Comments received on poems by applecherry
A glimmer
sorenbarrett said:
The light a metaphor maybe of hope or knowledge or truth. The amount is only what one deserves. One is left with the end question. Nicely conceived and written.
September 16th, 2026 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
The light a metaphor maybe of hope or knowledge or truth. The amount is only what one deserves. One is left with the end question. Nicely conceived and written.
September 16th, 2026 05:28
Unlock my door
sorenbarrett said:
Messages misinterpreted and rejection looking for persistence. Nicely written
September 13th, 2026 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Messages misinterpreted and rejection looking for persistence. Nicely written
September 13th, 2026 06:34
A game
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a disadvantage when one does not know one\'s opponent, what game is being played or how to stop the action one is about to have doubts. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is a disadvantage when one does not know one\'s opponent, what game is being played or how to stop the action one is about to have doubts. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:43
Her
sorenbarrett said:
Not being the primary person in a relationship is difficult this poem puts it out there. Well done
September 4th, 2026 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
Not being the primary person in a relationship is difficult this poem puts it out there. Well done
September 4th, 2026 19:41
I had never felt the urge to I love you
peto said:
Emotional and heartfelt
Great write
August 28th, 2026 15:33
peto said:
Emotional and heartfelt
Great write
August 28th, 2026 15:33
I had never felt the urge to I love you
sorenbarrett said:
Love a complicated emotion that we do not even define very well, it spreading over various categories from sexual passion to motherly and God pure charity. No wonder we get confused. Well written
August 28th, 2026 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Love a complicated emotion that we do not even define very well, it spreading over various categories from sexual passion to motherly and God pure charity. No wonder we get confused. Well written
August 28th, 2026 04:39
The poems that sit in my drafts
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful fossil words capturing in time who one once was. A lovely image here. Creative and most poetic.
August 27th, 2026 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful fossil words capturing in time who one once was. A lovely image here. Creative and most poetic.
August 27th, 2026 04:36
Confined
sorenbarrett said:
When passion turns to obsession and obsession becomes dependency then the relationship is mortally wounded. A raw and convincing write of emotion well said.
August 22nd, 2026 11:52
sorenbarrett said:
When passion turns to obsession and obsession becomes dependency then the relationship is mortally wounded. A raw and convincing write of emotion well said.
August 22nd, 2026 11:52
Somebody
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this a gem. Lovely and a fave
August 20th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording makes this a gem. Lovely and a fave
August 20th, 2026 10:31
You eat your cake and I become it
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of being used in this poem. Well written
August 19th, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of being used in this poem. Well written
August 19th, 2026 17:54
I see me through your eyes
Demar Desu said:
I’m closing my eyes from now on… do we smell the same?
August 18th, 2026 13:30
Demar Desu said:
I’m closing my eyes from now on… do we smell the same?
August 18th, 2026 13:30
I see me through your eyes
sorenbarrett said:
This one requires thought like watching someone in a mirror then double mirror. Well done
August 18th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one requires thought like watching someone in a mirror then double mirror. Well done
August 18th, 2026 10:56
A rhyme
Butter said:
:3
Keep writing
Event of its just for yourself
And maybe someone will enjoy it just as much.
(At least I do)
And yes-
Thinking is bad :3
August 13th, 2026 18:11
Butter said:
:3
Keep writing
Event of its just for yourself
And maybe someone will enjoy it just as much.
(At least I do)
And yes-
Thinking is bad :3
August 13th, 2026 18:11
A phone call
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says plainly that one has to tell people what is wrong if one wants help. No one is a mind reader and one must want help to receive it. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2026 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says plainly that one has to tell people what is wrong if one wants help. No one is a mind reader and one must want help to receive it. Nicely done.
August 11th, 2026 08:34
A phone call
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful and sad as I felt myself in this! Thank you for sharing and caring! Most battles are our own. Much peace and respect 🙏
August 11th, 2026 07:38
Poetic Dan said:
Beautiful and sad as I felt myself in this! Thank you for sharing and caring! Most battles are our own. Much peace and respect 🙏
August 11th, 2026 07:38
The end
sorenbarrett said:
Choices made sometimes for the best and sometimes for the worst. Well written
August 2nd, 2026 19:14
sorenbarrett said:
Choices made sometimes for the best and sometimes for the worst. Well written
August 2nd, 2026 19:14
When I think about my week, you are the least exciting part
sorenbarrett said:
A deliberate statement of cruelty. Said to bring pain. Understandably hurtful.
August 1st, 2026 03:07
sorenbarrett said:
A deliberate statement of cruelty. Said to bring pain. Understandably hurtful.
August 1st, 2026 03:07
who I am, what I embody, what I wish for
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful spread of qualities mentioned in this poem. Well done
July 27th, 2026 20:10
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful spread of qualities mentioned in this poem. Well done
July 27th, 2026 20:10
If I am consumed by food, maybe my heart will be spared
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of food substituted for something else missing. Well done
July 26th, 2026 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of food substituted for something else missing. Well done
July 26th, 2026 11:11
A rhyme
Cheeky Missy said:
Discipline is a challenge well worth the effort but little appreciated, if at all, by whom take the easier path.
July 22nd, 2026 14:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Discipline is a challenge well worth the effort but little appreciated, if at all, by whom take the easier path.
July 22nd, 2026 14:18
A rhyme
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed that is the difficulty for words that rhyme do not always fit the thought or desired meaning. Wording and rewording are often required. Well written
July 22nd, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed that is the difficulty for words that rhyme do not always fit the thought or desired meaning. Wording and rewording are often required. Well written
July 22nd, 2026 11:30
A boo away from a woohoo
Demar Desu said:
Well if it’s for me… thank you.. great poem
July 9th, 2026 21:07
Demar Desu said:
Well if it’s for me… thank you.. great poem
July 9th, 2026 21:07
I worry about being known
sorenbarrett said:
A true reveal may not get the person desired but will get the right person. A great write
February 8th, 2026 22:00
sorenbarrett said:
A true reveal may not get the person desired but will get the right person. A great write
February 8th, 2026 22:00
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