Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Love and Light
Gino said:
Awesome Jason, just the message we need in today\'s world, ....
April 15th, 2020 21:03
Gino said:
Awesome Jason, just the message we need in today\'s world, ....
April 15th, 2020 21:03
Love and Light
Lauraš» said:
Jason,
This is the most beautiful, loving, sensitive and caring piece of writing Iāve seen/read today or any other day from you! You are a very special human being!
I wish you all the best from this day forward! You are a rare jewel!
Stay well & be safe!
~Laura~š»
March 31st, 2020 16:48
Lauraš» said:
Jason,
This is the most beautiful, loving, sensitive and caring piece of writing Iāve seen/read today or any other day from you! You are a very special human being!
I wish you all the best from this day forward! You are a rare jewel!
Stay well & be safe!
~Laura~š»
March 31st, 2020 16:48
Lingering
tundrol said:
Hello. Interesting work. I was in a wood somewhere, wandering along, thinking about death and how I wouldn\'t want to die all alone, when I met this chap (a chap is a bloke) who told me that he dreamed just of that; dying alone in nature. I had to smile.
March 3rd, 2020 03:44
tundrol said:
Hello. Interesting work. I was in a wood somewhere, wandering along, thinking about death and how I wouldn\'t want to die all alone, when I met this chap (a chap is a bloke) who told me that he dreamed just of that; dying alone in nature. I had to smile.
March 3rd, 2020 03:44
Woodchuck Witch Bitch
Gino said:
One of the best poets on this site actually!...Damn Jason, your write is mesmerizing and captivating. I know this is real and not something your acting...Your emotion is raw and continual...Keep writing my friend.
August 10th, 2019 01:55
Gino said:
One of the best poets on this site actually!...Damn Jason, your write is mesmerizing and captivating. I know this is real and not something your acting...Your emotion is raw and continual...Keep writing my friend.
August 10th, 2019 01:55
Fling
Gino said:
Hahaha,...brilliant! Your words are intelligibly pieced together in humor and raw emotion...
July 14th, 2019 01:58
Gino said:
Hahaha,...brilliant! Your words are intelligibly pieced together in humor and raw emotion...
July 14th, 2019 01:58
Woodchuck Witch Bitch
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding! All the way to end, like a volcano of come on Lets have it then!
Thats what I felt anyway, thank you and very well expressed!
March 31st, 2019 09:57
Poetic Dan said:
Outstanding! All the way to end, like a volcano of come on Lets have it then!
Thats what I felt anyway, thank you and very well expressed!
March 31st, 2019 09:57
Nomad
Amherrera1190 said:
I relate to this very much so. I hope that you find a new home to put down roots for yourself nomad.š¤š¤š
February 16th, 2019 17:27
Amherrera1190 said:
I relate to this very much so. I hope that you find a new home to put down roots for yourself nomad.š¤š¤š
February 16th, 2019 17:27
Nomad
dusk arising said:
Do you feel better now? They say writing is theraputic and you appear to be quite depressed. I hope it helped getting this off your shoulders.
LOL just kidding, nice interpretation of what it must feel like to be one of life\'s unfortunates.
February 11th, 2019 09:41
dusk arising said:
Do you feel better now? They say writing is theraputic and you appear to be quite depressed. I hope it helped getting this off your shoulders.
LOL just kidding, nice interpretation of what it must feel like to be one of life\'s unfortunates.
February 11th, 2019 09:41
Fling
Caleb.A said:
A very honest piece of work, very true to the nature of such events - Great work!
February 4th, 2019 18:09
Caleb.A said:
A very honest piece of work, very true to the nature of such events - Great work!
February 4th, 2019 18:09
Fling
Neville said:
life\'s a bitch aint it... go on let it all out, I can almost certainly guarantee ya gonna feel either better, the same or worse for it.... N
February 1st, 2019 12:40
Neville said:
life\'s a bitch aint it... go on let it all out, I can almost certainly guarantee ya gonna feel either better, the same or worse for it.... N
February 1st, 2019 12:40
Drawn
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Jason, the reader is certainly able to feel that revenge.
Those who live by hate and envy always reap the rewards of the unjust.
A great poem with a significantly strong message.
Thanks for sharing :-)
January 10th, 2019 12:35
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! Jason, the reader is certainly able to feel that revenge.
Those who live by hate and envy always reap the rewards of the unjust.
A great poem with a significantly strong message.
Thanks for sharing :-)
January 10th, 2019 12:35
Still In The Zone
Neville said:
this felt like an out of body experience... like being dragged along the tiny alleys of some remote Mexican village by some powerful but unseen force.....
December 26th, 2018 11:35
Neville said:
this felt like an out of body experience... like being dragged along the tiny alleys of some remote Mexican village by some powerful but unseen force.....
December 26th, 2018 11:35
Portals
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank u both..I corrected some typos that snuck by me before..u have a wonderful holiday season as well..
December 24th, 2018 18:22
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank u both..I corrected some typos that snuck by me before..u have a wonderful holiday season as well..
December 24th, 2018 18:22
Portals
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Jason - -so true that life goes on and that death is a mere opposite to birth - as part of the permanent there can never be an opposite to life -- your poet\'s mind wrapped the subject up well - - best wishes my friend for the festive season.
December 24th, 2018 12:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read Jason - -so true that life goes on and that death is a mere opposite to birth - as part of the permanent there can never be an opposite to life -- your poet\'s mind wrapped the subject up well - - best wishes my friend for the festive season.
