Comments received on poems by Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS
SCENT OF LOVE / AROMA DE AMOR
sorenbarrett said:
Love can be a cliche but it does not feel so at the time and any words may carry one off in the clouds. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Love can be a cliche but it does not feel so at the time and any words may carry one off in the clouds. Nicely done
July 20th, 2026 04:33
BREEZE / BRISA
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely piece, Carlos! The moving air gently awakens the room, the senses, and the language itself. Nothing monumental needs to happen...the ordinary moment already contains enough life to savor. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely piece, Carlos! The moving air gently awakens the room, the senses, and the language itself. Nothing monumental needs to happen...the ordinary moment already contains enough life to savor. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:36
SPARKLES / Chisporroteos
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a joyful and thoughtful piece, Carlos! Fashion becomes both presentation and revelation...a chosen surface through which identity, confidence, and connection become visible. Sometimes becoming ourselves begins with deciding how we wish to appear. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a joyful and thoughtful piece, Carlos! Fashion becomes both presentation and revelation...a chosen surface through which identity, confidence, and connection become visible. Sometimes becoming ourselves begins with deciding how we wish to appear. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:17
BREEZE / BRISA
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem evokes thoughts of how poems are air, vibrations in air, sound waves carried on the wind to those within distance to hear. Very nicely written it vibrates.
July 18th, 2026 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Carlos this poem evokes thoughts of how poems are air, vibrations in air, sound waves carried on the wind to those within distance to hear. Very nicely written it vibrates.
July 18th, 2026 06:49
SPARKLES / Chisporroteos
sorenbarrett said:
To be ourselves is becoming more and more of a privilege. Nicely written
July 17th, 2026 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
To be ourselves is becoming more and more of a privilege. Nicely written
July 17th, 2026 13:12
Snapshots / Instantáneas
sorenbarrett said:
The message behind this poem is powerful. In a disposable world where we just buy new and never own anything we just rent it for a moment and it is gone. It is not just photos but property of all sorts, we lease our car, pay per view of movies, and music. Even our houses are take from us if we don\'t pay the tax. Our roads are toll ways. Maybe even relationships will soon be this way. A fave
July 17th, 2026 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
The message behind this poem is powerful. In a disposable world where we just buy new and never own anything we just rent it for a moment and it is gone. It is not just photos but property of all sorts, we lease our car, pay per view of movies, and music. Even our houses are take from us if we don\'t pay the tax. Our roads are toll ways. Maybe even relationships will soon be this way. A fave
July 17th, 2026 10:48
Snapshots / Instantáneas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. We capture everything as though we are preserving it forever, yet our digital memories may prove more temporary than we realize. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 10:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this really moved me. We capture everything as though we are preserving it forever, yet our digital memories may prove more temporary than we realize. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 10:04
SCORCHED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is absolutely relentless! The heat, dread, and corruption close in from every direction until there is barely room to breathe. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is absolutely relentless! The heat, dread, and corruption close in from every direction until there is barely room to breathe. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:13
A QUIET WISH
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries beautiful feelings with its message. Nicely written it proclaims happiness. Well done
July 17th, 2026 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries beautiful feelings with its message. Nicely written it proclaims happiness. Well done
July 17th, 2026 03:39
Nebula
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is of another world an interior one probably where one is caught up ignoring the external one. Well written Carlos
July 16th, 2026 18:41
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is of another world an interior one probably where one is caught up ignoring the external one. Well written Carlos
July 16th, 2026 18:41
SCORCHED
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficult times where things are going downward. Well written
July 16th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of difficult times where things are going downward. Well written
July 16th, 2026 14:36
THE DANCE OF LIFE / La danza de la vida
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an uplifting piece, Carlos. The repeated invitation to dance gives the poem its heartbeat, while the acknowledgment of pain keeps that joy grounded in real life. That balance is what resonated with me most. Here\'s to dancing anyway, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What an uplifting piece, Carlos. The repeated invitation to dance gives the poem its heartbeat, while the acknowledgment of pain keeps that joy grounded in real life. That balance is what resonated with me most. Here\'s to dancing anyway, my friend. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:43
THE DANCE OF LIFE / La danza de la vida
Doggerel Dave said:
Steady on now - you are making me very tired; great write though.
July 14th, 2026 08:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Steady on now - you are making me very tired; great write though.
July 14th, 2026 08:47
SUNSET
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one heavy piece, my friend. It doesn\'t romanticize escape for a second...it keeps bringing us back to the emptiness beneath every attempt to outrun reality. That honesty gives it a lot of weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is one heavy piece, my friend. It doesn\'t romanticize escape for a second...it keeps bringing us back to the emptiness beneath every attempt to outrun reality. That honesty gives it a lot of weight. Powerful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 13th, 2026 08:39
SUNSET
Doggerel Dave said:
A connection between the world’s problems and an individual chemical rather than a collective response is made very clear here.
