Comments received on poems by Izzi Lynn
Color
chinaaliciarivera said:
Creatively written. Like speaking of auras. Nice. ❤ 💗 💕 😊
October 3rd, 2017 21:53
chinaaliciarivera said:
Creatively written. Like speaking of auras. Nice. ❤ 💗 💕 😊
October 3rd, 2017 21:53
magic
Simple-Man87 said:
Power. That screamed Power. I loved every word. My goosebumps have yet to go away.
limits do not keep us from exploring
I love that line. This needs to go into the journal of every woman who struggles with confidence, every girl afraid of approaching a boy, and every-ONE who just needs a power surge.
This has left me gob-stopped.
September 14th, 2017 14:53
Simple-Man87 said:
Power. That screamed Power. I loved every word. My goosebumps have yet to go away.
limits do not keep us from exploring
I love that line. This needs to go into the journal of every woman who struggles with confidence, every girl afraid of approaching a boy, and every-ONE who just needs a power surge.
This has left me gob-stopped.
September 14th, 2017 14:53
In Memoriam
niallprideaux said:
Incredibly well written :) we are all our harshest critics x
March 14th, 2017 11:20
niallprideaux said:
Incredibly well written :) we are all our harshest critics x
March 14th, 2017 11:20
Fear
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I appreciate the adorable futuristic thoughts here , the fears, the anxieties and the mortal conditions of us all. U r too young but yor poem shows u r a smart teen. I ESP liked the poetic last 9. Lines , in the last stanza. Interesting muse here.
Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest, u r most welcome to.
March 8th, 2017 14:00
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I appreciate the adorable futuristic thoughts here , the fears, the anxieties and the mortal conditions of us all. U r too young but yor poem shows u r a smart teen. I ESP liked the poetic last 9. Lines , in the last stanza. Interesting muse here.
Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest, u r most welcome to.
March 8th, 2017 14:00
Fear
MendedFences27 said:
From one who is old and withered, let me say that you should listen to your friend. Life is a struggle that we live from day to day. NO ONE remembers anything from before they are four, and as you get older that moves up to 5-6-7- etc. So live, as you wish to live. Learn all you can and fall in love. And when you are old and gray, you will look back at your poem, here, and chuckle.
You have writing talent . Use it. I loved reading your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 18:08
MendedFences27 said:
From one who is old and withered, let me say that you should listen to your friend. Life is a struggle that we live from day to day. NO ONE remembers anything from before they are four, and as you get older that moves up to 5-6-7- etc. So live, as you wish to live. Learn all you can and fall in love. And when you are old and gray, you will look back at your poem, here, and chuckle.
You have writing talent . Use it. I loved reading your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 18:08
My Favorite Melody
grindbaby16 said:
This write is very powerful, very accurate. I much enjoyed. I was blown away! please keep writing!
January 27th, 2017 00:14
grindbaby16 said:
This write is very powerful, very accurate. I much enjoyed. I was blown away! please keep writing!
January 27th, 2017 00:14
My Favorite Melody
Corey said:
Such a beautiful and inspiring write. If only people could see their beauty through the eyes of those we love them...everyone would be beautiful! What a beautiful feeling reading your words gave me! Thank you!
January 26th, 2017 21:31
Corey said:
Such a beautiful and inspiring write. If only people could see their beauty through the eyes of those we love them...everyone would be beautiful! What a beautiful feeling reading your words gave me! Thank you!
January 26th, 2017 21:31
Forgetting A Song
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER ~ I agree my past is painted in music ~ tunes ~ songs ~ choirs ~ dances ~ travel and LOVE ! Because I remember the People I remember the songs and in their turn the Songs bring back the memories of the People and the Places etc. If MUSIC be the FOOD of LOVE ~ PLAY ON ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems & Fusions ~ Thanks B
January 9th, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER ~ I agree my past is painted in music ~ tunes ~ songs ~ choirs ~ dances ~ travel and LOVE ! Because I remember the People I remember the songs and in their turn the Songs bring back the memories of the People and the Places etc. If MUSIC be the FOOD of LOVE ~ PLAY ON ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Hugs BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems & Fusions ~ Thanks B
January 9th, 2017 17:23
Bleed and Break
Augustus said:
Your message is sad but hopeful. Sometimes denial of our aliments is not for the best. Better to face them as you suggest and somehow struggle on. In the struggle we learn all sorts of stuff. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 22:38
Augustus said:
Your message is sad but hopeful. Sometimes denial of our aliments is not for the best. Better to face them as you suggest and somehow struggle on. In the struggle we learn all sorts of stuff. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 22:38
Resigned
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, however so sad. Beautifully expressed. I hope they can find a way to ease your pain. Thanks for sharing!
January 1st, 2017 13:57
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, however so sad. Beautifully expressed. I hope they can find a way to ease your pain. Thanks for sharing!
January 1st, 2017 13:57
Resigned
willyweed said:
a very good expression of pain and fear. I do hope your condition can be eased. peace ww
January 1st, 2017 09:02
willyweed said:
a very good expression of pain and fear. I do hope your condition can be eased. peace ww
January 1st, 2017 09:02
Wild
Francesco said:
Very well written and very descriptive as usual. I enjoyed reasing this. Thank you.
December 26th, 2016 02:24
Francesco said:
Very well written and very descriptive as usual. I enjoyed reasing this. Thank you.
December 26th, 2016 02:24
Beautiful?
Francesco said:
This is a beautiful, evocative poem. Your description so thorough, I could really see a beautiful person (objective of course) despite words sounding somewhat self-deprecating. It also speaks to me of emotional, spiritual growth and self reflection: why is this person unable to see their beauty?
