Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Elemental
kevin browne said:
I need to spend a whole day with you. sounds really exciting. great poem.
January 22nd, 2017 07:00
kevin browne said:
I need to spend a whole day with you. sounds really exciting. great poem.
January 22nd, 2017 07:00
Egyptian Gold
Augustus said:
A bit of soul searching. Love the line, the animal within.
January 15th, 2017 18:45
Augustus said:
A bit of soul searching. Love the line, the animal within.
January 15th, 2017 18:45
The Upper Echelon
gerrylegister said:
I love this line, its incredible \"The proud clothed folks\"
January 4th, 2017 17:06
gerrylegister said:
I love this line, its incredible \"The proud clothed folks\"
January 4th, 2017 17:06
Covetous
willyweed said:
wonderful and honest with raw emotion you have a mighty pen
my friend! ww
January 3rd, 2017 21:01
willyweed said:
wonderful and honest with raw emotion you have a mighty pen
my friend! ww
January 3rd, 2017 21:01
Covetous
Augustus said:
I learn so much about life reading your poems, so rich in content and emotion.
January 3rd, 2017 11:53
Augustus said:
I learn so much about life reading your poems, so rich in content and emotion.
January 3rd, 2017 11:53
The Upper Echelon
willyweed said:
well said it\'s perception vs reality.
I can\'t stand those elitests
good job! ww
January 1st, 2017 11:10
willyweed said:
well said it\'s perception vs reality.
I can\'t stand those elitests
good job! ww
January 1st, 2017 11:10
The Upper Echelon
Augustus said:
Rich elitists running our lives. Wow! Very powerful and soooo elegantly expressed. Happy New Year!
January 1st, 2017 09:05
Augustus said:
Rich elitists running our lives. Wow! Very powerful and soooo elegantly expressed. Happy New Year!
January 1st, 2017 09:05
Pinnacle
Augustus said:
I like the line-- living in a state of mind that lacks rhythm. At first I was looking at this as a New Years resolution. But it is more than that. You are sensing a profound change in many aspects of your life, all to the positive, and I believe in alignment with the heavenly bodies. You sound excited about this and purging all that needs purging.
December 28th, 2016 22:33
Augustus said:
I like the line-- living in a state of mind that lacks rhythm. At first I was looking at this as a New Years resolution. But it is more than that. You are sensing a profound change in many aspects of your life, all to the positive, and I believe in alignment with the heavenly bodies. You sound excited about this and purging all that needs purging.
December 28th, 2016 22:33
Median
Augustus said:
You just have your heart spilled out all over the page.----- Glomming was a new word for me. I like it. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 23:06
Augustus said:
You just have your heart spilled out all over the page.----- Glomming was a new word for me. I like it. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2016 23:06
Median
WriteBeLight said:
Your wishes are similar to many and your poem allows the reader to easily relate in the frustration you have in the writing. Merry Christmas Pharaoh! I hope you have much better experiences in the year to come!
December 24th, 2016 04:37
WriteBeLight said:
Your wishes are similar to many and your poem allows the reader to easily relate in the frustration you have in the writing. Merry Christmas Pharaoh! I hope you have much better experiences in the year to come!
December 24th, 2016 04:37
Whack Off
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..I found out today by his idiotic new boyfriend that he us paying out of his pocket 40 a day to support Marks habit very hr \"loves him so much\". Omg they deserve each other...I am MOVING ON IN 2017..MY FINAL ANSWER
December 24th, 2016 02:02
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..I found out today by his idiotic new boyfriend that he us paying out of his pocket 40 a day to support Marks habit very hr \"loves him so much\". Omg they deserve each other...I am MOVING ON IN 2017..MY FINAL ANSWER
December 24th, 2016 02:02
Whack Off
notapoet said:
This BOOMING voice from above and beyond
Shattering what were once my eardrums
Carrying me past that flimsy, flailing point of swallowing all of my tears
My fears have all found me, and as I have stated so many times before, I never have had very many
Love those lines my friend, great write.......NAP
December 22nd, 2016 17:10
notapoet said:
This BOOMING voice from above and beyond
Shattering what were once my eardrums
Carrying me past that flimsy, flailing point of swallowing all of my tears
My fears have all found me, and as I have stated so many times before, I never have had very many
Love those lines my friend, great write.......NAP
December 22nd, 2016 17:10
Whispers of Perfection
Augustus said:
Your life is so rich and your energy so endless I did not figure \"wee bit\" in your vocabulary. Heh, heh. Warm regards.
December 21st, 2016 15:58
Augustus said:
Your life is so rich and your energy so endless I did not figure \"wee bit\" in your vocabulary. Heh, heh. Warm regards.
December 21st, 2016 15:58
Whispers of Perfection
willyweed said:
Here you are a wizard with the word!
Pharaoh33 I salute you! ww
December 21st, 2016 14:13
willyweed said:
Here you are a wizard with the word!
Pharaoh33 I salute you! ww
December 21st, 2016 14:13
Whispers of Perfection
ElleDionne said:
The metaphors, word choice, and imagery collaborates super well. It gives the piece a really ethereal feel, amazing!
December 21st, 2016 09:43
ElleDionne said:
The metaphors, word choice, and imagery collaborates super well. It gives the piece a really ethereal feel, amazing!
December 21st, 2016 09:43
Whispers of Perfection
Seeker said:
The metaphor of the head first dive and the leafless tree is the best one I have read in a long while. Excellent!!
December 21st, 2016 08:24
Seeker said:
The metaphor of the head first dive and the leafless tree is the best one I have read in a long while. Excellent!!
December 21st, 2016 08:24
Branded
Augustus said:
Talons to the altar! Love it. From your intro this is more like closing the book rather than a chapter.
December 19th, 2016 20:55
Augustus said:
Talons to the altar! Love it. From your intro this is more like closing the book rather than a chapter.
December 19th, 2016 20:55
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