Comments received on poems by avigail
The resolution of cleaning
burning-embers said:
Hee hee hee, any excuse to stop that cleaning chore - why do u think i write so much? Nice one.
August 5th, 2017 20:47
burning-embers said:
Hee hee hee, any excuse to stop that cleaning chore - why do u think i write so much? Nice one.
August 5th, 2017 20:47
The resolution of cleaning
FredPeyer said:
Great poem. I should take it as a metaphor for my life....don\'t worry about the little things.
August 5th, 2017 12:59
FredPeyer said:
Great poem. I should take it as a metaphor for my life....don\'t worry about the little things.
August 5th, 2017 12:59
The resolution of cleaning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ from a Scientific point of view we call it ENTROPY (disorder !) Because the Entropy of the Universe is increasing there will always be Muddled Bookcases ~ Chaotic Cutlery Drawers ~ Dusty Bedrooms and Untidy Gardens. As we grow up and acquire our own Flat or House we have to face ENTROPY (increasing disorder) and appreciate how much dusting ~ washing ~ ironing ~ tidying up after us our Mothers did every day ! However I find If I tolerate a soupcon of disorder (which is natural) life becomes much easier and less frenetic ~ OK Tidiness & obsessive Cleanliness Freaks drive me mad ~ BUT ~ I am a Food Hygiene Freak so everything is COVERED ~ FRIDGED ~ FROZEN ! Thanks for rattling my cage ! Love & Hugs (I\'ve just had a shower so I smell like a Pine Tree) ~ BRIAN ~ the Microbe Hunter ! Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 11:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ from a Scientific point of view we call it ENTROPY (disorder !) Because the Entropy of the Universe is increasing there will always be Muddled Bookcases ~ Chaotic Cutlery Drawers ~ Dusty Bedrooms and Untidy Gardens. As we grow up and acquire our own Flat or House we have to face ENTROPY (increasing disorder) and appreciate how much dusting ~ washing ~ ironing ~ tidying up after us our Mothers did every day ! However I find If I tolerate a soupcon of disorder (which is natural) life becomes much easier and less frenetic ~ OK Tidiness & obsessive Cleanliness Freaks drive me mad ~ BUT ~ I am a Food Hygiene Freak so everything is COVERED ~ FRIDGED ~ FROZEN ! Thanks for rattling my cage ! Love & Hugs (I\'ve just had a shower so I smell like a Pine Tree) ~ BRIAN ~ the Microbe Hunter ! Please check my poem ~ Thanks B.
August 5th, 2017 11:17
The resolution of cleaning
Night Owl said:
Love this-- Thanks for your poetic perspective ~:)
August 5th, 2017 11:13
Night Owl said:
Love this-- Thanks for your poetic perspective ~:)
August 5th, 2017 11:13
a recipe for my alergy
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I like your poem. Your happy juice is not only a recipe for S Florida, it works all over the world! My wife swears that whenever she feels a cold coming on, or simply does not feel well, a shot of Kirsch (the real thing from Europe, not the Kirsch Brandy made in the USA) is the best medicine.
August 4th, 2017 20:59
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I like your poem. Your happy juice is not only a recipe for S Florida, it works all over the world! My wife swears that whenever she feels a cold coming on, or simply does not feel well, a shot of Kirsch (the real thing from Europe, not the Kirsch Brandy made in the USA) is the best medicine.
