Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Branded
WriteBeLight said:
Good that you are cutting ties. Remember the saying, doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results, applies here. Do not enable anyone to treat you badly. That is what I think you say you may have learned in this piece..:)
December 19th, 2016 19:03
WriteBeLight said:
Good that you are cutting ties. Remember the saying, doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results, applies here. Do not enable anyone to treat you badly. That is what I think you say you may have learned in this piece..:)
December 19th, 2016 19:03
Halt
Augustus said:
This seems a change, a sadness, a vulnerability in the warrior I\'ve come to know a little. Hugs.
December 18th, 2016 12:26
Augustus said:
This seems a change, a sadness, a vulnerability in the warrior I\'ve come to know a little. Hugs.
December 18th, 2016 12:26
Lightning From The Heavens
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thanks k you very much Kathy...I really appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read my work
December 16th, 2016 15:50
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thanks k you very much Kathy...I really appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read my work
December 16th, 2016 15:50
When Penguins Fly
SabreLi said:
All of the connotations that Nibiru conjures is a wonderful addition to this piece when the explanation is read alongside the words themselves! A masterpiece, loved every part of it. But then, I am a fan of the darkness :P Great work! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:24
SabreLi said:
All of the connotations that Nibiru conjures is a wonderful addition to this piece when the explanation is read alongside the words themselves! A masterpiece, loved every part of it. But then, I am a fan of the darkness :P Great work! xx
December 15th, 2016 09:24
When Penguins Fly
kevin browne said:
scared me brilliantly..fab writing skills..
December 12th, 2016 02:21
kevin browne said:
scared me brilliantly..fab writing skills..
December 12th, 2016 02:21
Epiphany
Augustus said:
You are so in the moment, really living every moment of your life and having every emotion humanly possible plus some feelings on some ethereal plane.
December 8th, 2016 00:09
Augustus said:
You are so in the moment, really living every moment of your life and having every emotion humanly possible plus some feelings on some ethereal plane.
December 8th, 2016 00:09
Exhibit
Augustus said:
Oh, thank God that you are not another boring \"normal\". Yes there is an exhibit of scattered pieces that together are profound.
December 5th, 2016 19:34
Augustus said:
Oh, thank God that you are not another boring \"normal\". Yes there is an exhibit of scattered pieces that together are profound.
December 5th, 2016 19:34
Casting Call
Augustus said:
With Nag Champa burning in the background in this poem you make the test of your patience seem almost fun and an opportunity not to waste the time. I have not studied astrology and was pleasantly surprised to find in a google search how mercury in retrograde affects travel, communication and interaction with others. It\'s inclusion made the poem that much more thoughtful. Delighted.
December 4th, 2016 18:17
Augustus said:
With Nag Champa burning in the background in this poem you make the test of your patience seem almost fun and an opportunity not to waste the time. I have not studied astrology and was pleasantly surprised to find in a google search how mercury in retrograde affects travel, communication and interaction with others. It\'s inclusion made the poem that much more thoughtful. Delighted.
December 4th, 2016 18:17
Burning
SabreLi said:
This is a great piece - despite it\'s atypical format (such is poetry :P) you keep the piece flowing naturally and hold it together well with carefully placed rhymes and short lines which emphasise and really bring out it\'s true meaning. I love how you tell a somewhat \'full circle journey\' - from burning on the inside (An inferno rages within me) to being consumed by the flames on the outside (I burn all over because of them) right the way through to the resurrection, if you will, of a more powerful self; (Like the Phoenix rising from the ashes) a really well rounded piece. Thanks for writing and sharing! :D xx
December 4th, 2016 17:14
SabreLi said:
This is a great piece - despite it\'s atypical format (such is poetry :P) you keep the piece flowing naturally and hold it together well with carefully placed rhymes and short lines which emphasise and really bring out it\'s true meaning. I love how you tell a somewhat \'full circle journey\' - from burning on the inside (An inferno rages within me) to being consumed by the flames on the outside (I burn all over because of them) right the way through to the resurrection, if you will, of a more powerful self; (Like the Phoenix rising from the ashes) a really well rounded piece. Thanks for writing and sharing! :D xx
December 4th, 2016 17:14
Scorn
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I never want to make you mad. I hope you feel much better sharing this. There are truly rotten people in the world and you have captured the essence of this relationship very, very well.
