Comments received on poems by Felicityjones



My Name Is..
Raven333 said:

OMG, I enjoyed that way to much and I believe you know me.. LOL, because I am all that wrapped in one.. clever write and I loved the rhyme!!!

September 9th, 2022 21:01

Mind Games
Paul Bell said:

Tough one, but don\'t hang around, tomorrow is another day.

April 10th, 2022 08:31

Growing Up
Crowns4Christ said:

Glad you\'re out of that toxic relationship, there\'s someone out there worthy of you, who will treat you right

March 29th, 2022 14:10

Ignorance Is Bliss
L. B. Mek said:

this reads sincere, hard to voice our frustrations
and share them without getting carried away
I think you found the right balance,
thanks for choosing to share

August 19th, 2021 02:01

Unconditionally
L. B. Mek said:

such a warming dedication, who wouldn\'t be humbled to have this written for them, I hope your partner appreciates you and reciprocates equally,
a wonderful write, thanks for sharing

January 26th, 2021 04:44

Unconditionally
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good loving write Felicity, with love so deep no matter what happens you will always be together.

Andy

January 26th, 2021 01:49

Unconditionally
FredPeyer said:

That, Felicity, is one of the nicest poems I read about unconditional love. After being married for nearly 45 years I still feel the same way towards my wife. Kudos!

January 25th, 2021 19:52

We Made It Another Day
L. B. Mek said:

a poignant message for these trouble times, good read
\'I know right now we wish we were gone and everything feels like it’s gone all wrong.
I’m sorry that we’ve been suffering for so long.
We made it another day.
Our life matters and we deserve to feel loved.\'

October 24th, 2020 04:07

We Made It Another Day
Goldfinch60 said:

In slowing down you can look around you and realise that it is a good day and once you realise that it is a good day you can then be aware that there will be other good days ahead of you.

Andy

October 24th, 2020 01:09

We Made It Another Day
myself and me said:

Those days could be so long and so wrong and so hard to move on. Cry is fine, anger is OK, let it out and hold on. Yes, you will be OK, it just takes a lot of courage and strength. Well penned.

October 23rd, 2020 23:13

We Made It Another Day
dusk arising said:

In our wandering through life there are many paths before us. Sometimes instinct takes us into a thickness of entangled jungle of solitude through which we struggle yet our inner light motivates self preservation even though it may grow dim...... for part of our humanity is the wish, the desire, the justification.... of something better.
Though the night be dark, a dawning will follow.
Keep on keeping on.

October 23rd, 2020 18:55

A relationships death
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, you are better out of that situation, the person for you will be out there and all will be well.

Andy

September 30th, 2020 00:20

A relationships death
Whimsical_1 said:

Awe, I felt this down in my core. I too have been there. Im glad you were able to get out.

September 29th, 2020 13:23

What It\'s Like To Be Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Most people do not see the real person inside as we can put on different masks in different situations. Being able to release our true feelings in words is a great help to get us ahead in our lives.

Andy

September 4th, 2020 00:11

What It\'s Like To Be Me
dusk arising said:

Most of us are a front to those around us, even to those close to us but i guess most of us are lucky to shrug that off as \'normal\' whatever that is. But you reveal here a pain unseen and unseeable. Yet so tangible for you that you feel it\'s killing you.
Now i don\'t know if this is your reality or a well composed piece of work.
But i do know that writing poetry let me release much darkness and despair as i shared it here on mps where many have done just that, many are doing that now and we are the most supportive group of anonymous friends you\'ll find.
Keep writing.


September 3rd, 2020 21:34

What It\'s Like To Be Me
Crowns4Christ said:

depression and anxiety are very real,i struggle with them also,and understand how you feel.nobody can understand our struggle of making it through day by day unless they\'ve lived it themselves.i feel your meaning

September 3rd, 2020 14:26

Strength
L. B. Mek said:

empowering other\'s with your words alone - is an enviable gift, that you wield: with unbridled passion!
thank you for sharing

September 3rd, 2020 01:33

Strength
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Morning FELICITY - As a WOMAN I love the TRUISM expressed in your Frank Testimony!

You arn*t born strong
You*re forced to be it !

