Comments received on poems by kevin browne
My Love Was Left For Dead.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, the love and loss burns through your words Kevin.
November 17th, 2017 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, the love and loss burns through your words Kevin.
November 17th, 2017 01:14
My Love Was Left For Dead.
Seek said:
Passionate writing on sadness and loss. One cannot stay unmoved by this wonderful write.
November 17th, 2017 01:04
Seek said:
Passionate writing on sadness and loss. One cannot stay unmoved by this wonderful write.
November 17th, 2017 01:04
Melody For The Moon..
FredPeyer said:
...And I was dancing with the orchestra while reading your poem!
Good write again, Kevin!
PS: For that \'volcanic disarray eruption\' I guess I will have to fly to the Big Island of Hawaii!
November 16th, 2017 21:31
FredPeyer said:
...And I was dancing with the orchestra while reading your poem!
Good write again, Kevin!
PS: For that \'volcanic disarray eruption\' I guess I will have to fly to the Big Island of Hawaii!
November 16th, 2017 21:31
God\'s Reflection.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this is a strong poem, full of power and hope, of belief and acceptance. Very well written!
November 16th, 2017 20:36
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, this is a strong poem, full of power and hope, of belief and acceptance. Very well written!
November 16th, 2017 20:36
A Way Of Life.
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent poem made me look back on my own life. There is much truth in your writing, and it reminded me again that we do have to re-invent ourselves over and over again.
November 15th, 2017 17:59
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent poem made me look back on my own life. There is much truth in your writing, and it reminded me again that we do have to re-invent ourselves over and over again.
November 15th, 2017 17:59
God\'s Reflection.
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
This is a lovely tribute to God. Nice to have a poem with a spiritual feel to it.
Keep writing.
Fine B
November 15th, 2017 11:56
FineB said:
Thank you Kevin.
This is a lovely tribute to God. Nice to have a poem with a spiritual feel to it.
Keep writing.
Fine B
November 15th, 2017 11:56
A Way Of Life.
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. We must learn from the mistakes of the past and begin anew. Well said.
November 14th, 2017 10:58
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. We must learn from the mistakes of the past and begin anew. Well said.
November 14th, 2017 10:58
When I Breath.
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yours here is a writing style that I am familiar with and quite fond of: the repetition of words and use of them for their multiple but distinct meanings. A fun way to express the subject matter at hand I think - going for internal rhymes too I see. I also appreciate your spiritual references to the greatest muse of all; if we will only surrender to his Will!
November 13th, 2017 22:54
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Yours here is a writing style that I am familiar with and quite fond of: the repetition of words and use of them for their multiple but distinct meanings. A fun way to express the subject matter at hand I think - going for internal rhymes too I see. I also appreciate your spiritual references to the greatest muse of all; if we will only surrender to his Will!
November 13th, 2017 22:54
When I Breath.
FredPeyer said:
\'You share your love, you live your life and start to win\'....what is winning here is your writing, Kevin
November 13th, 2017 17:58
FredPeyer said:
\'You share your love, you live your life and start to win\'....what is winning here is your writing, Kevin
November 13th, 2017 17:58
When Frankenstein Played God.
orchidee said:
I forget sometimes that Franky is the creator of the monster. So what is the monster\'s name? Could be Joe Bloggs for all we know! lol. Is the creator Mr Frank N. Stein? (Wish I would shut up. lol).
November 13th, 2017 11:07
orchidee said:
I forget sometimes that Franky is the creator of the monster. So what is the monster\'s name? Could be Joe Bloggs for all we know! lol. Is the creator Mr Frank N. Stein? (Wish I would shut up. lol).
November 13th, 2017 11:07
When Frankenstein Played God.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the book is actually about a sad love story.
November 13th, 2017 09:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the book is actually about a sad love story.
November 13th, 2017 09:14
When I Breath.
Drewp said:
Wow. Powerful write.I can really feel the emotion in this. Thank you for sharing
November 12th, 2017 07:56
Drewp said:
Wow. Powerful write.I can really feel the emotion in this. Thank you for sharing
November 12th, 2017 07:56
Balloons Filled With Heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled write Kevin.
November 11th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful love filled write Kevin.
