Comments received on poems by Izzi Lynn
A Chemical Reaction
Summersounds68 said:
A very profound poem. Do no apologize for your writing. Apparently it helps unload a heavy heart. Keep writing every day when you can. Journaling is good for our souls as well as praying. ~ Sonia
October 10th, 2016 10:54
Summersounds68 said:
A very profound poem. Do no apologize for your writing. Apparently it helps unload a heavy heart. Keep writing every day when you can. Journaling is good for our souls as well as praying. ~ Sonia
October 10th, 2016 10:54
A Chemical Reaction
Augustus said:
A very personal poem. Thanks for the explanation. I liked the perfect storm stanza.
October 9th, 2016 22:33
Augustus said:
A very personal poem. Thanks for the explanation. I liked the perfect storm stanza.
October 9th, 2016 22:33
Sliding Away
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER for a well written poem. Love the concept of HAWK and IZZI KAT ! I do call some of the Ladies on MPS "SISTER" but never LITTLE SIS (WOULDN'T DARE !) I'm 33 but when I was young we didn't have mobiles so when my GF's moved away communication was difficult (almost impossible !). You have mobiles and you don't have to let each other GO ~ However as you say (and it's happens !) "He's fading and I'm slipping away" Yours BRIAN Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2016 18:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER for a well written poem. Love the concept of HAWK and IZZI KAT ! I do call some of the Ladies on MPS "SISTER" but never LITTLE SIS (WOULDN'T DARE !) I'm 33 but when I was young we didn't have mobiles so when my GF's moved away communication was difficult (almost impossible !). You have mobiles and you don't have to let each other GO ~ However as you say (and it's happens !) "He's fading and I'm slipping away" Yours BRIAN Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
September 22nd, 2016 18:05
Earthquake
Augustus said:
You nailed it. If there are problems we can all decide to ignore them, sit around and complain or do something . If Paul Revere chose not to ride would it all be the same? I like the butterfly analogy.
September 10th, 2016 20:27
Augustus said:
You nailed it. If there are problems we can all decide to ignore them, sit around and complain or do something . If Paul Revere chose not to ride would it all be the same? I like the butterfly analogy.
September 10th, 2016 20:27
Earthquake
Jeff said:
Very well written and an excellent message...great work
September 10th, 2016 14:08
Jeff said:
Very well written and an excellent message...great work
September 10th, 2016 14:08
Phoenix
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER for a great poem of hope and perseverance ! This is my experience too. If I stand firm in times of adversity I will survive the flames and like PHOENIX I will rise again ~ from the ashes of defeat and despair ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 01:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER for a great poem of hope and perseverance ! This is my experience too. If I stand firm in times of adversity I will survive the flames and like PHOENIX I will rise again ~ from the ashes of defeat and despair ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 01:40
Butterfly
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SILVER ~ this a very beautiful poem but also a very challenging one. Wherever I go in the World in Spring and Summer there are always Butterflies in a vast range of size and colour ~ but all beautiful Their beauty and ephemeral nature does give us joy and wonder. I know many people who are just like butterflies who by their very presence bring love ~ joy ~ peace ! What a World if we were all Butterflies. But (as you indicate) everywhere I go there are also "starving and ravenous monsters" going about seeking whom they may devour ~ motivated by Satan himself. You and I can make a difference by being Butterflies in all we do and seeking to encourage others to be Butterflies as well ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 17:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SILVER ~ this a very beautiful poem but also a very challenging one. Wherever I go in the World in Spring and Summer there are always Butterflies in a vast range of size and colour ~ but all beautiful Their beauty and ephemeral nature does give us joy and wonder. I know many people who are just like butterflies who by their very presence bring love ~ joy ~ peace ! What a World if we were all Butterflies. But (as you indicate) everywhere I go there are also "starving and ravenous monsters" going about seeking whom they may devour ~ motivated by Satan himself. You and I can make a difference by being Butterflies in all we do and seeking to encourage others to be Butterflies as well ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 17:42
Butterfly
thatsilentgirl said:
This poem makes a whole lot of sense! I ♥ this and can totally relate this! This is awesome and should be read by everyone! I rather be the butterfly. I wish everyone would.