August 4th, 2017 20:59
a recipe for my alergy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well AVI ~ Grapefruit Juice is a good cure for sore throats as is Fresh Orange Juice ! When I stay with my Friends in Tampa on a Sunday Morning after Church there are \"tea chests\" full of oranges and grapefruit all for free. I have been a bit a bit hoarse since returning fro Cuba (Feidel Castro\'s Revenge ?) so i would love to drink some of your HAPPY JUICE ! Oranges & Pineapples are expensive in the UK ! Love & Citrus Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
August 4th, 2017 19:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well AVI ~ Grapefruit Juice is a good cure for sore throats as is Fresh Orange Juice ! When I stay with my Friends in Tampa on a Sunday Morning after Church there are \"tea chests\" full of oranges and grapefruit all for free. I have been a bit a bit hoarse since returning fro Cuba (Feidel Castro\'s Revenge ?) so i would love to drink some of your HAPPY JUICE ! Oranges & Pineapples are expensive in the UK ! Love & Citrus Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX
August 4th, 2017 19:16
One cent psychology:
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THE PSYCHIATRIST IS IN ~ 1 C (Linus !) I prefer to hang loose and I always (as you know) see some good in everybody ! Experience tell me that we are all tainted but we cn all be changed by the \"renewing of our minds\" ! The Behavioural Sciences ar an infinite field of study ~ BUT ~ For Man (and Woman) HUMAN PSYCHE & BEHAVIOUR is a very appropriate study ! Thanks for caring ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN
August 1st, 2017 12:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THE PSYCHIATRIST IS IN ~ 1 C (Linus !) I prefer to hang loose and I always (as you know) see some good in everybody ! Experience tell me that we are all tainted but we cn all be changed by the \"renewing of our minds\" ! The Behavioural Sciences ar an infinite field of study ~ BUT ~ For Man (and Woman) HUMAN PSYCHE & BEHAVIOUR is a very appropriate study ! Thanks for caring ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN
August 1st, 2017 12:58
One cent psychology:
FredPeyer said:
Met one who was very tight
thinking she was always right
The loose one on the other hand
was happy, funny, rather grand
Tight or loose can be bad or good
I for one take loose, yes I would!
I will send you a private message with my overseas bank account so you can deposit the one cent I just earned!
August 1st, 2017 11:38
FredPeyer said:
Met one who was very tight
thinking she was always right
The loose one on the other hand
was happy, funny, rather grand
Tight or loose can be bad or good
I for one take loose, yes I would!
I will send you a private message with my overseas bank account so you can deposit the one cent I just earned!
August 1st, 2017 11:38
One cent psychology:
Louis Gibbs said:
The light and the dark both dwell within us. Life gives us opportunities to explore and learn from both, wouldn\'t you say? I appreciated this fine poem, Avigail!
August 1st, 2017 10:11
Louis Gibbs said:
The light and the dark both dwell within us. Life gives us opportunities to explore and learn from both, wouldn\'t you say? I appreciated this fine poem, Avigail!
August 1st, 2017 10:11
Little moments of attention we give and receive
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you had attention shown ~ PASS IT ON ! Twas meant for you alone PASS IT ON ! Thanks for reminding us AVI ~ Of how we feel when someone bothers to smile ~ to say HI ~ to give us a HUG etc etc. My feelings are like you ~ we should no only be RECEIVERS of Attention but GIVERS also ! LOVE & HUGS for you ANGEL as always ~ BRIAN
July 31st, 2017 14:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Have you had attention shown ~ PASS IT ON ! Twas meant for you alone PASS IT ON ! Thanks for reminding us AVI ~ Of how we feel when someone bothers to smile ~ to say HI ~ to give us a HUG etc etc. My feelings are like you ~ we should no only be RECEIVERS of Attention but GIVERS also ! LOVE & HUGS for you ANGEL as always ~ BRIAN
July 31st, 2017 14:03
Little moments of attention we give and receive
FredPeyer said:
Avigail you are right on. In today\'s world of cellphones and texting it is that much more important to actually talk to each other. It is also amazing what happens when you smile at a stranger and just say hello. Their faces light up.
July 31st, 2017 14:00
FredPeyer said:
Avigail you are right on. In today\'s world of cellphones and texting it is that much more important to actually talk to each other. It is also amazing what happens when you smile at a stranger and just say hello. Their faces light up.
July 31st, 2017 14:00
How can we eliminate violence with non-violence?
FredPeyer said:
Agree completely with this beautifully written poem, Avigail. BUT am afraid that humanity is not yet at this point and will not be in the foreseeable future either. You are not naive, you are WAY ahead of our time.
July 31st, 2017 11:32
FredPeyer said:
Agree completely with this beautifully written poem, Avigail. BUT am afraid that humanity is not yet at this point and will not be in the foreseeable future either. You are not naive, you are WAY ahead of our time.
