Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
ABANDONMENT / ABANDONO
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed the description of another world maybe mental where there is such a thing as freedom. Well written
June 27th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
This is indeed the description of another world maybe mental where there is such a thing as freedom. Well written
June 27th, 2026 05:06
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
Lorenz said:
Do we understand the language of mirrors ? They also lie out of compassion...
June 26th, 2026 13:02
Lorenz said:
Do we understand the language of mirrors ? They also lie out of compassion...
June 26th, 2026 13:02
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonated with me. Learning to see ourselves with grace instead of criticism is a journey, and your poem captures that quiet transformation so well. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This resonated with me. Learning to see ourselves with grace instead of criticism is a journey, and your poem captures that quiet transformation so well. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:34
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about embracing the person we become.
June 26th, 2026 07:55
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful poem about embracing the person we become.
June 26th, 2026 07:55
THAT MIRROR / ESE ESPEJO
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections both in thoughts and image a poem that sees beauty in oneself, who one is and what one has become. Continued returns to this concept throughout the poem reinforces its meaning. Nicely written.
June 26th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections both in thoughts and image a poem that sees beauty in oneself, who one is and what one has become. Continued returns to this concept throughout the poem reinforces its meaning. Nicely written.
June 26th, 2026 07:44
VITAMINS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one uplifting ride, my friend. The poem radiates encouragement from beginning to end...almost like a pep talk set to music. The energy is contagious and unwavering. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one uplifting ride, my friend. The poem radiates encouragement from beginning to end...almost like a pep talk set to music. The energy is contagious and unwavering. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:33
VITAMINS
sorenbarrett said:
Joy and happiness emotional signs of health grow off positive thinking just as a vitamin for the soul. A lovely write Carlos
June 24th, 2026 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Joy and happiness emotional signs of health grow off positive thinking just as a vitamin for the soul. A lovely write Carlos
June 24th, 2026 06:50
FRAGILE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, the crystal imagery really stayed with me. Something transparent and beautiful, yet capable of fracturing under pressure. That image echoes throughout the poem and gives it such a haunting quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, the crystal imagery really stayed with me. Something transparent and beautiful, yet capable of fracturing under pressure. That image echoes throughout the poem and gives it such a haunting quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:32
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminds me of people who have touched my life and are no longer physically present, yet somehow remain part of it all the same. The impact of genuine kindness has a way of lingering. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminds me of people who have touched my life and are no longer physically present, yet somehow remain part of it all the same. The impact of genuine kindness has a way of lingering. This spoke to me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:05
FRAGILE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. There is such a deep weariness running through it, yet it never feels theatrical. It feels like someone holding up their inner world and refusing to hide the cracks. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 21:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard. There is such a deep weariness running through it, yet it never feels theatrical. It feels like someone holding up their inner world and refusing to hide the cracks. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 21:54
FRAGILE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor speaks of fragility and transparency in a modern world and the end to a life. Well said
June 23rd, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in metaphor speaks of fragility and transparency in a modern world and the end to a life. Well said
June 23rd, 2026 04:39
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that transcends time and space. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that transcends time and space. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 16:07
I Am by Your Side / Estoy a tu lado
ms.divine said:
So touching I needed that 🫂🤗 nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 13:31
ms.divine said:
So touching I needed that 🫂🤗 nicely written
June 22nd, 2026 13:31
Sighs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow...this feels like pure celebration. There is so much warmth and joy flowing through it that I couldn\'t help but smile as I read. It feels completely immersed in wonder and affection from beginning to end. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, wow...this feels like pure celebration. There is so much warmth and joy flowing through it that I couldn\'t help but smile as I read. It feels completely immersed in wonder and affection from beginning to end. Beautiful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 22nd, 2026 10:04
Sighs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
ANIMAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:34
ANIMAL
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
BUBBLES OF HAPPINESS
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
The Luxury of Living
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
The Luxury of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:52
The Luxury of Living
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
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