Comments received on poems by applecherry
it may be obvious
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed feeling in this poem not so much uncertainty as just confusion. Well written
November 28th, 2025 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
Mixed feeling in this poem not so much uncertainty as just confusion. Well written
November 28th, 2025 18:51
does love exist
sorenbarrett said:
A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided and only rarely two. It does not depend on the other just the self. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided and only rarely two. It does not depend on the other just the self. A lovely poem
November 23rd, 2025 20:42
a cruel love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for another. Love unfulfilled is the term I would give it as a letter to one that is now gone. Raw and heart felt.
November 18th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for another. Love unfulfilled is the term I would give it as a letter to one that is now gone. Raw and heart felt.
November 18th, 2025 19:34
Do you wish to forget?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of break up but not forgetting the past. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 18:37
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of break up but not forgetting the past. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 18:37
I know you\'re out there
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with longing and sadness. It implies an event that impedes reunion. Nicely written with just enough unknowns.
November 14th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with longing and sadness. It implies an event that impedes reunion. Nicely written with just enough unknowns.
November 14th, 2025 14:08
you are not kind
sorenbarrett said:
There needs to be a balance in life in giving and taking in a relationship and it appears that in this instance this is not the case. A lovely write
November 13th, 2025 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
There needs to be a balance in life in giving and taking in a relationship and it appears that in this instance this is not the case. A lovely write
November 13th, 2025 19:48
Release
sorenbarrett said:
Time wears away things we thought were permanent. A write about such erosion and the slow loosing of a relationship. Well done
November 12th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Time wears away things we thought were permanent. A write about such erosion and the slow loosing of a relationship. Well done
November 12th, 2025 04:26
if forever comes, is it waiting?
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is so nicely upbeat but uses contradictions such as \"my body is tired but my mind is awake\" \"a happy song that evoked deep sadness in me\" These create tension in the reader and promote attention to the poem. Very nicely done.
November 11th, 2025 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is so nicely upbeat but uses contradictions such as \"my body is tired but my mind is awake\" \"a happy song that evoked deep sadness in me\" These create tension in the reader and promote attention to the poem. Very nicely done.
November 11th, 2025 15:09
you always say the right thing
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the conflict between emotions and mind between the female and male. A deeper meaning couched in a relationship. You are right not to criticize for neither is better or worse only different and a blend is the best of all worlds. A nicely presented dilema for which there is no answer.
November 10th, 2025 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the conflict between emotions and mind between the female and male. A deeper meaning couched in a relationship. You are right not to criticize for neither is better or worse only different and a blend is the best of all worlds. A nicely presented dilema for which there is no answer.
November 10th, 2025 11:50
a reflection
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity oozes out of this poem. Fear, doubt, discomfort all reflect in the mirror and who wants to look at that. Better to close the eyes or look elsewhere. This poem is raw and nicely done expressing well that feeling. Well done
November 9th, 2025 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity oozes out of this poem. Fear, doubt, discomfort all reflect in the mirror and who wants to look at that. Better to close the eyes or look elsewhere. This poem is raw and nicely done expressing well that feeling. Well done
November 9th, 2025 10:24
a sandwich part.2
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for a relationship here where it takes two slices of bread and a filling in the middle. Without any of these there is no sandwich and someone has to make it. Nicely written.
November 8th, 2025 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for a relationship here where it takes two slices of bread and a filling in the middle. Without any of these there is no sandwich and someone has to make it. Nicely written.
November 8th, 2025 06:18
writing freely
Paul Bell said:
Doesn\'t heartbreak feel like getting stabbed over and over again.
Breakup is like a bad tape that just plays the same stuff on return.
I suppose the pessimist would say you\'ve been discarded.
Now, the optimist would be thinking. Out with the old and in with the new, girl.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
Paul Bell said:
Doesn\'t heartbreak feel like getting stabbed over and over again.
Breakup is like a bad tape that just plays the same stuff on return.
I suppose the pessimist would say you\'ve been discarded.
Now, the optimist would be thinking. Out with the old and in with the new, girl.
November 6th, 2025 10:47
writing freely
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how there are expectations in relationships and how one wants to feel more special even if others are treated nicely. A wonderful write
November 6th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
It is funny how there are expectations in relationships and how one wants to feel more special even if others are treated nicely. A wonderful write
November 6th, 2025 10:15
721
sorenbarrett said:
To fantasize is such a common occurrence becoming Walter Mitty. A lovely poem about an obsession.
November 5th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
To fantasize is such a common occurrence becoming Walter Mitty. A lovely poem about an obsession.
November 5th, 2025 08:25
I Keep Listening
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that feeling of not turning it off…of listening just to feel close again. You’ve written that impulse so honestly, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know that feeling of not turning it off…of listening just to feel close again. You’ve written that impulse so honestly, my friend. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 4th, 2025 15:37
I Keep Listening
sorenbarrett said:
Love and loss lead to pain. All major topics of poetry. A read that feels so real and everyday that it leaps off the page and into the room. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Love and loss lead to pain. All major topics of poetry. A read that feels so real and everyday that it leaps off the page and into the room. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 06:06
a sandwich analogy
sorenbarrett said:
I got this poem and loved the last line that has so much meaning. (I had that sandwich because we shared it and I loved it. ) Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
I got this poem and loved the last line that has so much meaning. (I had that sandwich because we shared it and I loved it. ) Nicely done
November 3rd, 2025 11:58
a poem of breakup
sorenbarrett said:
A difference of feeling and a desire to unite on one side not quite the same on the other. Emotional entanglement a complicated subject. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A difference of feeling and a desire to unite on one side not quite the same on the other. Emotional entanglement a complicated subject. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 03:50