July 31st, 2017 11:32
How can we eliminate violence with non-violence?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well MARTIN LUTHER KING tried ~ So did JESUS bar-JOSEPH a First Century Preacher of Righteousness ~ They both paid with their lives ~ but their legacy is amazing ! Perhaps that is the price demanded of those who would oppose VIOLENCE with NON-VIOLENCE and HATRED with LOVE & PEACE ~ SHALOM ~ Love & Hugs as always BRIAN (UK)
July 30th, 2017 14:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well MARTIN LUTHER KING tried ~ So did JESUS bar-JOSEPH a First Century Preacher of Righteousness ~ They both paid with their lives ~ but their legacy is amazing ! Perhaps that is the price demanded of those who would oppose VIOLENCE with NON-VIOLENCE and HATRED with LOVE & PEACE ~ SHALOM ~ Love & Hugs as always BRIAN (UK)
July 30th, 2017 14:15
How can we eliminate violence with non-violence?
ElenaGrace said:
Very nice. I really like the message as I feel the same way, I just never thought to put it in words. Keep up the good work
July 30th, 2017 10:36
ElenaGrace said:
Very nice. I really like the message as I feel the same way, I just never thought to put it in words. Keep up the good work
July 30th, 2017 10:36
Things that I delay
FredPeyer said:
In my case, to be honest, I guess I would have to say: laziness!
But thanks to your poem I promised myself that I would do it....tomorrow!
July 29th, 2017 12:47
FredPeyer said:
In my case, to be honest, I guess I would have to say: laziness!
But thanks to your poem I promised myself that I would do it....tomorrow!
July 29th, 2017 12:47
Things that I delay
GODisreal said:
I can understand your poem I think that is my main problem holding back and not taking care of things that I should because of fear and the unknown I love your poem
July 29th, 2017 12:28
GODisreal said:
I can understand your poem I think that is my main problem holding back and not taking care of things that I should because of fear and the unknown I love your poem
July 29th, 2017 12:28
TV ads
FredPeyer said:
If the side effects are longer than the ingredients, stay away from it!
Same with food, I don\'t buy anything that has a long list of ingredients.
Thank you for addressing this Avigail! And as usual, you wrote admirably in getting your point across.
July 27th, 2017 11:25
FredPeyer said:
If the side effects are longer than the ingredients, stay away from it!
Same with food, I don\'t buy anything that has a long list of ingredients.
Thank you for addressing this Avigail! And as usual, you wrote admirably in getting your point across.
July 27th, 2017 11:25
TV ads
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ It happens in the UK too also on phone. I just ignore them ~ I prefer face to face (and cheek to cheek) discussion I\'m not really a CYBERMAN at heart ! LOVE & HUGS (across space & time BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 10:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ It happens in the UK too also on phone. I just ignore them ~ I prefer face to face (and cheek to cheek) discussion I\'m not really a CYBERMAN at heart ! LOVE & HUGS (across space & time BRIAN
July 27th, 2017 10:41
TV ads
Louis Gibbs said:
That\'s exactly what I have to watch in graphic detail while I\'m trying to eat my dinner ... Disgusting! Excellent poem, I completely appreciated it, Avigail.
July 27th, 2017 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
That\'s exactly what I have to watch in graphic detail while I\'m trying to eat my dinner ... Disgusting! Excellent poem, I completely appreciated it, Avigail.
July 27th, 2017 10:24
Who is the MMM?
illia said:
My MMM, is my mate Mandy. Triple M, she would not be amused that I had triple M tattooed on my hand. I say with a big grin, dreams are for the ones who have already passed through. And for us so that the memories are still there. Even if I am riding a dragon 🐲 and Mandy is on her horse 🐴, nothing to interpret most times. Good stories though, 🙈,🙉,🙊,✌ xxx...
July 26th, 2017 19:28
illia said:
My MMM, is my mate Mandy. Triple M, she would not be amused that I had triple M tattooed on my hand. I say with a big grin, dreams are for the ones who have already passed through. And for us so that the memories are still there. Even if I am riding a dragon 🐲 and Mandy is on her horse 🐴, nothing to interpret most times. Good stories though, 🙈,🙉,🙊,✌ xxx...
July 26th, 2017 19:28
Deep inside I have wings
FredPeyer said:
Well said Avigail, sometimes just a little push in the right direction is all it needs. And hopefully your wonderful poem can be that push for someone struggling to fly again.
July 26th, 2017 10:17
FredPeyer said:
Well said Avigail, sometimes just a little push in the right direction is all it needs. And hopefully your wonderful poem can be that push for someone struggling to fly again.
