Comments received on poems by Augustus
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janetaylor said:
i love it! very intriguing! i will think about this poem as i create my day with my footsteps.
February 24th, 2017 12:32
janetaylor said:
i love it! very intriguing! i will think about this poem as i create my day with my footsteps.
February 24th, 2017 12:32
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willyweed said:
now I ask you are you ok? just kidding great one master of desaster
February 24th, 2017 12:08
willyweed said:
now I ask you are you ok? just kidding great one master of desaster
February 24th, 2017 12:08
What\'s your nail?
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! i like your use of words and the way they rhyme.
February 22nd, 2017 17:22
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! i like your use of words and the way they rhyme.
February 22nd, 2017 17:22
What\'s your nail?
willyweed said:
and the killer hits the hammer right on the head? Bang, Bang, Maxell, s
silver hammer made sure the you are dead Oh. Oh, Oh, whoa!
February 22nd, 2017 16:52
willyweed said:
and the killer hits the hammer right on the head? Bang, Bang, Maxell, s
silver hammer made sure the you are dead Oh. Oh, Oh, whoa!
February 22nd, 2017 16:52
What\'s your nail?
Elbeanzio said:
Like your poem, clicks together nicely and I find it very clever. Good stuff.
February 22nd, 2017 16:36
Elbeanzio said:
Like your poem, clicks together nicely and I find it very clever. Good stuff.
February 22nd, 2017 16:36
What\'s your nail?
WriteBeLight said:
Simply wonderful Augustus! You hit the nail on the head for sure!
February 22nd, 2017 15:52
WriteBeLight said:
Simply wonderful Augustus! You hit the nail on the head for sure!
February 22nd, 2017 15:52
What\'s your nail?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" We are what we are and it conditions how we act and react. We have some for Chemists (I am a Fellow of the Royal Society of Chemisty ~ UK) Chemists do it Radioactively ~ Chemists do it Periodically and Chemists do it Exothermicly. That refers to whatever it is we\'re doing ! Thanks for your poem ~ very humorous and it does explain a lot of things. Chemists are also very ELEMENTAL ! Yours BRIAN
February 22nd, 2017 15:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" We are what we are and it conditions how we act and react. We have some for Chemists (I am a Fellow of the Royal Society of Chemisty ~ UK) Chemists do it Radioactively ~ Chemists do it Periodically and Chemists do it Exothermicly. That refers to whatever it is we\'re doing ! Thanks for your poem ~ very humorous and it does explain a lot of things. Chemists are also very ELEMENTAL ! Yours BRIAN
February 22nd, 2017 15:24
Sheen
notapoet said:
I don\'t think I could say any more than what\'s already been said, brilliant write Augustus.
February 21st, 2017 17:18
notapoet said:
I don\'t think I could say any more than what\'s already been said, brilliant write Augustus.
February 21st, 2017 17:18
Sheen
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. Reads like Sci-Fi. Asteroid crashes into the sea, strange things happen, Man is returned to pre-history, but the planet is saved. Great story, great poem. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 15:13
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. Reads like Sci-Fi. Asteroid crashes into the sea, strange things happen, Man is returned to pre-history, but the planet is saved. Great story, great poem. - Phil A.
February 21st, 2017 15:13
Sheen
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Can I just say this blew me outta the water. I fell in love with this piece!
February 21st, 2017 15:11
lost-but-not-broken17 said:
Can I just say this blew me outta the water. I fell in love with this piece!
February 21st, 2017 15:11
Sheen
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire message one of the best -- first rate writing.
February 21st, 2017 13:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire message one of the best -- first rate writing.
February 21st, 2017 13:55
Sheen
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent writing Augustus. I could visualize the events, and even became a little sick to my stomach as I was eating my salad. :)
February 21st, 2017 12:50
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent writing Augustus. I could visualize the events, and even became a little sick to my stomach as I was eating my salad. :)
February 21st, 2017 12:50
Sheen
kevin browne said:
this is superb. I imagined all what you wrote and oh my days, it was a fruitful journey and never forgetting the roots of our poetry at the end. stunning write Augustus.
February 21st, 2017 10:34
kevin browne said:
this is superb. I imagined all what you wrote and oh my days, it was a fruitful journey and never forgetting the roots of our poetry at the end. stunning write Augustus.
February 21st, 2017 10:34
Shades
rrodriguez said:
Yes indeed. Truth is its own light. Nicely done my friend.
February 20th, 2017 21:14
rrodriguez said:
Yes indeed. Truth is its own light. Nicely done my friend.
February 20th, 2017 21:14
Justica Picks
MendedFences27 said:
The rich, the poor, the elite, the common man, justice for all, not so much. The only true equality is death. Lives are lived according to the hand you are dealt. My life is modest, but I look and see so many in the world worse off than I. If I had to pick cotton I\'d be dead by now. Nice work here. Much said. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 17:59
MendedFences27 said:
The rich, the poor, the elite, the common man, justice for all, not so much. The only true equality is death. Lives are lived according to the hand you are dealt. My life is modest, but I look and see so many in the world worse off than I. If I had to pick cotton I\'d be dead by now. Nice work here. Much said. - Phil A.
February 20th, 2017 17:59
Shades
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" ~ Men loved darkness rather than light ~ because their deeds were evil ~ JESUS said \"I am the light of the World\" ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
February 20th, 2017 12:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"A\" ~ Men loved darkness rather than light ~ because their deeds were evil ~ JESUS said \"I am the light of the World\" ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
February 20th, 2017 12:04
Another Touch
P.H.Rose said:
Really very wonderful
Augustus...
Flows so beautifully...
There are some wonderful
Poems on here today,
This being one of them..
February 18th, 2017 18:30
P.H.Rose said:
Really very wonderful
Augustus...
Flows so beautifully...
There are some wonderful
Poems on here today,
This being one of them..
February 18th, 2017 18:30
Another Touch
MendedFences27 said:
\"Truth,\" is a precious commodity in any relationship. Incomplete personalities cannot recognize it. Abuse replaces truth and the relationship ends. Great write. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2017 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
\"Truth,\" is a precious commodity in any relationship. Incomplete personalities cannot recognize it. Abuse replaces truth and the relationship ends. Great write. - Phil A.
February 18th, 2017 15:14
Another Touch
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the turmoil and love the line about sleeping sweet reason. Fine job Augustus.
February 18th, 2017 11:33
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the turmoil and love the line about sleeping sweet reason. Fine job Augustus.
February 18th, 2017 11:33
Another Touch
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem! The last couplet so powerful. I agree with DS. Perfection!
February 18th, 2017 10:43
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem! The last couplet so powerful. I agree with DS. Perfection!
February 18th, 2017 10:43
Another Touch
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines here - especially like ; minds touch and borrow thoughts; super stuff.
February 18th, 2017 09:19
Michael Edwards said:
Some great lines here - especially like ; minds touch and borrow thoughts; super stuff.
February 18th, 2017 09:19
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