I think this is a feeling many of us can relate to.
Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2016 02:21
Francesco said:
This is a beautiful, evocative poem. Your description so thorough, I could really see a beautiful person (objective of course) despite words sounding somewhat self-deprecating. It also speaks to me of emotional, spiritual growth and self reflection: why is this person unable to see their beauty?
I think this is a feeling many of us can relate to.
Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2016 02:21
The Tigress
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love this poem SILVER because in your metaphors you talk about the role reversals in the Game of Love and I am old enough to have experienced that and it is delicious ! You are ........ A PAWN on my chessboard ~ a KING in my heart ! You play the LION and I the ANTELOPE ~ or I the TIGRESS and you the DEER ~ I was afraid ~ Now I am not ! Thanks for sharing ~ You are a very passionate Poet ~ Yours BRIAN.
December 25th, 2016 17:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I love this poem SILVER because in your metaphors you talk about the role reversals in the Game of Love and I am old enough to have experienced that and it is delicious ! You are ........ A PAWN on my chessboard ~ a KING in my heart ! You play the LION and I the ANTELOPE ~ or I the TIGRESS and you the DEER ~ I was afraid ~ Now I am not ! Thanks for sharing ~ You are a very passionate Poet ~ Yours BRIAN.
December 25th, 2016 17:12
Beautiful?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is a BEAUTIFUL Poem SILVER ~ because it examines the external physical things that people consider the\"source of beauty ~ our FACE & FIGURE and are dismissive of them because of your self-image ~ BUT you really are beautiful physically because YOU are YOU ! And YES you do have beautiful inner qualities also ~ your mind & personality. It is YOU he considers beautiful ~ the whole package ~ Face ~ Body ~ Mind & Personality ~ so believe him ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 25th, 2016 16:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is a BEAUTIFUL Poem SILVER ~ because it examines the external physical things that people consider the\"source of beauty ~ our FACE & FIGURE and are dismissive of them because of your self-image ~ BUT you really are beautiful physically because YOU are YOU ! And YES you do have beautiful inner qualities also ~ your mind & personality. It is YOU he considers beautiful ~ the whole package ~ Face ~ Body ~ Mind & Personality ~ so believe him ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 25th, 2016 16:59
The Tigress
willyweed said:
very well written and an interesting read thanks for that. ww
December 24th, 2016 16:47
willyweed said:
very well written and an interesting read thanks for that. ww
December 24th, 2016 16:47
Not Silly
WriteBeLight said:
Could apply to a lot of things in life. So sorry about your favorite sweatshirt! Merry Christmas!
December 22nd, 2016 19:01
WriteBeLight said:
Could apply to a lot of things in life. So sorry about your favorite sweatshirt! Merry Christmas!
December 22nd, 2016 19:01
A Quiet Being
SabreLi said:
I like how this one takes us on a journey through your very existance; a very introspective and reflective piece. xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:58
SabreLi said:
I like how this one takes us on a journey through your very existance; a very introspective and reflective piece. xx
December 22nd, 2016 15:58
A Quiet Being
willyweed said:
This is well written, it seems a peek behind the closed door. good flow and structure in this work> write on! ww
December 21st, 2016 11:28
willyweed said:
This is well written, it seems a peek behind the closed door. good flow and structure in this work> write on! ww
December 21st, 2016 11:28
Edited for Clarity
Augustus said:
Oh, don\'t get me started on the media. You do have a point. I like in depth discussions on topics presenting all sides.
December 9th, 2016 23:49
Augustus said:
Oh, don\'t get me started on the media. You do have a point. I like in depth discussions on topics presenting all sides.
December 9th, 2016 23:49
Edited for Clarity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELL SIVLER ~ We must understand That CLARITY produces BREVITY (one sheet of A4) and prevents DEPRAVITY ~ stops us seeing things (or knowing things) we shouldn\'t and in a PC World it eliminates UNCERTAINTY & AMBIGUITY ~ we all follow the same sacred code ! For every CLARITY SHEET of A4 ~ there are also 100 pages on line ~ which of coure we never bother to read because they are always full of convoluted GOBBLE - DE - GOOK is that CLEAR ~ OK ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 9th, 2016 19:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELL SIVLER ~ We must understand That CLARITY produces BREVITY (one sheet of A4) and prevents DEPRAVITY ~ stops us seeing things (or knowing things) we shouldn\'t and in a PC World it eliminates UNCERTAINTY & AMBIGUITY ~ we all follow the same sacred code ! For every CLARITY SHEET of A4 ~ there are also 100 pages on line ~ which of coure we never bother to read because they are always full of convoluted GOBBLE - DE - GOOK is that CLEAR ~ OK ~ Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 9th, 2016 19:33
The Darkness In My Blood and the Truth In My Eyes
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah engaging epic here, I like how u say u r daughter of the moon, as I\'m a lunar lover. The imagery part is great as well in this musing soulful appealing poem. U r a young budding poetess.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too , Pls dont forget to. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 4th, 2016 02:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah engaging epic here, I like how u say u r daughter of the moon, as I\'m a lunar lover. The imagery part is great as well in this musing soulful appealing poem. U r a young budding poetess.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too , Pls dont forget to. I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 4th, 2016 02:55
Carousel
Izzi Lynn said:
Oh my gosh, thank you all for commenting, this means so much to me! I appreciate this
October 16th, 2016 17:23
Izzi Lynn said:
Oh my gosh, thank you all for commenting, this means so much to me! I appreciate this
October 16th, 2016 17:23
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