Comments received on poems by avigail
The orchid in my garden knows…
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Avigail. Over here we say the same thing of Bamboo.
September 18th, 2017 12:29
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Avigail. Over here we say the same thing of Bamboo.
September 18th, 2017 12:29
The orchid in my garden knows…
orchidee said:
A fine write Avigail. I\'m an orchid-ee too!
September 18th, 2017 08:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Avigail. I\'m an orchid-ee too!
September 18th, 2017 08:25
Walking mediation after Irma
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Avigail. While it is sad to see an uprooted tree, it is all part of nature\'s birth, destruction, re-birth cycle.
September 17th, 2017 15:36
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Avigail. While it is sad to see an uprooted tree, it is all part of nature\'s birth, destruction, re-birth cycle.
September 17th, 2017 15:36
Walking mediation after Irma
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fro this AVI ~ I cried with you ! It is devastating when GAIA fights back castigating the entire Human Race for our Profligation and Desecration of NATURE Ignorami like TRUMP say why all the fuss over ONE DEGREE 15C TO 16C ? But it DOES make a big DIFFERENCE and IRMA and Her Siblings are the result ! Sow pollution and reap a WHIRLWIND ! Thanks for sharing HUGS & KISSES ~ LOVE BRIAN XOX
September 17th, 2017 10:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks fro this AVI ~ I cried with you ! It is devastating when GAIA fights back castigating the entire Human Race for our Profligation and Desecration of NATURE Ignorami like TRUMP say why all the fuss over ONE DEGREE 15C TO 16C ? But it DOES make a big DIFFERENCE and IRMA and Her Siblings are the result ! Sow pollution and reap a WHIRLWIND ! Thanks for sharing HUGS & KISSES ~ LOVE BRIAN XOX
September 17th, 2017 10:32
BBC news from the cruse to Nordic Fjords
FredPeyer said:
Nice to hear from you again, Avigail! Hope you are enjoying your trip.
I stopped watching the News, too depressing!
September 16th, 2017 21:30
FredPeyer said:
Nice to hear from you again, Avigail! Hope you are enjoying your trip.
I stopped watching the News, too depressing!
September 16th, 2017 21:30
BBC news from the cruse to Nordic Fjords
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~Wondered where you had got too ! Did you know that NORWAY is the most desirable place on Earth to live ! YES the Earth and its 7.4 billion people is going slightly MAD ! Because I care for you ~ my advice would be STAY on the BOAT ! I love NORWAY wish i was with you ! Love & Hugs BRIAN ~ XOX
September 16th, 2017 17:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~Wondered where you had got too ! Did you know that NORWAY is the most desirable place on Earth to live ! YES the Earth and its 7.4 billion people is going slightly MAD ! Because I care for you ~ my advice would be STAY on the BOAT ! I love NORWAY wish i was with you ! Love & Hugs BRIAN ~ XOX
September 16th, 2017 17:34
As I was writing out checks, i realized...
burning-embers said:
Its really refreshing to hear you like writing checks. I hope you have a pen where the 0\'s just seem to roll off it so easily (like the old papermate ad). Ten thousand US dollars will suit me just now. My handwriting used to be lovely but now its a scrawl and i mess up on certain letters too often..... the world changes doesn\'t it. Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 18:16
burning-embers said:
Its really refreshing to hear you like writing checks. I hope you have a pen where the 0\'s just seem to roll off it so easily (like the old papermate ad). Ten thousand US dollars will suit me just now. My handwriting used to be lovely but now its a scrawl and i mess up on certain letters too often..... the world changes doesn\'t it. Nice writing.
August 21st, 2017 18:16
As I was writing out checks, i realized...
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I completely agree with your poem, but as a leftie who was forced to write with my write hand, even though I can write with both now, I do prefer the computer.
August 21st, 2017 16:25
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I completely agree with your poem, but as a leftie who was forced to write with my write hand, even though I can write with both now, I do prefer the computer.
August 21st, 2017 16:25
We little ants in the universe
FredPeyer said:
Now, if we could also work together like ants do, this world would be a much better place!
August 21st, 2017 15:44
FredPeyer said:
Now, if we could also work together like ants do, this world would be a much better place!
