Comments received on poems by Izzi Lynn
Mr. President
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, like Michael I feel I cannot comment but just have to agree with what Michael has said.
September 16th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, like Michael I feel I cannot comment but just have to agree with what Michael has said.
September 16th, 2018 01:34
Mr. President
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IZZY very well put my Sentiments as well. Im from the UK so I didn\'t have a VOTE. Only an ANARCHIST would vote for TRUMP but I wouldn\'t have abstained ~ like many millions of Americans did and certainly ended up with the ~ worst US President ever ! I sure woukd have voted for GRANMA HILLARY at least she knows what DEMOCRACY is and understands the CONSTITUTION ! I like MIKE PENCE and maybe His turn will come soon. thanks for sharing & caring ~ please check my POEM on US Presidents ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 18:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks IZZY very well put my Sentiments as well. Im from the UK so I didn\'t have a VOTE. Only an ANARCHIST would vote for TRUMP but I wouldn\'t have abstained ~ like many millions of Americans did and certainly ended up with the ~ worst US President ever ! I sure woukd have voted for GRANMA HILLARY at least she knows what DEMOCRACY is and understands the CONSTITUTION ! I like MIKE PENCE and maybe His turn will come soon. thanks for sharing & caring ~ please check my POEM on US Presidents ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 15th, 2018 18:19
Mr. President
Michael Edwards said:
A heart felt plea so well put.
As a Brit I hesitate to criticise the choice of President by the people in another country (although he wasn\'t the peoples choice - so much for democracy) but I must say that the respect for him overseas is almost non-existent. Such a sad state of affairs for the leader of such a great country.
September 15th, 2018 16:20
Michael Edwards said:
A heart felt plea so well put.
As a Brit I hesitate to criticise the choice of President by the people in another country (although he wasn\'t the peoples choice - so much for democracy) but I must say that the respect for him overseas is almost non-existent. Such a sad state of affairs for the leader of such a great country.
September 15th, 2018 16:20
god there is something swelling inside of me
Crystal Hope said:
Your description and emotions are greatly done in this poem
September 3rd, 2018 22:46
Crystal Hope said:
Your description and emotions are greatly done in this poem
September 3rd, 2018 22:46
lucifer
fuche_bu said:
Lucifer is not without sin but that makes him more like us than most will admit. Nice poem here.
September 1st, 2018 19:19
fuche_bu said:
Lucifer is not without sin but that makes him more like us than most will admit. Nice poem here.
September 1st, 2018 19:19
gospel
MendedFences27 said:
Izzi - Wow! what a powerful message.
Your writing, your form of communication, the images you have created or reported, are all amazing.You have a true talent, please continue to write, and to express your emotions with color as you\'ve done here. Sometimes it\'s best to not say directly how you feel, but to show it in images .
Loved this poem. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2018 16:04
MendedFences27 said:
Izzi - Wow! what a powerful message.
Your writing, your form of communication, the images you have created or reported, are all amazing.You have a true talent, please continue to write, and to express your emotions with color as you\'ve done here. Sometimes it\'s best to not say directly how you feel, but to show it in images .
Loved this poem. - Phil A.
August 9th, 2018 16:04
gospel
orchidee said:
Well here in the UK there is a band called The Hoosiers. One of the singers was in a church youth group I used to help with - true!
August 9th, 2018 13:18
orchidee said:
Well here in the UK there is a band called The Hoosiers. One of the singers was in a church youth group I used to help with - true!
August 9th, 2018 13:18
gospel
Crystal Hope said:
This is a fantastic piece. I like the descending part.
August 9th, 2018 12:22
Crystal Hope said:
This is a fantastic piece. I like the descending part.
August 9th, 2018 12:22
Body Dysphoria
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As one past teenage worries I can advise all teenagers to neither overeat and neither under eat. Just a balanced diet and exercise and if the body still keeps on gaining weight then know that you are pretty just like that and many would love u as u are. Your epic is expressed in a very interesting creative way but it\'s great to read you came up and rose with positivity instead of hankering after the impossible and killing yourself in the process. Keep up the positive vibes of wisdom and inspire the many who had been in your shoes. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"
July 12th, 2018 12:11
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
As one past teenage worries I can advise all teenagers to neither overeat and neither under eat. Just a balanced diet and exercise and if the body still keeps on gaining weight then know that you are pretty just like that and many would love u as u are. Your epic is expressed in a very interesting creative way but it\'s great to read you came up and rose with positivity instead of hankering after the impossible and killing yourself in the process. Keep up the positive vibes of wisdom and inspire the many who had been in your shoes. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"
July 12th, 2018 12:11
Body Dysphoria
Heartwriter said:
I agree withhodgetiger. Beautiful words. You deserve happiness.
