Comments received on poems by Felicityjones
Stuck In Hell
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
wow....I have been right there before hun...it will get better the moment that you take action and decide it to be so...you are in COMPLETE CONTROL OF YOUR DESTINY...NEVER GIVE ANYONE ELSE THAT POWER...IT IS NOT THEIRS...ITS YOURS....XXXOOO
January 3rd, 2019 02:55
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
wow....I have been right there before hun...it will get better the moment that you take action and decide it to be so...you are in COMPLETE CONTROL OF YOUR DESTINY...NEVER GIVE ANYONE ELSE THAT POWER...IT IS NOT THEIRS...ITS YOURS....XXXOOO
January 3rd, 2019 02:55
It\'s All In Your Head
orchidee said:
it\'s tricky in a way, as there is not just one sort of depression. It may spring from mental, physical, chemical-imbalance causes, etc. I\'m no doctor. We know we can\'t say \'Snap out of it\' as people can\'t immediately snap out of it, as if by magic.
May 21st, 2018 02:13
orchidee said:
it\'s tricky in a way, as there is not just one sort of depression. It may spring from mental, physical, chemical-imbalance causes, etc. I\'m no doctor. We know we can\'t say \'Snap out of it\' as people can\'t immediately snap out of it, as if by magic.
May 21st, 2018 02:13
Holding Me Hostage
dusk arising said:
You sound like the person i recently fell out of love with. Her condition became all that she was. Familiarity smothered the wonderful joyous person whom i saw thru her veil of illness. Maybe it was me, unable for her to sustain her joyous self around me. Maybe its the people around you enable you to maintain your depression. Maybe change could be a refreshing and positive force.
Maybe.
May 7th, 2018 11:16
dusk arising said:
You sound like the person i recently fell out of love with. Her condition became all that she was. Familiarity smothered the wonderful joyous person whom i saw thru her veil of illness. Maybe it was me, unable for her to sustain her joyous self around me. Maybe its the people around you enable you to maintain your depression. Maybe change could be a refreshing and positive force.
Maybe.
May 7th, 2018 11:16
Hospital Bed
Syd said:
Hi there Amber. Great poem, I\'m glad you made it through.
Take care - Syd
May 7th, 2018 04:52
Syd said:
Hi there Amber. Great poem, I\'m glad you made it through.
Take care - Syd
May 7th, 2018 04:52
I Really Loved You
Chloé said:
I felt every single line, so raw with emotion can completely relate. Beautifully written.
March 21st, 2018 18:14
Chloé said:
I felt every single line, so raw with emotion can completely relate. Beautifully written.
March 21st, 2018 18:14
One Week
Caring dove said:
bless you ..its so sad to lose someone so precious to us.. you put this into words, in such a good way .. well done for expressing this... i never cried after my grans died, i just for some reason , felt numb
March 15th, 2018 06:51
Caring dove said:
bless you ..its so sad to lose someone so precious to us.. you put this into words, in such a good way .. well done for expressing this... i never cried after my grans died, i just for some reason , felt numb
March 15th, 2018 06:51
One Week
Ivory said:
Wow. you really put all your turmoil into this piece. I hope it helps you to heal your soul.
March 14th, 2018 20:55
Ivory said:
Wow. you really put all your turmoil into this piece. I hope it helps you to heal your soul.
March 14th, 2018 20:55
Am I Perfect Yet?
Resa71 said:
Why do parents place such pressure on their children to be so
Perfect?
Then again, as a mother of a smart, beautiful 20 year old,
I recall being hard on her sometimes. Especially once high school began.
I never went to college.
I wanted a better life for her, I didn’t
Realize the pressure I was putting on her, was too mych!
Until one day at 15 years she told me how she felt.
That trying to be “ The perfect girl”
Was making her crazy, afraid to let me down.
I hugged her and apologized.
February 10th, 2018 12:07
Resa71 said:
Why do parents place such pressure on their children to be so
Perfect?
Then again, as a mother of a smart, beautiful 20 year old,
I recall being hard on her sometimes. Especially once high school began.
I never went to college.
I wanted a better life for her, I didn’t
Realize the pressure I was putting on her, was too mych!
Until one day at 15 years she told me how she felt.
That trying to be “ The perfect girl”
Was making her crazy, afraid to let me down.
I hugged her and apologized.
