Comments received on poems by kevin browne
But Take Me Underneath It.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you are branching out into different but equally well written territory here! Love the flow and the repetitions. This is good, you don\'t have to \'hide\' it, so \'take it above it\'!
October 5th, 2017 11:54
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you are branching out into different but equally well written territory here! Love the flow and the repetitions. This is good, you don\'t have to \'hide\' it, so \'take it above it\'!
October 5th, 2017 11:54
Edge Of Life.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this time you outdid yourself! Love how every line starts with \'A\', and the last line applies to you and all of us here on MPS.
Thank you for this great posting.
October 4th, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this time you outdid yourself! Love how every line starts with \'A\', and the last line applies to you and all of us here on MPS.
Thank you for this great posting.
October 4th, 2017 14:09
Growing Into Older Life.
Fay Slimm. said:
A thought provoking read Kevin - letting go and saying a last goodbye is something to face as time hurries on -- a sincere and honest verse
October 3rd, 2017 13:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A thought provoking read Kevin - letting go and saying a last goodbye is something to face as time hurries on -- a sincere and honest verse
October 3rd, 2017 13:47
Growing Into Older Life.
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Kevin, but scaring the you know what out of me!!!!
What you so aptly describe could be just around the corner!!!
October 3rd, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Kevin, but scaring the you know what out of me!!!!
What you so aptly describe could be just around the corner!!!
October 3rd, 2017 11:44
The Place Where Love Controls.
Pintu Mahakul said:
The honesty of one\'s sentiments lifts life ahead with love and peace. Brilliant thought is shared.
October 2nd, 2017 15:47
Pintu Mahakul said:
The honesty of one\'s sentiments lifts life ahead with love and peace. Brilliant thought is shared.
October 2nd, 2017 15:47
The Place Where Love Controls.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love controls all our emotions.
October 2nd, 2017 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, love controls all our emotions.
October 2nd, 2017 07:53
The Place Where Love Controls.
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Kevin, but where love controls is in my marriage!
October 2nd, 2017 04:38
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Kevin, but where love controls is in my marriage!
October 2nd, 2017 04:38
I Stare Wisely Into Nothing.
FredPeyer said:
If I could choose only one favorite line in this poem, it would be this one: Fermenting faith in our blood but why listen to religion anyway
It is ingenious! Not that the others are bad, no way, but this one just called out to me.
October 1st, 2017 02:50
FredPeyer said:
If I could choose only one favorite line in this poem, it would be this one: Fermenting faith in our blood but why listen to religion anyway
It is ingenious! Not that the others are bad, no way, but this one just called out to me.
October 1st, 2017 02:50
What I couldn\'t Find.
FredPeyer said:
Out of all your good lines, it is the first one that grabbed me and made me think the most. It is your expression \'left behind what I couldn\'t find\' that got to me. Am still working on it though.
September 30th, 2017 12:35
FredPeyer said:
Out of all your good lines, it is the first one that grabbed me and made me think the most. It is your expression \'left behind what I couldn\'t find\' that got to me. Am still working on it though.
September 30th, 2017 12:35
Traditions Of Life.
FredPeyer said:
There is so much in this poem that I need to \'digest\' that I cannot say anything about it yet, except: great writing. Need to read it a few more times!
September 29th, 2017 20:39
FredPeyer said:
There is so much in this poem that I need to \'digest\' that I cannot say anything about it yet, except: great writing. Need to read it a few more times!
September 29th, 2017 20:39
Where Primroses Grow.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this is a very beautiful declaration of love. But I am perplexed by the 90 year reference.
September 23rd, 2017 22:15
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this is a very beautiful declaration of love. But I am perplexed by the 90 year reference.
September 23rd, 2017 22:15
When Life Gets You Down.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, well written, but kind of depressing. I might have said it before, but I think it fits here: The difference between being in a rut and a grave is only depth. But the last four lines do give some hope!
September 23rd, 2017 21:49
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, well written, but kind of depressing. I might have said it before, but I think it fits here: The difference between being in a rut and a grave is only depth. But the last four lines do give some hope!
September 23rd, 2017 21:49
When Life Gets You Down.
Christina8 said:
I like the way you write. \"And in the deepest darkest places where not even God has seen\". So profound. I feel like I have been in some of those places once upon a time. Really great piece!
September 23rd, 2017 11:06
Christina8 said:
I like the way you write. \"And in the deepest darkest places where not even God has seen\". So profound. I feel like I have been in some of those places once upon a time. Really great piece!
September 23rd, 2017 11:06
For Those Who Struggle.
