Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Cobbled Steps.
FredPeyer said:
Was in England twice, but never visited London. Your excellent poem makes it come alive, shows a different side. Superb writing as always, Kevin!
December 9th, 2017 13:26
FredPeyer said:
Was in England twice, but never visited London. Your excellent poem makes it come alive, shows a different side. Superb writing as always, Kevin!
December 9th, 2017 13:26
Cobbled Steps.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the lifeline of London a long time ago.
December 9th, 2017 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the lifeline of London a long time ago.
December 9th, 2017 01:31
Flower Over Love
FredPeyer said:
\'My heart has gone, God knows only where\'....\'old lovers lane kissed goodbye\'....
Superb writing, Kevin! Love it!
November 30th, 2017 13:38
FredPeyer said:
\'My heart has gone, God knows only where\'....\'old lovers lane kissed goodbye\'....
Superb writing, Kevin! Love it!
November 30th, 2017 13:38
Rosie Lee Sure Loved Me.
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
Ah the wonders of love and Rosie Lee.
Thank you that was lovely
Keep writing
FineB
November 26th, 2017 14:34
FineB said:
Hi Kevin,
Ah the wonders of love and Rosie Lee.
Thank you that was lovely
Keep writing
FineB
November 26th, 2017 14:34
Rosie Lee Sure Loved Me.
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly written declaration which I hope Rosie Lee treasured my friend. A really appealing read Kevin.
November 26th, 2017 10:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A tenderly written declaration which I hope Rosie Lee treasured my friend. A really appealing read Kevin.
November 26th, 2017 10:47
Whisper Me Gently.
Laura🌻 said:
The fifth stanza and the last line are my favorites in this beautifully written poem drenched with hopefulness! I very much enjoyed the read, Kevin!
November 25th, 2017 18:17
Laura🌻 said:
The fifth stanza and the last line are my favorites in this beautifully written poem drenched with hopefulness! I very much enjoyed the read, Kevin!
November 25th, 2017 18:17
Whisper Me Gently.
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you use the verbs iand play with the nouns in this picture of love needing the allness of every experience. My favourite stanza if I had to choose would be this one - - \"Dance me til the dead of dawn
Misty me dew drops daisy
With a flake of snowdrop sun
Garden me mowing the lawn.\" An exciting piece of work Kevin and am so glad to have caught the read.
November 25th, 2017 13:30
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you use the verbs iand play with the nouns in this picture of love needing the allness of every experience. My favourite stanza if I had to choose would be this one - - \"Dance me til the dead of dawn
Misty me dew drops daisy
With a flake of snowdrop sun
Garden me mowing the lawn.\" An exciting piece of work Kevin and am so glad to have caught the read.
November 25th, 2017 13:30
Timeless Affection.
Seeker said:
Kevin, the is an interesting and clever rhyme scheme. A lot of truth and most importantly a lot of heart in this beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2017 22:27
Seeker said:
Kevin, the is an interesting and clever rhyme scheme. A lot of truth and most importantly a lot of heart in this beautiful poem.
November 24th, 2017 22:27
Raindrops On My Blanket.
FredPeyer said:
\'Shivers in the sunshine when all I lost was never really mine\'
Kevin, this is a heart-wrenching account of homelessness. You wrote it so real, I thought it was you for sure, but then read your comment to Fay...am relieved!
And that line above is my absolutely favorite line!
November 24th, 2017 12:44
FredPeyer said:
\'Shivers in the sunshine when all I lost was never really mine\'
Kevin, this is a heart-wrenching account of homelessness. You wrote it so real, I thought it was you for sure, but then read your comment to Fay...am relieved!
And that line above is my absolutely favorite line!
November 24th, 2017 12:44
Timeless Affection.
FredPeyer said:
You are not called \'kingkev\' for nothing! This is \'royal writing\' here, Kevin! Enjoyed it to the last line.
November 24th, 2017 11:20
FredPeyer said:
You are not called \'kingkev\' for nothing! This is \'royal writing\' here, Kevin! Enjoyed it to the last line.
November 24th, 2017 11:20
Timeless Affection.
Michael Edwards said:
Sure penetrates even more so after a second reading - great work.
November 24th, 2017 06:27
Michael Edwards said:
Sure penetrates even more so after a second reading - great work.
November 24th, 2017 06:27
Timeless Affection.
b-LAH-que said:
This is pretty damn good, Kevin. I keep re-reading it both for enjoyment and to let it\'s imagery and meaning sink in, something it\'s smooth rhythm and rhyme scheme make it very easy and satisfying to do.
