Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
LUXURY WAVES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. 😌 I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this felt wonderfully soothing, my friend. 😌 I really enjoyed the idea of the waves becoming luxury and even \"satin music.\" What a lovely way to describe those peaceful moments when the world slows down and all that remains is the night, the stars, and the sound of the sea. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 13:03
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
Lorenz said:
une suite de paysages en forme d\'aquarelles nocturnes ...
June 12th, 2026 10:29
LUXURY WAPES / ONDAS DE LUJO 🎵
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
Hypnotic it like resounding waves puts us to sleep. Lovely images in this narcotic of a poem, Well done my friend.
June 12th, 2026 07:25
LUXURY WAVES
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely mood set by many soft and tender images it wends its way through a frantic world in peace. Loved it my friend
June 11th, 2026 16:27
MAGICAL / Mágico
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful celebration of love and life, my friend. There is such warmth flowing through this piece...sunlight, breeze, sky, rain, all gathered together into a vision of harmony. Wonderful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:26
MAGICAL / Mágico
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
sorenbarrett said:
In that place is a good description of magic. Nicely said Carlos
June 10th, 2026 13:53
MAGICAL / Mágico
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta línea “donde la lluvia es amor” como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
soheil khodaparasti said:
Muy hermoso, me gusta esta línea “donde la lluvia es amor” como la mejor.
June 10th, 2026 12:31
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many of us begin to understand this tension more with each passing year. The imagination, curiosity, and inner life often feel unchanged, while the body increasingly reminds us of time\'s passage. This spoke to me in a very human way. Really enjoyed it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 10th, 2026 08:10
UNFOLDED / DESDOBLADO
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Aging represented in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 16:35
AT PEACE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what struck me most is the repeated return to place. Not a physical location, but an inner refuge where rest, creativity, hope, and peace coexist. That recurring image gives the poem its meditative quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what struck me most is the repeated return to place. Not a physical location, but an inner refuge where rest, creativity, hope, and peace coexist. That recurring image gives the poem its meditative quality. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 7th, 2026 09:15
AT PEACE
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Carlos a poem that seems surreal in ways and a sense of peace and freedom. Well done
June 7th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Carlos a poem that seems surreal in ways and a sense of peace and freedom. Well done
June 7th, 2026 08:37
WOUNDED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a moving poem. The progression from woundedness and despair toward moments of release gives the piece tremendous emotional power. I especially love how the dream sequence at the end transforms the speaker into creatures associated with freedom and movement. For a brief moment, the burden lifts, and that glimpse of liberation feels deeply earned. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a moving poem. The progression from woundedness and despair toward moments of release gives the piece tremendous emotional power. I especially love how the dream sequence at the end transforms the speaker into creatures associated with freedom and movement. For a brief moment, the burden lifts, and that glimpse of liberation feels deeply earned. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 5th, 2026 06:29
WOUNDED
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sleep as a release from pain and wounds and so it might be, an escape from reality and its pain or a prison of nightmares with their pains. Nicely penned Carlos
June 5th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of sleep as a release from pain and wounds and so it might be, an escape from reality and its pain or a prison of nightmares with their pains. Nicely penned Carlos
June 5th, 2026 03:35
FISH
sorenbarrett said:
A fish out of water does drown on air and so it seems in this poem. Fish is a good metaphor here as the old saying goes a fish out of water. Well written my friend
June 4th, 2026 19:38
sorenbarrett said:
A fish out of water does drown on air and so it seems in this poem. Fish is a good metaphor here as the old saying goes a fish out of water. Well written my friend
June 4th, 2026 19:38
FISH
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a fascinating poem. The fish becomes a powerful metaphor for someone who has spent a lifetime navigating an environment that was never quite meant for them. I especially love the tension between admiration and rejection, between survival and exhaustion. And that ending lands beautifully…the person who once drowned in the air still remains, swimming through a world that is both theirs and everyone else’s. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a fascinating poem. The fish becomes a powerful metaphor for someone who has spent a lifetime navigating an environment that was never quite meant for them. I especially love the tension between admiration and rejection, between survival and exhaustion. And that ending lands beautifully…the person who once drowned in the air still remains, swimming through a world that is both theirs and everyone else’s. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 18:25
PLEASES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vibrant poem, Carlos. The detail that stayed with me is the invitation to \"make the world rhyme around us.\" That line feels like the heart of the piece. Not merely enduring life, but participating in it so fully that everything begins to move in harmony. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vibrant poem, Carlos. The detail that stayed with me is the invitation to \"make the world rhyme around us.\" That line feels like the heart of the piece. Not merely enduring life, but participating in it so fully that everything begins to move in harmony. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 17:59
ADDED TIME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, Carlos. This feels like a full-throated refusal to surrender to despair. What stays with me is the determination to wring every last drop out of life...not recklessly, but gratefully. There is joy here, but also defiance. A celebration that keeps dancing while the clock keeps ticking. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Powerful poem, Carlos. This feels like a full-throated refusal to surrender to despair. What stays with me is the determination to wring every last drop out of life...not recklessly, but gratefully. There is joy here, but also defiance. A celebration that keeps dancing while the clock keeps ticking. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 1st, 2026 16:29
PLEASES
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem the essence of this poem. Live life to the fullest in the moment and tomorrow will take care of itself. A lovely write.
June 1st, 2026 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem the essence of this poem. Live life to the fullest in the moment and tomorrow will take care of itself. A lovely write.
June 1st, 2026 11:09
ADDED TIME
mylastwrites said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
May 31st, 2026 16:43
mylastwrites said:
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
May 31st, 2026 16:43
ADDED TIME
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59
ONE MORE LEAF
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful and thoughtful piece. The leaf works wonderfully as both image and metaphor...fragile, ordinary, anonymous, yet carrying the story of an entire life. I was especially moved by the journey from childhood journaling to later years at the keyboard. By the end, it feels as though the poem and the poet have become inseparable. There is a quiet wisdom here that lingers. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 11:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a beautiful and thoughtful piece. The leaf works wonderfully as both image and metaphor...fragile, ordinary, anonymous, yet carrying the story of an entire life. I was especially moved by the journey from childhood journaling to later years at the keyboard. By the end, it feels as though the poem and the poet have become inseparable. There is a quiet wisdom here that lingers. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 11:01
ONLY SOMEONE ELSE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such quiet honesty in the way this unfolds...that feeling of standing at the edge of life, convinced everyone else has the map while you\'re left observing from afar. What I love most is that it doesn\'t stay trapped there. It grows into something gentler...something accepting. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. There is such quiet honesty in the way this unfolds...that feeling of standing at the edge of life, convinced everyone else has the map while you\'re left observing from afar. What I love most is that it doesn\'t stay trapped there. It grows into something gentler...something accepting. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:34
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