February 10th, 2018 12:07
Slave To My Anxiety
Christina8 said:
Well written amber! I can relate to anxiety and have written about it in the past. You\'ve described it better than I could. I hope you feel better soon!
January 30th, 2018 13:41
Christina8 said:
Well written amber! I can relate to anxiety and have written about it in the past. You\'ve described it better than I could. I hope you feel better soon!
January 30th, 2018 13:41
Slave To My Anxiety
Lorna said:
A very good picture - you made me feel your anxiety....... I want to make it go away somehow!!
January 30th, 2018 04:24
Lorna said:
A very good picture - you made me feel your anxiety....... I want to make it go away somehow!!
January 30th, 2018 04:24
Slave To My Anxiety
orchidee said:
A fine write Amber. Sometimes the fear of doing something is worse than the fear of actually doing it. While, or when, we\'re \'doing it\' it may not seem so bad after all!
January 30th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Amber. Sometimes the fear of doing something is worse than the fear of actually doing it. While, or when, we\'re \'doing it\' it may not seem so bad after all!
January 30th, 2018 02:50
Dating With Disorders
Silent Nights said:
This hit the nail on the head for me! I absolutely agree with you about the little thoughts that go on in your head whenever you\'re dating someone. Thank you for creating this!
November 30th, 2017 14:12
Silent Nights said:
This hit the nail on the head for me! I absolutely agree with you about the little thoughts that go on in your head whenever you\'re dating someone. Thank you for creating this!
November 30th, 2017 14:12
Monster
Syd said:
Wow Amber! I really like this poem although it is sad. I\'m sorry for what you\'ve been through (I\'m assuming it\'s a factual write). You definitely sound like someone not to be messed with.
I look forward to reading more from you - Syd
November 8th, 2017 05:15
Syd said:
Wow Amber! I really like this poem although it is sad. I\'m sorry for what you\'ve been through (I\'m assuming it\'s a factual write). You definitely sound like someone not to be messed with.
I look forward to reading more from you - Syd
November 8th, 2017 05:15
Undersized
kevin browne said:
you have portrayed this issue brilliantly. I just wish everyone else would. thank you for making us aware.
October 24th, 2017 22:15
kevin browne said:
you have portrayed this issue brilliantly. I just wish everyone else would. thank you for making us aware.
October 24th, 2017 22:15
You Made Your Bed
Joseph M Marion said:
On my Facebook page I put in an editorial in everybody wants to know I suffered something very serious a deadly blow buy an axe after 25 years and it up thought it was a joke and I paid the price I\'ll never be the same again
October 24th, 2017 21:29
Joseph M Marion said:
On my Facebook page I put in an editorial in everybody wants to know I suffered something very serious a deadly blow buy an axe after 25 years and it up thought it was a joke and I paid the price I\'ll never be the same again
October 24th, 2017 21:29
Nature Is Dieing
Joseph M Marion said:
How much concrete can we lay upon her skin how much pollution can we pump from within how much can we throw in her lungs until she suffocates and dies something that\'s happening before our very eyes
October 24th, 2017 21:27
Joseph M Marion said:
How much concrete can we lay upon her skin how much pollution can we pump from within how much can we throw in her lungs until she suffocates and dies something that\'s happening before our very eyes
October 24th, 2017 21:27
Dear Depression
Joseph M Marion said:
Ok I been reading your work it is good thank you for sharing what\'s inside feelings you just can\'t hid
October 24th, 2017 21:23
Joseph M Marion said:
Ok I been reading your work it is good thank you for sharing what\'s inside feelings you just can\'t hid
October 24th, 2017 21:23
Born To Fight
dusk arising said:
Nice writing. Wanting to change is a good start on any journey.
please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 08:18
dusk arising said:
Nice writing. Wanting to change is a good start on any journey.
please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 08:18
Born To Fight
lanaevans said:
Nice rhyme scheme. Being raised in war makes you tough.
September 3rd, 2017 02:05
lanaevans said:
Nice rhyme scheme. Being raised in war makes you tough.
September 3rd, 2017 02:05
Nothing But A Sperm Donor
brianna jean zeiger said:
This is so powerful and it\'s just amazing, well written! I\'m so sorry you had to have someone so terrible in your life.
April 22nd, 2017 11:10
brianna jean zeiger said:
This is so powerful and it\'s just amazing, well written! I\'m so sorry you had to have someone so terrible in your life.
April 22nd, 2017 11:10
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