:
This poem metaphoric in regard to our path. It speaks of life in general and how we choose to follow it. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem metaphoric in regard to our path. It speaks of life in general and how we choose to follow it. Nicely written
May 25th, 2026 10:11
AUREAL BEAUTY / MOMENTO AUREO
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful are whether words or marble is the same it touches the soul of the viewer. Nicely done
May 24th, 2026 15:27
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful are whether words or marble is the same it touches the soul of the viewer. Nicely done
May 24th, 2026 15:27
IN THE CLOUDS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to that feeling of living partly inside yourself...moving through the world while also remaining distant from it somehow. The miniature world and fishbowl imagery especially hit me hard. There’s loneliness here, but also honesty and self-awareness. Really moving work, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to that feeling of living partly inside yourself...moving through the world while also remaining distant from it somehow. The miniature world and fishbowl imagery especially hit me hard. There’s loneliness here, but also honesty and self-awareness. Really moving work, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:10
IN THE CLOUDS
arqios said:
Thanks for also putting up the Spanish text. There is something that translation cannot supply and reading it in another language brings out nuances that otherwise gets lost. Most thoroughly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:27
arqios said:
Thanks for also putting up the Spanish text. There is something that translation cannot supply and reading it in another language brings out nuances that otherwise gets lost. Most thoroughly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:27
IN THE CLOUDS
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative lines \"Clouds of flesh\" what a great line. Well written my friend
May 22nd, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative lines \"Clouds of flesh\" what a great line. Well written my friend
May 22nd, 2026 06:03
FLORID SKIN / PIEL FLORIDA
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lush and intimate poem this is. The layering of moonlight, skin, feathers, lips, and memory creates this soft emotional atmosphere where love feels both physical and spiritual at once. I especially love how the poem keeps returning to remembrance...as though touch itself becomes a form of dreaming. The bilingual presentation also adds beautifully to the rhythm and musicality of the piece. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lush and intimate poem this is. The layering of moonlight, skin, feathers, lips, and memory creates this soft emotional atmosphere where love feels both physical and spiritual at once. I especially love how the poem keeps returning to remembrance...as though touch itself becomes a form of dreaming. The bilingual presentation also adds beautifully to the rhythm and musicality of the piece. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:37
FLORID SKIN / PIEL FLORIDA
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories and I love the tree configuration of the Spanish poem. Well done
May 20th, 2026 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories and I love the tree configuration of the Spanish poem. Well done
May 20th, 2026 16:22
WEARINESS
Lorenz said:
This feels like a never-ending day that yearns for some \'\' After-void\" !
May 16th, 2026 14:27
Lorenz said:
This feels like a never-ending day that yearns for some \'\' After-void\" !
May 16th, 2026 14:27
WEARINESS
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem feels confining and depressing. Well done
May 16th, 2026 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem feels confining and depressing. Well done
May 16th, 2026 12:23
WEARINESS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels crushingly claustrophobic in both content and form. The centered structure makes the poem read like a slow collapse inward, which fits the exhaustion and despair running through it perfectly. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels crushingly claustrophobic in both content and form. The centered structure makes the poem read like a slow collapse inward, which fits the exhaustion and despair running through it perfectly. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:25
NAKED / DESNUDOS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, almost tidal sensuality to it. Bodies, skin, floating, night, flowers, forgotten memories…everything moves in waves between pleasure and transience, intimacy and disappearance. Beautifully atmospheric piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, almost tidal sensuality to it. Bodies, skin, floating, night, flowers, forgotten memories…everything moves in waves between pleasure and transience, intimacy and disappearance. Beautifully atmospheric piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:13
NAKED / DESNUDOS
Lorenz said:
un clip et un texte d\'une sensualité troublante et un peu dérangeante !
May 15th, 2026 13:52
Lorenz said:
un clip et un texte d\'une sensualité troublante et un peu dérangeante !
May 15th, 2026 13:52
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