Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
PSYCHEDELIC
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a calming almost relaxation poem of guided imagery almost hypnotic. Well done Carlos
August 30th, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a calming almost relaxation poem of guided imagery almost hypnotic. Well done Carlos
August 30th, 2026 08:35
Relax
Jamiano said:
\"Enhancing rest.\" Delightful imagery.
A few words which effortlessly travel far.
August 27th, 2026 20:54
Jamiano said:
\"Enhancing rest.\" Delightful imagery.
A few words which effortlessly travel far.
August 27th, 2026 20:54
ALL LOVE / Todo amor
Jamiano said:
The discovery of love is revealed by the sharing, the giving and the receiving. Thank you for this monumental reflection of love:
\"I am all love.\"
August 27th, 2026 20:42
Jamiano said:
The discovery of love is revealed by the sharing, the giving and the receiving. Thank you for this monumental reflection of love:
\"I am all love.\"
August 27th, 2026 20:42
Friends / Amigos
Jamiano said:
I used to live with a house bordered by the deep forest. There was a lone deer who traveled, being a long distance from the deer herd. We often hear of the lone wolf. A lone deer is seldom mentioned.
August 27th, 2026 20:32
Jamiano said:
I used to live with a house bordered by the deep forest. There was a lone deer who traveled, being a long distance from the deer herd. We often hear of the lone wolf. A lone deer is seldom mentioned.
August 27th, 2026 20:32
STARSTRUCK / ESTRELLADO
Jamiano said:
\"Trusting in the beyond.\" Wholesome thought.
August 27th, 2026 04:38
Jamiano said:
\"Trusting in the beyond.\" Wholesome thought.
August 27th, 2026 04:38
STARSTRUCK / ESTRELLADO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautifully hopeful. The cosmic imagery transforms human fragility into belonging within something immeasurably larger...even amid chaos, the speaker refuses to surrender wonder. This spoke deeply to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautifully hopeful. The cosmic imagery transforms human fragility into belonging within something immeasurably larger...even amid chaos, the speaker refuses to surrender wonder. This spoke deeply to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2026 18:54
STARSTRUCK / ESTRELLADO
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful cosmic view in this write. Well done Carlos.
August 25th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful cosmic view in this write. Well done Carlos.
August 25th, 2026 04:38
NOCTURNAL HUNTER 🧛♂️
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is dark, sensual, and wonderfully dangerous. Desire becomes predation until attraction and terror are feeding from the same pulse. One hell of a gothic piece, my friend. You know this is a fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is dark, sensual, and wonderfully dangerous. Desire becomes predation until attraction and terror are feeding from the same pulse. One hell of a gothic piece, my friend. You know this is a fave from me! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2026 08:17
NOCTURNAL HUNTER 🧛♂️
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphorically alluring, allegorically seductive a baited hook for an unsuspecting catch. Well worded my friend
August 24th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphorically alluring, allegorically seductive a baited hook for an unsuspecting catch. Well worded my friend
August 24th, 2026 06:53
SLUT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. The rage, exhaustion, and humiliation of being reduced to an expendable commodity come through without restraint. A brutal and powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. The rage, exhaustion, and humiliation of being reduced to an expendable commodity come through without restraint. A brutal and powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:58
SLUT
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and identifiable I long ago came to the view that we all are whores. I a psychologist paid by people to listen to their problems to sell my compassion, to prostitute my ear. For pay to listen to the depraved, the insane, the damaged refuse of society. To pretend interest to the boring and feign climax at people\'s revelations of self discovery. We are all slaves to our professions selling our souls for crumbs to feed our hunger.
August 23rd, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and identifiable I long ago came to the view that we all are whores. I a psychologist paid by people to listen to their problems to sell my compassion, to prostitute my ear. For pay to listen to the depraved, the insane, the damaged refuse of society. To pretend interest to the boring and feign climax at people\'s revelations of self discovery. We are all slaves to our professions selling our souls for crumbs to feed our hunger.
August 23rd, 2026 06:20
Friends / Amigos
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting exploration of isolation, Carlos! The closed door protects the speaker from rejection, but it also prevents the companionship he quietly mourns. Your werewolf imagery captures that tension beautifully...the desire to remain safely unknown while still howling to be heard. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting exploration of isolation, Carlos! The closed door protects the speaker from rejection, but it also prevents the companionship he quietly mourns. Your werewolf imagery captures that tension beautifully...the desire to remain safely unknown while still howling to be heard. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:44
Friends / Amigos
sorenbarrett said:
Being a werewolf carries with it many meanings. Nicely written Carlos
August 21st, 2026 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Being a werewolf carries with it many meanings. Nicely written Carlos
August 21st, 2026 10:46
FEAST / FESTÍN.