December 3rd, 2016 09:56
WriteBeLight said:
Wow! I never want to make you mad. I hope you feel much better sharing this. There are truly rotten people in the world and you have captured the essence of this relationship very, very well.
December 3rd, 2016 09:56
Scorn
notapoet said:
You never fail to disappoint my friend, another powerfully emotional piece! NAP.
December 3rd, 2016 09:45
notapoet said:
You never fail to disappoint my friend, another powerfully emotional piece! NAP.
December 3rd, 2016 09:45
Toxicity
Augustus said:
Powerful piece. Best read out loud to appreciate the meter and rhyme. Can we rise from the ashes of immorality?
December 1st, 2016 23:22
Augustus said:
Powerful piece. Best read out loud to appreciate the meter and rhyme. Can we rise from the ashes of immorality?
December 1st, 2016 23:22
Lightning From The Heavens
Augustus said:
Pharaoh, Wow! This is a side of you that lay hidden. This piece is so incredible. Yes, we drink the kool-aid, then follow like lemmings pulling our own puppet strings. Love it!
December 1st, 2016 21:45
Augustus said:
Pharaoh, Wow! This is a side of you that lay hidden. This piece is so incredible. Yes, we drink the kool-aid, then follow like lemmings pulling our own puppet strings. Love it!
December 1st, 2016 21:45
Lightning From The Heavens
Tony36 said:
Great write, and much truth is this write
December 1st, 2016 11:42
Tony36 said:
Great write, and much truth is this write
December 1st, 2016 11:42
Lightning From The Heavens
willyweed said:
This is very well thought out and scary because I believe you are correct. prepare to be humped again.
we elect clowns and so we have a circus. excellent work Mr. Poet! ww
December 1st, 2016 11:08
willyweed said:
This is very well thought out and scary because I believe you are correct. prepare to be humped again.
we elect clowns and so we have a circus. excellent work Mr. Poet! ww
December 1st, 2016 11:08
Lightning From The Heavens
WriteBeLight said:
There has been so much about the influence of the Illuminatti. I find that interesting that included that. Maybe I never noticed it six years ago. Everyone was hoping for change when he was first elected. I do not know if anything is ever going to really change. I like the reference to the squares of a quilt. Nice read.
December 1st, 2016 06:33
WriteBeLight said:
There has been so much about the influence of the Illuminatti. I find that interesting that included that. Maybe I never noticed it six years ago. Everyone was hoping for change when he was first elected. I do not know if anything is ever going to really change. I like the reference to the squares of a quilt. Nice read.
December 1st, 2016 06:33
New & Old
willyweed said:
Love is evasive I hope you find yours
your poem seems heartfelt but a bit sad. I wish you luck in your venture!
peace ww
November 30th, 2016 07:25
willyweed said:
Love is evasive I hope you find yours
your poem seems heartfelt but a bit sad. I wish you luck in your venture!
peace ww
November 30th, 2016 07:25
Disarmed
SharonMoemise said:
Very explosive emotion coming out in this poem. Great writing, Pharaoh. It\'s also quite inspiring.
November 27th, 2016 01:31
SharonMoemise said:
Very explosive emotion coming out in this poem. Great writing, Pharaoh. It\'s also quite inspiring.
November 27th, 2016 01:31
Grace
WriteBeLight said:
Good thing you broke down and had a chance to write this. I like it.
November 25th, 2016 02:01
WriteBeLight said:
Good thing you broke down and had a chance to write this. I like it.
November 25th, 2016 02:01
Vapor
notapoet said:
Love your work, so powerful, and brutally honest, and packed with raw emotion letting the reader become a part of it and feel every word. Another great one!
N.P.
November 23rd, 2016 13:44
notapoet said:
Love your work, so powerful, and brutally honest, and packed with raw emotion letting the reader become a part of it and feel every word. Another great one!
N.P.
November 23rd, 2016 13:44
« Return to the profile of LIGHT WARRIOR
