Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
Resignation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, steady weight…not dramatic, just deeply reflective. It sits with the reality of it without trying to push it away, and that gives it real strength. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries a quiet, steady weight…not dramatic, just deeply reflective. It sits with the reality of it without trying to push it away, and that gives it real strength. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 08:43
Resignation
sorenbarrett said:
Truth harsh but real and the recognition that we are not much to be remembered. Very powerful and most refreshing to hear. A fave
April 16th, 2026 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Truth harsh but real and the recognition that we are not much to be remembered. Very powerful and most refreshing to hear. A fave
April 16th, 2026 21:29
JEWELS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. But now about yourpoem...the way you tie jewels not just to appearance but to feeling…to moments and presence…that’s what stands out for me. It turns something material into something more personal and lived. Strong piece, my friend. Very strong and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I apologize for the delay…just came off finishing a composition and it knocked me flat for a bit. But now about yourpoem...the way you tie jewels not just to appearance but to feeling…to moments and presence…that’s what stands out for me. It turns something material into something more personal and lived. Strong piece, my friend. Very strong and a fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 15:53
JEWELS
sorenbarrett said:
Jewels come in many forms from mineral to special people to poems and each can be a jewel. Lovely Carlos
April 15th, 2026 18:58
sorenbarrett said:
Jewels come in many forms from mineral to special people to poems and each can be a jewel. Lovely Carlos
April 15th, 2026 18:58
JEWELS
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of jewels as representations of love and moments of happiness.
April 15th, 2026 18:31
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of jewels as representations of love and moments of happiness.
April 15th, 2026 18:31
BRILLANCE TARDIVE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries that stark, final clarity…a kind of brilliance arriving at the very end. It’s heavy, controlled, and unflinching, and it lingers in that quiet light. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 14th, 2026 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries that stark, final clarity…a kind of brilliance arriving at the very end. It’s heavy, controlled, and unflinching, and it lingers in that quiet light. Strong, thoughtful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
April 14th, 2026 09:04
BRILLANCE TARDIVE
sorenbarrett said:
This is imaginative and in the technology of personification it becomes almost credible with today\'s AI nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
This is imaginative and in the technology of personification it becomes almost credible with today\'s AI nicely done
April 14th, 2026 04:47
Late glow
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a send off from life and this earth. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful a send off from life and this earth. Well done
April 13th, 2026 14:28
Late glow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries a cold, final stillness…like everything winding down without resistance. It feels stark and deliberate, and it lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos… this carries a cold, final stillness…like everything winding down without resistance. It feels stark and deliberate, and it lingers. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 13th, 2026 09:11
Late glow
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into the emotional turmoil of leaving behind love and connection, presenting a stark contrast between the organic human experience and the encroaching robotic or artificial presence that dominates existence. It speaks to feelings of isolation, fear, and the search for meaning in a world that appears to be moving towards a cold, mechanized future.
April 13th, 2026 08:58
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem delves into the emotional turmoil of leaving behind love and connection, presenting a stark contrast between the organic human experience and the encroaching robotic or artificial presence that dominates existence. It speaks to feelings of isolation, fear, and the search for meaning in a world that appears to be moving towards a cold, mechanized future.
April 13th, 2026 08:58
Late glow
2781 said:
There\'s a lot in that. I had a very deep conversation with a google AI. My wife thinks I\'m mad, but google understands
April 13th, 2026 08:57
2781 said:
There\'s a lot in that. I had a very deep conversation with a google AI. My wife thinks I\'m mad, but google understands
April 13th, 2026 08:57
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries that flowing, almost dreamlike quality…where everything is sensation and contrast, heat and softness, light and shadow. It doesn’t rush, it just lets the moment unfold and dissolve as it goes. That immersive feel really works. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this carries that flowing, almost dreamlike quality…where everything is sensation and contrast, heat and softness, light and shadow. It doesn’t rush, it just lets the moment unfold and dissolve as it goes. That immersive feel really works. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:20
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
2781 said:
My lust has so vanished that even the thought would be folly!
