Comments received on poems by kevin browne
Splashing Waves In Rainbows.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant! Every other line my brain was on fire, so many thoughts I couldn\'t keep up.
Well and truly blow my mind.
July 11th, 2017 02:45
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant! Every other line my brain was on fire, so many thoughts I couldn\'t keep up.
Well and truly blow my mind.
July 11th, 2017 02:45
Splashing Waves In Rainbows.
FredPeyer said:
You hit the nail on the head. I do wonder sometimes!
July 11th, 2017 02:38
FredPeyer said:
You hit the nail on the head. I do wonder sometimes!
July 11th, 2017 02:38
I Have The Poets Will.
malubotelho said:
For who knows what a thought is doing even if it is mine or yours.
Wow! I never thought about it. A thought can be just a thought and still it could affect the global energy since we are all connected through mental energy. Without saying what a thought can became or produce. Awesome write Kevin. I will need to read it more and brake it into sections because it is too rich to be considered just one part.
July 10th, 2017 23:13
malubotelho said:
For who knows what a thought is doing even if it is mine or yours.
Wow! I never thought about it. A thought can be just a thought and still it could affect the global energy since we are all connected through mental energy. Without saying what a thought can became or produce. Awesome write Kevin. I will need to read it more and brake it into sections because it is too rich to be considered just one part.
July 10th, 2017 23:13
I Have The Poets Will.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, Poets seem to have the will to keep writing and may your will never leave you.
July 10th, 2017 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, Poets seem to have the will to keep writing and may your will never leave you.
July 10th, 2017 00:58
I Have The Poets Will.
whisperingquill said:
\"Because the honesty is in the crime of someone else\'s dream
Shouldering up against ambition if ever we get a chance for war\"
Very enviable lines Kevin
Wonderfully crafted poet a tapestry of potent truth marvelous profound message 🍻
July 9th, 2017 23:41
whisperingquill said:
\"Because the honesty is in the crime of someone else\'s dream
Shouldering up against ambition if ever we get a chance for war\"
Very enviable lines Kevin
Wonderfully crafted poet a tapestry of potent truth marvelous profound message 🍻
July 9th, 2017 23:41
I Have The Poets Will.
onepauly said:
each line is like a poem in itself reading slow brings the poem to life
July 9th, 2017 17:35
onepauly said:
each line is like a poem in itself reading slow brings the poem to life
July 9th, 2017 17:35
On a Bad Thought
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Powerful word flow! I especially liked the phrase \"the bitches of our tools,\"
And BTW: I\'ve spent some time with the \'Hawk & Trowel\' myself.
Nice job!
Kurt
July 9th, 2017 16:20
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Powerful word flow! I especially liked the phrase \"the bitches of our tools,\"
And BTW: I\'ve spent some time with the \'Hawk & Trowel\' myself.
Nice job!
Kurt
July 9th, 2017 16:20
A love Thats Found.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful write - my wife and I have been together for well over 50 years so this really means something.
July 9th, 2017 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful write - my wife and I have been together for well over 50 years so this really means something.
July 9th, 2017 00:34
A love Thats Found.
malubotelho said:
So awesome. I think it is one of the best I know from you. I too think that love should be extensive for all things and be just exclusity of romantic relationship. The more we make love, the better. I declare that all my senses are making love with your poem right now. Thank you.
July 8th, 2017 23:13
malubotelho said:
So awesome. I think it is one of the best I know from you. I too think that love should be extensive for all things and be just exclusity of romantic relationship. The more we make love, the better. I declare that all my senses are making love with your poem right now. Thank you.
July 8th, 2017 23:13
A love Thats Found.
Augustus said:
Sharing the love we have is awesome. And when we give some it grows. I\'ll take this moment to sent to you positive thoughts, love and a hug.
July 8th, 2017 22:18
Augustus said:
Sharing the love we have is awesome. And when we give some it grows. I\'ll take this moment to sent to you positive thoughts, love and a hug.
July 8th, 2017 22:18
A love Thats Found.
FredPeyer said:
Your poem hit me right between the eyes. THAT is what love is all about.
Beautiful writing, thank you for sharing!
July 8th, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
Your poem hit me right between the eyes. THAT is what love is all about.
Beautiful writing, thank you for sharing!
July 8th, 2017 19:32
A love Thats Found.
onepauly said:
the most positively inspiring one yet, quite fulfilling. put it there.
July 8th, 2017 00:48
onepauly said:
the most positively inspiring one yet, quite fulfilling. put it there.
July 8th, 2017 00:48
Doubts In The Thought.
onepauly said:
is there justice in the jungle?
life is not fair. but sometimes we are. cherish this.
July 7th, 2017 21:00
onepauly said:
is there justice in the jungle?
life is not fair. but sometimes we are. cherish this.
July 7th, 2017 21:00
Doubts In The Thought.
malubotelho said:
I would say we live for learning. This is the only reason we live, even when it does make no sense.
July 7th, 2017 20:38
malubotelho said:
I would say we live for learning. This is the only reason we live, even when it does make no sense.
July 7th, 2017 20:38
Doubts In The Thought.
Augustus said:
Perishing in the sunlight of perception.
Yes the rainbow wanted to catch a star. Heh, heh.
Yea, what are we living for?
Love you work.
July 7th, 2017 18:32
Augustus said:
Perishing in the sunlight of perception.
Yes the rainbow wanted to catch a star. Heh, heh.
Yea, what are we living for?
Love you work.