August 21st, 2017 15:44
As I was writing out checks, i realized...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you AVI ~ Even though I am young enough to be your PUPIL I was born in the last Century and old enough to remember (in the 1990\'s) real pens (fountain & nib pens) and real ink ~ we stoped using slates in UK Schools after WW1 (1920\'s) I have even used a QUILL PEN in a Stately home of England ! I always write out my MPS Poems in pen & ink (or gel pen or biro) in MANU (hand) SCRIPT (writing) so there are books with my original and amended MS ~ before the perfect version appears in MPS from the PC (UGH). My MS\'s are me in my own handwriting which would tell the discerning reader so much more than my spell checked ~ grammar checked and sterilised odes that appear on MPS ! In short ~ I agree with you ! Love & Hugs ~ You Pupil and Poetic Child ~ BRIAN XOX
August 21st, 2017 09:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks you AVI ~ Even though I am young enough to be your PUPIL I was born in the last Century and old enough to remember (in the 1990\'s) real pens (fountain & nib pens) and real ink ~ we stoped using slates in UK Schools after WW1 (1920\'s) I have even used a QUILL PEN in a Stately home of England ! I always write out my MPS Poems in pen & ink (or gel pen or biro) in MANU (hand) SCRIPT (writing) so there are books with my original and amended MS ~ before the perfect version appears in MPS from the PC (UGH). My MS\'s are me in my own handwriting which would tell the discerning reader so much more than my spell checked ~ grammar checked and sterilised odes that appear on MPS ! In short ~ I agree with you ! Love & Hugs ~ You Pupil and Poetic Child ~ BRIAN XOX
August 21st, 2017 09:15
As I was writing out checks, i realized...
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, some ecperts posit thst writing (manuscript) is therapeutic. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2017 08:50
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, some ecperts posit thst writing (manuscript) is therapeutic. Thanks for sharing.
August 21st, 2017 08:50
As I was writing out checks, i realized...
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Is mine in the post?! Was you writing one to me, for thousands of (UK) pounds £££?! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:12
orchidee said:
A fine write A. Is mine in the post?! Was you writing one to me, for thousands of (UK) pounds £££?! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 08:12
We little ants in the universe
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, in this vast universe we are but a tiny speck, an ant as you say. Reflective poem. I believe that this phenomenon is a natural happening following the laws of the universe. So I don\'t worry, I just live and write poems for us. Like yours...
August 20th, 2017 09:12
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, in this vast universe we are but a tiny speck, an ant as you say. Reflective poem. I believe that this phenomenon is a natural happening following the laws of the universe. So I don\'t worry, I just live and write poems for us. Like yours...
August 20th, 2017 09:12
Attentiveness 2.0
burning-embers said:
I am mindful of my confusion but attend i did.
August 19th, 2017 20:16
burning-embers said:
I am mindful of my confusion but attend i did.
August 19th, 2017 20:16
Attentiveness 2.0
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for another important lesson ! I always paid ATTENTION at School and College (as did most of my fellow Pupils ! It is true in the big things in life ~ like learning to drive ~ but also in every conversation we should always pay close attention to what OTHERS are saying. It is what in the UK we call \"COMMON COURTESY\" ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2017 10:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for another important lesson ! I always paid ATTENTION at School and College (as did most of my fellow Pupils ! It is true in the big things in life ~ like learning to drive ~ but also in every conversation we should always pay close attention to what OTHERS are saying. It is what in the UK we call \"COMMON COURTESY\" ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 19th, 2017 10:57
what do you do in the 20%?
myself and me said:
Oh, I have 20% to handle, that is too much for me. I wish I have zero percent, so that I could goof around, and blame the Creator for all the mistake.
Thank you for remind me I might still have 10% left to deal with.
August 16th, 2017 22:02
myself and me said:
Oh, I have 20% to handle, that is too much for me. I wish I have zero percent, so that I could goof around, and blame the Creator for all the mistake.
Thank you for remind me I might still have 10% left to deal with.
August 16th, 2017 22:02
what do you do in the 20%?
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, you know I am usually 100% behind your writing. With this one I understand the question (don\'t know the answer yet!), but don\'t get the point of the cancer (non-cancer) story. Is it co-incidence? Bad luck? He did not jump in after his niece because he WANTED to drown!
You are right, that a minor choice can have huge results. I made a minor choice of going out with my friends, met a girl, she became my wife, changed my life completely!
