Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Fire smoke / Humo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful poem, my friend. The imagery is stark from beginning to end, especially that shadowed world beneath a red sun. It carries the weight of grief without losing sight of hope, and that closing call to restore what has been devastated feels deeply needed. Excellent write, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 15:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful poem, my friend. The imagery is stark from beginning to end, especially that shadowed world beneath a red sun. It carries the weight of grief without losing sight of hope, and that closing call to restore what has been devastated feels deeply needed. Excellent write, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 3rd, 2026 15:09
Dance Without Stopping.
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
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August 3rd, 2026 10:52
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
Fire smoke / Humo
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Carlos and although metaphoric it has special meaning to many in Europe and the Western United States that are suffering from fires out of control. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Carlos and although metaphoric it has special meaning to many in Europe and the Western United States that are suffering from fires out of control. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2026 06:55
THROUGH YOUR BODY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is rich with sensual imagery and admiration. It reads like an intimate journey of discovery, where desire and wonder move hand in hand. Passionate write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is rich with sensual imagery and admiration. It reads like an intimate journey of discovery, where desire and wonder move hand in hand. Passionate write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 1st, 2026 20:46
THROUGH YOUR BODY
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sensual, sexual it evokes feelings of passion. Well written
August 1st, 2026 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Erotic, sensual, sexual it evokes feelings of passion. Well written
August 1st, 2026 07:12
ON EARTH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the frustrating divide between recognizing that depression will eventually loosen its grip and finding absolutely no comfort in that knowledge while living through it. You capture that experience with tremendous honesty, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I know the frustrating divide between recognizing that depression will eventually loosen its grip and finding absolutely no comfort in that knowledge while living through it. You capture that experience with tremendous honesty, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 31st, 2026 08:26
ON EARTH
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a marvelous message Carlos. The format alone in its design must have been difficult so as to maintain the meter and flow. Very nice
July 31st, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a marvelous message Carlos. The format alone in its design must have been difficult so as to maintain the meter and flow. Very nice
July 31st, 2026 06:27
HEAT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a wonderfully sensual poem! I love how the scientific premise becomes an elemental law of intimacy...reciprocal, transformative, and impossible to contain. Nothing meaningful passes between two people without changing them both. Beautifully conceived, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a wonderfully sensual poem! I love how the scientific premise becomes an elemental law of intimacy...reciprocal, transformative, and impossible to contain. Nothing meaningful passes between two people without changing them both. Beautifully conceived, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:06
CINEMA
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me most is how thoroughly the boundaries collapse here. Public and private, performance and reality, ambition and exploitation all become indistinguishable. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What struck me most is how thoroughly the boundaries collapse here. Public and private, performance and reality, ambition and exploitation all become indistinguishable. Brilliantly constructed, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 09:50
HEAT
sorenbarrett said:
A vibrant and radiating write Carlos of passion heated and love burning. It portrays emotion as energy, waves vibrating and is both poetic as well as scientific. The best of both worlds and science at its heart is poetry. A lovely write and a fave
July 30th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
A vibrant and radiating write Carlos of passion heated and love burning. It portrays emotion as energy, waves vibrating and is both poetic as well as scientific. The best of both worlds and science at its heart is poetry. A lovely write and a fave
July 30th, 2026 04:13
CINEMA
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Carlos there is a lot of inuendo in this poem of life likened to a movie. It is full of passion and sex reminiscent of a casting couch. The issue of how we sell ourselves to our own instincts and that of others. It is raw but sanded smooth, Well done my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! Carlos there is a lot of inuendo in this poem of life likened to a movie. It is full of passion and sex reminiscent of a casting couch. The issue of how we sell ourselves to our own instincts and that of others. It is raw but sanded smooth, Well done my friend
July 29th, 2026 11:49
CRACKPOTS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one heck of a celebration! The speaker’s exuberance is wonderfully contagious...unapologetic, unruly, and completely committed to experiencing everything intensely. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one heck of a celebration! The speaker’s exuberance is wonderfully contagious...unapologetic, unruly, and completely committed to experiencing everything intensely. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:55
POLILLAS Y MARIPOSAS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such tenderness in the way you honor lives that may be overlooked, yet remain beautiful in their own right. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such tenderness in the way you honor lives that may be overlooked, yet remain beautiful in their own right. Wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:42
CRACKPOTS
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of being who one is and not submitting to conformity. Nicely crafted it sits well with any who wish to be themselves. Lovely
July 28th, 2026 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of being who one is and not submitting to conformity. Nicely crafted it sits well with any who wish to be themselves. Lovely
July 28th, 2026 05:09
POLILLAS Y MARIPOSAS
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are a great comparison Carlos. Well written
July 27th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are a great comparison Carlos. Well written
July 27th, 2026 14:43
Dance Without Stopping.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lovely and uplifting piece! The dreamlike atmosphere creates a place beyond weariness and sadness…where two people are completely free to share joy and love. Beautiful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lovely and uplifting piece! The dreamlike atmosphere creates a place beyond weariness and sadness…where two people are completely free to share joy and love. Beautiful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 19:20
Dance Without Stopping.