This is something all WOMEN have to learn in the face of WEAK & PREDATORY MEN ! As Females We are born with Confidence & Dignity - BUT - A weak & shameless Man can remove that with one Blow of his Sword. Alas Young & Old Men are taught in a Godless Society that this is how they *Prove their MANHOOD* by thoughtlessly destroying the most precious thing a GIRL possesses - HER VIGINITY ! I my case many a promising relationship ended because I wouldn*t give the BOY / MAN what they expected. Im half Spanish & A Physiotherapist and I was accused of being FRIGID (which Im not!) just because I defended my HONOUR! I was raised a Good Catholic Girl - by God fearing Parents (My PAPA is Spanish) so I drew the line at full Intercourse. As you know not all Men are PREDATORY and when I met Brian four years ago I was still a VIRGIN. Brian was a Gentleman (Caballero) and loved me more for my Whole Being & Personality (my SOUL) rather than just my PHYSICAL BODY - there are Men like that. I was still technically a *VIRGIN* when we got married Six Months agoi (Brian will be 37 in a few days time) and we are hoping to start a Family soon ! Thinking of You & Praying for You. BRIAN & I are Youth Workers (In the Church) and the RESOLVE in Your Story *TO BE STRONG* will be a great help to our TEENS who face similar situations in todays very very permissive Society ~ AMEN

Bessings & Peace & Joy for You always
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 2nd, 2020 00:43

Strength
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Morning FELICITY - As a WOMAN I love the TRUISM expressed in your Frank Testimony!

You arn*t born strong
You*re forced to be it !

This is something all WOMEN have to learn in the face of WEAK & PREDATORY MEN ! As Females We are born with Confidence & Dignity - BUT - A weak & shameless Man can remove that with one Blow of his Sword. Alas Young & Old Men are taught in a Godless Society that this is how they *Prove their MANHOOD* by thoughtlessly destroying the most precious thing a GIRL possesses - HER VIGINITY ! I my case many a promising relationship ended because I wouldn*t give the BOY / MAN what they expected. Im half Spanish & A Physiotherapist and I was accused of being FRIGID (which Im not) just because I defended my HONOUR! I was raised a Good Catholic Girl - by God fearing Parents (My PAPA is Spanish) so I drew the line at full Intercourse. As you know not all Men are PREDATORY and when I met Brian four years ago I was still a VIRGIN. Brian was a Gentleman (Caballero) and loved mr more for my Whole Being & Personality (my SOUL) rather than just my PHYSICAL BODY - there are Men like that. I was still a *VIRGIN* when we got married (Brian will be 37 in a few days time) and we are hoping to start a Family soon ! Thinking of You & Praying for You. BRIAN are Youth Workers (In the Church) and the RESOLVE in Your Story *TO BE STRONG* will be a great help to our TEENS who face similar situations in todays very very permissive Society ~ AMEN

Bessings & Peace & Joy for You always
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

September 2nd, 2020 00:43

Strength
Goldfinch60 said:

That strength that you have resounds through your words and in life you will only get stronger and maybe be able to dismiss the \'limp body\' of your past and move into the wonderful life that awaits you.

Andy

September 2nd, 2020 00:26

Strength
MelissaJA said:

you are strong, and this poem is wonderful. thank you for sharing!

September 1st, 2020 21:47

Strength
orchidee said:

A fine write Felicity.

September 1st, 2020 13:23

Strength
dusk arising said:

The seldom heard voice of the strong steadfast mind resounds here. Yes, just as you recount, we are not born with such strength and when i see those who suffer life without if i wonder where it has come from. I know that it is nurtured into maturity by the hard blows life dishes out and once one is aware of ones tenacity it bolsters itself anew.
Thank goodness for the soft heart and depth of feeling at the core though. Essential facets of our humanity.
I really embraced your post today.

September 1st, 2020 13:16

50 Shades Of Mess
JustABird said:

Consider yourself seen. I know a lot of people who feel these same things, so you\'re not alone either. Please be good to yourself and keep yourself safe as best you can.

May 19th, 2020 00:46

Depression
Clara said:

You, dear one, keep fighting this. You\'re not as alone as you might think. This disease is an epidemic. I don\'t aim to preach or advise or say you\'re fine. Just keep your head above those clouds. You are loved. You are wanted here.

February 11th, 2020 16:33

Separation Anxiety
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will always be there and you will be back together soon once his dad has got better.

January 20th, 2020 01:37

I Love You
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write.

January 19th, 2020 14:30

I Love You
Nicholas Browning said:

Love is a wondrous thing, isn\'t it?

January 19th, 2020 02:29

Disability
Goldfinch60 said:

Your bravery echos in every word. Many people in the world are so ignorant about those with disabilities which is awful.
You may not be able to do some things but remember everybody is ignorant about different subjects.
You are blessed with your art and words so ignore those who do not care and do what you do in the delightful way you have written these words.

Andy.

November 12th, 2019 01:46

Disability
orchidee said:

A fine write Felicity.

November 11th, 2019 10:13

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