Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Bad Feng Shui
Augustus said:
I like the reference to Chinese Metaphysics. Invisible forces that bind earth and humanity together. The rhyming pattern was nice also. Hugs.
October 26th, 2016 17:27
Augustus said:
I like the reference to Chinese Metaphysics. Invisible forces that bind earth and humanity together. The rhyming pattern was nice also. Hugs.
October 26th, 2016 17:27
Alchemy
danielcortorreal said:
This is amazing! Love how you intertwined the psychedelic overtone with the sense of longing for this stranger. Great job!
October 24th, 2016 18:13
danielcortorreal said:
This is amazing! Love how you intertwined the psychedelic overtone with the sense of longing for this stranger. Great job!
October 24th, 2016 18:13
Alchemy
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..the picture is actually an Alchemical formula of some sort...or an Alchemical map...I can\'t remember exactly ..but I\'m glad u like it
October 24th, 2016 17:13
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..the picture is actually an Alchemical formula of some sort...or an Alchemical map...I can\'t remember exactly ..but I\'m glad u like it
October 24th, 2016 17:13
Alchemy
Augustus said:
Nice tribute to this stranger, your protector. Love the psychedelic photo.
October 24th, 2016 16:53
Augustus said:
Nice tribute to this stranger, your protector. Love the psychedelic photo.
October 24th, 2016 16:53
Transcendental Awareness
Augustus said:
Wow. Your relationships! Love the \"fluff that clandestinely hides\", \"harnessed to size\", and \"wisdom embarks\" lines.
October 23rd, 2016 11:41
Augustus said:
Wow. Your relationships! Love the \"fluff that clandestinely hides\", \"harnessed to size\", and \"wisdom embarks\" lines.
October 23rd, 2016 11:41
Lord of the Flies
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\'\" how fast words can travel through thin air\". Wow this whole poem is intense and sublime. Nicely worded poetically and interesting freeverse epic style here.
I\'m a new poetess here, pls do comment my latest poem too.
October 22nd, 2016 03:54
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\'\" how fast words can travel through thin air\". Wow this whole poem is intense and sublime. Nicely worded poetically and interesting freeverse epic style here.
I\'m a new poetess here, pls do comment my latest poem too.
October 22nd, 2016 03:54
Check-Mate
Augustus said:
I have often had the ideas of wreaking some devastating havoc on those that irritate me and those ideas are absolutely crazy yet delicious at the same time. And it hurts so to loose your queen in a game of chess. One wrong jump and it feels like it is starting all over. Thanks for sharing.
October 20th, 2016 14:23
Augustus said:
I have often had the ideas of wreaking some devastating havoc on those that irritate me and those ideas are absolutely crazy yet delicious at the same time. And it hurts so to loose your queen in a game of chess. One wrong jump and it feels like it is starting all over. Thanks for sharing.
October 20th, 2016 14:23
The Illuminated of the Now
Augustus said:
I have heard of the relation between music and math. There is something both refreshing and soothing about it. If you are a performer, then there is no greater high. Interesting contrast with the dark ago magic and also what I am interpreting as suicidal ideation of the soft skin of the temple. Enjoy reading.
October 15th, 2016 10:03
Augustus said:
I have heard of the relation between music and math. There is something both refreshing and soothing about it. If you are a performer, then there is no greater high. Interesting contrast with the dark ago magic and also what I am interpreting as suicidal ideation of the soft skin of the temple. Enjoy reading.
October 15th, 2016 10:03
Conundrum
Augustus said:
The emotions, questions, promises to ourselves when the possibility of new love enters our lives. I love the "redicule, angst or pain" line and "sit still nor squander." Nicely done.
October 9th, 2016 22:01
Augustus said:
The emotions, questions, promises to ourselves when the possibility of new love enters our lives. I love the "redicule, angst or pain" line and "sit still nor squander." Nicely done.
October 9th, 2016 22:01
Clean Slate
Augustus said:
My understanding is that you are letting go and there is excitement in anticipation for new love. I liked the first half better than the second. Personally I don't like 4 letter words but that is just me.
September 28th, 2016 13:29
Augustus said:
My understanding is that you are letting go and there is excitement in anticipation for new love. I liked the first half better than the second. Personally I don't like 4 letter words but that is just me.
September 28th, 2016 13:29
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