You truly did well with this.
July 21st, 2016 13:13
thatsilentgirl said:
This poem makes a whole lot of sense! I ♥ this and can totally relate this! This is awesome and should be read by everyone! I rather be the butterfly. I wish everyone would.
You truly did well with this.
July 21st, 2016 13:13
Butterfly
IAmJaz said:
I absolutely love this poem! It would be so amazing if we could just all put our differences aside and instead, value each other for what makes us "different". This is by far, one of the BEST poems that I've seen on here! Much love - jaz 💘
July 21st, 2016 12:57
IAmJaz said:
I absolutely love this poem! It would be so amazing if we could just all put our differences aside and instead, value each other for what makes us "different". This is by far, one of the BEST poems that I've seen on here! Much love - jaz 💘
July 21st, 2016 12:57
Silent Destiny
IAmJaz said:
Isn't it funny how life is when you don't accept the opportunities in front of you? lol I feel like I totally connect with this poem!
July 19th, 2016 23:40
IAmJaz said:
Isn't it funny how life is when you don't accept the opportunities in front of you? lol I feel like I totally connect with this poem!
July 19th, 2016 23:40
Sick To My Stomach
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SILVER ~ For caring so so much and sharing such a painful poem ! It happens ~ but you can't just disappear ~ you have to tell him ! Every time my Parents moved and every time I move I grieve for weeks for all those I have left behind. BUT ~ I always try to make new friends and move on ~ BUT ~ it's very very painful ! Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 14:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SILVER ~ For caring so so much and sharing such a painful poem ! It happens ~ but you can't just disappear ~ you have to tell him ! Every time my Parents moved and every time I move I grieve for weeks for all those I have left behind. BUT ~ I always try to make new friends and move on ~ BUT ~ it's very very painful ! Yours BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 14:17
Past Her Limit
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER ~ What you describe is true for all of us ~ M & F ~ because we all have limits ! Modern life often pushes us over them. M & F react in different ways ! In my experience as a Student Councillor ~ Females often self-harm. So do Males but more sacrificially by driving when drunk or stoned or jumping off railway bridges or buildings ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 13:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SILVER ~ What you describe is true for all of us ~ M & F ~ because we all have limits ! Modern life often pushes us over them. M & F react in different ways ! In my experience as a Student Councillor ~ Females often self-harm. So do Males but more sacrificially by driving when drunk or stoned or jumping off railway bridges or buildings ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 13:19
Past Her Limit
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, we all feel this way every so often. You did an excellent job bringing forth The emotional turmoil in this poem.
July 8th, 2016 12:25
Tony36 said:
Awesome write, we all feel this way every so often. You did an excellent job bringing forth The emotional turmoil in this poem.
July 8th, 2016 12:25
Past Her Limit
PerpetualFlowers said:
Wow, I relate to this feeling completely, good writing. I can feel the emotion behind it..similar to how I write..good work seriously..hope you feel better
July 8th, 2016 11:45
PerpetualFlowers said:
Wow, I relate to this feeling completely, good writing. I can feel the emotion behind it..similar to how I write..good work seriously..hope you feel better
July 8th, 2016 11:45
Rampage
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SILVER ~ For sharing your experience and fears. My DAD is a kind Man so I can sympathize but not empathize because I have never had such an experience. It must be awful to live in fear of the one who should love you most ~ but is so so destructive. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 04:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SILVER ~ For sharing your experience and fears. My DAD is a kind Man so I can sympathize but not empathize because I have never had such an experience. It must be awful to live in fear of the one who should love you most ~ but is so so destructive. Thinking of you and praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN
July 7th, 2016 04:16
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