Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Loneliness Complies.
malubotelho said:
Hei Kingkev. Long time I see you. Come along. Don\'t give up.
August 20th, 2017 13:43
malubotelho said:
Hei Kingkev. Long time I see you. Come along. Don\'t give up.
August 20th, 2017 13:43
When Mother Natures Karma.
malubotelho said:
As ugly as it is I feel sad because so much inocente people are dieing and even more is to happen. There is no ending for that atrocity. Nice writing Kevin.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
malubotelho said:
As ugly as it is I feel sad because so much inocente people are dieing and even more is to happen. There is no ending for that atrocity. Nice writing Kevin.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
When Mother Natures Karma.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity - fine rhyming in this outcry against abusive enforcement - - one phrase you used I will not forget \"peace loves attention\" - -oh how very true.
August 12th, 2017 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity - fine rhyming in this outcry against abusive enforcement - - one phrase you used I will not forget \"peace loves attention\" - -oh how very true.
August 12th, 2017 17:04
When Mother Natures Karma.
FredPeyer said:
So well written and rhymed again! So true and awfully scary! Kevin, you are showing us a mirror of today\'s world, and it is not pretty.
August 12th, 2017 13:20
FredPeyer said:
So well written and rhymed again! So true and awfully scary! Kevin, you are showing us a mirror of today\'s world, and it is not pretty.
August 12th, 2017 13:20
Grow With Despair.
FredPeyer said:
Read it, like it, nuff said!
I like the line \'Sitting on benches left alone the death of any useless alcoholic\' and in my mind added \'by\' between alone and the.
Writing that much every day I guess you only need two hours of sleep!
August 4th, 2017 21:14
FredPeyer said:
Read it, like it, nuff said!
I like the line \'Sitting on benches left alone the death of any useless alcoholic\' and in my mind added \'by\' between alone and the.
Writing that much every day I guess you only need two hours of sleep!
August 4th, 2017 21:14
Grow With Despair.
malubotelho said:
I\'m bathing myself on this cascading of words that reverberates with my soul. I\'m still trying to put clauses on your poem to get a better grip of it.
August 4th, 2017 13:27
malubotelho said:
I\'m bathing myself on this cascading of words that reverberates with my soul. I\'m still trying to put clauses on your poem to get a better grip of it.
August 4th, 2017 13:27
Sentiments It Found.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing again Kevin, I guess you know by now that I do read every line, sometimes more than once! You start with a \'pearl\', and there are too many of them in this poem to mention individually.
August 3rd, 2017 14:01
FredPeyer said:
Great writing again Kevin, I guess you know by now that I do read every line, sometimes more than once! You start with a \'pearl\', and there are too many of them in this poem to mention individually.
August 3rd, 2017 14:01
Sentiments It Found.
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the line - - Sometimes never realised a mistake can be built upon a blessing - -- I wholly agree and thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 12:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the line - - Sometimes never realised a mistake can be built upon a blessing - -- I wholly agree and thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 12:39
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
malubotelho said:
I like that you softened a bit your writing and agree with Heather and Fred; a lot of this poem is about love. Heather wrote a poem from your poem. Beautiful sayings Kevin.
August 2nd, 2017 07:22
malubotelho said:
I like that you softened a bit your writing and agree with Heather and Fred; a lot of this poem is about love. Heather wrote a poem from your poem. Beautiful sayings Kevin.
August 2nd, 2017 07:22
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
FredPeyer said:
I specifically liked
\'Buttered with the cream of hope smearing these silly old hearts\',
\'Sitting in the farmhouse where laying in the hay became an affair\',
\'The steps of each castle which told the dungeons to redecorate\', and \'Hearing whispers through the ghosts of the intimate Ouija board\'
Great writing as usual!
August 2nd, 2017 01:21
FredPeyer said:
I specifically liked
\'Buttered with the cream of hope smearing these silly old hearts\',
\'Sitting in the farmhouse where laying in the hay became an affair\',
\'The steps of each castle which told the dungeons to redecorate\', and \'Hearing whispers through the ghosts of the intimate Ouija board\'
Great writing as usual!
August 2nd, 2017 01:21
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
Heather T said:
Kevin, there is a gentle softness in so many of these lines.
\"With a petal in a hand there floats by another dream in motion
Meandering in a thoughtful place created for just only the lonely
Staircase creep with spiralling waves of all the flowered emotion\"
\"Lake edges with Lavender leaving aroma left behind for lovers
With a daffodil smiling in yellow and a face fitting for a charmer
And misty moons swooned with the stars that danced into life\"
So, so lovely.
August 1st, 2017 22:50
Heather T said:
Kevin, there is a gentle softness in so many of these lines.
\"With a petal in a hand there floats by another dream in motion
Meandering in a thoughtful place created for just only the lonely
Staircase creep with spiralling waves of all the flowered emotion\"
\"Lake edges with Lavender leaving aroma left behind for lovers
With a daffodil smiling in yellow and a face fitting for a charmer
And misty moons swooned with the stars that danced into life\"
So, so lovely.
August 1st, 2017 22:50
Forwards In Return.
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose outlines we need to fit a second hand forward to help things brighten a little at times - - a deeply affecting read.
July 31st, 2017 16:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose outlines we need to fit a second hand forward to help things brighten a little at times - - a deeply affecting read.
July 31st, 2017 16:23
Forwards In Return.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, they are all good lines, but the last one spoke to me real loud. Thank you for so much food for thought!