July 10th, 2018 16:41
Heartwriter said:
I agree withhodgetiger. Beautiful words. You deserve happiness.
July 10th, 2018 16:41
Four Apocalyptic Horsemen With No Horses
MLHnow said:
Wow is all I can say! Your words fill up all of my moment. You have captured a place than has too much depth for mere lines on paper-MLH
June 2nd, 2018 14:44
MLHnow said:
Wow is all I can say! Your words fill up all of my moment. You have captured a place than has too much depth for mere lines on paper-MLH
June 2nd, 2018 14:44
A Tribute to Families and Funerals
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Izzi, it is the young of America that will be able to change the ways and make guns less accessible. This poem is so powerful it should be shown to others in your country, spread the word.
May 30th, 2018 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong write Izzi, it is the young of America that will be able to change the ways and make guns less accessible. This poem is so powerful it should be shown to others in your country, spread the word.
May 30th, 2018 01:10
written
Poetic Dan said:
I read that so fast in my head, felt like reading miss chatterbox to the kids again. You\'ve captured so moments of my life, thank you so much for an outstanding picture we created together.
Much love and respect
May 28th, 2018 17:36
Poetic Dan said:
I read that so fast in my head, felt like reading miss chatterbox to the kids again. You\'ve captured so moments of my life, thank you so much for an outstanding picture we created together.
Much love and respect
May 28th, 2018 17:36
Sinner
orchidee said:
What I am, what anyone is, is at St Francis of Assist put it: \'What a person is before God, that they are, and nothing more\' . When we see Him one day, \'I\', that is, myself, shall not insist on anything of me, of \'I\', but shall bow down in worship to Him.
April 29th, 2018 01:33
orchidee said:
What I am, what anyone is, is at St Francis of Assist put it: \'What a person is before God, that they are, and nothing more\' . When we see Him one day, \'I\', that is, myself, shall not insist on anything of me, of \'I\', but shall bow down in worship to Him.
April 29th, 2018 01:33
guns and glory and children too young to know what death is
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
my high school just had a gun threat on friday
April 23rd, 2018 07:26
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
my high school just had a gun threat on friday
April 23rd, 2018 07:26
guns and glory and children too young to know what death is
onepauly said:
you have my sympathy.
what else can I give?
let it be known.
April 22nd, 2018 07:41
onepauly said:
you have my sympathy.
what else can I give?
let it be known.
April 22nd, 2018 07:41
guns and glory and children too young to know what death is
Lorna said:
This is a horrific and unnatural way to live - it\'s what happens in third world countries ...... please vote out the people who won\'t listen at the mid term elections....... we need the young people to do this as there are so many of you now........
April 22nd, 2018 06:18
Lorna said:
This is a horrific and unnatural way to live - it\'s what happens in third world countries ...... please vote out the people who won\'t listen at the mid term elections....... we need the young people to do this as there are so many of you now........
April 22nd, 2018 06:18
Seven Deadly Sins: Gluttony
Aislinn Wilson said:
The longing resonates powerfully. I really like this one.
January 17th, 2018 13:46
Aislinn Wilson said:
The longing resonates powerfully. I really like this one.
January 17th, 2018 13:46
Dark
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is such a fantastical look inside, and I can\'t help but wish I got to see more and even more clearly! I love your writing!
January 15th, 2018 20:08
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is such a fantastical look inside, and I can\'t help but wish I got to see more and even more clearly! I love your writing!
