Comments received on poems by LIGHT WARRIOR
Pantheon
kevin browne said:
Your work makes me fall in love with you. The extremities of life in your almost 3 dimensional poetic world leaves me in awe of you and your brilliance at constructing work with such tremendous force. You appear to be an intelligent writer who hits home the gravity in which I am tangled within. Pure genius, my friend!!!
November 28th, 2018 13:05
kevin browne said:
Your work makes me fall in love with you. The extremities of life in your almost 3 dimensional poetic world leaves me in awe of you and your brilliance at constructing work with such tremendous force. You appear to be an intelligent writer who hits home the gravity in which I am tangled within. Pure genius, my friend!!!
November 28th, 2018 13:05
Gypsies
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you both...yeah....life is crazy....and u would think that moving to a tiny town when u come from a town of one million that it would limit the craziness in which u witness and, thus , write about...however, I write much more often living here....I am one of a kind, that\'s for sure...we are all...supposedly?.lol...thx again...I appreciate your support and friendship on this site....I thought that more people would communicate on this site more often but they don\'t...I get way more views than I do commentary....but, I guess they don\'t know why to say with the shit I write...xxxooo
November 17th, 2018 07:33
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you both...yeah....life is crazy....and u would think that moving to a tiny town when u come from a town of one million that it would limit the craziness in which u witness and, thus , write about...however, I write much more often living here....I am one of a kind, that\'s for sure...we are all...supposedly?.lol...thx again...I appreciate your support and friendship on this site....I thought that more people would communicate on this site more often but they don\'t...I get way more views than I do commentary....but, I guess they don\'t know why to say with the shit I write...xxxooo
November 17th, 2018 07:33
Phantoms
Gino said:
Brilliant write, wow,...Love it very much indeed. I loved the way you wrote it is not our job to dust their shelves...You need to publish your works my friend, if you haven\'t already done so...
November 17th, 2018 02:58
Gino said:
Brilliant write, wow,...Love it very much indeed. I loved the way you wrote it is not our job to dust their shelves...You need to publish your works my friend, if you haven\'t already done so...
November 17th, 2018 02:58
Gypsies
Gino said:
Fucken crazy write! Love your style my friend, as your like no other...
November 17th, 2018 02:47
Gino said:
Fucken crazy write! Love your style my friend, as your like no other...
November 17th, 2018 02:47
Phantoms
Fay Slimm. said:
Well said Jason - A timely word wrapped in excellent poetry which sorts out the true from the false - - we need only to look deep within to find the authentic and avoid certain tricks of selfish deceivers - I love the line - - - \" It is not your job to dust their shelves\" A stunning read.
November 5th, 2018 10:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Well said Jason - A timely word wrapped in excellent poetry which sorts out the true from the false - - we need only to look deep within to find the authentic and avoid certain tricks of selfish deceivers - I love the line - - - \" It is not your job to dust their shelves\" A stunning read.
November 5th, 2018 10:36
Phantoms
Laura🌻 said:
Jason,
Wow! This is an amazing write! A superb delivery of a truthful message which you have cleverly penned! A very powerful read indeed!
This part of the poem really brought it home for me...
“It is not your job to dust their shelves
To help them out of their
messes by getting their messes all over you”...
~Laura~
ps-[stationery]...
Did you mean “stationary”?
November 5th, 2018 10:07
Laura🌻 said:
Jason,
Wow! This is an amazing write! A superb delivery of a truthful message which you have cleverly penned! A very powerful read indeed!
This part of the poem really brought it home for me...
“It is not your job to dust their shelves
To help them out of their
messes by getting their messes all over you”...
~Laura~
ps-[stationery]...
Did you mean “stationary”?
November 5th, 2018 10:07
Mockery
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly piece of writing. I\'m stunned between the eyes!!!
November 2nd, 2018 19:08
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly piece of writing. I\'m stunned between the eyes!!!
November 2nd, 2018 19:08
Through the Looking Glass
sylviasearcher said:
The idea of the looking glass resonates with me. And the why don\'t people comment after reading my poems.
I don\'t comment on all the poems I read.
Sometimes I feel like the poem is the tip of the iceberg. I\'d like to delve beneath the waters of each one but I\'m never sure where to begin or if I even know which ocean I am in...
October 22nd, 2018 08:56
sylviasearcher said:
The idea of the looking glass resonates with me. And the why don\'t people comment after reading my poems.
I don\'t comment on all the poems I read.