August 16th, 2017 10:36
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, you know I am usually 100% behind your writing. With this one I understand the question (don\'t know the answer yet!), but don\'t get the point of the cancer (non-cancer) story. Is it co-incidence? Bad luck? He did not jump in after his niece because he WANTED to drown!
You are right, that a minor choice can have huge results. I made a minor choice of going out with my friends, met a girl, she became my wife, changed my life completely!
August 16th, 2017 10:36
what do you do in the 20%?
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s life\'s big and glorious mystery. No one really knows what you do in the 20%. You just figure it out as you go. Every time I think about it I get a headache, and no answers. Mind boggling thought. Thanks for this. Well said.
August 16th, 2017 09:12
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s life\'s big and glorious mystery. No one really knows what you do in the 20%. You just figure it out as you go. Every time I think about it I get a headache, and no answers. Mind boggling thought. Thanks for this. Well said.
August 16th, 2017 09:12
your kaleidoscope essence
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I don\'t know anymore how I could get through my days without your gems! In my case though I think I need a new operating system!
August 15th, 2017 16:50
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, I don\'t know anymore how I could get through my days without your gems! In my case though I think I need a new operating system!
August 15th, 2017 16:50
Mind how you fill the gap
FredPeyer said:
Very thought provoking writing here, Avigail. How do we fill the gaps? Probability is one way, based on similar (compatible?) experiences. Or sometimes we just need to take that leap of faith.
August 14th, 2017 12:13
FredPeyer said:
Very thought provoking writing here, Avigail. How do we fill the gaps? Probability is one way, based on similar (compatible?) experiences. Or sometimes we just need to take that leap of faith.
August 14th, 2017 12:13
Mind how you fill the gap
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MIND THE GAP ~ This is the mantra on the London Tube System ~ because when passengers fall between the trains & the platform it\'s messy and upsets the schedule ! There are gaps in all \"man made systems\" and Robots (Librarians) are the type of genre who try to fill them. Mendeleev ~ who designed the MODERN PERIODIC TABLE of elements - believed in the exactness of the Table and left GAPS for elements yet to be discovered and even predicted the chemical and physical properties of the yet undiscovered elements ~ Only geneii do that ! The element below BARIUM (No. 56) he called ekaBARIUM and left a gap for it. When the Curies isolated RADIUM (No. 88) in the early 1900\'s it was indeed ekaBARIUM and in 1906 Mendeleev travelled from Moscow to Paris to thank the Curies for filling the gap, They also isolated POLONIUM (No. 84) which Mendeleev had named ekaTELLURIUM ! Other Scientists failed to develop an accurate Periodic Table because ~ THY REUSED TO LEAVE GAPS ~ believing that all the element had been discovered ! Because I am disciple of Mendeleev (as well as YOU) I always leave GAPS ! thanks for caring and sharing ~ LOVE & HUGS ~ Best Boy BRIAN XOX
August 14th, 2017 09:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MIND THE GAP ~ This is the mantra on the London Tube System ~ because when passengers fall between the trains & the platform it\'s messy and upsets the schedule ! There are gaps in all \"man made systems\" and Robots (Librarians) are the type of genre who try to fill them. Mendeleev ~ who designed the MODERN PERIODIC TABLE of elements - believed in the exactness of the Table and left GAPS for elements yet to be discovered and even predicted the chemical and physical properties of the yet undiscovered elements ~ Only geneii do that ! The element below BARIUM (No. 56) he called ekaBARIUM and left a gap for it. When the Curies isolated RADIUM (No. 88) in the early 1900\'s it was indeed ekaBARIUM and in 1906 Mendeleev travelled from Moscow to Paris to thank the Curies for filling the gap, They also isolated POLONIUM (No. 84) which Mendeleev had named ekaTELLURIUM ! Other Scientists failed to develop an accurate Periodic Table because ~ THY REUSED TO LEAVE GAPS ~ believing that all the element had been discovered ! Because I am disciple of Mendeleev (as well as YOU) I always leave GAPS ! thanks for caring and sharing ~ LOVE & HUGS ~ Best Boy BRIAN XOX
August 14th, 2017 09:09
Somewhere in the process
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Evening Avi ~ Most Countries are polarized politically into LEFT (Socialism) RIGHT (Conservatism) there is and always a PARTY that seeks to hog the Middle Ground ! It is when Parties move too far to the LEFT or RIGHT that the populace says enough is enough and it ends in REVOLUTION ! Outside forces like N Korea can also disturb the equilibrium ! There is a ripple of unrest GLOBALLY ~ let us pray that it does not become a FLOOD ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN XOX
August 13th, 2017 16:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Good Evening Avi ~ Most Countries are polarized politically into LEFT (Socialism) RIGHT (Conservatism) there is and always a PARTY that seeks to hog the Middle Ground ! It is when Parties move too far to the LEFT or RIGHT that the populace says enough is enough and it ends in REVOLUTION ! Outside forces like N Korea can also disturb the equilibrium ! There is a ripple of unrest GLOBALLY ~ let us pray that it does not become a FLOOD ~ Love & Hugs BRIAN XOX
August 13th, 2017 16:36
Somewhere in the process
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, your excellent writing confirms the \"power corrupts\" expression. People have woken up in the past and will wake up in the future, just look at the French Revolution, what is happening in the Middle East, etc. A very true and meaningful write!
