Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Frio sueño
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
Frio sueño
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
Only love / Solo amor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Only love / Solo amor
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
Only love / Solo amor
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:26
LUXURY WAVES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. 😌 I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. 😌 I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:03
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
LUXURY WAVES
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
MAGICAL / Mágico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:26
MAGICAL / Mágico
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
MAGICAL / Mágico
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta línea “donde la lluvia es amor” como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta línea “donde la lluvia es amor” como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:10
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
AT PEACE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what struck me most is the repeated return to place. Not a physical location, but an inner refuge where rest, creativity, hope, and peace coexist. That recurring image gives the poem its meditative quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what struck me most is the repeated return to place. Not a physical location, but an inner refuge where rest, creativity, hope, and peace coexist. That recurring image gives the poem its meditative quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
AT PEACE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Carlos a poem that seems surreal in ways and a sense of peace and freedom. Well done
June 7th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Carlos a poem that seems surreal in ways and a sense of peace and freedom. Well done
June 7th, 2026 08:37
WOUNDED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a moving poem. The progression from woundedness and despair toward moments of release gives the piece tremendous emotional power. I especially love how the dream sequence at the end transforms the speaker into creatures associated with freedom and movement. For a brief moment, the burden lifts, and that glimpse of liberation feels deeply earned. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a moving poem. The progression from woundedness and despair toward moments of release gives the piece tremendous emotional power. I especially love how the dream sequence at the end transforms the speaker into creatures associated with freedom and movement. For a brief moment, the burden lifts, and that glimpse of liberation feels deeply earned. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:29
WOUNDED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sleep as a release from pain and wounds and so it might be, an escape from reality and its pain or a prison of nightmares with their pains. Nicely penned Carlos
June 5th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sleep as a release from pain and wounds and so it might be, an escape from reality and its pain or a prison of nightmares with their pains. Nicely penned Carlos
June 5th, 2026 03:35
FISH
sorenbarrett said:
A fish out of water does drown on air and so it seems in this poem. Fish is a good metaphor here as the old saying goes a fish out of water. Well written my friend
June 4th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fish out of water does drown on air and so it seems in this poem. Fish is a good metaphor here as the old saying goes a fish out of water. Well written my friend
June 4th, 2026 19:38
FISH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a fascinating poem. The fish becomes a powerful metaphor for someone who has spent a lifetime navigating an environment that was never quite meant for them. I especially love the tension between admiration and rejection, between survival and exhaustion. And that ending lands beautifully…the person who once drowned in the air still remains, swimming through a world that is both theirs and everyone else’s. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a fascinating poem. The fish becomes a powerful metaphor for someone who has spent a lifetime navigating an environment that was never quite meant for them. I especially love the tension between admiration and rejection, between survival and exhaustion. And that ending lands beautifully…the person who once drowned in the air still remains, swimming through a world that is both theirs and everyone else’s. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:25
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