Sometimes I feel like the poem is the tip of the iceberg. I\'d like to delve beneath the waters of each one but I\'m never sure where to begin or if I even know which ocean I am in...
October 22nd, 2018 08:56
False Pretenses
Gino said:
Awesome write! Reptilians are real I believe, as the Illuminati pulls all the strings...Don\'t worry about love, for love is destined in the stars, your time will come...
October 20th, 2018 23:50
Gino said:
Awesome write! Reptilians are real I believe, as the Illuminati pulls all the strings...Don\'t worry about love, for love is destined in the stars, your time will come...
October 20th, 2018 23:50
Through the Looking Glass
Gino said:
Great poem once again my friend. I hope everything is well with you. Your write here is very unique, keeping my muse in a transition of awe and wonder. Yes, people arrive too early at the gate \"staring through the looking glass\" before boarding, and never arrive...
October 20th, 2018 23:43
Gino said:
Great poem once again my friend. I hope everything is well with you. Your write here is very unique, keeping my muse in a transition of awe and wonder. Yes, people arrive too early at the gate \"staring through the looking glass\" before boarding, and never arrive...
October 20th, 2018 23:43
Harvest Moon
The Gifted One said:
We have such similar passions. I love any narrative involving the moon, the constellations, the stars, and my favorite, Angels. A very nice eclectic narrative.
The Gifted One
September 12th, 2018 09:35
The Gifted One said:
We have such similar passions. I love any narrative involving the moon, the constellations, the stars, and my favorite, Angels. A very nice eclectic narrative.
The Gifted One
September 12th, 2018 09:35
Taken By The Pack
The Gifted One said:
I like the metaphors of this poem, and that\'s only because I write about hybrid vampires and wolves.
The Gifted One
September 8th, 2018 22:29
The Gifted One said:
I like the metaphors of this poem, and that\'s only because I write about hybrid vampires and wolves.
The Gifted One
September 8th, 2018 22:29
False Pretenses
kevin browne said:
Don\'t wait, don\'t cry, don\'t dismiss, don\'t hope, don\'t speak, don\'t give in and you\'ll discover honest love. Love appears from out of no where most of the time, and when it does your rewards for your patience will arrive in abundance. Allow your passion for love to settle inside your heart waiting for someone to open it up for you.
September 8th, 2018 08:41
kevin browne said:
Don\'t wait, don\'t cry, don\'t dismiss, don\'t hope, don\'t speak, don\'t give in and you\'ll discover honest love. Love appears from out of no where most of the time, and when it does your rewards for your patience will arrive in abundance. Allow your passion for love to settle inside your heart waiting for someone to open it up for you.
September 8th, 2018 08:41
Dynasty
Heartwriter said:
Wow! You killed it dude. Truly it was off the charts. That\'s the you I remember. Keep it up!!!!
August 5th, 2018 20:33
Heartwriter said:
Wow! You killed it dude. Truly it was off the charts. That\'s the you I remember. Keep it up!!!!
August 5th, 2018 20:33
Fire Dragon
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful and perceptive read Jason - telling the ways we can be brought down when lies rule relationships makes for retaliation where freedom by rising from painful fire can win the day. A compelling read.
July 25th, 2018 09:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful and perceptive read Jason - telling the ways we can be brought down when lies rule relationships makes for retaliation where freedom by rising from painful fire can win the day. A compelling read.
July 25th, 2018 09:19
Fire Dragon
Heartwriter said:
Jason you hold the pen well. I feel for you. We have been friends on MPS for a while. Nothing changes that. Stop letting others dictate your happiness man. Move on, bigger horizon\'s. Ride the stars. Let them go. Live your own life. I still say there is someone for you. Take care...keep writing. Achieve!
July 25th, 2018 06:32
Heartwriter said:
Jason you hold the pen well. I feel for you. We have been friends on MPS for a while. Nothing changes that. Stop letting others dictate your happiness man. Move on, bigger horizon\'s. Ride the stars. Let them go. Live your own life. I still say there is someone for you. Take care...keep writing. Achieve!