sorenbarrett said:
Birds do bring a song and happiness lightening the day. A lovely write nicely composed it leave a lighter feeling and one of serving a purpose of charity feeding the birds. Well done Carlos
August 21st, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Birds do bring a song and happiness lightening the day. A lovely write nicely composed it leave a lighter feeling and one of serving a purpose of charity feeding the birds. Well done Carlos
August 21st, 2026 06:06
DIVINE BEAUTY
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely meditation, Carlos. Creation becomes almost sacramental here, making divine grace visible through the smallest wonders as well as the vastness surrounding us. The sparrows are a perfect dedication. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely meditation, Carlos. Creation becomes almost sacramental here, making divine grace visible through the smallest wonders as well as the vastness surrounding us. The sparrows are a perfect dedication. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 20th, 2026 20:50
DIVINE BEAUTY
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful Carlos and I would agree not a religious man I do believe in nature and its creative and mysterious power. A fave my friend
August 20th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful Carlos and I would agree not a religious man I do believe in nature and its creative and mysterious power. A fave my friend
August 20th, 2026 07:43
You, and you
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of encouragement a write to tell the readers that they need to be who they are. Well written Carlos
August 20th, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of encouragement a write to tell the readers that they need to be who they are. Well written Carlos
August 20th, 2026 05:32
TAPPING / GOLPETEO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, my friend. The deteriorating home becomes inseparable from the person within it…both exhausted, isolated, and surrendering beneath accumulated damage. This darkness feels lived rather than imagined. Powerful write. 🌹🖤
August 19th, 2026 18:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a haunting piece, my friend. The deteriorating home becomes inseparable from the person within it…both exhausted, isolated, and surrendering beneath accumulated damage. This darkness feels lived rather than imagined. Powerful write. 🌹🖤
August 19th, 2026 18:14
TAPPING / GOLPETEO
sorenbarrett said:
By the first line it seemed a political statement but no it is far broader in its meaning. Deterioration seems the theme. A sad poem of internal corruption. Well done my friend
August 19th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
By the first line it seemed a political statement but no it is far broader in its meaning. Deterioration seems the theme. A sad poem of internal corruption. Well done my friend
August 19th, 2026 06:12
IN THE PIT / EN EL FOSO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this turns the passage of time into both spectacle and imprisonment. Everything beyond the speaker continues moving, changing, and returning, while the inner confinement remains untouched...a bleak, hypnotic, and powerfully existential piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this turns the passage of time into both spectacle and imprisonment. Everything beyond the speaker continues moving, changing, and returning, while the inner confinement remains untouched...a bleak, hypnotic, and powerfully existential piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2026 21:45
IN THE PIT / EN EL FOSO
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hopelessness in this poem a hole one can not crawl out of. Nicely written Carlos
August 18th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of hopelessness in this poem a hole one can not crawl out of. Nicely written Carlos
August 18th, 2026 14:19
EVIL / EL MAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a dark and uncompromising vision. Political violence, spiritual decay, and prophetic imagery merge into a world that has surrendered conscience itself. The final numbness is devastating. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a dark and uncompromising vision. Political violence, spiritual decay, and prophetic imagery merge into a world that has surrendered conscience itself. The final numbness is devastating. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2026 18:57
EVIL / EL MAL
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like a good prophesy of doom to get attention and maintain it. This write fulfills that requirement well. Nicely written with great imagery. Nicely done Carlos.
August 17th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like a good prophesy of doom to get attention and maintain it. This write fulfills that requirement well. Nicely written with great imagery. Nicely done Carlos.
August 17th, 2026 04:43
FIRE SHIP / NAVIO DE FUEGO
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of destruction. I have often wondered what will happen when an electrical storm, sun spot or some other phenomena takes down the electrical component of society. What chaos will ensue. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of destruction. I have often wondered what will happen when an electrical storm, sun spot or some other phenomena takes down the electrical component of society. What chaos will ensue. Nicely written
August 16th, 2026 07:40
FIRE SHIP / NAVIO DE FUEGO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos...this is intense, inventive, and loaded with momentum. I really like how you fuse the historical fire-ship with digital overload and turn the whole thing into a metaphor for pressure reaching ignition point. And the note at the end gives the image even more depth. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos...this is intense, inventive, and loaded with momentum. I really like how you fuse the historical fire-ship with digital overload and turn the whole thing into a metaphor for pressure reaching ignition point. And the note at the end gives the image even more depth. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2026 06:36
THE LEAP
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos...this is intense and deeply unsettling. The whole piece feels suspended between collapse and awakening, as if the mind is trying to orient itself while everything around it keeps shifting. That tension between lucidity and madness really landed with me. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 15th, 2026 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos...this is intense and deeply unsettling. The whole piece feels suspended between collapse and awakening, as if the mind is trying to orient itself while everything around it keeps shifting. That tension between lucidity and madness really landed with me. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 15th, 2026 07:52
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