December 24th, 2018 12:18
Jezebel\'s Expose
Simon Bromley said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Well done.
December 23rd, 2018 13:06
Simon Bromley said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Well done.
December 23rd, 2018 13:06
Dead Flowers
MaddieJ said:
The problem I have with your truly excellent dialogue, is that you leave no room for the reality that similarly to other ancient history, the Bible is a record of the past. I believe myself, that the past helps to shape who we are today. It is wise, and it helps to instruct the present population what mistakes have been made so they donāt repeat it. I donāt fully understand the word of God all the time, but I know there is a a better way to present it than what evangelists have often done. What I think is a mistake too is considering the Bible as something that aims to trick people. Man has his own will. Man is capable of deciding for themselves what is good and what is not. Closing your mind to the entire goal that it has might be a loss. The reality I find in reading the Bible is that it actually aims to expand the mind. It is full of poetry. Often poetry as you can see on this website, helps us to see the world and God more clearly through its artful expression. I donāt wish to argue over the Bibleās place in your life, but donāt dodge those who have chosen to live by it and find wisdom and instruction by it. I suppose the argument that I am going to make is that the Bible is not small minded, but quite the contrary in todayās society, and throughout history.
December 16th, 2018 11:13
MaddieJ said:
The problem I have with your truly excellent dialogue, is that you leave no room for the reality that similarly to other ancient history, the Bible is a record of the past. I believe myself, that the past helps to shape who we are today. It is wise, and it helps to instruct the present population what mistakes have been made so they donāt repeat it. I donāt fully understand the word of God all the time, but I know there is a a better way to present it than what evangelists have often done. What I think is a mistake too is considering the Bible as something that aims to trick people. Man has his own will. Man is capable of deciding for themselves what is good and what is not. Closing your mind to the entire goal that it has might be a loss. The reality I find in reading the Bible is that it actually aims to expand the mind. It is full of poetry. Often poetry as you can see on this website, helps us to see the world and God more clearly through its artful expression. I donāt wish to argue over the Bibleās place in your life, but donāt dodge those who have chosen to live by it and find wisdom and instruction by it. I suppose the argument that I am going to make is that the Bible is not small minded, but quite the contrary in todayās society, and throughout history.
December 16th, 2018 11:13
Dead Flowers
whisperingquill said:
Very very profound a brilliant writešš¼šš¼....well done
December 16th, 2018 07:52
whisperingquill said:
Very very profound a brilliant writešš¼šš¼....well done
December 16th, 2018 07:52
Centaurs
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise captivating poem.. I am by the way Sagittarius .... cheers
December 16th, 2018 06:35
Neville said:
an intriguing and otherwise captivating poem.. I am by the way Sagittarius .... cheers
December 16th, 2018 06:35
Dead Flowers
Michael Edwards said:
Although a non-believer I can connect with so much of what you say here - an interesting and intriguing write.
December 16th, 2018 06:14
Michael Edwards said:
Although a non-believer I can connect with so much of what you say here - an interesting and intriguing write.
December 16th, 2018 06:14
Infinity
Neville said:
I sincerely hope you found the penning of this epic, more than just a little cathartic... Neville
December 9th, 2018 04:06
Neville said:
I sincerely hope you found the penning of this epic, more than just a little cathartic... Neville
December 9th, 2018 04:06
Infinity
Gino said:
Haha wow. I mean that last line cracks me up my friend, as I drink my beer reading your verses in high drama. It\'s always a pleasure to read your writing my friend...
December 9th, 2018 02:40
Gino said:
Haha wow. I mean that last line cracks me up my friend, as I drink my beer reading your verses in high drama. It\'s always a pleasure to read your writing my friend...
December 9th, 2018 02:40
Pagan Lie
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A most interesting muse with much goings on and how you awesomely reflect and think with ink and jot down your thoughts fabulously. I too heard of Jesus not being born in December since it was a sun worshippers day of ancient pagans. I was admiring and nodding at each line, then the word play in the beginning wow sounded cool. Eloquent musing indeed. Kudos.
December 6th, 2018 04:04
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A most interesting muse with much goings on and how you awesomely reflect and think with ink and jot down your thoughts fabulously. I too heard of Jesus not being born in December since it was a sun worshippers day of ancient pagans. I was admiring and nodding at each line, then the word play in the beginning wow sounded cool. Eloquent musing indeed. Kudos.
December 6th, 2018 04:04
Pantheon
Lauraš» said:
Jason,
Iām in total agreement with Kevinās comments!
This powerful write evokes so many truths! I sincerely enjoyed the read! Youāre right...the proof is in the pudding...and NOT in the instant one!
~Laura~
P.S. - You may want to edit the typo ātheirā in the phrase ātheir in the puddingā.
November 28th, 2018 14:12
Lauraš» said:
Jason,
Iām in total agreement with Kevinās comments!
This powerful write evokes so many truths! I sincerely enjoyed the read! Youāre right...the proof is in the pudding...and NOT in the instant one!
~Laura~
P.S. - You may want to edit the typo ātheirā in the phrase ātheir in the puddingā.
November 28th, 2018 14:12
Pantheon
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you for continued support. I appreciate it a lot.
November 28th, 2018 13:50
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you for continued support. I appreciate it a lot.
November 28th, 2018 13:50
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