July 25th, 2018 06:32
Ravens
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
No lady, Hun, I\'m 100 percent homosexual...as it should show in many of my writings..lol..but there is a good man for me somewhere, guaranteed,..my fiancé came out here for Christmas w his bitch mother..and I haven\'t spoken to him since he left..totally made me feel like a fool for ever caring about either of them..it\'s been he\'d to swallow the pill he fed me ..AGAIN..THIS TIME THOUGH, I WONT EVER TURN BACK..IM DONE
July 23rd, 2018 06:20
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
No lady, Hun, I\'m 100 percent homosexual...as it should show in many of my writings..lol..but there is a good man for me somewhere, guaranteed,..my fiancé came out here for Christmas w his bitch mother..and I haven\'t spoken to him since he left..totally made me feel like a fool for ever caring about either of them..it\'s been he\'d to swallow the pill he fed me ..AGAIN..THIS TIME THOUGH, I WONT EVER TURN BACK..IM DONE
July 23rd, 2018 06:20
Ravens
Heartwriter said:
Sounds like someone\'s been riding your back. Buck em! Stop letting everyone dictate your feelings. Your carrying a crutch. There is a kind caring lady for you. Of this I am sure. Look in a new direction my friend. If you want too. Totally in your ball park. You give the swing or throw the bat down. Good to see you as always.
July 23rd, 2018 04:36
Heartwriter said:
Sounds like someone\'s been riding your back. Buck em! Stop letting everyone dictate your feelings. Your carrying a crutch. There is a kind caring lady for you. Of this I am sure. Look in a new direction my friend. If you want too. Totally in your ball park. You give the swing or throw the bat down. Good to see you as always.
July 23rd, 2018 04:36
Playing God
Gino said:
Wow, that was something. Amazing how you speak your mind, and in such a way that fascinates my attention all the way through.. Thanks for sharing this my friend...
March 10th, 2018 19:01
Gino said:
Wow, that was something. Amazing how you speak your mind, and in such a way that fascinates my attention all the way through.. Thanks for sharing this my friend...
March 10th, 2018 19:01
Little Drummer Boy
Gino said:
Very awesome, and cleverly crafted write. Your one of a kind my friend, the world needs to know your talent...
November 2nd, 2017 17:20
Gino said:
Very awesome, and cleverly crafted write. Your one of a kind my friend, the world needs to know your talent...
November 2nd, 2017 17:20
Witch & Werewolf
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..it means a lot to me and its all true in its own way..thank you again
October 24th, 2017 18:11
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Thank you..it means a lot to me and its all true in its own way..thank you again
October 24th, 2017 18:11
Witch & Werewolf
Gino said:
Excellent, and otherworldly masterpiece, with such a unique appeal to the darkness that intrigues us. Your one of a kind poet my friend. Your words are rich and smooth in knowledge and craft. Truly amazing. Thanks for sharing.
October 24th, 2017 16:58
Gino said:
Excellent, and otherworldly masterpiece, with such a unique appeal to the darkness that intrigues us. Your one of a kind poet my friend. Your words are rich and smooth in knowledge and craft. Truly amazing. Thanks for sharing.
October 24th, 2017 16:58
Three-Dogged Night
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is based on a real life event that is taking place. Everything is great....I\'m engaged to be married...I\'m happy for the first time in a very long while......xxxooo
October 16th, 2017 15:22
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is based on a real life event that is taking place. Everything is great....I\'m engaged to be married...I\'m happy for the first time in a very long while......xxxooo
October 16th, 2017 15:22
Little Drummer Boy
orchidee said:
Ohh, I swooned! I read those Pah-Rumpah\'s as \'Rumpy Pumpy!\' And what would I know about that?! heehee. Spell-checker has gone mad with them too!
August 16th, 2017 02:03
orchidee said:
Ohh, I swooned! I read those Pah-Rumpah\'s as \'Rumpy Pumpy!\' And what would I know about that?! heehee. Spell-checker has gone mad with them too!
August 16th, 2017 02:03
Stand Still
FredPeyer said:
\'Pathetic tunes of self-centered ridicule\'
Jason, for a while there I got the impression you were talking about the house that shines so white.
And when time becomes extinct, do we become timeless?
Great Poem Jason!
July 26th, 2017 12:52
FredPeyer said:
\'Pathetic tunes of self-centered ridicule\'
Jason, for a while there I got the impression you were talking about the house that shines so white.
And when time becomes extinct, do we become timeless?
Great Poem Jason!
July 26th, 2017 12:52
Grown
whisperingquill said:
Yeah Bro you popped the cork of a poetic bottle of enlightenment with this piece
Epic write man. 🍻
July 9th, 2017 23:37
whisperingquill said:
Yeah Bro you popped the cork of a poetic bottle of enlightenment with this piece
Epic write man. 🍻
July 9th, 2017 23:37
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