Comments received on poems by avigail



sometimes you feel lonely
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ This is so so beautiful. We all feel like that at times ~ and long to be hugged and cherished. I have had a hectic week and now (after reading your soothing words ~ breathing deep ~ and giving myself an inner hug) ~ I feel better already) In my mind I am sitting at your feet and drinking at your fountain of love and wisdom ~ you have enchanted me again with your words and loving nature ! Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

May 13th, 2017 16:51

The decisions i make
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhhh AVI ~ I love the Ying & Yang of this poem and making decisions doing THIS & doing THAT. You can lie (au natural) on my VIBROACOUSTIC THERAPY MAT anytime ~ I have one at College for the pleasure and instruction of my Beauty Therapy Students. When I stay behind at night and use it ~ it does make me think ~ and make some resolutions ! The seven other meditative situations you describe are equally stimulating ! In essence ~ You are teaching us ~ that whatever state (or State) or situation we find ourselves in ~ 24/7 we have decision opportunities which just might affect the course of our lives ~ awesome. You are altogether Lovely AVI and every poem is another revelationary (and sometimes revolutionary) step on Life\'s Journey. I Love to sit at your Feet and drink at your Fountain ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN ~ always hungry (and thirsty) for more ! Please check my poem today on CHARACTER TRAIT ~ A Sonnet ~ Thanks B.

May 8th, 2017 10:08

The school of awareness
swingline said:

By hybrid I take it you mean we are created in the image of God . And awreness does not exist when a tree falls in the forest when no one is around . So our reach of existence extends no futher than our comprehension ot the minds ability to absorb . Yet most of our DNA has yest to be plugged into it\'s future purpose . It was not placed there by evolution for there was no reason for it\'s existence . Those unused genetic codes will become aware someday and then their existence will define the future of modern man .

May 5th, 2017 14:13

The school of awareness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI for another lesson and insight into AWARENESS ! It is a very important \"trait\" which we need to keep alive (and alert) at all times. I am very aware of what is happening in my own community and i get involved with a wide spectrum of people in dicussion ~ debate and \"heat searching\". I have bothered to have a working knowledge of German ~ French ~ Spanish & Italian so that when I do travel i can read information and have a dialogue ~ I am visiting CUBA for two weeks in JUNE and I found when i visited Mexico some Knowledge of Spanish and of the Country is essential. Its the same with every thing ~ the more knowledge and experience and understanding one has ~ the more INNER and OUTER AWARENESS one has. ! Most of us only have less than 100 years on Planet Earth and my belief is I will go to the Spiritual Dimension (Heaven) and NOT be reincarnated back on Earth ! But when i get to Heaven I will have to give an account of how AWARE I was whilst on Earth ~ so i value your \"Lesson for Today\" ~ Thanks for sharing and caring ! Love and heartfelt Hugs ~ BRIAN

May 5th, 2017 13:43

The school of awareness
avigail said:

observing in realtime, dynamic exansion of perception from a limited mindset

May 5th, 2017 12:21

Self-healing
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ we all need an inner HUG. I am a BIOCHEMIST soi do appreciate all of my organs (individually) and try to maintain SYMBIOSIS by healthy eating ~ exercise and avoiding narcotics etc. But the motto is MENS SANA IN CORPORE SANO ~So the Mind & Body must work in harmony to optimise self healing ! You are a very wise Lady and I love You for being You ~ Loving Hugs & Cuddles ~ BRIAN

May 3rd, 2017 12:37

Cherish yourself
swingline said:

They say you can\"t love someone else until you love yourself first .

May 3rd, 2017 01:48

Cherish yourself
Hopey_xx said:

Very nice and inspirational poem!

May 2nd, 2017 15:46

Connectivity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW AVI THIS IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL ! Its Beauty lies in its completeness and the fact that its \"color~coded\" ~ Color is so so important and so so dominant in all our lives ! I\'ll start at the end form the Infinite down to the finite. Our Creator (GOD) designed DNA to be a universal blueprint ! When Rosy Franklin (who was a Jewess) saw the CRICK / WATSON DNA Model she exclaimed \"It\'s too beautiful ~ not to be correct !\" God is infinite and the variations of the Genetic Code are also infinite ~ AMEN. Next come the Milky Way (which is finite) ~ Then the Solar System ~ Then our Global Village (I\'ve travelled round it from London to London) Planet Earth awesome and unique ~ You and I closely related as Earthlings ! They are the last four of your THIRTEEN (SACRED NUMBER) ENERGY CENTRES ! I then lock in (with you) to 9. Infinite being 8. White Spiral ~ Crown above my Head 7.. Violet ~ Forehead 6.. Blue ~ Neck & Throat 5\'. Green ~ Our Hearts 4. Yellow ~ Bellies 3. Orange ~ Our Reproductive Systems 2. Red ~ Pelvis & Hips 1. Our Feet ~ firmly on the ground. We are one with our Creator and one wit each other ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN


April 30th, 2017 19:00

clouds and mind clouds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ The message I\'m getting here is: \"Don\'t let the World squeeze you into its own mold ~ you are much too precious for that (you always make me feel special !) ~ be an INDIVIDUAL ~ and be \"transformed\" by the renewing of you mind ! In other words don\'t let the carnal systems \"cloud you mind\" but clear them away by the \"Power of constructive thinking\". We can (as you say) have our minds clouded by thoughts ~ emotions ~ memories ~ imaginations ~ sensations ~ beliefs etc. These are all important facets of our conscious and sub-conscious mind ~ but they often become overpowering and need to be dispersed. Thanks for caring ~ when i read your poems ~ i feel you near me and the scent and sensation is BEAUTIFUL ! Love & Hugs ~ Your Loving pupil ~ BRIAN