July 26th, 2017 10:17
Deep inside I have wings
Azura Nightsong said:
We all have potential and abilities that sometimes get suppressed by drama, but they always come back eventually!
I enjoyed this immensely.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
Azura Nightsong said:
We all have potential and abilities that sometimes get suppressed by drama, but they always come back eventually!
I enjoyed this immensely.
July 26th, 2017 09:02
Deep inside I have wings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us AVI ~ we all have untapped inner resources which would enable us to FLY ! I know ~ in most of exchanges you are the GURU and I your PUPIL am honoured to sit at your feet ! You are much WISER and more EXPERIENCED than I will ever be ! However in your final Stanza ~ there is an admission ~ the I could hold your hand ~ and for a moment our roles could reverse ? I know you trust me ~ and I know I am sincere ! Love & Hugs ~ Always at your Service YOUR DISCIPLE BRIAN
July 26th, 2017 08:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us AVI ~ we all have untapped inner resources which would enable us to FLY ! I know ~ in most of exchanges you are the GURU and I your PUPIL am honoured to sit at your feet ! You are much WISER and more EXPERIENCED than I will ever be ! However in your final Stanza ~ there is an admission ~ the I could hold your hand ~ and for a moment our roles could reverse ? I know you trust me ~ and I know I am sincere ! Love & Hugs ~ Always at your Service YOUR DISCIPLE BRIAN
July 26th, 2017 08:18
What is stored in your beliefs closet?
FredPeyer said:
So true Avigail, our belief closet does need to be cleaned out every once in a while, just like all the junk we accumulate in the rest of our house.
July 25th, 2017 11:54
FredPeyer said:
So true Avigail, our belief closet does need to be cleaned out every once in a while, just like all the junk we accumulate in the rest of our house.
July 25th, 2017 11:54
Who is the MMM?
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I always wondered about that. Figured my MMM must be a clown, or maybe mentally disturbed. :)
July 23rd, 2017 15:12
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I always wondered about that. Figured my MMM must be a clown, or maybe mentally disturbed. :)
July 23rd, 2017 15:12
Who is the MMM?
charlesbarrett said:
Good poem. Very imaginative with some very thought provoking questions about our dreams. I appreciate this. Thanks for sharing.
July 23rd, 2017 14:16
charlesbarrett said:
Good poem. Very imaginative with some very thought provoking questions about our dreams. I appreciate this. Thanks for sharing.
July 23rd, 2017 14:16
Who is the MMM?
Louis Gibbs said:
There is much to be gained by examining a dream immediately upon waking. Good advice, and a good poem, Avigail!
July 23rd, 2017 14:09
Louis Gibbs said:
There is much to be gained by examining a dream immediately upon waking. Good advice, and a good poem, Avigail!
July 23rd, 2017 14:09
Levels of under-standing
FredPeyer said:
Avi, I like how you challenge us to think about things we just accept and take for granted.
According to the extremely useful and interesting Online Etymology Dictionary (www.etymonline.com), understand comes from old English. In those days, under did not mean \"beneath\", but \"among, between\", a semantic thread that goes all the way back to the Sanskrit word antar.
I guess \'understanding\' happens when we connect the threads \'between\' different inputs and choose \'among\' different solutions.
July 21st, 2017 11:47
FredPeyer said:
Avi, I like how you challenge us to think about things we just accept and take for granted.
According to the extremely useful and interesting Online Etymology Dictionary (www.etymonline.com), understand comes from old English. In those days, under did not mean \"beneath\", but \"among, between\", a semantic thread that goes all the way back to the Sanskrit word antar.
I guess \'understanding\' happens when we connect the threads \'between\' different inputs and choose \'among\' different solutions.
July 21st, 2017 11:47
Levels of under-standing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well AVI ~ You know i am your MPS Disciple ~ so i always sit at your feet ~ is that the same as standing under you ~ in search of fully UNDERSTANDING YOU ? Love you lots ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN your faithful Disciple
July 21st, 2017 09:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Well AVI ~ You know i am your MPS Disciple ~ so i always sit at your feet ~ is that the same as standing under you ~ in search of fully UNDERSTANDING YOU ? Love you lots ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN your faithful Disciple
July 21st, 2017 09:36
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