Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
IN THE CLOUDS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to that feeling of living partly inside yourself...moving through the world while also remaining distant from it somehow. The miniature world and fishbowl imagery especially hit me hard. There’s loneliness here, but also honesty and self-awareness. Really moving work, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this speaks to that feeling of living partly inside yourself...moving through the world while also remaining distant from it somehow. The miniature world and fishbowl imagery especially hit me hard. There’s loneliness here, but also honesty and self-awareness. Really moving work, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:10
IN THE CLOUDS
arqios said:
Thanks for also putting up the Spanish text. There is something that translation cannot supply and reading it in another language brings out nuances that otherwise gets lost. Most thoroughly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:27
arqios said:
Thanks for also putting up the Spanish text. There is something that translation cannot supply and reading it in another language brings out nuances that otherwise gets lost. Most thoroughly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:27
IN THE CLOUDS
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative lines \"Clouds of flesh\" what a great line. Well written my friend
May 22nd, 2026 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
Most creative lines \"Clouds of flesh\" what a great line. Well written my friend
May 22nd, 2026 06:03
FLORID SKIN / PIEL FLORIDA
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lush and intimate poem this is. The layering of moonlight, skin, feathers, lips, and memory creates this soft emotional atmosphere where love feels both physical and spiritual at once. I especially love how the poem keeps returning to remembrance...as though touch itself becomes a form of dreaming. The bilingual presentation also adds beautifully to the rhythm and musicality of the piece. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, what a lush and intimate poem this is. The layering of moonlight, skin, feathers, lips, and memory creates this soft emotional atmosphere where love feels both physical and spiritual at once. I especially love how the poem keeps returning to remembrance...as though touch itself becomes a form of dreaming. The bilingual presentation also adds beautifully to the rhythm and musicality of the piece. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 21st, 2026 10:37
FLORID SKIN / PIEL FLORIDA
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories and I love the tree configuration of the Spanish poem. Well done
May 20th, 2026 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of memories and I love the tree configuration of the Spanish poem. Well done
May 20th, 2026 16:22
WEARINESS
Lorenz said:
This feels like a never-ending day that yearns for some \'\' After-void\" !
May 16th, 2026 14:27
Lorenz said:
This feels like a never-ending day that yearns for some \'\' After-void\" !
May 16th, 2026 14:27
WEARINESS
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem feels confining and depressing. Well done
May 16th, 2026 12:23
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem feels confining and depressing. Well done
May 16th, 2026 12:23
WEARINESS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels crushingly claustrophobic in both content and form. The centered structure makes the poem read like a slow collapse inward, which fits the exhaustion and despair running through it perfectly. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels crushingly claustrophobic in both content and form. The centered structure makes the poem read like a slow collapse inward, which fits the exhaustion and despair running through it perfectly. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:25
NAKED / DESNUDOS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, almost tidal sensuality to it. Bodies, skin, floating, night, flowers, forgotten memories…everything moves in waves between pleasure and transience, intimacy and disappearance. Beautifully atmospheric piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, almost tidal sensuality to it. Bodies, skin, floating, night, flowers, forgotten memories…everything moves in waves between pleasure and transience, intimacy and disappearance. Beautifully atmospheric piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 16th, 2026 09:13
NAKED / DESNUDOS
Lorenz said:
un clip et un texte d\'une sensualité troublante et un peu dérangeante !
May 15th, 2026 13:52
Lorenz said:
un clip et un texte d\'une sensualité troublante et un peu dérangeante !
