Comments received on poems by kevin browne



Timeless Affection.
b-LAH-que said:

This is pretty damn good, Kevin. I keep re-reading it both for enjoyment and to let it\'s imagery and meaning sink in, something it\'s smooth rhythm and rhyme scheme make it very easy and satisfying to do.

November 24th, 2017 04:22

Supreme Sensation.
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully flowed down to the end, thank you for calming my brain ;)

November 23rd, 2017 18:53

Raindrops On My Blanket.
Accidental Poet said:

Hard to imagine a homeless life when you\'ve always had a roof over your head and food for every meal. And yet, they are out there as real as can be. Very sad to see. Excellent write Kevin.

November 23rd, 2017 09:03

Raindrops On My Blanket.
Fay Slimm. said:

Wonderfully worded phrasing in this heart wrenching account of being out on a homeless rim Kevin - - a shiver of sympathy goes out to all those who today are in doorways and worse through no fault of their own.

November 23rd, 2017 05:42

Raindrops On My Blanket.
FineB said:

Thank you Kevin.

That was wonderful and poignant.

Great stuff.

Keep writing
FineB

November 23rd, 2017 04:54

Supreme Sensation.
FredPeyer said:

That supreme sensation turned into a supreme poem, Kevin!

November 22nd, 2017 13:22

This World As We Know It.
FredPeyer said:

\'Mouth filled with the tongue of intellect revealing all brand new\'
In your case Kevin, it is your mind that is filled with intellect and revealing our future, or at least the future we would like to have!

November 22nd, 2017 12:19

Supreme Sensation.
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 22nd, 2017 09:24

Supreme Sensation.
Fay Slimm. said:

The gifts love bestows to those who treasure the places to find it - a superb read Kevin.

November 22nd, 2017 06:24

Supreme Sensation.
Accidental Poet said:

Love IS a many splendor thing Kevin. Great write.

November 22nd, 2017 05:03

This World As We Know It.
FineB said:

Thank you Kevin.

What an interesting poem, philosophical, thought provoking, deep and simply beautiful!

Keep writing
FineB

November 21st, 2017 07:24

Like A Flower All Over My Pen.
Michael Edwards said:

Some write - I think need to read it again - a great feel good ending.

November 20th, 2017 04:00

I\'ll Dress Up.
LukeCoomer said:

This is masterful, I love the every other line thing you got going there! I\'ve done this before and I don\'t think anyone realizes it not an easy feat... I applaude you sir

November 18th, 2017 19:36

I\'ll Dress Up.
FineB said:

Thanks Kev for that lovely powerful poem.

One thing I know I will certainly have to dress up as the cold and bleak winter in the UK is definitely upon us.
Keep writing
FineB

November 18th, 2017 13:53

My Love Was Left For Dead.
FredPeyer said:

\'Where frolics play under pavements deep\'....are you hinting (and beautifully at that) at the Paris catacombs?
Love the whole poem, Kevin! \'A glass shoe reflecting a shine upon her smile\' is simply beautiful writing.

November 17th, 2017 11:58

My Love Was Left For Dead.
Accidental Poet said:

A very moving write this is Kevin. The hills and valleys of love. Well written.

November 17th, 2017 09:25

My Love Was Left For Dead.
Fay Slimm. said:

Your talent for wording with depth attracting such attention to detail of love\'s journey shines through each line in this poignant verse Kevin. A touching read.

November 17th, 2017 02:58

My Love Was Left For Dead.
Michael Edwards said:

A beautiful emotive write - Great work Kevin.

November 17th, 2017 02:16

My Love Was Left For Dead.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, the love and loss burns through your words Kevin.

November 17th, 2017 01:14

My Love Was Left For Dead.
Seek said:

Passionate writing on sadness and loss. One cannot stay unmoved by this wonderful write.

November 17th, 2017 01:04

Melody For The Moon..
FredPeyer said:

...And I was dancing with the orchestra while reading your poem!
Good write again, Kevin!
PS: For that \'volcanic disarray eruption\' I guess I will have to fly to the Big Island of Hawaii!

November 16th, 2017 21:31

God\'s Reflection.
FredPeyer said:

Kevin, this is a strong poem, full of power and hope, of belief and acceptance. Very well written!

November 16th, 2017 20:36

A Way Of Life.
FredPeyer said:

Your excellent poem made me look back on my own life. There is much truth in your writing, and it reminded me again that we do have to re-invent ourselves over and over again.


November 15th, 2017 17:59

God\'s Reflection.
FineB said:

Thank you Kevin.

This is a lovely tribute to God. Nice to have a poem with a spiritual feel to it.

Keep writing.
Fine B

November 15th, 2017 11:56

God\'s Reflection.
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 15th, 2017 11:41

God\'s Reflection.
orchidee said:

A fine write Kevin.

November 15th, 2017 09:46

A Way Of Life.
Nicholas Browning said:

Indeed. We must learn from the mistakes of the past and begin anew. Well said.

November 14th, 2017 10:58

When I Breath.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Yours here is a writing style that I am familiar with and quite fond of: the repetition of words and use of them for their multiple but distinct meanings. A fun way to express the subject matter at hand I think - going for internal rhymes too I see. I also appreciate your spiritual references to the greatest muse of all; if we will only surrender to his Will!

November 13th, 2017 22:54

When I Breath.
FredPeyer said:

\'You share your love, you live your life and start to win\'....what is winning here is your writing, Kevin

November 13th, 2017 17:58

When Frankenstein Played God.
orchidee said:

I forget sometimes that Franky is the creator of the monster. So what is the monster\'s name? Could be Joe Bloggs for all we know! lol. Is the creator Mr Frank N. Stein? (Wish I would shut up. lol).

November 13th, 2017 11:07



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