April 11th, 2026 08:07
2781 said:
My lust has so vanished that even the thought would be folly!
April 11th, 2026 08:07
EVANESCENT SKIN (OPERETTA)
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, seductive, sexual, passionate, burning desire, lust all encompass this poem
April 11th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, seductive, sexual, passionate, burning desire, lust all encompass this poem
April 11th, 2026 07:06
WHEN LOVE ILLUMINATES EVERYTHING - Operetta
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is overflowing…in the best way. It just keeps pouring forward without holding back, and that kind of sincerity really lands. You mean every word of it, and it shows. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is overflowing…in the best way. It just keeps pouring forward without holding back, and that kind of sincerity really lands. You mean every word of it, and it shows. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 9th, 2026 07:49
WHEN LOVE ILLUMINATES EVERYTHING - Operetta
sorenbarrett said:
If there could be so much love shown in todays world. It is a beautiful wish and desire. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
If there could be so much love shown in todays world. It is a beautiful wish and desire. Well written
April 8th, 2026 16:09
PENDING / PENDIENTE
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really lands…that transition from the climb into the descent, especially in that image of setting the suitcases down. It feels like release, but not without weight. There’s something grounded in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really lands…that transition from the climb into the descent, especially in that image of setting the suitcases down. It feels like release, but not without weight. There’s something grounded in that. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 7th, 2026 08:51
PENDING / PENDIENTE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to action. It creates great scenes with wonderful imagery. Well done
April 7th, 2026 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls to action. It creates great scenes with wonderful imagery. Well done
April 7th, 2026 07:49
Flowers for Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a quiet, enduring sorrow here…returning again and again with flowers, holding love even in absence. That image of bringing flowers to someone who is both gone and still with you…that anchors everything. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, there’s a quiet, enduring sorrow here…returning again and again with flowers, holding love even in absence. That image of bringing flowers to someone who is both gone and still with you…that anchors everything. It lingers. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:39
Flowers for Love
Teddy.15 said:
Grief is something that stays always even beneath the stone of those who have left, a beautiful piece of poetry so very relatable to me. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 10:19
Teddy.15 said:
Grief is something that stays always even beneath the stone of those who have left, a beautiful piece of poetry so very relatable to me. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 10:19
Flowers for Love
sorenbarrett said:
Mournful and melancholic this poem of a lost love speaks of clinging to memories and hopes for reunion. A sad poem a lacrimosa dedicated to one loved.
April 5th, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
Mournful and melancholic this poem of a lost love speaks of clinging to memories and hopes for reunion. A sad poem a lacrimosa dedicated to one loved.
April 5th, 2026 05:32
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve been there…missing what was right beside me while thinking it was absent. That kind of blindness isn’t loud, it’s quiet…and you captured that clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I’ve been there…missing what was right beside me while thinking it was absent. That kind of blindness isn’t loud, it’s quiet…and you captured that clearly. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 3rd, 2026 08:12
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
Friendship said:
nicely done. Your poem explores the theme of unrecognized love and the blindness that often comes with being preoccupied with one\'s own life.
April 3rd, 2026 07:16
Friendship said:
nicely done. Your poem explores the theme of unrecognized love and the blindness that often comes with being preoccupied with one\'s own life.
April 3rd, 2026 07:16
Sometimes we look but do not see (Operetta 8)
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is such a lovely write that turns the tables and puts the responsibility right back where it belongs on our shoulders. Well written
April 3rd, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this is such a lovely write that turns the tables and puts the responsibility right back where it belongs on our shoulders. Well written
April 3rd, 2026 07:13
REFULGENT (Operetta) ♬
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady sense of light moving through darkness that never fades. It doesn’t deny the weight of life…it just keeps returning to that glow within it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this feels luminous from start to finish…there’s a steady sense of light moving through darkness that never fades. It doesn’t deny the weight of life…it just keeps returning to that glow within it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 1st, 2026 17:27
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