May 15th, 2026 13:52
NAKED / DESNUDOS
sorenbarrett said:
This ghostly poem of passion is cloaked in sensuality and sexuality that are mortal yet this is spiritual and so is it the memory of mortality and its passions that we hold as spirits? Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
This ghostly poem of passion is cloaked in sensuality and sexuality that are mortal yet this is spiritual and so is it the memory of mortality and its passions that we hold as spirits? Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 13:43
INNER WATERS / AGUAS INTERIORES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, flowing quality that never stops moving. Water, bodies, dreams, distance…everything blends together into something sensual and deeply atmospheric. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this has a lush, flowing quality that never stops moving. Water, bodies, dreams, distance…everything blends together into something sensual and deeply atmospheric. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:13
INNER WATERS / AGUAS INTERIORES
sorenbarrett said:
Water one of the basic elements, water a holy substance covering the earth before land, baptizing it, In the Tao it is something to be emulated. A metaphor of being. Nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Water one of the basic elements, water a holy substance covering the earth before land, baptizing it, In the Tao it is something to be emulated. A metaphor of being. Nicely written
May 13th, 2026 17:11
Baila conmigo ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminded me of those rare moments where music, closeness, and the night seem to blur together into something almost timeless. The poem carries that feeling beautifully…simple, romantic, and sincere. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reminded me of those rare moments where music, closeness, and the night seem to blur together into something almost timeless. The poem carries that feeling beautifully…simple, romantic, and sincere. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:53
Baila conmigo ♬
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and cheerful poem that reads better in the original Spanish than in translated \'English
May 9th, 2026 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and cheerful poem that reads better in the original Spanish than in translated \'English
May 9th, 2026 04:55
DANCE WITH ME / Baila conmigo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back the feeling of those rare moments where music and closeness make the rest of the world disappear for a while. There’s such sincerity here...nothing flashy, just pure affection and presence. I loved the atmosphere you created, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this brought back the feeling of those rare moments where music and closeness make the rest of the world disappear for a while. There’s such sincerity here...nothing flashy, just pure affection and presence. I loved the atmosphere you created, Carlos. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:14
DANCE WITH ME / Baila conmigo
sorenbarrett said:
Musical, poetic and romantic. Nicely expressed in this poem are all the elements of a romantic night. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Musical, poetic and romantic. Nicely expressed in this poem are all the elements of a romantic night. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:03
WITH TASTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reads like a hymn to living fully…to art, touch, music, tenderness, pleasure, and presence. The repetition of savoring, tasting, and giving yourself to life gives the whole poem such rich emotional texture. And that final idea of making “the small immense” lands beautifully. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this reads like a hymn to living fully…to art, touch, music, tenderness, pleasure, and presence. The repetition of savoring, tasting, and giving yourself to life gives the whole poem such rich emotional texture. And that final idea of making “the small immense” lands beautifully. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 18:16
NET / RED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really pulled me in…humid, tangled, dreamlike. It feels like getting caught inside thought itself, where language and life become the same net. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really pulled me in…humid, tangled, dreamlike. It feels like getting caught inside thought itself, where language and life become the same net. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:59
WITH TASTE
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of those things that bring pleasure a carpe diem vision of life. Nicely written
May 7th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of those things that bring pleasure a carpe diem vision of life. Nicely written
May 7th, 2026 13:22
WITH TASTE
Katie B. said:
Excellent piece of poetry! Wonderful images and descriptions. Well done!
May 7th, 2026 12:03
Katie B. said:
Excellent piece of poetry! Wonderful images and descriptions. Well done!
May 7th, 2026 12:03
WITH TASTE
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your story revolves around the sensory experiences of eating, drinking, and enjoying life. It highlights themes of luxury, pleasure, and the act of savoring both the physical and emotional aspects of existence.
May 7th, 2026 09:19
Friendship said:
Nicely said. Your story revolves around the sensory experiences of eating, drinking, and enjoying life. It highlights themes of luxury, pleasure, and the act of savoring both the physical and emotional aspects of existence.
May 7th, 2026 09:19
NET / RED
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
May 6th, 2026 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of life and its rushing confusion. Nicely written Carlos
May 6th, 2026 20:32
PRECIPICIO / PRECIPICIO
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve felt that tension before…looking at the world and sensing something slipping, something out of alignment. That pull between ruin and something deeper…you captured that clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve felt that tension before…looking at the world and sensing something slipping, something out of alignment. That pull between ruin and something deeper…you captured that clearly. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:14
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