Insight in poetic form.
July 12th, 2026 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
A connection between the world’s problems and an individual chemical rather than a collective response is made very clear here.
Insight in poetic form.
July 12th, 2026 18:28
SUNSET
sorenbarrett said:
This poem focuses on a pharmaceutical world of candied answers to life\'s problems. Sad and yet so true. Well done
July 12th, 2026 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem focuses on a pharmaceutical world of candied answers to life\'s problems. Sad and yet so true. Well done
July 12th, 2026 13:07
AGUAS ENSOÑADAS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I loved this. The gentle repetition of the water imagery gives the poem a calm, meditative rhythm, and the memories of childhood make it all the more inviting. Then that final thought brings everything together so naturally...some places become part of us forever. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, I loved this. The gentle repetition of the water imagery gives the poem a calm, meditative rhythm, and the memories of childhood make it all the more inviting. Then that final thought brings everything together so naturally...some places become part of us forever. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 07:31
AGUAS ENSOÑADAS
sorenbarrett said:
The sea has always been a metaphor for life and here is used well to illustrate the sentiments of the poem. Very nice
July 10th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
The sea has always been a metaphor for life and here is used well to illustrate the sentiments of the poem. Very nice
July 10th, 2026 04:12
HISTORIAS CORRIENTES
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, it was the image of love never reaching your mailbox that caught me. Such a simple way to express a profound sense of absence. That one stayed with me long after I finished reading. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, it was the image of love never reaching your mailbox that caught me. Such a simple way to express a profound sense of absence. That one stayed with me long after I finished reading. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 21:34
HISTORIAS CORRIENTES
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of love in all its forms that some are lucky enough to experience and others are not. An outside view that tells of others fortune and misfortune in this. Well written
July 9th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of love in all its forms that some are lucky enough to experience and others are not. An outside view that tells of others fortune and misfortune in this. Well written
July 9th, 2026 04:38
COME
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos, this really moved me. There’s such an intense, unguarded passion running through this…it doesn’t hold back, it just burns from start to finish. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Carlos, this really moved me. There’s such an intense, unguarded passion running through this…it doesn’t hold back, it just burns from start to finish. Great job on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:18
COME
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear fire fighting fire to cool the passion. Nicely composed it includes fireworks. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem I hear fire fighting fire to cool the passion. Nicely composed it includes fireworks. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 16:08
Free rights
sorenbarrett said:
There is a joyous and exuberant feel to this poem that is bursting with an overflowing need to give. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is a joyous and exuberant feel to this poem that is bursting with an overflowing need to give. Well written
July 7th, 2026 03:43
FLOWERS IN MY DESERT
Doggerel Dave said:
A road map to self realisation and something many could learn from. I particularly enjoyed your celebratory voice as it recognised the freedom of being oneself and not subject to the values and norms imposed externally.
July 6th, 2026 23:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A road map to self realisation and something many could learn from. I particularly enjoyed your celebratory voice as it recognised the freedom of being oneself and not subject to the values and norms imposed externally.
July 6th, 2026 23:17
FLOWERS IN MY DESERT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautifully done. A whole life\'s worth of growing into yourself, laid out like a desert learning to bloom on its own terms...decades of shedding what weighed you down, until the cactus finally flowers, spines and all. Grateful and real, nothing less and nothing more. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Carlos, this is beautifully done. A whole life\'s worth of growing into yourself, laid out like a desert learning to bloom on its own terms...decades of shedding what weighed you down, until the cactus finally flowers, spines and all. Grateful and real, nothing less and nothing more. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 16:50
FLOWERS IN MY DESERT
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exposition of self in this write. Nicely composed and set to verse. Well done Carlos
July 6th, 2026 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic exposition of self in this write. Nicely composed and set to verse. Well done Carlos
July 6th, 2026 16:14
METAMORFOSIS
Doggerel Dave said:
I once had a feeling similar for a marble woman. Her image remained even after I moved and no longer had access.
I want to also thank you for the presentation of the \'AI Short film\' which left me somewhat hypnotised. I now wonder if my nightly dreams will ever be quite the same again. I have my reservations with respect to AI, which you can find spread across my verses, but here....
July 5th, 2026 07:33
Doggerel Dave said:
I once had a feeling similar for a marble woman. Her image remained even after I moved and no longer had access.
I want to also thank you for the presentation of the \'AI Short film\' which left me somewhat hypnotised. I now wonder if my nightly dreams will ever be quite the same again. I have my reservations with respect to AI, which you can find spread across my verses, but here....
July 5th, 2026 07:33
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