Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Broken Days.
Fay Slimm. said:
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate times \" indeed Kevin.
September 11th, 2017 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate times \" indeed Kevin.
September 11th, 2017 11:47
Broken Days.
Christina8 said:
So beautifully written although sad--people in unfortunate times. But I enjoyed the read. Again, I add--very well written!
September 11th, 2017 09:55
Christina8 said:
So beautifully written although sad--people in unfortunate times. But I enjoyed the read. Again, I add--very well written!
September 11th, 2017 09:55
Riverbanks And Daffodils.
FredPeyer said:
\'Mother maid cow sucked milked when Mary had another lamb\'
Kevin, it took me a loooong time to read your poem, but as always, it was worth it. Some of the lines, like the above, are just out of this world. Do you think like this in everyday life as well????
I can imagine that having a conversation with you must be incredible!
September 6th, 2017 11:28
FredPeyer said:
\'Mother maid cow sucked milked when Mary had another lamb\'
Kevin, it took me a loooong time to read your poem, but as always, it was worth it. Some of the lines, like the above, are just out of this world. Do you think like this in everyday life as well????
I can imagine that having a conversation with you must be incredible!
September 6th, 2017 11:28
Mother.
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. Most of mothers are truly a blessing.
September 1st, 2017 09:22
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. Most of mothers are truly a blessing.
September 1st, 2017 09:22
Mother.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a worthy and very perceptive tribute Kevin to all those excellent mothers whose smile \"has forever been a perfect gracious fit.\" A truly lovely read.
August 31st, 2017 16:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - a worthy and very perceptive tribute Kevin to all those excellent mothers whose smile \"has forever been a perfect gracious fit.\" A truly lovely read.
August 31st, 2017 16:40
Mother.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I absolutely LOVE this poem! A great and fitting ode and may I say \'declaration of love and gratefulness\' to our mothers! Thank you!
August 31st, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, I absolutely LOVE this poem! A great and fitting ode and may I say \'declaration of love and gratefulness\' to our mothers! Thank you!
August 31st, 2017 11:31
World Wide Wicked.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, tried to find a favorite line, but could not make up my mind!
August 30th, 2017 03:35
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, tried to find a favorite line, but could not make up my mind!
August 30th, 2017 03:35
Loneliness Complies.
malubotelho said:
Hei Kingkev. Long time I see you. Come along. Don\'t give up.
August 20th, 2017 13:43
malubotelho said:
Hei Kingkev. Long time I see you. Come along. Don\'t give up.
August 20th, 2017 13:43
When Mother Natures Karma.
malubotelho said:
As ugly as it is I feel sad because so much inocente people are dieing and even more is to happen. There is no ending for that atrocity. Nice writing Kevin.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
malubotelho said:
As ugly as it is I feel sad because so much inocente people are dieing and even more is to happen. There is no ending for that atrocity. Nice writing Kevin.
August 13th, 2017 00:54
When Mother Natures Karma.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity - fine rhyming in this outcry against abusive enforcement - - one phrase you used I will not forget \"peace loves attention\" - -oh how very true.
August 12th, 2017 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity - fine rhyming in this outcry against abusive enforcement - - one phrase you used I will not forget \"peace loves attention\" - -oh how very true.
August 12th, 2017 17:04
When Mother Natures Karma.
FredPeyer said:
So well written and rhymed again! So true and awfully scary! Kevin, you are showing us a mirror of today\'s world, and it is not pretty.
August 12th, 2017 13:20
FredPeyer said:
So well written and rhymed again! So true and awfully scary! Kevin, you are showing us a mirror of today\'s world, and it is not pretty.
August 12th, 2017 13:20
Grow With Despair.
FredPeyer said:
Read it, like it, nuff said!
I like the line \'Sitting on benches left alone the death of any useless alcoholic\' and in my mind added \'by\' between alone and the.
Writing that much every day I guess you only need two hours of sleep!
August 4th, 2017 21:14
FredPeyer said:
Read it, like it, nuff said!
I like the line \'Sitting on benches left alone the death of any useless alcoholic\' and in my mind added \'by\' between alone and the.
Writing that much every day I guess you only need two hours of sleep!