November 11th, 2017 01:26
10.000 feet.
dusk arising said:
You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh you down, always preventing that ecstacy of flying near the sun.
Nice words KB.
November 10th, 2017 17:25
dusk arising said:
You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh you down, always preventing that ecstacy of flying near the sun.
Nice words KB.
November 10th, 2017 17:25
10.000 feet.
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Kevin! I would have never thought of this metaphor as pertaining to love, but, yeah, you do kind\'ve jump in, don\'t you? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading!
November 10th, 2017 12:29
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem, Kevin! I would have never thought of this metaphor as pertaining to love, but, yeah, you do kind\'ve jump in, don\'t you? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading!
November 10th, 2017 12:29
10.000 feet.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great poem, love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great poem, love it!
November 10th, 2017 12:00
10.000 feet.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and sweet or long and dusty your pen has scribed with lusty questions as to its end. A first rate style of rhyming too.
November 10th, 2017 10:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah clever wordsmithing here Kevin - - love\'s journey whether short and sweet or long and dusty your pen has scribed with lusty questions as to its end. A first rate style of rhyming too.
November 10th, 2017 10:59
Teardrops Close In.
FredPeyer said:
\'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best friends\'
\'Wearing daffodils on my fingertips so poetry can type in flowers\'
Just two of so many incredible lines!
Going straight to my favs, Kevin.
October 31st, 2017 11:20
FredPeyer said:
\'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best friends\'
\'Wearing daffodils on my fingertips so poetry can type in flowers\'
Just two of so many incredible lines!
Going straight to my favs, Kevin.
October 31st, 2017 11:20
And This Is My Story.
FredPeyer said:
There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a Shakespeare, but still, we are writers, be it good or bad. As long as we write from the heart, are not pretentious, know our limits, all is good!
Btw, your poem is so well written, great structure!
From one \'fake\' to another: Kudos!
October 30th, 2017 20:13
FredPeyer said:
There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a Shakespeare, but still, we are writers, be it good or bad. As long as we write from the heart, are not pretentious, know our limits, all is good!
Btw, your poem is so well written, great structure!
From one \'fake\' to another: Kudos!
October 30th, 2017 20:13
And This Is My Story.
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I never claimed to be a poet either
I only write the truth or how i feel at that moment
October 30th, 2017 13:13
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I never claimed to be a poet either
I only write the truth or how i feel at that moment
October 30th, 2017 13:13
And This Is My Story.
Louis Gibbs said:
I really appreciate the structure you have adopted with this poem, Kevin. So much more readable, and a fine write it is!
October 30th, 2017 12:43
Louis Gibbs said:
I really appreciate the structure you have adopted with this poem, Kevin. So much more readable, and a fine write it is!
October 30th, 2017 12:43
Angel Dust Curing.
Fay Slimm. said:
A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a life-time of hurting - hope I read it correctly Kevin as it is such a powerful poem - thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2017 11:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A rhyme which words sad between well written lines yet angel dust curing a life-time of hurting - hope I read it correctly Kevin as it is such a powerful poem - thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2017 11:42
Angel Dust Curing.
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza rhymes within (is there a name for that?). This excellent poem must have taken a long time to write. Great craftsmanship.
October 25th, 2017 10:46
FredPeyer said:
Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza rhymes within (is there a name for that?). This excellent poem must have taken a long time to write. Great craftsmanship.
October 25th, 2017 10:46
From Those Days.
FredPeyer said:
\'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\'
Again too many great lines to mention, but the above floored me!
October 24th, 2017 18:21
FredPeyer said:
\'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\'
Again too many great lines to mention, but the above floored me!
October 24th, 2017 18:21
Where Have All The Poems Gone.
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece of prose which has pace in its reading and tells tales of interest and has a true message Well done indeed.
October 21st, 2017 13:28
Fay Slimm. said:
You create such a flow of good interconnection here Kevin - a rare piece of prose which has pace in its reading and tells tales of interest and has a true message Well done indeed.
October 21st, 2017 13:28
Poetic Mosaic Perfection.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the winds of loving forever \" is one of my favs. - a really good write on poetic ways of scribing mosaic.
October 19th, 2017 05:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the winds of loving forever \" is one of my favs. - a really good write on poetic ways of scribing mosaic.
October 19th, 2017 05:45
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