Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Champion
Elizabethan Sea said:
That is so beautifully written. And progressive as well. Lovely meaning.
March 23rd, 2017 00:41
Elizabethan Sea said:
That is so beautifully written. And progressive as well. Lovely meaning.
March 23rd, 2017 00:41
Packages
kevin browne said:
Lilacs in a bouquet of malice is perfectly said toward your poem. summing up on the addictions that capture the moments of despair. well said, Pharoah33.
March 17th, 2017 01:58
kevin browne said:
Lilacs in a bouquet of malice is perfectly said toward your poem. summing up on the addictions that capture the moments of despair. well said, Pharoah33.
March 17th, 2017 01:58
Packages
Hypothesis said:
Good imagery here poet.
This poem highly describes the successful individuals whom are in high places then offered a wage of interest. If you should take part in it. Well clearly its up to you, but regardless of either option. Your life is in jeopardy as his/her demeanor gets cutback.
They will praise you then ridicule as they did Jesus himself many years ago. So being glorified isn\'t much hyped with ribbons as some may think.
Same goes for being amazingly rich m, yet your soul is poor searching endless depths.
Good read indeed poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:55
Hypothesis said:
Good imagery here poet.
This poem highly describes the successful individuals whom are in high places then offered a wage of interest. If you should take part in it. Well clearly its up to you, but regardless of either option. Your life is in jeopardy as his/her demeanor gets cutback.
They will praise you then ridicule as they did Jesus himself many years ago. So being glorified isn\'t much hyped with ribbons as some may think.
Same goes for being amazingly rich m, yet your soul is poor searching endless depths.
Good read indeed poet.
March 17th, 2017 01:55
Dream Team
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank all of you for reading my work and for those of you who always read my posts, I am grateful for you all...this site has given me the courage that I needed to do many other things with my work...Its like my blockages are all gone now and the road ahead is clear...THANK U THANK U THANK U.XXXOOO
March 6th, 2017 20:59
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank all of you for reading my work and for those of you who always read my posts, I am grateful for you all...this site has given me the courage that I needed to do many other things with my work...Its like my blockages are all gone now and the road ahead is clear...THANK U THANK U THANK U.XXXOOO
March 6th, 2017 20:59
Dream Team
Augustus said:
I love this. Trapped in a nightmare for a week. Rich with imagery.
March 6th, 2017 18:29
Augustus said:
I love this. Trapped in a nightmare for a week. Rich with imagery.
March 6th, 2017 18:29
Dream Team
willyweed said:
Good write Pharoah, I love the dark side of the moon!
March 6th, 2017 16:50
willyweed said:
Good write Pharoah, I love the dark side of the moon!
March 6th, 2017 16:50
Spring Fever
kevin browne said:
and as winter turns reluctantly to spring we wait in anticipation of it dearly to our hearts. a great write about one of life\'s great moments. good to see you\'re back Pharaoh33.
March 5th, 2017 16:01
kevin browne said:
and as winter turns reluctantly to spring we wait in anticipation of it dearly to our hearts. a great write about one of life\'s great moments. good to see you\'re back Pharaoh33.
March 5th, 2017 16:01
Spring Fever
willyweed said:
can\'t wait for spring to be sprung? love is in the air !...oh you nasty boy! good poem thought!
March 5th, 2017 10:51
willyweed said:
can\'t wait for spring to be sprung? love is in the air !...oh you nasty boy! good poem thought!
March 5th, 2017 10:51
Tracks
Augustus said:
Oh wise sage, hath thou a new love creating jealous discord amongst those craving your attention? Let them sniff butt! Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 18:13
Augustus said:
Oh wise sage, hath thou a new love creating jealous discord amongst those craving your attention? Let them sniff butt! Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 18:13
January
Augustus said:
George Burns used to,say he stopped going to doctors when he decided to live for old age. Missed you. I have been in and out.
February 26th, 2017 16:07
Augustus said:
George Burns used to,say he stopped going to doctors when he decided to live for old age. Missed you. I have been in and out.
February 26th, 2017 16:07
Pause
willyweed said:
the best part of addiction is beating the habit mind over matter> Nice poem brother! ww
February 25th, 2017 21:28
willyweed said:
the best part of addiction is beating the habit mind over matter> Nice poem brother! ww
February 25th, 2017 21:28
Pink
kevin browne said:
I totally adore this piece. fantastic job done and I\'m loving reading your work again. keep it rolling.
February 14th, 2017 14:50
kevin browne said:
I totally adore this piece. fantastic job done and I\'m loving reading your work again. keep it rolling.
February 14th, 2017 14:50
Pink
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PINK INDEED ~ Mister P ~ to make the boys WINK ! It is a very sensuous color ans the females of our species ~ learn that lesson very early on. You will observe hat i have posted my (more muted !) Valentine Poem in PINK (preferable I thought than red (too exotic) or blue (too neutral) and the ONE Valentine I got this morning (14.2.17) was also PINK ! Have a great day ! Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
PINK INDEED ~ Mister P ~ to make the boys WINK ! It is a very sensuous color ans the females of our species ~ learn that lesson very early on. You will observe hat i have posted my (more muted !) Valentine Poem in PINK (preferable I thought than red (too exotic) or blue (too neutral) and the ONE Valentine I got this morning (14.2.17) was also PINK ! Have a great day ! Yours BRIAN
February 14th, 2017 04:48
Exposure
kevin browne said:
lovely write Pharaoh33. been missing you and glad you\'re back on board.
February 13th, 2017 17:44
kevin browne said:
lovely write Pharaoh33. been missing you and glad you\'re back on board.
February 13th, 2017 17:44
Haunted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly enjoyed this piece! I can relate with this, entirely! Flows wonderfully. Great write! Thank you for pointing me to it!
February 4th, 2017 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truly enjoyed this piece! I can relate with this, entirely! Flows wonderfully. Great write! Thank you for pointing me to it!
February 4th, 2017 10:10
Spinning
notapoet said:
Another powerful write my friend, really enjoyed the read.
February 1st, 2017 08:59
notapoet said:
Another powerful write my friend, really enjoyed the read.
February 1st, 2017 08:59
Fall Into Tranquility
Augustus said:
You! Tranquil?. Who would have dreamed. 😃
January 23rd, 2017 18:03
Augustus said:
You! Tranquil?. Who would have dreamed. 😃
January 23rd, 2017 18:03
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