Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Duck
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real… stripped down and honest. The simplicity lets the feeling speak without anything getting in the way. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, clumsy sadness that feels very real… stripped down and honest. The simplicity lets the feeling speak without anything getting in the way. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 3rd, 2026 16:51
Duck
sorenbarrett said:
Never thought of a duck as famished. Metaphoric perhaps. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Never thought of a duck as famished. Metaphoric perhaps. Well done
May 3rd, 2026 04:33
VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one way love and a plea to make it last a little longer. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of one way love and a plea to make it last a little longer. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2026 12:44
VERY SLOWLY / Muy despacio
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both tender and a little heartbreaking. It holds onto a moment that’s already slipping away. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me…there’s a softness here that feels both tender and a little heartbreaking. It holds onto a moment that’s already slipping away. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 2nd, 2026 11:21
I, SLAVE
sorenbarrett said:
Death the great leveler and emancipator of all brings peace and love. A wonderful write
May 1st, 2026 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Death the great leveler and emancipator of all brings peace and love. A wonderful write
May 1st, 2026 16:39
I, SLAVE
Cerise456 said:
This is so beautiful, it\'s crazy the fact that some are treated so poorly and seen as less than for just being different (:
May 1st, 2026 12:24
Cerise456 said:
This is so beautiful, it\'s crazy the fact that some are treated so poorly and seen as less than for just being different (:
May 1st, 2026 12:24
ALIVE / VIVO / TRISTES LETRAS / SAD LETTERS
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem full of sentiment. Feels regretful and remorseful, but also wistful nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem full of sentiment. Feels regretful and remorseful, but also wistful nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:17
STONES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like more than just material…it reads like something about what gets shaped under pressure. That idea of becoming something refined through effort and force…there’s something very real in that. I felt that layer come through. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels like more than just material…it reads like something about what gets shaped under pressure. That idea of becoming something refined through effort and force…there’s something very real in that. I felt that layer come through. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:36
STONES
sorenbarrett said:
Gems covered by many worn by some and valued by a few a lovely poem
April 29th, 2026 17:09
sorenbarrett said:
Gems covered by many worn by some and valued by a few a lovely poem
April 29th, 2026 17:09
STONES
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem aims to celebrate the beauty found in hard work and the transformation of raw materials into something precious.
April 29th, 2026 08:58
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem aims to celebrate the beauty found in hard work and the transformation of raw materials into something precious.
April 29th, 2026 08:58
SOUL / ALMA
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem speaks to me of the un importance of the size of the soul. It may be small, but still large and it’s importance. Nicely set my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem speaks to me of the un importance of the size of the soul. It may be small, but still large and it’s importance. Nicely set my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:34
SPIDER / ARAÑA
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a steady thread from memory into creation…that moment in the web becoming the way you describe your whole process. The imagery holds, the metaphor stays consistent, and it all settles into something reflective and real. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 05:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a steady thread from memory into creation…that moment in the web becoming the way you describe your whole process. The imagery holds, the metaphor stays consistent, and it all settles into something reflective and real. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 28th, 2026 05:42
SPIDER / ARAÑA
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely imaged this poem takes the spider and its web making it a word catcher. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely imaged this poem takes the spider and its web making it a word catcher. Well done
April 28th, 2026 04:49
A DROP OF LIFE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard…there’s something quietly humbling in this. The way everything is reduced down to something so small, yet still part of something vast…it stays with you. It feels simple, but it carries weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this hit me hard…there’s something quietly humbling in this. The way everything is reduced down to something so small, yet still part of something vast…it stays with you. It feels simple, but it carries weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:19
A DROP OF LIFE
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works so well for all forms of life to meld together with no real difference. So nicely done a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works so well for all forms of life to meld together with no real difference. So nicely done a fave
April 26th, 2026 06:52
A DROP OF LIFE
Demar Desu said:
I had someone at the bar told me 2+2=1 because it all comes from 1… your poem reminds me of that recent conversation. Great work
April 26th, 2026 04:37
Demar Desu said:
I had someone at the bar told me 2+2=1 because it all comes from 1… your poem reminds me of that recent conversation. Great work
April 26th, 2026 04:37
The Little Kitten Catalina
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries such a soft, lasting love…the kind that doesn’t disappear, just changes form. From her presence to memory, to poetry…she’s still right there. A beautiful tribute, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries such a soft, lasting love…the kind that doesn’t disappear, just changes form. From her presence to memory, to poetry…she’s still right there. A beautiful tribute, my friend. Well written. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 25th, 2026 15:03
The Little Kitten Catalina
sorenbarrett said:
People as if there is a dog heave, if cats go to a celestial realm. The Egyptians seemed to think so and if there is a heaven I believe any just God would all all in. After all he created them all.
April 25th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
People as if there is a dog heave, if cats go to a celestial realm. The Egyptians seemed to think so and if there is a heaven I believe any just God would all all in. After all he created them all.
April 25th, 2026 10:16
UNDEFINED
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Like \"love soothes the noise of life.\" Well done.
April 24th, 2026 14:51
Katie B. said:
Excellent. Like \"love soothes the noise of life.\" Well done.
April 24th, 2026 14:51
UNDEFINED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this moves like a meditation…light, breath, and feeling all weaving together without force. The bilingual flow adds to that sense of connection, like the same peace expressed in two voices. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this moves like a meditation…light, breath, and feeling all weaving together without force. The bilingual flow adds to that sense of connection, like the same peace expressed in two voices. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 24th, 2026 12:38
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