Comments received on poems by avigail



shine inside out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ Inner PEACE and outer JOY 24/7 is what we all strive for ! These are FRUITS of the HOLY SPIRIT so can be attained by SPIRITUAL MEDITATION ~ but when I meditate I always need soothing background music ! Thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Meditative Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

January 25th, 2018 11:35

play life
FredPeyer said:

Love the title and your thinking, Avigail! Too many of us regard life as a \'chore\' rather than as \'play\'!

January 24th, 2018 11:11

play life
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 24th, 2018 07:55

My son sees
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

PERCEPTION AVI IS A GREAT GIFT ~ All Painters and Poets need it to be successful ! But with photography it a different technique and level of perception ! The photo you included in this Poem is a good exemplar of you Son\'s photographic perception ! He waited patiently (all good photographers are patient) for the right season ~ the right light and the solitary bird to highlight (and contrast) the relative size of the tree ! A lovely picture to ponder ! I always try to include a picture with my POEMS ~ it\'s worth a thousand words ~ Thanks for sharing ~ food for thought ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOXOX Please check my FUSION ~ Thanks B !

January 16th, 2018 15:44

My son sees
FredPeyer said:

So true, Avigail! If you have ten people looking at something, you will get ten different views. And some people do have the ability to see more than others.

January 16th, 2018 13:48

My son sees
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 16th, 2018 13:14

My Mess His Mess
ron parrish aka wordman said:

you know we see from a different perspective i guess, i guess he just needed to claim a small space

January 13th, 2018 20:32

My Mess His Mess
FredPeyer said:

Avigail, I do like this poem. The first six lines setting the stage, leading up to the last two most important lines, the ones carrying the message. And that message is quite universal and I think does go straight to our inner values. It made me think.
My wife has a tendency to drop the car keys and her phone just anywhere when she comes home. Then she cannot find them. I have a place for the keys, always know where my phone is. But then I am messy in other ways, with my tools for example. I use them, after that cannot find them. We see what is important to us, the rest, well....

January 11th, 2018 16:30

My Mess His Mess
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OMG AVI ~ This rings a bell when I have shared a ROOM or a HOUSE with other GUYS ! Both Angela and I are very ordered so if & when we do tie the knot it should be OK ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my FUSION on FOOTWEAR ~ Thanks B.

January 11th, 2018 15:12

My Mess His Mess
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 11th, 2018 14:37

I don\'t know
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ Morality is always RELATIVE ~ which accounts for the lack of ABSOLUTES in today\'s WILD WORLD ~ Which explains why @ 10:30 am I too am lying down and recharging ~ Thanks for making us all think ~ Love & Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN XOX

January 7th, 2018 17:29

I don\'t know
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, Avigail, you seem to hold up a mirror where we can see ourselves. We all have days like that. Then one either does yoga or stays in bed!

January 7th, 2018 11:41

If you feel that the universe is not responding
Elsie said:

This is where I am, sat at home, trying to reconnect after looking after my Dad for 18 months; I need to get a life again! I know it has to be me to \'make some waves\' cos people won\'t knock on my door if I don\'t knock at theirs! This poem really resonates with me.

January 6th, 2018 20:49

If you feel that the universe is not responding
FredPeyer said:

Great, thought provoking poem, Avigail! As per Nike: Just do it!
You know, we all need a kick in the behind once in a while!

January 6th, 2018 15:32

Life is like an onion
FredPeyer said:

I like the onion metaphor, Avigail.
At least with the onion you know what you will get below the layer you are peeling: more onion!
Peeling back the layers of life is more like a box of chocolates: You never know what you will get!

January 1st, 2018 20:02

Life is like an onion
ChaoticGood said:

Lol, Nice Poem.

December 31st, 2017 09:27

2018 is just a number
FredPeyer said:

That first line says it all! Age is just a number as well. It is what we do and how we do it that counts!

December 30th, 2017 20:33

Beyond the conditioning of the mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

YES INDEED AVI ~ Missed you and your \"Words of Wisdom\" YES indeed we can be released from the Terrestrial Restraints of 2017 ( and all of the sordid Human History that preceded it !) and \"By the Renewing of our Minds\" enter into a Celestial Dimension of LOVE JOY & PEACE ! Every Blessing for 2018 Love you lots as always BRIAN The listener ! XOXOX

December 28th, 2017 10:21

I changed my mind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Well AVI ~ The Good Book (Paul\'s letter to Rome ~ Chapter 12) says \"We can be transformed by the renewing of our minds !\" My own experience is if i try to Please My Creator God (Jehovah) by my daily thoughts ~ words and deeds ~ then my MIND is RENEWED and I think differently from how I did yesterday and I pray that my mind will be even more purer and renewed tomorrow ~ AMEN ~ Of course SATAN seeks to pollute our minds in all sorts of was as well ! Seasonal Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX

December 1st, 2017 15:39

I changed my mind
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 1st, 2017 09:16

B playful
FredPeyer said:

Good advice, Avigail! We get so caught up in everyday life and work, we do have to be reminded of this every so often!

October 30th, 2017 11:10

B playful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ! I totally agree and you know how playful I am ! Love & Playful Hugs ~ Your Bestest Pupil ~ BRIAN \"Happy Man\"

October 29th, 2017 12:42

Successful entrepreneurship
FredPeyer said:

You are absolutely right, Avigail! But entrepreneurs are also risk takers, suckers, gamblers, and eternal optimists!

October 26th, 2017 19:39

Distractions
FredPeyer said:

Well said Avigail! We have TMI (too much information). It does the soul good to shut everything down once in a while.

October 24th, 2017 18:11

Distractions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for the advice AVI ~ my LAPTOP is anchored to my desk ~ I don\'t have a TABLET (and I don\'t take any !) and I have never had a PORTABLE PHONE (and never will !) so I am FUN and FANCY GADGET free ~ AMEN ! Real life is much too short to be on call 24/7 ~ My MANTRA is: Don\'t RING ME and I won\'t RING YOU ! Every Blessing ~ Your A~STUDENT BRIAN with Love & Kisses & An Apple for the Teacher XOX Please check my recipe for PUMPKIN SOUP and my latest (CON) FUSION ~ Thanks B

October 24th, 2017 16:11

Attunement
ron parrish aka wordman said:

great wisdom,and a hard journey

October 20th, 2017 11:36

Attunement
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for reminding us AVI of the importance of living (and working) in Harmony with individuals and groups ! When I sing in a Choir or play in a group ~ I have to be in Tune ~ In Key and in Chord ~ so it is in my human interactions ~ individually and especially in a Group ~ Group Dynamics ! Love & Hugs as always ~ Your best pupil BRIAN XOX

October 20th, 2017 09:51

Attunement
Louis Gibbs said:

And it has to do with adherence to the path of awakening, as well. Well done write, Avigail!

October 20th, 2017 08:50

Let’s just be kind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ The BIBLE exhorts me \"Be ye kind to everybody and any body\" so I AM ~ Thanks for caring about us all ~ Kind Hugs & Love ~ Your Pupil BRIAN XOX

October 19th, 2017 17:12

Let’s just be kind
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October 19th, 2017 11:17

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