July 31st, 2017 14:13
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, they are all good lines, but the last one spoke to me real loud. Thank you for so much food for thought!
July 31st, 2017 14:13
Intense Sometimes.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant words to start my morning off! Thank you as always!
July 31st, 2017 02:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant words to start my morning off! Thank you as always!
July 31st, 2017 02:20
Intense Sometimes.
onepauly said:
excellent poem kingkev101,
good or even better then the ones before. you have a gift my friend. invaluable essence, for all of us that need you.
July 30th, 2017 19:19
onepauly said:
excellent poem kingkev101,
good or even better then the ones before. you have a gift my friend. invaluable essence, for all of us that need you.
July 30th, 2017 19:19
Ridiculous Renditions.
whisperingquill said:
This thumps bro this breathes on its own really damn good job seriously I\'m in awe this is poetic even for the stars
Too many good lines to choose from I will have to re read it and get back to you all I can say is there will be more than one I choose . Excellent brother five ⭐️🌟🌟🌟🌟 🍻 I greatly appreciate this one thank you
July 30th, 2017 13:08
whisperingquill said:
This thumps bro this breathes on its own really damn good job seriously I\'m in awe this is poetic even for the stars
Too many good lines to choose from I will have to re read it and get back to you all I can say is there will be more than one I choose . Excellent brother five ⭐️🌟🌟🌟🌟 🍻 I greatly appreciate this one thank you
July 30th, 2017 13:08
Ridiculous Renditions.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin you are not only the king of poetry as Kat pointed out, you are the king of poetry marathons!
Yes it does take time to read, but it is worth it!
July 29th, 2017 19:23
FredPeyer said:
Kevin you are not only the king of poetry as Kat pointed out, you are the king of poetry marathons!
Yes it does take time to read, but it is worth it!
July 29th, 2017 19:23
Ridiculous Renditions.
onepauly said:
if you want to change your style that\'s your buissness. but ill say they are great just the way they are. and if you do change it you might get a different mode of information. I say if they want to read your work twice or more have tham do it and stick to your guns. you don\'t have to make it easier on them. let them do that and stop being lazy
July 29th, 2017 12:56
onepauly said:
if you want to change your style that\'s your buissness. but ill say they are great just the way they are. and if you do change it you might get a different mode of information. I say if they want to read your work twice or more have tham do it and stick to your guns. you don\'t have to make it easier on them. let them do that and stop being lazy
July 29th, 2017 12:56
Ridiculous Renditions.
Michael Edwards said:
A great work as always Kevin but a tad daunting to read. Hope you don\'t mind me suggesting this but perhaps a few stanza breaks might make it a little easier for the reader. Just read it a second time and it gets better and better.
July 29th, 2017 12:27
Michael Edwards said:
A great work as always Kevin but a tad daunting to read. Hope you don\'t mind me suggesting this but perhaps a few stanza breaks might make it a little easier for the reader. Just read it a second time and it gets better and better.
July 29th, 2017 12:27
Finally Go To Sleep.
onepauly said:
I feel like nothing can compete with your words. I\'m a dry sponge soaking up your words like water. I will tell you now you are a great poet
kevin browne, its an honor to know you. pauly
July 27th, 2017 16:16
onepauly said:
I feel like nothing can compete with your words. I\'m a dry sponge soaking up your words like water. I will tell you now you are a great poet
kevin browne, its an honor to know you. pauly
July 27th, 2017 16:16
Finally Go To Sleep.
Michael Edwards said:
Such a well composed write with some great lines.
July 27th, 2017 08:35
Michael Edwards said:
Such a well composed write with some great lines.
July 27th, 2017 08:35
Finally Go To Sleep.
Fay Slimm. said:
Some wonderful imagery on the degree of frustration a thinking mind feels face with conditions today - bravo too for the line - \"Selfish concoctions maintain a strength for many an act played out\" - - great read Kevin.
July 27th, 2017 06:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Some wonderful imagery on the degree of frustration a thinking mind feels face with conditions today - bravo too for the line - \"Selfish concoctions maintain a strength for many an act played out\" - - great read Kevin.
July 27th, 2017 06:21
Whispering Ghosts.
Nathan Fairchild said:
Amazing write. I even had to read it twice which is what all artists should strive for. That wow factor that astounds and inspiries the mind. My favorite line is \"Saying something at a school with teaching thought how to rule\". For which is very true, for speaking thoughtlessly is not only reckless but irresponsible. Words have more power than most give proper credit.
July 26th, 2017 22:22
Nathan Fairchild said:
Amazing write. I even had to read it twice which is what all artists should strive for. That wow factor that astounds and inspiries the mind. My favorite line is \"Saying something at a school with teaching thought how to rule\". For which is very true, for speaking thoughtlessly is not only reckless but irresponsible. Words have more power than most give proper credit.
July 26th, 2017 22:22
Whispering Ghosts.
Poetic Dan said:
I won\'t lie I look at your work and think I\'m too tired to take that all in. Half way down and it\'s like a breeze, then the wording to end it off!
Wow my friend just wow, I\'ll keep walking if you keep hitting that fullstop....
July 26th, 2017 18:20
Poetic Dan said:
I won\'t lie I look at your work and think I\'m too tired to take that all in. Half way down and it\'s like a breeze, then the wording to end it off!
Wow my friend just wow, I\'ll keep walking if you keep hitting that fullstop....
July 26th, 2017 18:20
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