Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Sighs
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love that feels light and floating. Nicely written
June 21st, 2026 11:00
ANIMAL
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one wild ride. It bursts with energy from the opening lines and never really pauses for breath. There\'s a fierce hunger running through it all...not for destruction, but for connection. Fascinating piece, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 20th, 2026 09:34
ANIMAL
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is the impossible juxtaposition of love and violence that captures thought and the mind but there is a violent emotional force that is so forceful as is love itself. It is also the forcing of love that is paradoxical and how love itself makes no sense that all come together in an emotive piece that captures the animalistic aspect of love and thereby the metaphor. A clever well written fave
June 20th, 2026 06:54
BUBBLES OF HAPPINESS
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A light hearted poem of happiness and joy displayed metaphorically as bubbles. It is effervescent and nicely done
June 19th, 2026 04:48
The Luxury of Living
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
soheil khodaparasti said:
The contrast between material conditions and inner life is interesting, and it suggests that the true luxury is not wealth but the experience of living itself. How lucky are those who can dream, imagine, and find meaning even in hardship.
June 18th, 2026 23:51
The Luxury of Living
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful piece. I especially appreciate the tension between surviving and truly living. The poem acknowledges hardship without surrendering to it, choosing instead to keep collecting fragments of hope and transforming them into something meaningful. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 18th, 2026 20:52
The Luxury of Living
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A sad truth where wealth rules and the poor are kept at bay with dreams unfulfilled. Nicely written
June 18th, 2026 06:17
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
I like this feature that the poem uses an extended metaphor of messages in bottles to show how poetry travels from the poet to readers and continues to live in their hearts and minds.
June 16th, 2026 15:29
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this warmed my heart, my friend. There is something beautiful about the faith this poem places in words...the belief that they can travel beyond us and find a home somewhere we may never see. A lovely piece. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 16th, 2026 09:23
Frio sueΓ±o
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 16th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really touched me, my friend. There is such a deep loneliness running through these lines...not simply the absence of love, but the ache of feeling unable to receive it when it appears. A heartbreaking piece. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 16th, 2026 09:15
WORDS IN THE AIR / PALABRAS EN EL AIRE
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely message with which I can identify. If even one person can be affected by one line of one poem then the writing is worth while. I believe that most feel the same. Nicely composed it sends a powerful message. Well written and a fave
June 16th, 2026 04:14
Frio sueΓ±o
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken a couple of ways and the cold mechanical metaphor works well with people as well as machines. Nicely done
June 15th, 2026 15:01
Only love / Solo amor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like a warm embrace, my friend. There is such tenderness throughout these lines...a lingering affection for love itself in all its beauty, longing, and wonder. Beautiful poem. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 15th, 2026 08:26
Only love / Solo amor
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
This a poem of love in its many splendors very nicely written Carlos
June 15th, 2026 08:19
Only love / Solo amor
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem presents love as an elusive, idealized, dreamlike refuge, intensely felt yet never fully grasped in reality. Still, people tend to favor its dreamlike qualities over its real aspects.
June 15th, 2026 07:26
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO π΅
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 12th, 2026 13:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, great poem, my friend. I\'ve always loved those rare nights when the world finally quiets down and there is nothing demanding your attention. Just the breeze, the stars, and the simple gift of being still for a while. This brought that feeling right back for me. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 12th, 2026 13:26
LUXURY WAVES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. π I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 12th, 2026 13:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. π I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 12th, 2026 13:03
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO π΅
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO π΅
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
LUXURY WAVES
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
MAGICAL / MΓ‘gico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 11th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 11th, 2026 08:26
MAGICAL / MΓ‘gico
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
MAGICAL / MΓ‘gico
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta lΓnea βdonde la lluvia es amorβ como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta lΓnea βdonde la lluvia es amorβ como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 10th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
June 10th, 2026 08:10
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
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