Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Sanskrit Tapestry
Augustus said:
I like the analogy that once your name would have been changed you can lay there in the glade with none the wiser. I too have had My bout with what seemed insanity. Police, newspapers, TV. Somehow we survive and hope to come out better on the other side.
November 19th, 2016 10:12
Augustus said:
I like the analogy that once your name would have been changed you can lay there in the glade with none the wiser. I too have had My bout with what seemed insanity. Police, newspapers, TV. Somehow we survive and hope to come out better on the other side.
November 19th, 2016 10:12
Loaded
kevin browne said:
most people don\'t feel any guilt these day of there mistakes. learning about yourself is very important so that at least you understand yourself with clarity rather than listening to others negative vibe remarks. typically \'gay\' people suffer immensely with self-reflection and emotions about their own being. a very delicate poem, yet, to be involved with solutions is a must. a good edgy write Tony36.
November 18th, 2016 11:33
kevin browne said:
most people don\'t feel any guilt these day of there mistakes. learning about yourself is very important so that at least you understand yourself with clarity rather than listening to others negative vibe remarks. typically \'gay\' people suffer immensely with self-reflection and emotions about their own being. a very delicate poem, yet, to be involved with solutions is a must. a good edgy write Tony36.
November 18th, 2016 11:33
Loaded
Tony36 said:
Forgiving yourself is the hardest part but an important one. Great write
November 18th, 2016 08:25
Tony36 said:
Forgiving yourself is the hardest part but an important one. Great write
November 18th, 2016 08:25
Denied
littlegoat23 said:
I adored this. It is beautifully writen, and I can feel the passion behind each word.
November 17th, 2016 18:44
littlegoat23 said:
I adored this. It is beautifully writen, and I can feel the passion behind each word.
November 17th, 2016 18:44
Denied
omgoli said:
Letting go of the one who you thought to love you and realizing they were hurting you is the hardest thing to overcome. Beautiful poem though.
November 17th, 2016 12:00
omgoli said:
Letting go of the one who you thought to love you and realizing they were hurting you is the hardest thing to overcome. Beautiful poem though.
November 17th, 2016 12:00
Denied
Tony36 said:
A hat led lesson of love is knowing that it is time to leave the one you cared so much about and mllove on Great write
November 17th, 2016 09:06
Tony36 said:
A hat led lesson of love is knowing that it is time to leave the one you cared so much about and mllove on Great write
November 17th, 2016 09:06
Will Bender
Augustus said:
P.S. I have heard of giving some one the bird but wishing on them enough spunk to clog their tracheas has to be a classic. You must come up with a hand signal for that. I\'d like to use it the next time I\'m cut off by some A-hole in traffic.
November 16th, 2016 14:42
Augustus said:
P.S. I have heard of giving some one the bird but wishing on them enough spunk to clog their tracheas has to be a classic. You must come up with a hand signal for that. I\'d like to use it the next time I\'m cut off by some A-hole in traffic.
November 16th, 2016 14:42
Will Bender
Augustus said:
House cleaning time. There are times where we have to draw the line. Thanks for sharing.
November 16th, 2016 14:37
Augustus said:
House cleaning time. There are times where we have to draw the line. Thanks for sharing.
November 16th, 2016 14:37
Toxicity
notapoet said:
I can\'t even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this powerfully awesome write, i just blew me away! Reall enjoy your stuff my friend.
November 11th, 2016 20:59
notapoet said:
I can\'t even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this powerfully awesome write, i just blew me away! Reall enjoy your stuff my friend.
November 11th, 2016 20:59
Falling Star
Augustus said:
This has an underlying sweetness and sadness to it.
November 10th, 2016 21:52
Augustus said:
This has an underlying sweetness and sadness to it.
November 10th, 2016 21:52
Falling Star
walkingmess said:
what a heartfelt and well described poem. You can really feel the emotion. This is quiet nice.
November 10th, 2016 13:53
walkingmess said:
what a heartfelt and well described poem. You can really feel the emotion. This is quiet nice.
November 10th, 2016 13:53
Ride to the Clouds
Augustus said:
Raw. You never hold back. You are not afraid to say what you think and feel. Many of us are writing but You my man are real.
November 9th, 2016 10:00
Augustus said:
Raw. You never hold back. You are not afraid to say what you think and feel. Many of us are writing but You my man are real.
November 9th, 2016 10:00
Limbo
Augustus said:
Enjoyed especialy the wolf lines and part about brutality.
November 5th, 2016 21:20
Augustus said:
Enjoyed especialy the wolf lines and part about brutality.
November 5th, 2016 21:20
Limbo
Oneyedtoad said:
This is pure. Great imagery/metaphor/honesty. I really think the latter is the most important. \"hardcore\" poetry that doesn\'t ignore the facts of life is as real as it gets, and this is that. Good job man.
November 5th, 2016 01:36
Oneyedtoad said:
This is pure. Great imagery/metaphor/honesty. I really think the latter is the most important. \"hardcore\" poetry that doesn\'t ignore the facts of life is as real as it gets, and this is that. Good job man.
November 5th, 2016 01:36
In Broad Daylight
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you very much. I wasn\'t going to publish it becuz I thought it was too personal for the audience to enjoy.i was excited to see that someone appreciated it...please do read my manuscript..I\'m sure it will find your interest.i have like 65 published.thx again..God bless
November 3rd, 2016 15:59
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you very much. I wasn\'t going to publish it becuz I thought it was too personal for the audience to enjoy.i was excited to see that someone appreciated it...please do read my manuscript..I\'m sure it will find your interest.i have like 65 published.thx again..God bless
November 3rd, 2016 15:59
In Broad Daylight
sonicpoet said:
I love this poem. It\'s so informative. I love the flow and the story it tells. I will check out more of your poetry.
November 3rd, 2016 15:38
sonicpoet said:
I love this poem. It\'s so informative. I love the flow and the story it tells. I will check out more of your poetry.
November 3rd, 2016 15:38
Trucks
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a great expressive poem muse here showing independence and some lines esp the end line poetically sarcastic. Way to go poet, I like how u say \'there\'s no room for junk in my garage\'.
And yes like u I like writing out reality., with dips in fantasy rarely only when I\'m in surreal moods
Kudos. And great to read from u again.
November 2nd, 2016 03:37
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah a great expressive poem muse here showing independence and some lines esp the end line poetically sarcastic. Way to go poet, I like how u say \'there\'s no room for junk in my garage\'.
And yes like u I like writing out reality., with dips in fantasy rarely only when I\'m in surreal moods
Kudos. And great to read from u again.
November 2nd, 2016 03:37
Slow Motion
Augustus said:
I sensed that though there were demons and villains there were wonderful moments and perhaps some optimism for the future. Enjoyed.
October 31st, 2016 12:06
Augustus said:
I sensed that though there were demons and villains there were wonderful moments and perhaps some optimism for the future. Enjoyed.
October 31st, 2016 12:06
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