April 30th, 2017 17:27

reinventing yourself
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ Confucius He say ~ Before you start on journey you must be more aware of your destination ~ than when you are there ! I take this advice and I KNOW where I\'m going do you ? Love & Hugs ~ Yours now & forever ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my Poem and my Cities FUSION ~ Thanks B

April 23rd, 2017 10:48

just checking...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ and (by now) you should know me ! I am always ready and willing ~ (but not always able) to be ~ Inspired ~ Excited ~ Intrigued ~ Passionate ~ Motivated ~ I am a Scientist and a Believer in the Spiritual Dimension and when I have LOVED UNCONDITIONALLY ~ I have been transported to a Seventh Heaven ! And I never say NO ! Pierre Curie was weakened by Radioactivity and Marie Curie died of Leukemia but their discoveries Blessed the whole Human Race ~ they never said NO ~ Unconditional Love and Big Hugs ~ BRIAN

April 15th, 2017 14:22

just checking...
vvnrose said:

I like this! Its encouraging to look within and ask those questions that will motivate us live to our potential. Thanks for sharing

April 15th, 2017 14:12

Be like a tree, a special tree
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Very wise advice AVI \"Blessed is the Man ~ whose delight is in the Scriptures ! He is like a TREE planted by rivers of water ~ that brings forth his fruit in the Season ~ his leaf shall not wither ~ and whatever he does will prosper ~ AMEN ~ PSALM 1\" I am blessed AVI that your lovely poem emphasises the Wise Words of the Psalmist in the very First Psalm ~ beautiful. ! GOD wants all of His Children ~ Jews & Gentiles ~ to be Special Trees ~ Evergreen ~ Fruitful and Innovative ~ AMEN I will share your poem with my Group on Sunday ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love & Hugs ~ Yours Brother BRIAN

April 12th, 2017 15:23

Be like a tree, a special tree
Alethia said:

Good poem

April 12th, 2017 14:38

Be like a tree, a special tree
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 12th, 2017 12:51

Be like a tree, a special tree
WriteBeLight said:

Such a wonderful, deep-rooted write Avigail. I really like it :)

April 12th, 2017 12:20

And then you push the button – its time to act!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ Good advice. I am a DOER not a DITHERER especially in real life situations. At work (or in family situations) my favorite riposte to DITHERERS is \"Now is the time to act ~ we\'ve talked about it far too long\" It seems to me (in my experience) there is never the perfect time ~ BUT ~ there are appropriate times to act ~AND ~ it does produce a result (an outcome) and enables the system to move forward. It avoids stagnation or even worse regression. Thanks for caring ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN

April 10th, 2017 15:19

Eden is Here
willyweed said:

I think your on to something here, Avigail? ww

April 8th, 2017 09:47

Eden is Here
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI this is beautiful in both Form & Function becaue it invites us to reach out ~and reach in ~ and rediscover the Garden of Eden which has always been there ! I\'m thinking and searching and hoping ~ Love you because your poems always inspire me ~ Loving Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

April 8th, 2017 09:44

Life, Death and Humblness
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very Surrreal and well-written in a matter of fact type of way....Enjoyed

April 7th, 2017 18:34

Pass Over
Jooles said:

Love this and totally agree

April 5th, 2017 17:54

Pass Over
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS for caring AVI. Even in Christian Circles the word PASSOVER is very emotive and symbolises the Angel of Death passing over the Jewish Houses whose doorposts and lintel were sprinkled with the shed blood of a lamb without blemish. The first born Son in those houses was not slain but was now liberated and able to move out with Moses into the Promised land ~ when PHARAOH finally decided to let God\'s people escape from slavery. So for me the idea of PASSOVER means freedom and release from negativity and attachments etc which bind us to \"EGYPT\" and release into God\'s land of Promise. I love you AVI because you have made me weep again when I think about all the clutter and unnecessary things that hold me down and I can now resolve to PASSOVER FROM ~ AMEN ! Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN

April 4th, 2017 17:37

Pass Over
Jooles said:

Love this and totally agree

April 4th, 2017 16:43

Pass Over
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 4th, 2017 15:14

attention
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for caring AVI ~ about our attention span ~ You always hold mine ! For me I guess interest is the KEY factor. I went to the Theatre tonight ~ it was A STREETCAR NAMED DESIRE by Tennessee Williams ~ awesome ! It held my full attention every single minute. If you\'ve seen it you will know what i mean ! Love & Hugs BRIAN

April 1st, 2017 17:30

attention
willyweed said:

passion will hold ones attention

April 1st, 2017 17:04

siblings from hell siblings from heaven in your sub consciousness
Tony36 said:

Reminds me of my brother and I. Great write

March 31st, 2017 10:48

Silence
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 30th, 2017 13:59

Silence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love the shape of your poem AVI ~ It brought to mind many things ! I also love the theme \"The Sound of Silence\" I was Course Tutor for an Environmental Monitoring Course and one of the elements was ACOUSTICS ! We had a sound proof room and the Males were encouraged to go in in just a pair of swimming trunks and the girls in a bikini (individually !) so there was no extraneous sound from outer clothing ! It was a mind opening experience ! In the absence of all extraneous sound one heard one\'s heart ~ breathing ~ joints moving ~ digestive system etc. In other words (as you point out) one heard oneself for the first time. For me the new level of self-awareness was infinite ~ I was born again. I love you AVI for all the beauty and sensation and self belief and self awareness you bring to this humble site ~ THANK YOU ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN XOX

March 30th, 2017 11:19



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