sorenbarrett said:
I love how you use dance as a major part of this poem. In our society we have lost the meaning of dance where there are specific moves and steps to follow where it is choreographed. Dance real dance is from inside the self where the body takes over and movement becomes emotion. Love a most powerful emotion drives the dance. Nicely written Carlos
July 26th, 2026 14:40
sorenbarrett said:
I love how you use dance as a major part of this poem. In our society we have lost the meaning of dance where there are specific moves and steps to follow where it is choreographed. Dance real dance is from inside the self where the body takes over and movement becomes emotion. Love a most powerful emotion drives the dance. Nicely written Carlos
July 26th, 2026 14:40
Mágico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful and hopeful vision. The softness of the floral imagery carries us toward something much larger...a world transformed by compassion, abundance, and shared joy. Imagination becomes sacred here, allowing us to glimpse what could yet become real. Loved this, my friend. 🌸✨🖤🙏
July 26th, 2026 07:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful and hopeful vision. The softness of the floral imagery carries us toward something much larger...a world transformed by compassion, abundance, and shared joy. Imagination becomes sacred here, allowing us to glimpse what could yet become real. Loved this, my friend. 🌸✨🖤🙏
July 26th, 2026 07:05
SUMMER / VERANO
sorenbarrett said:
For some reason the fable of that grasshopper and ants came to mind. But this poem has a pastoral feel to it one of warmth and basking in the sun, one of plenty and a cornucopia of fruits and vegetables of the season where carpe diem comes to mind and no worries are present. A lovely write.
July 26th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
For some reason the fable of that grasshopper and ants came to mind. But this poem has a pastoral feel to it one of warmth and basking in the sun, one of plenty and a cornucopia of fruits and vegetables of the season where carpe diem comes to mind and no worries are present. A lovely write.
July 26th, 2026 04:02
Mágico
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the land of dreams and fantasy that we all create in our minds. Well written my friend
July 25th, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the land of dreams and fantasy that we all create in our minds. Well written my friend
July 25th, 2026 10:50
SUMLIT / SOLEADO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautifully uplifting poem! This carries a determined hope that refuses to surrender, even when life becomes painfully difficult. I needed this reminder today, my friend. Wonderful work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautifully uplifting poem! This carries a determined hope that refuses to surrender, even when life becomes painfully difficult. I needed this reminder today, my friend. Wonderful work! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:31
SUMLIT / SOLEADO
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of encouragement to look for the silver lining and find brightness in the day. Very nice Carlos
July 24th, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of encouragement to look for the silver lining and find brightness in the day. Very nice Carlos
July 24th, 2026 04:21
SPIES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos! This is one heck of a poem. You expose a world where privacy has been surrendered so gradually that people barely recognize their confinement...watched, categorized, and manipulated while still believing themselves free. A disturbing and increasingly relevant truth, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos! This is one heck of a poem. You expose a world where privacy has been surrendered so gradually that people barely recognize their confinement...watched, categorized, and manipulated while still believing themselves free. A disturbing and increasingly relevant truth, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 23rd, 2026 08:29
SPIES
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
data is everything in this modern world
July 23rd, 2026 05:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
data is everything in this modern world
July 23rd, 2026 05:02
SPIES
Lorenz said:
they\'re everywhere -even inside me -but is that really me ?
July 23rd, 2026 04:56
Lorenz said:
they\'re everywhere -even inside me -but is that really me ?
July 23rd, 2026 04:56
SPIES
sorenbarrett said:
Call it paranoia, conspiracy theory, but truth it is all phone calls are recorded, saved and stored. All are monitored by computer for red flag words which get a live monitor. It is not only those calls that advise you that they are being recorded that are. We have been watched for many years already. Now they speak of data centers for much more data and its storage. A good write my friend
July 23rd, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Call it paranoia, conspiracy theory, but truth it is all phone calls are recorded, saved and stored. All are monitored by computer for red flag words which get a live monitor. It is not only those calls that advise you that they are being recorded that are. We have been watched for many years already. Now they speak of data centers for much more data and its storage. A good write my friend
July 23rd, 2026 04:08
INFLAMMABLE
sorenbarrett said:
The bird itself a symbol of freedom is released to fly. Nicely written it calls out for liberation of self and all things. Nicely written Carlos
July 22nd, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
The bird itself a symbol of freedom is released to fly. Nicely written it calls out for liberation of self and all things. Nicely written Carlos
July 22nd, 2026 04:34
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