Comments received on poems by kevin browne
When Frankenstein Played God.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the book is actually about a sad love story.
November 13th, 2017 09:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the book is actually about a sad love story.
November 13th, 2017 09:14
When I Breath.
Accidental Poet said:
You did your best, and you did touch, it did not go wrong, what you did was to create a masterpiece of composition. Great writing Kevin.
November 12th, 2017 08:41
Accidental Poet said:
You did your best, and you did touch, it did not go wrong, what you did was to create a masterpiece of composition. Great writing Kevin.
November 12th, 2017 08:41
When I Breath.
Drewp said:
Wow. Powerful write.I can really feel the emotion in this. Thank you for sharing
November 12th, 2017 07:56
Drewp said:
Wow. Powerful write.I can really feel the emotion in this. Thank you for sharing
November 12th, 2017 07:56
Balloons Filled With Heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled write Kevin.
November 11th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled write Kevin.
November 11th, 2017 01:26
10.000 feet.
dusk arising said:
You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh you down, always preventing that ecstacy of flying near the sun.
Nice words KB.
November 10th, 2017 17:25
dusk arising said:
You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh you down, always preventing that ecstacy of flying near the sun.
Nice words KB.
November 10th, 2017 17:25
10.000 feet.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Kevin! I would have never thought of this metaphor as pertaining to love, but, yeah, you do kind\'ve jump in, don\'t you? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading!
November 10th, 2017 12:29
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Kevin! I would have never thought of this metaphor as pertaining to love, but, yeah, you do kind\'ve jump in, don\'t you? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading!
November 10th, 2017 12:29
10.000 feet.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great poem, love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great poem, love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:00
10.000 feet.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and sweet or long and dusty your pen has scribed with lusty questions as to its end. A first rate style of rhyming too.
November 10th, 2017 10:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and sweet or long and dusty your pen has scribed with lusty questions as to its end. A first rate style of rhyming too.
November 10th, 2017 10:59
Teardrops Close In.
FredPeyer said:
\'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best friends\'
\'Wearing daffodils on my fingertips so poetry can type in flowers\'
Just two of so many incredible lines!
Going straight to my favs, Kevin.
October 31st, 2017 11:20
FredPeyer said:
\'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best friends\'
\'Wearing daffodils on my fingertips so poetry can type in flowers\'
Just two of so many incredible lines!
Going straight to my favs, Kevin.
October 31st, 2017 11:20
And This Is My Story.
FredPeyer said:
There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a Shakespeare, but still, we are writers, be it good or bad. As long as we write from the heart, are not pretentious, know our limits, all is good!
Btw, your poem is so well written, great structure!
From one \'fake\' to another: Kudos!
October 30th, 2017 20:13
FredPeyer said:
There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a Shakespeare, but still, we are writers, be it good or bad. As long as we write from the heart, are not pretentious, know our limits, all is good!
Btw, your poem is so well written, great structure!
From one \'fake\' to another: Kudos!
October 30th, 2017 20:13
And This Is My Story.
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I never claimed to be a poet either
I only write the truth or how i feel at that moment
October 30th, 2017 13:13
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I never claimed to be a poet either
I only write the truth or how i feel at that moment
October 30th, 2017 13:13
And This Is My Story.
Louis Gibbs said:
I really appreciate the structure you have adopted with this poem, Kevin. So much more readable, and a fine write it is!
October 30th, 2017 12:43
Louis Gibbs said:
I really appreciate the structure you have adopted with this poem, Kevin. So much more readable, and a fine write it is!
October 30th, 2017 12:43
Treasures Deep.
Accidental Poet said:
What an amazing historical journey. And the Earth\'s journey pretty amazing too. But your poem is the star here Kevin. A great read, thoroughly enjoyed it.
October 28th, 2017 19:35
Accidental Poet said:
What an amazing historical journey. And the Earth\'s journey pretty amazing too. But your poem is the star here Kevin. A great read, thoroughly enjoyed it.
October 28th, 2017 19:35
Angel Dust Curing.
Fay Slimm. said:
A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a life-time of hurting - hope I read it correctly Kevin as it is such a powerful poem - thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2017 11:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a life-time of hurting - hope I read it correctly Kevin as it is such a powerful poem - thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2017 11:42
Angel Dust Curing.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza rhymes within (is there a name for that?). This excellent poem must have taken a long time to write. Great craftsmanship.
