Comments received on poems by applecherry
A rhyme
Butter said:
:3
Keep writing
Event of its just for yourself
And maybe someone will enjoy it just as much.
(At least I do)
And yes-
Thinking is bad :3
August 13th, 2026 18:11
Butter said:
:3
Keep writing
Event of its just for yourself
And maybe someone will enjoy it just as much.
(At least I do)
And yes-
Thinking is bad :3
August 13th, 2026 18:11
A phone call
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says plainly that one has to tell people what is wrong if one wants help. No one is a mind reader and one must want help to receive it. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says plainly that one has to tell people what is wrong if one wants help. No one is a mind reader and one must want help to receive it. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2026 08:34
A phone call
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful and sad as I felt myself in this! Thank you for sharing and caring! Most battles are our own. Much peace and respect 🙏
August 11th, 2026 07:38
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful and sad as I felt myself in this! Thank you for sharing and caring! Most battles are our own. Much peace and respect 🙏
August 11th, 2026 07:38
The end
sorenbarrett said:
Choices made sometimes for the best and sometimes for the worst. Well written
August 2nd, 2026 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Choices made sometimes for the best and sometimes for the worst. Well written
August 2nd, 2026 19:14
When I think about my week, you are the least exciting part
sorenbarrett said:
A deliberate statement of cruelty. Said to bring pain. Understandably hurtful.
August 1st, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
A deliberate statement of cruelty. Said to bring pain. Understandably hurtful.
August 1st, 2026 03:07
who I am, what I embody, what I wish for
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful spread of qualities mentioned in this poem. Well done
July 27th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful spread of qualities mentioned in this poem. Well done
July 27th, 2026 20:10
If I am consumed by food, maybe my heart will be spared
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of food substituted for something else missing. Well done
July 26th, 2026 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of food substituted for something else missing. Well done
July 26th, 2026 11:11
A rhyme
Cheeky Missy said:
Discipline is a challenge well worth the effort but little appreciated, if at all, by whom take the easier path.
July 22nd, 2026 14:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Discipline is a challenge well worth the effort but little appreciated, if at all, by whom take the easier path.
July 22nd, 2026 14:18
A rhyme
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed that is the difficulty for words that rhyme do not always fit the thought or desired meaning. Wording and rewording are often required. Well written
July 22nd, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed that is the difficulty for words that rhyme do not always fit the thought or desired meaning. Wording and rewording are often required. Well written
July 22nd, 2026 11:30
A boo away from a woohoo
Demar Desu said:
Well if it’s for me… thank you.. great poem
July 9th, 2026 21:07
Demar Desu said:
Well if it’s for me… thank you.. great poem
July 9th, 2026 21:07
I worry about being known
sorenbarrett said:
A true reveal may not get the person desired but will get the right person. A great write
February 8th, 2026 22:00
sorenbarrett said:
A true reveal may not get the person desired but will get the right person. A great write
February 8th, 2026 22:00
relief
sorenbarrett said:
All living things shed part of themselves and in fact over time all of themselves. To shed the parts that are hurtful would be a good thing. A lovely write
January 26th, 2026 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
All living things shed part of themselves and in fact over time all of themselves. To shed the parts that are hurtful would be a good thing. A lovely write
January 26th, 2026 08:23
The girl who got ill, but got better.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that expresses doubt and fear that one deals with in their own way. Well stated
January 21st, 2026 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that expresses doubt and fear that one deals with in their own way. Well stated
January 21st, 2026 17:17
If no one sees you, do you matter?
sorenbarrett said:
The last line is a winner and philosophical and existential winner. Some would say yes but I believe that deep down inside we all want to be recognized and remembered. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
The last line is a winner and philosophical and existential winner. Some would say yes but I believe that deep down inside we all want to be recognized and remembered. Well written
January 16th, 2026 06:26
Remembrance
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. Well said
December 31st, 2025 19:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of loss and missing someone. Well said
December 31st, 2025 19:25
chosen
spiderlily said:
\"you wanted someone,
just someone. \"
this is so beautiful
December 19th, 2025 10:57
spiderlily said:
\"you wanted someone,
just someone. \"
this is so beautiful
December 19th, 2025 10:57
friendship
WinterBunny said:
I know exactly how you feel. I had a time in my life where I was isolated. . . not by choice but by my parents. They pulled me out of public school so I lost all my friends and the connections to them . .. the only people I had where my sibs but they are younger then me and. . . well. . . their family. It\'s not the same with someone who\'s not related to u and your age /gender. For those couple years I had no friends, no events. . . this poem speaks to what I felt during that time. Thank you for the emotional you put in the poem.
WinterBunny
December 17th, 2025 14:49
WinterBunny said:
I know exactly how you feel. I had a time in my life where I was isolated. . . not by choice but by my parents. They pulled me out of public school so I lost all my friends and the connections to them . .. the only people I had where my sibs but they are younger then me and. . . well. . . their family. It\'s not the same with someone who\'s not related to u and your age /gender. For those couple years I had no friends, no events. . . this poem speaks to what I felt during that time. Thank you for the emotional you put in the poem.
WinterBunny
December 17th, 2025 14:49
friendship
sorenbarrett said:
The pluses and minuses of friends and of being outgoing or introverted. A good write on the dilema involved. Well written it shows the vacillation between the two.
December 17th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
The pluses and minuses of friends and of being outgoing or introverted. A good write on the dilema involved. Well written it shows the vacillation between the two.
December 17th, 2025 08:46
recognition
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good attempt for the first rhyme. The message came through so well and was identifiable. Keep it up it grows easier the more you do it. Lovely
December 12th, 2025 20:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good attempt for the first rhyme. The message came through so well and was identifiable. Keep it up it grows easier the more you do it. Lovely
December 12th, 2025 20:47
chosen
Adam Shirley (geef) said:
\"but she\'s not me\" is hauntingly relatable. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:44
Adam Shirley (geef) said:
\"but she\'s not me\" is hauntingly relatable. Great write. - AS
December 10th, 2025 22:44
chosen
NinjaGirl said:
I suppose they were never meant to choose you...I relate to this one a lot! Well done
December 10th, 2025 21:08
NinjaGirl said:
I suppose they were never meant to choose you...I relate to this one a lot! Well done
December 10th, 2025 21:08
chosen
sorenbarrett said:
The matter of selection is a complex one and jealousy comes from people still looking people, chosen and discarded for the strangest reasons and interesting write
December 10th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
The matter of selection is a complex one and jealousy comes from people still looking people, chosen and discarded for the strangest reasons and interesting write
December 10th, 2025 13:47
it may be obvious
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed feeling in this poem not so much uncertainty as just confusion. Well written
November 28th, 2025 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed feeling in this poem not so much uncertainty as just confusion. Well written
November 28th, 2025 18:51
does love exist
sorenbarrett said:
A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided and only rarely two. It does not depend on the other just the self. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided and only rarely two. It does not depend on the other just the self. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 20:42
a cruel love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for another. Love unfulfilled is the term I would give it as a letter to one that is now gone. Raw and heart felt.
November 18th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for another. Love unfulfilled is the term I would give it as a letter to one that is now gone. Raw and heart felt.
November 18th, 2025 19:34
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