January 15th, 2018 20:08
Heartbeat Rage
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh my u can write such an imaginative epic, enjoyed the muse in the first stanzas and the rest was fine too. Great u can write so much at your young age. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh my u can write such an imaginative epic, enjoyed the muse in the first stanzas and the rest was fine too. Great u can write so much at your young age. Thumbs up.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"
January 9th, 2018 23:54
Seven Deadly Sins- Sloth
space_girl said:
Kinda of dark , but it’s still a great write :)
December 20th, 2017 10:16
space_girl said:
Kinda of dark , but it’s still a great write :)
December 20th, 2017 10:16
Seven Deadly Sins- Envy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS IZZY ~ Another Great ODE ~ this time \"TO ENVY\" The GOOD BOOK says we should be CONTENTED with the Hand that Life has dealt us. Because I live in England and have a Flat ~ a Car ~ a Job I enjoy ~ Good Health \"An active Mind in a Healthy Body\" no debts and no addictions and a very nice GF (ANGELA) etc etc I am not Envious and I have much more than most people my age in this Planet ! I can only live one life ~ have one \"Special GF\" ~ one job ~ one car ~ one Place to live in ~ SO I COUNT MY BLESSINGS ! I am grateful to GOD for who I am ~ where I am ~ the People I\'m with and my extended Family ~ I am a contented Man ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 12:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS IZZY ~ Another Great ODE ~ this time \"TO ENVY\" The GOOD BOOK says we should be CONTENTED with the Hand that Life has dealt us. Because I live in England and have a Flat ~ a Car ~ a Job I enjoy ~ Good Health \"An active Mind in a Healthy Body\" no debts and no addictions and a very nice GF (ANGELA) etc etc I am not Envious and I have much more than most people my age in this Planet ! I can only live one life ~ have one \"Special GF\" ~ one job ~ one car ~ one Place to live in ~ SO I COUNT MY BLESSINGS ! I am grateful to GOD for who I am ~ where I am ~ the People I\'m with and my extended Family ~ I am a contented Man ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN (UK)
December 19th, 2017 12:37
Seven Deadly Sins- Lust
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS IZZI ~ Yes LUST ~ because we are HUMAN it is a SIN we are all prone to ! You written it \"naturally\" from a Female perspective ~ in MY EXPERIENCE ~ Ladies are more often the OBJECT of LUST than the SUJECT ! I love the way you describe the \"heat\" of \"Female Lust\" ! You mention LONELINESS at the beginning and DESIRE in the presence of an \"available\" MALE. All the LADIES in my Circle are not lonely and the majority have a satisfying love life ~ BUT ~ I go on quite a few Residential Science Conferences and Field Courses and one does encounter Lonely & Unloved Females who make the first move ! I am SINGLE but in a stable relationship with ANGELA so in recent years I have enjoyed a drink and a chat etc with \"Lustful Ladies\" but have NOT reciprocated ! Thanks for an excellent Poem on a provocative subject ~ Yours BRIAN Please add a Poem to the \"LOVE IS\" Fusion from the lovely CHRISTINA S ~ Thanks B.
December 18th, 2017 13:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS IZZI ~ Yes LUST ~ because we are HUMAN it is a SIN we are all prone to ! You written it \"naturally\" from a Female perspective ~ in MY EXPERIENCE ~ Ladies are more often the OBJECT of LUST than the SUJECT ! I love the way you describe the \"heat\" of \"Female Lust\" ! You mention LONELINESS at the beginning and DESIRE in the presence of an \"available\" MALE. All the LADIES in my Circle are not lonely and the majority have a satisfying love life ~ BUT ~ I go on quite a few Residential Science Conferences and Field Courses and one does encounter Lonely & Unloved Females who make the first move ! I am SINGLE but in a stable relationship with ANGELA so in recent years I have enjoyed a drink and a chat etc with \"Lustful Ladies\" but have NOT reciprocated ! Thanks for an excellent Poem on a provocative subject ~ Yours BRIAN Please add a Poem to the \"LOVE IS\" Fusion from the lovely CHRISTINA S ~ Thanks B.
December 18th, 2017 13:05
Seven Deadly Sins- Greed
Laura🌻 said:
All that gold and diamonds will weigh me down! Nice job Izzi!
December 14th, 2017 14:52
Laura🌻 said:
All that gold and diamonds will weigh me down! Nice job Izzi!
December 14th, 2017 14:52
letting go
winternightsky123 said:
Oh my gosh this poem is amazing! I love it so much! 😍
November 27th, 2017 12:21
winternightsky123 said:
Oh my gosh this poem is amazing! I love it so much! 😍
November 27th, 2017 12:21
west coast angel
chinaaliciarivera said:
Very interesting and creatively written piece. Nice. ❤💗💕😊
October 3rd, 2017 21:57
chinaaliciarivera said:
Very interesting and creatively written piece. Nice. ❤💗💕😊
October 3rd, 2017 21:57
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