July 7th, 2017 18:32
I stayed Up For Three Years.
onepauly said:
I study each line. and take my time. that way I am able to understand you and what you mean. I don\'t get it all exactly but enough. good job
July 7th, 2017 01:44
onepauly said:
I study each line. and take my time. that way I am able to understand you and what you mean. I don\'t get it all exactly but enough. good job
July 7th, 2017 01:44
I stayed Up For Three Years.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a great believer in the last line and this is as good as they come - great read
July 6th, 2017 23:22
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a great believer in the last line and this is as good as they come - great read
July 6th, 2017 23:22
I stayed Up For Three Years.
Augustus said:
Staying up in fear
Scared, hiding
Knocks with pain
Never speaking.
I believe I hear you. Hugs.
July 6th, 2017 21:46
Augustus said:
Staying up in fear
Scared, hiding
Knocks with pain
Never speaking.
I believe I hear you. Hugs.
July 6th, 2017 21:46
I stayed Up For Three Years.
kevin browne said:
then those two loves should ignite the flame forever. that\'s my reckoning anyhow. I blunder at lot of things which normally go wrong but, practise is a good concept to have. especially within the field of beautiful ladies such as your life has been. thoughts belong to the people my friend and that\'s where my heart lays to rest sometimes.
July 6th, 2017 18:38
kevin browne said:
then those two loves should ignite the flame forever. that\'s my reckoning anyhow. I blunder at lot of things which normally go wrong but, practise is a good concept to have. especially within the field of beautiful ladies such as your life has been. thoughts belong to the people my friend and that\'s where my heart lays to rest sometimes.
July 6th, 2017 18:38
On a Bad Thought
ShannonXx said:
A wonderful use of many different words in one poem! A great read
July 6th, 2017 11:33
ShannonXx said:
A wonderful use of many different words in one poem! A great read
July 6th, 2017 11:33
On a Bad Thought
kevin browne said:
and i didn\'t expect all this for\' on a bad thought\'.
July 6th, 2017 00:46
kevin browne said:
and i didn\'t expect all this for\' on a bad thought\'.
July 6th, 2017 00:46
On a Bad Thought
malubotelho said:
LOL. I love to read you guys comments. I was waiting till someone would begin to fight the criticism. What some people do not understand is that even if a blind person is awaiting for help to cross a street, it is respectfull to ask them if they want your help. It is always smart to think that they might be there just appreciating the sound of the cars passing by.
Thanks for the great writing and for the precious comments.
July 6th, 2017 00:26
malubotelho said:
LOL. I love to read you guys comments. I was waiting till someone would begin to fight the criticism. What some people do not understand is that even if a blind person is awaiting for help to cross a street, it is respectfull to ask them if they want your help. It is always smart to think that they might be there just appreciating the sound of the cars passing by.
Thanks for the great writing and for the precious comments.
July 6th, 2017 00:26
On a Bad Thought
onepauly said:
your poem was great wonderfully worded. I never use punctuation in any of my poetry. its more free for the reader. its easier for him or her to make their own choice with what they have just read.
July 5th, 2017 20:15
onepauly said:
your poem was great wonderfully worded. I never use punctuation in any of my poetry. its more free for the reader. its easier for him or her to make their own choice with what they have just read.
July 5th, 2017 20:15
On a Bad Thought
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
You have a lot of great words mingled together. They are dancing a dance that many don\'t tango. That being said, I don\'t get some of the word usage. I think it might be the old Brit-American break down. For instance when you use Whippet are you referring to the dog, or are you referring to a drug that Americans use to get high? When you use bitches are you talking again about a female dog, or about people? At any rate your poem fills my mouth, and certainly is a tongue twister. I have a hard time with it just like with many other poems here on poetic side due to the lack of commas, and periods. I don\'t know where you want me to place them when I read it. This makes it hard for me to appreciate it in it\'s glory. If I were to grade your poem I would give it a 6/10 due to the lack of commas. Other than that you have a real gem here. A diamond in the rough that is still in the rough if I might say. My favorite line is Beware\'s beware for the distance rebelling are the wars in tow
Please look at and review my poem(s) and tell me what you think! I hoped this helped. If not tell me so!
July 5th, 2017 18:54
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
You have a lot of great words mingled together. They are dancing a dance that many don\'t tango. That being said, I don\'t get some of the word usage. I think it might be the old Brit-American break down. For instance when you use Whippet are you referring to the dog, or are you referring to a drug that Americans use to get high? When you use bitches are you talking again about a female dog, or about people? At any rate your poem fills my mouth, and certainly is a tongue twister. I have a hard time with it just like with many other poems here on poetic side due to the lack of commas, and periods. I don\'t know where you want me to place them when I read it. This makes it hard for me to appreciate it in it\'s glory. If I were to grade your poem I would give it a 6/10 due to the lack of commas. Other than that you have a real gem here. A diamond in the rough that is still in the rough if I might say. My favorite line is Beware\'s beware for the distance rebelling are the wars in tow
Please look at and review my poem(s) and tell me what you think! I hoped this helped. If not tell me so!
July 5th, 2017 18:54
Something On My Heart.
onepauly said:
very emotional poem, I was deeply moved by your expertice in wording what you felt, by the way you wrote it. and I was there at every line you explained about the sadness. you certainly have the gift my friend.
July 4th, 2017 01:31
onepauly said:
very emotional poem, I was deeply moved by your expertice in wording what you felt, by the way you wrote it. and I was there at every line you explained about the sadness. you certainly have the gift my friend.
July 4th, 2017 01:31
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