Poetic Dan said:
You stitched it up well for me. The flow was brilliant I was sucked right in, taking a fulfilling breath at the end. Thank you my friend, great work of art!
September 19th, 2017 12:12
Poetic Dan said:
You stitched it up well for me. The flow was brilliant I was sucked right in, taking a fulfilling breath at the end. Thank you my friend, great work of art!
September 19th, 2017 12:12
For Those Who Struggle.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, honestly, I did read everything, but it is the last two lines that touched me! Thanks!
September 19th, 2017 11:58
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, honestly, I did read everything, but it is the last two lines that touched me! Thanks!
September 19th, 2017 11:58
Languages In Paradise.
malubotelho said:
Hey Kevin, very nice writing. I was training to write like you. Without any commas or dots and in a different way I normally write. Almost using a new center to inspire me. Almost not thinking. I came out with some interesting writes I will publish one today and need your opinion. I will mention your name once I publish it. It is going to be called NEW WAY OF WRITING
September 19th, 2017 07:28
malubotelho said:
Hey Kevin, very nice writing. I was training to write like you. Without any commas or dots and in a different way I normally write. Almost using a new center to inspire me. Almost not thinking. I came out with some interesting writes I will publish one today and need your opinion. I will mention your name once I publish it. It is going to be called NEW WAY OF WRITING
September 19th, 2017 07:28
Languages In Paradise.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, in my unprofessional and not very important opinion, this one is one of your best! Like how it starts and how it ends, even though I had to take a vacation to be able to read the whole thing! :-)
September 16th, 2017 13:05
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, in my unprofessional and not very important opinion, this one is one of your best! Like how it starts and how it ends, even though I had to take a vacation to be able to read the whole thing! :-)
September 16th, 2017 13:05
Wars.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, a very apt description of the futility of war.
September 13th, 2017 21:56
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, a very apt description of the futility of war.
September 13th, 2017 21:56
Broken Days.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very emotive write with great imagery. The sorrow for these people just rushes from the page.
September 12th, 2017 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very emotive write with great imagery. The sorrow for these people just rushes from the page.
September 12th, 2017 00:27
Broken Days.
FredPeyer said:
You capture the plight of the homeless and downtrodden so well. Love the last line!
September 11th, 2017 19:41
FredPeyer said:
You capture the plight of the homeless and downtrodden so well. Love the last line!
September 11th, 2017 19:41
Broken Days.
Fay Slimm. said:
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate times \" indeed Kevin.
September 11th, 2017 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate times \" indeed Kevin.
September 11th, 2017 11:47
Broken Days.
Christina8 said:
So beautifully written although sad--people in unfortunate times. But I enjoyed the read. Again, I add--very well written!
September 11th, 2017 09:55
Christina8 said:
So beautifully written although sad--people in unfortunate times. But I enjoyed the read. Again, I add--very well written!
September 11th, 2017 09:55
Riverbanks And Daffodils.
FredPeyer said:
\'Mother maid cow sucked milked when Mary had another lamb\'
Kevin, it took me a loooong time to read your poem, but as always, it was worth it. Some of the lines, like the above, are just out of this world. Do you think like this in everyday life as well????
I can imagine that having a conversation with you must be incredible!
September 6th, 2017 11:28
FredPeyer said:
\'Mother maid cow sucked milked when Mary had another lamb\'
Kevin, it took me a loooong time to read your poem, but as always, it was worth it. Some of the lines, like the above, are just out of this world. Do you think like this in everyday life as well????
I can imagine that having a conversation with you must be incredible!
September 6th, 2017 11:28
Mother.
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. Most of mothers are truly a blessing.
September 1st, 2017 09:22
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. Most of mothers are truly a blessing.
September 1st, 2017 09:22
Mother.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a worthy and very perceptive tribute Kevin to all those excellent mothers whose smile \"has forever been a perfect gracious fit.\" A truly lovely read.
August 31st, 2017 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a worthy and very perceptive tribute Kevin to all those excellent mothers whose smile \"has forever been a perfect gracious fit.\" A truly lovely read.
August 31st, 2017 16:40
Mother.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I absolutely LOVE this poem! A great and fitting ode and may I say \'declaration of love and gratefulness\' to our mothers! Thank you!
August 31st, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I absolutely LOVE this poem! A great and fitting ode and may I say \'declaration of love and gratefulness\' to our mothers! Thank you!
August 31st, 2017 11:31
World Wide Wicked.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, tried to find a favorite line, but could not make up my mind!
August 30th, 2017 03:35
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, tried to find a favorite line, but could not make up my mind!
August 30th, 2017 03:35
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