August 13th, 2017 16:06
FredPeyer said:
Avigail, your excellent writing confirms the \"power corrupts\" expression. People have woken up in the past and will wake up in the future, just look at the French Revolution, what is happening in the Middle East, etc. A very true and meaningful write!
August 13th, 2017 16:06
Supportive team
FredPeyer said:
Very nice poem Avigail! Yes, we do have to care more about each other, and you got it across in rhymes! Chapeau!
August 10th, 2017 23:58
FredPeyer said:
Very nice poem Avigail! Yes, we do have to care more about each other, and you got it across in rhymes! Chapeau!
August 10th, 2017 23:58
Learning
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The Good Book says \"Ever learning and never coming to a knowledge of the Truth ! Thanks AVI ~ what we need is Understanding & Wisdom ~ For potted knowledge we just have to click on GOOGLE ! For me Wisdom & Knowledge only comes with AGE ! BUT ~ I\'m wiser now than i was 16 years ago when I left School ~ Love & Hugs from your willing Pupil ~ BRIAN Please check my FUSION on DESSERTS ~ That\'s Tiramisu not the Sahara ~ Thanks B.
August 7th, 2017 10:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The Good Book says \"Ever learning and never coming to a knowledge of the Truth ! Thanks AVI ~ what we need is Understanding & Wisdom ~ For potted knowledge we just have to click on GOOGLE ! For me Wisdom & Knowledge only comes with AGE ! BUT ~ I\'m wiser now than i was 16 years ago when I left School ~ Love & Hugs from your willing Pupil ~ BRIAN Please check my FUSION on DESSERTS ~ That\'s Tiramisu not the Sahara ~ Thanks B.
August 7th, 2017 10:58
Don’t be so serious, seriously
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOI SERIOUS AVI ? NON ~ YOU MUST KNOW BY NOW YOUR FAVORITE STUDENT IS A CLOWN ! In my experience all Females like a Man with a Sense of Humour ~ who Smiles ~who Laughs (at himself) such Men do have SEX APPEAL ~ Thanks for sharing ~ It made me smile ~ LOVE & HUGS ~ SMILER XOX
August 6th, 2017 17:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MOI SERIOUS AVI ? NON ~ YOU MUST KNOW BY NOW YOUR FAVORITE STUDENT IS A CLOWN ! In my experience all Females like a Man with a Sense of Humour ~ who Smiles ~who Laughs (at himself) such Men do have SEX APPEAL ~ Thanks for sharing ~ It made me smile ~ LOVE & HUGS ~ SMILER XOX
August 6th, 2017 17:50
Don’t be so serious, seriously
FredPeyer said:
While increasing my sex appeal at my age is rather impossible, I do love your poem. Never took myself too seriously.
August 6th, 2017 15:02
FredPeyer said:
While increasing my sex appeal at my age is rather impossible, I do love your poem. Never took myself too seriously.
August 6th, 2017 15:02
Don’t be so serious, seriously
burning-embers said:
You are right. Lifes too short for serious.
August 6th, 2017 13:00
burning-embers said:
You are right. Lifes too short for serious.
August 6th, 2017 13:00
Don’t be so serious, seriously
Louis Gibbs said:
A bit preachy, perhaps, but a good \'advice\' poem, Avigail. Thanks for sharing it!
August 6th, 2017 10:36
Louis Gibbs said:
A bit preachy, perhaps, but a good \'advice\' poem, Avigail. Thanks for sharing it!
August 6th, 2017 10:36
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