October 25th, 2017 10:46
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza rhymes within (is there a name for that?). This excellent poem must have taken a long time to write. Great craftsmanship.
October 25th, 2017 10:46
From Those Days.
FredPeyer said:
\'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\'
Again too many great lines to mention, but the above floored me!
October 24th, 2017 18:21
FredPeyer said:
\'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\'
Again too many great lines to mention, but the above floored me!
October 24th, 2017 18:21
Where Have All The Poems Gone.
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece of prose which has pace in its reading and tells tales of interest and has a true message Well done indeed.
October 21st, 2017 13:28
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece of prose which has pace in its reading and tells tales of interest and has a true message Well done indeed.
October 21st, 2017 13:28
Poetic Mosaic Perfection.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the winds of loving forever \" is one of my favs. - a really good write on poetic ways of scribing mosaic.
October 19th, 2017 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the winds of loving forever \" is one of my favs. - a really good write on poetic ways of scribing mosaic.
October 19th, 2017 05:45
A Delinquent Fetish For Adversity.
FredPeyer said:
Again, too many great lines to single out. I just love the way you write.
October 16th, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
Again, too many great lines to single out. I just love the way you write.
October 16th, 2017 11:50
Upon Her Cheek.
FredPeyer said:
I like this love poem written in the unique Kevin style. Too many great lines to single out. Well done!
October 12th, 2017 17:44
FredPeyer said:
I like this love poem written in the unique Kevin style. Too many great lines to single out. Well done!
October 12th, 2017 17:44
Love Remains To Teach Us Every Night.
FredPeyer said:
\'A human mind filled with magic innovative genius intriguing ways\', this line Kevin, so aptly describes you. That is where all your exquisite writing comes from.
October 9th, 2017 20:19
FredPeyer said:
\'A human mind filled with magic innovative genius intriguing ways\', this line Kevin, so aptly describes you. That is where all your exquisite writing comes from.
October 9th, 2017 20:19
A Story about Another Poet.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, there are so many beautiful lines here, such as \'Time stood still for a blinkered moment of madness\', \'So my pen is put to bed as it sleeps softly in thought\'.
You covered a lot of ground with this one. Well done!
October 9th, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, there are so many beautiful lines here, such as \'Time stood still for a blinkered moment of madness\', \'So my pen is put to bed as it sleeps softly in thought\'.
You covered a lot of ground with this one. Well done!
October 9th, 2017 12:14
A Story about Another Poet.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A nice reflection about the important pastime of contemplation and writing. Asking questions and framing answers...but only like a poet can do.
October 8th, 2017 22:51
Gary Edward Geraci said:
A nice reflection about the important pastime of contemplation and writing. Asking questions and framing answers...but only like a poet can do.
October 8th, 2017 22:51
A Love Of God Keeps Crying.
malubotelho said:
Beautiful tender writing Kevin. It always seems to me that you write for yourself and you don\'t care if people understand it or not. You for sure have a strong personality, you are true to yourself.
October 7th, 2017 18:44
malubotelho said:
Beautiful tender writing Kevin. It always seems to me that you write for yourself and you don\'t care if people understand it or not. You for sure have a strong personality, you are true to yourself.
October 7th, 2017 18:44
A Love Of God Keeps Crying.
FredPeyer said:
A sad, yet tender poem, Kevin. Very well written.
October 7th, 2017 18:36
FredPeyer said:
A sad, yet tender poem, Kevin. Very well written.
October 7th, 2017 18:36
Drowned In Waters Grey.
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. I see you are changing a bit. Shorter and a different rhythm. Slower too. Still I don\'t get too much of it. Will try to read again later.
October 6th, 2017 23:36
malubotelho said:
Nice writing Kevin. I see you are changing a bit. Shorter and a different rhythm. Slower too. Still I don\'t get too much of it. Will try to read again later.
October 6th, 2017 23:36
Drowned In Waters Grey.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you got me a little bit on this one. The lines are your usual good, but I cannot find the glue that holds them together. Can you help me out?
October 6th, 2017 16:22
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, you got me a little bit on this one. The lines are your usual good, but I cannot find the glue that holds them together. Can you help me out?
October 6th, 2017 16:22
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