August 4th, 2017 21:14
Grow With Despair.
malubotelho said:
I\'m bathing myself on this cascading of words that reverberates with my soul. I\'m still trying to put clauses on your poem to get a better grip of it.
August 4th, 2017 13:27
malubotelho said:
I\'m bathing myself on this cascading of words that reverberates with my soul. I\'m still trying to put clauses on your poem to get a better grip of it.
August 4th, 2017 13:27
Sentiments It Found.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing again Kevin, I guess you know by now that I do read every line, sometimes more than once! You start with a \'pearl\', and there are too many of them in this poem to mention individually.
August 3rd, 2017 14:01
FredPeyer said:
Great writing again Kevin, I guess you know by now that I do read every line, sometimes more than once! You start with a \'pearl\', and there are too many of them in this poem to mention individually.
August 3rd, 2017 14:01
Sentiments It Found.
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the line - - Sometimes never realised a mistake can be built upon a blessing - -- I wholly agree and thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 12:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the line - - Sometimes never realised a mistake can be built upon a blessing - -- I wholly agree and thanks for sharing.
August 3rd, 2017 12:39
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
malubotelho said:
I like that you softened a bit your writing and agree with Heather and Fred; a lot of this poem is about love. Heather wrote a poem from your poem. Beautiful sayings Kevin.
August 2nd, 2017 07:22
malubotelho said:
I like that you softened a bit your writing and agree with Heather and Fred; a lot of this poem is about love. Heather wrote a poem from your poem. Beautiful sayings Kevin.
August 2nd, 2017 07:22
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
FredPeyer said:
I specifically liked
\'Buttered with the cream of hope smearing these silly old hearts\',
\'Sitting in the farmhouse where laying in the hay became an affair\',
\'The steps of each castle which told the dungeons to redecorate\', and \'Hearing whispers through the ghosts of the intimate Ouija board\'
Great writing as usual!
August 2nd, 2017 01:21
FredPeyer said:
I specifically liked
\'Buttered with the cream of hope smearing these silly old hearts\',
\'Sitting in the farmhouse where laying in the hay became an affair\',
\'The steps of each castle which told the dungeons to redecorate\', and \'Hearing whispers through the ghosts of the intimate Ouija board\'
Great writing as usual!
August 2nd, 2017 01:21
A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow.
Heather T said:
Kevin, there is a gentle softness in so many of these lines.
\"With a petal in a hand there floats by another dream in motion
Meandering in a thoughtful place created for just only the lonely
Staircase creep with spiralling waves of all the flowered emotion\"
\"Lake edges with Lavender leaving aroma left behind for lovers
With a daffodil smiling in yellow and a face fitting for a charmer
And misty moons swooned with the stars that danced into life\"
So, so lovely.
August 1st, 2017 22:50
Heather T said:
Kevin, there is a gentle softness in so many of these lines.
\"With a petal in a hand there floats by another dream in motion
Meandering in a thoughtful place created for just only the lonely
Staircase creep with spiralling waves of all the flowered emotion\"
\"Lake edges with Lavender leaving aroma left behind for lovers
With a daffodil smiling in yellow and a face fitting for a charmer
And misty moons swooned with the stars that danced into life\"
So, so lovely.
August 1st, 2017 22:50
Forwards In Return.
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose outlines we need to fit a second hand forward to help things brighten a little at times - - a deeply affecting read.
July 31st, 2017 16:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose outlines we need to fit a second hand forward to help things brighten a little at times - - a deeply affecting read.
July 31st, 2017 16:23
Forwards In Return.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, they are all good lines, but the last one spoke to me real loud. Thank you for so much food for thought!
July 31st, 2017 14:13
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, they are all good lines, but the last one spoke to me real loud. Thank you for so much food for thought!
July 31st, 2017 14:13
Intense Sometimes.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant words to start my morning off! Thank you as always!
July 31st, 2017 02:20
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant words to start my morning off! Thank you as always!
July 31st, 2017 02:20
Intense Sometimes.
onepauly said:
excellent poem kingkev101,
good or even better then the ones before. you have a gift my friend. invaluable essence, for all of us that need you.
July 30th, 2017 19:19
onepauly said:
excellent poem kingkev101,
good or even better then the ones before. you have a gift my friend. invaluable essence, for all of us that need you.
July 30th, 2017 19:19
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