November 24th, 2017 04:22
b-LAH-que said:
This is pretty damn good, Kevin. I keep re-reading it both for enjoyment and to let it\'s imagery and meaning sink in, something it\'s smooth rhythm and rhyme scheme make it very easy and satisfying to do.
November 24th, 2017 04:22
Supreme Sensation.
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully flowed down to the end, thank you for calming my brain ;)
November 23rd, 2017 18:53
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully flowed down to the end, thank you for calming my brain ;)
November 23rd, 2017 18:53
Raindrops On My Blanket.
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderfully worded phrasing in this heart wrenching account of being out on a homeless rim Kevin - - a shiver of sympathy goes out to all those who today are in doorways and worse through no fault of their own.
November 23rd, 2017 05:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderfully worded phrasing in this heart wrenching account of being out on a homeless rim Kevin - - a shiver of sympathy goes out to all those who today are in doorways and worse through no fault of their own.
November 23rd, 2017 05:42
Raindrops On My Blanket.
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
That was wonderful and poignant.
Great stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
November 23rd, 2017 04:54
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
That was wonderful and poignant.
Great stuff.
Keep writing
FineB
November 23rd, 2017 04:54
Supreme Sensation.
FredPeyer said:
That supreme sensation turned into a supreme poem, Kevin!
November 22nd, 2017 13:22
FredPeyer said:
That supreme sensation turned into a supreme poem, Kevin!
November 22nd, 2017 13:22
This World As We Know It.
FredPeyer said:
\'Mouth filled with the tongue of intellect revealing all brand new\'
In your case Kevin, it is your mind that is filled with intellect and revealing our future, or at least the future we would like to have!
November 22nd, 2017 12:19
FredPeyer said:
\'Mouth filled with the tongue of intellect revealing all brand new\'
In your case Kevin, it is your mind that is filled with intellect and revealing our future, or at least the future we would like to have!
November 22nd, 2017 12:19
Supreme Sensation.
Fay Slimm. said:
The gifts love bestows to those who treasure the places to find it - a superb read Kevin.
November 22nd, 2017 06:24
Fay Slimm. said:
The gifts love bestows to those who treasure the places to find it - a superb read Kevin.
November 22nd, 2017 06:24
This World As We Know It.
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
What an interesting poem, philosophical, thought provoking, deep and simply beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
November 21st, 2017 07:24
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
What an interesting poem, philosophical, thought provoking, deep and simply beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
November 21st, 2017 07:24
Like A Flower All Over My Pen.
Michael Edwards said:
Some write - I think need to read it again - a great feel good ending.
November 20th, 2017 04:00
Michael Edwards said:
Some write - I think need to read it again - a great feel good ending.
November 20th, 2017 04:00
I\'ll Dress Up.
LukeCoomer said:
This is masterful, I love the every other line thing you got going there! I\'ve done this before and I don\'t think anyone realizes it not an easy feat... I applaude you sir
November 18th, 2017 19:36
LukeCoomer said:
This is masterful, I love the every other line thing you got going there! I\'ve done this before and I don\'t think anyone realizes it not an easy feat... I applaude you sir
November 18th, 2017 19:36
I\'ll Dress Up.
FineB said:
Thanks Kev for that lovely powerful poem.
One thing I know I will certainly have to dress up as the cold and bleak winter in the UK is definitely upon us.
Keep writing
FineB
November 18th, 2017 13:53
FineB said:
Thanks Kev for that lovely powerful poem.
One thing I know I will certainly have to dress up as the cold and bleak winter in the UK is definitely upon us.
Keep writing
FineB
November 18th, 2017 13:53
My Love Was Left For Dead.
FredPeyer said:
\'Where frolics play under pavements deep\'....are you hinting (and beautifully at that) at the Paris catacombs?
Love the whole poem, Kevin! \'A glass shoe reflecting a shine upon her smile\' is simply beautiful writing.
November 17th, 2017 11:58
FredPeyer said:
\'Where frolics play under pavements deep\'....are you hinting (and beautifully at that) at the Paris catacombs?
Love the whole poem, Kevin! \'A glass shoe reflecting a shine upon her smile\' is simply beautiful writing.
November 17th, 2017 11:58
My Love Was Left For Dead.
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of love\'s journey shines through each line in this poignant verse Kevin. A touching read.
November 17th, 2017 02:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of love\'s journey shines through each line in this poignant verse Kevin. A touching read.
November 17th, 2017 02:58
My Love Was Left For Dead.
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful emotive write - Great work Kevin.
November 17th, 2017 02:16
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful emotive write - Great work Kevin.
November 17th, 2017 02:16
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