Comments received on poems by avigail



Do we act like robots?
Poetic Dan said:

Great writing, helping me reprogramming

June 25th, 2017 13:01

Love and its siblings
onepauly said:

I agree

June 24th, 2017 23:13

Love and its siblings
FredPeyer said:

I do like your poem. Never thought of love this way. It seems I am learning something new every day in this forum. Thank you for sharing.

June 24th, 2017 18:42

spirit over matter
FredPeyer said:

Your poem spoke to me. A long long time ago my friends wanted to go out, I wanted to stay at home, but finally relented. That night I met the woman who has been my wife for over 40 years. Always listen to the tiny voice! Thank you for a very nice poem.

June 23rd, 2017 14:39

spirit over matter
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you for showing me what life my spirit said leave behind. It\'s been a Rocky journey but now I\'m seeing it was right.
What it would like does matter ;)

June 23rd, 2017 14:23

spirit over matter
Louis Gibbs said:

That still, small voice within contains much wisdom ... if only we\'d listen. Well done, avigail!

June 23rd, 2017 09:16

Intonation,
Augustus said:

You caught me again. Need to be confident. Thanks

June 18th, 2017 21:18

silly poem or not
swingline said:

I added up all the credits and subtracted the debits and came just short of hilarious .

June 17th, 2017 20:20

life and death
swingline said:

What about revelation . Insight from an outside source implanted into your brain .

June 14th, 2017 18:52

life and death
Discreation said:

Good write.

June 14th, 2017 15:01

The art of knowing who you are
swingline said:

Is first word spelled right ? Reveling or revealing ? Anyway I used revealing . But the analogy is spot on when we consider who or what we are By examining.our lives definitely means pealing back the layers of time which sometimes does bring tears to one eyes . But when we do peal an onion it is because we have future plans for it\'s use .

June 11th, 2017 14:42

The art of knowing who you are
Augustus said:

I cry too when I peel onions. All kidding aside, we are many layers. Kissing yourself is accepting all those layers. Nicely done

June 11th, 2017 12:35

The art of knowing who you are
Louis Gibbs said:

Coming into awareness of self is a beautiful process. Congratulations, avigail!

June 11th, 2017 10:16

Explore and learn the operating system of your being
avigail said:

for all the people that are victims of ideologies and violence:
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June 6th, 2017 17:16

Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like you have figured out the formula for success, Avigail. Well done!

May 30th, 2017 17:16

Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference
Augustus said:

Persistence and determination, goal setting helped me. Niclly done. Good advice.

May 30th, 2017 14:03

Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference
swingline said:

Nothing grabs the attention like a suicide bomber when he goes bang . Or when a bank robber says ,\'This is a holdup.\' And messaged conveyed at the beach when someone yells \'Shark !\' But genius lies with the one who beguiles anothe into buying something they really don\'t want .

May 30th, 2017 11:03

Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference
Fay Slimm. said:

Such good and meaningful advice Avigail - - poets need to go on writing with a persistent drive of fire. A fine read.

May 30th, 2017 11:03

Nuance of sex dialogue
Augustus said:

Kudos for writing giving an excellent perspective on this sensitive subject.

May 29th, 2017 19:29

Nuance of sex dialogue
swingline said:

Your words resonate well , to be seen and contemplated before there is a need . One should always have a plan or train of thought , thought out way before the moment of passion . Much like an emergency evacuation route to safety .

May 29th, 2017 16:38

Nuance of sex dialogue
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing this AVI ~ it is very important message ~ mainly for MEN ~ in an age of increasing permissiveness. In relation to my relationships with FEMALES my Mother advised me to always be very hygienic ~ gentle and to always let the Lady decide the extent of the encounter. I am always gentle (and this pays dividends !) very hygienic and if a Lady says NO I always accept her decision. One of the horrors of YOU TUBE is that Young Men have the impression 1. That Females are always begging for it and 2. That anal ~ oral and group sex are the norm ~ and 3. That even \"rough rape\" is on the menu ! In my book ~ and I deal with a lot of damaged TEENS (mainly Female) Rape is never excusable and Men are responsible ~ And for me \"Rape of a Virgin\" is the ultimate crime and deserve the ultimate penalty ! Responsible Governments should ban sexplicit material (live & cartoons) from YOU TUBE especially that in which females are treated as less than animals ! Thanks for raising the issue of NO means NO ! Men of course will seek to override a Lady\'s morals with drugs & alcohol and money etc ! ~ Sometimes I am ashamed to be a MAN ~ Sadness & Hugs ~ BRIAN

May 29th, 2017 14:21

Hi are you ready for change?
Augustus said:

The best laid plans....nicely done.

May 28th, 2017 14:05

Hi are you ready for change?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I agree AVI \"Change & decay in all around I see ~ Entropy is increasing ~ Planet earth is getting more chaotic and the rate of change increases day by day ! As an individual I am very very adaptable and I know I will survive baring accidents etc ~ so I still walk under ladders ! For me it is not the change that worries me (because it is inevitable) but my capacity to adapt and restore sanity ! Thanks again for freely sharing your wisdom & advice ~ Love & Hugs ~ You faithful Apprentice ~ BRIAN

May 28th, 2017 13:03

Hi are you ready for change?
avigail said:

life is the school of awarness and humbless... change always stikes us... because we never perceive it all.. zoom out zoom in look here... something happens there...

May 28th, 2017 12:27

The beauty of Vibroacoustic Therapy - gentle power of harmonic low sound frequencies that hug and vibrates you from within
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing AVI ~ I have always believed in the therapeutic power of GOOD VIBRATIONS ~ In my experience too ~ it does work at many levels ! Love & Vibrating Hugs BRIAN

May 26th, 2017 16:43

today is my birthday
WriteBeLight said:

I wish you the most happiest of Birthdays Avigail! Great poetry, as well!

May 22nd, 2017 17:59

today is my birthday
Aamina said:

Lovely poem. Happy birthday x

May 22nd, 2017 14:57

today is my birthday
Hopey_xx said:

Very nice message, Happy birthday!

May 22nd, 2017 14:37

today is my birthday
swingline said:

A positive approach to the aging masses .

May 22nd, 2017 14:31

sometimes you feel lonely
NikitaPassmore said:

This honestly helped me so much😀

May 14th, 2017 01:18



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