Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Ladder of Ascension
thehippiepoet said:
I like your writing it almost puts me in another dimension, enthralling
June 5th, 2017 11:35
thehippiepoet said:
I like your writing it almost puts me in another dimension, enthralling
June 5th, 2017 11:35
Feeding Time to the Silence
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful outcry against false friends and the torture deceit can employ in the discovery that trust can be shattered. I love the positive finalé of this honest rant Jason - an example of how writing out inner disturbance can unwind the ultimate wisdom of peace. Great read.
June 1st, 2017 23:14
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful outcry against false friends and the torture deceit can employ in the discovery that trust can be shattered. I love the positive finalé of this honest rant Jason - an example of how writing out inner disturbance can unwind the ultimate wisdom of peace. Great read.
June 1st, 2017 23:14
Feeding Time to the Silence
Gino said:
Such depth and composure...Awesome and mind-bending...Truly a great write!...Our sufferings are usually intended for good, and this poem proves that point...
May 5th, 2017 00:17
Gino said:
Such depth and composure...Awesome and mind-bending...Truly a great write!...Our sufferings are usually intended for good, and this poem proves that point...
May 5th, 2017 00:17
Beacon
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome and I admire the religious knowledge that u have employed effectively drawing analogies. ESP the animals follow to ark, and other takings. I like how u used cactus and the wording and metaphors are fabulously done. Kudos for this sublime poem.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 00:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome and I admire the religious knowledge that u have employed effectively drawing analogies. ESP the animals follow to ark, and other takings. I like how u used cactus and the wording and metaphors are fabulously done. Kudos for this sublime poem.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
April 27th, 2017 00:34
Beacon
Gino said:
Awesome poem! You have a style that mesmerizes...Intellectual and talented indeed, my friend...
April 26th, 2017 09:59
Gino said:
Awesome poem! You have a style that mesmerizes...Intellectual and talented indeed, my friend...
April 26th, 2017 09:59
Beacon
Lizzy Renee said:
Beautiful Poem. I love the way you used those descriptive words to create a picture in the readers mind.
April 26th, 2017 09:04
Lizzy Renee said:
Beautiful Poem. I love the way you used those descriptive words to create a picture in the readers mind.
April 26th, 2017 09:04
Nobody
Gino said:
Wow, what an amazing work you have here...Great write and talent you have. You should write a book, if you haven\'t, and keep all of this and future writings safeguard for future posterity...
April 21st, 2017 03:00
Gino said:
Wow, what an amazing work you have here...Great write and talent you have. You should write a book, if you haven\'t, and keep all of this and future writings safeguard for future posterity...
April 21st, 2017 03:00
Pact
MendedFences27 said:
I think in life we all face trials, we are tested, and those who survive are those who learn to respect themselves, first, and then they become capable of loving another. Your writing paints a picture of conquering ones own inhibitions and finding a way through them, by way of a blood pact with ones self. I felt the despair and the victory. Well done. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:14
MendedFences27 said:
I think in life we all face trials, we are tested, and those who survive are those who learn to respect themselves, first, and then they become capable of loving another. Your writing paints a picture of conquering ones own inhibitions and finding a way through them, by way of a blood pact with ones self. I felt the despair and the victory. Well done. - Phil A.
April 20th, 2017 20:14
Solitaire
Gino said:
Wow, you really a very talented poet. You write clearly and effective, it drew me in the whole way. Thanks again for sharing.
April 7th, 2017 22:25
Gino said:
Wow, you really a very talented poet. You write clearly and effective, it drew me in the whole way. Thanks again for sharing.
April 7th, 2017 22:25
Atmosphere
Gino said:
Wow, beautifully written. I love how you absolutely weaved everything so wonderfully. Truly an awesome write. Thanks for sharing my friend.
April 7th, 2017 22:21
Gino said:
Wow, beautifully written. I love how you absolutely weaved everything so wonderfully. Truly an awesome write. Thanks for sharing my friend.
April 7th, 2017 22:21
Atrium
Liam Lawless said:
A moving poem, I love the part about what happens when the ignorant get riches. Well written... Anon
April 7th, 2017 14:05
Liam Lawless said:
A moving poem, I love the part about what happens when the ignorant get riches. Well written... Anon
April 7th, 2017 14:05
Sold
Frank Prem said:
Sorry Pharoah, this style doesn\'t appeal much to me.
I suspect it\'s a piece that works for slam/rap type presentations, but I\'m a generation before that and don\'t take to it.
All the best with your endeavours, though. Cheers, F~
April 6th, 2017 02:05
Frank Prem said:
Sorry Pharoah, this style doesn\'t appeal much to me.
I suspect it\'s a piece that works for slam/rap type presentations, but I\'m a generation before that and don\'t take to it.
All the best with your endeavours, though. Cheers, F~
April 6th, 2017 02:05
Solitaire
willyweed said:
very well thought out I like this you hit the nail squarely on the head here my friend! Great write Pharaoh! if there is a hell we are in it! peace ww
April 5th, 2017 05:42
willyweed said:
very well thought out I like this you hit the nail squarely on the head here my friend! Great write Pharaoh! if there is a hell we are in it! peace ww
April 5th, 2017 05:42
Ant Farm
Augustus said:
Hello again my friend. I have been away for a while, missing your poetic contributions. Boundaries . I have always said if I were Mexican I\'d probably be trying to cross the border. Kudos.
March 26th, 2017 19:27
Augustus said:
Hello again my friend. I have been away for a while, missing your poetic contributions. Boundaries . I have always said if I were Mexican I\'d probably be trying to cross the border. Kudos.
March 26th, 2017 19:27
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