Comments received on poems by Augustus



Doubt Revisited
WriteBeLight said:

I doubt you will get an argument on this point! :)

February 28th, 2017 12:20

Sheen
janetaylor said:

superbly written and chuck full of amazing imagery ~ bravo!

February 28th, 2017 12:10

Doubt Revisited
Michael Edwards said:

Just love it - great one Augustus.

February 28th, 2017 11:49

Doubt Revisited
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

AWESOME! That was a great follow-up!!!

February 28th, 2017 11:42

Doubt
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

When I am in doubt, its usually only because my Intuition is telling me that there is reason to have it..some things JUST ARENT Reality...the others are...its when we doubt the shit we have no reason to where we are fucked and its a rampant little sickness upon this Earth, unfortunately...good write Augustus

February 27th, 2017 21:30

Doubt
WriteBeLight said:

I wonder if doubt is really just a gut feeling that will always come up in our decision making, and the fear of the unknown result. Great thoughts provoked here Augustus.

February 27th, 2017 19:47

Doubt
willyweed said:

Oh you are very good you! enjoyed the reading of this one Augustus. WW

February 27th, 2017 16:59

Doubt
notapoet said:

Another great write Augustus, enjoyed it very much.

February 27th, 2017 16:56

Doubt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

All MEN have doubts ~ because we are not GODS ! Thanks BRIAN

February 27th, 2017 16:47

Doubt
Michael Edwards said:

Great piece Augustus - one of those which makes me wish I\'d thought of this theme.

February 27th, 2017 16:05

Little Boys
Augustus said:

Little girls had to write a hundred lines for misbehaving as well I am sure. Thanks.

February 27th, 2017 15:41

Little Boys
WriteBeLight said:

Ha Ha. Very funny and reality, I am sure.

February 27th, 2017 01:43

Little Boys
P.H.Rose said:

Love this Augustus
Absolutely brilliant

February 26th, 2017 15:15

Little Boys
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good fun write.

February 26th, 2017 13:33

Little Boys
kevin browne said:

brilliant Augustus.

February 26th, 2017 12:42

Little Boys
willyweed said:

boys will be boys and some old man are just as clever as all get out? WW

February 26th, 2017 12:33

Little Boys
rrodriguez said:

Wow, how dramatic... read very nicely and the message is so true. Great write my friend...

February 26th, 2017 12:08

An Apple For The Teacher
Augustus said:

I wish that would stick to basics. Thanks.

February 26th, 2017 11:49

An Apple For The Teacher
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, there are many sinners in the teaching profession.

February 26th, 2017 01:37

An Apple For The Teacher
WriteBeLight said:

To me it speaks volumes about the impression a teacher makes on a student. The power they have over the children they teach.

February 25th, 2017 20:23

An Apple For The Teacher
willyweed said:

sound just like the note I left my Drill Instructor ( he was rotten to the core as well) when I slipped out one night to swim with the man eating sharks on Parris Island once but that was long ago so maybe its just something I made up just to go AWOL? anyway the apple was missing upon my return I do remember that part be cause I felt hungry when I got back plus I was wet? good story thought? nice on WW

February 25th, 2017 17:11

An Apple For The Teacher
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February 25th, 2017 16:42

An Apple For The Teacher
rrodriguez said:

Well done Augustus... your poem is whimsical and fun...

February 25th, 2017 14:11

An Apple For The Teacher
Augustus said:

Thanks, written years ago. Simply creepy, strange, product of a sick mind. Thanks again.

February 25th, 2017 13:25

Tracks
Augustus said:

Thanks Mike, no telling what\'s up my sleeve today.

February 25th, 2017 13:19

An Apple For The Teacher
Reivax Camlost said:

I hesitate to contemplate what I believe the message is here...

February 25th, 2017 13:18

Tracks
Michael Edwards said:

Really like this one with its touch of humour.

February 25th, 2017 00:26

Tracks
rrodriguez said:

I thought what legacy am I leaving behind. Great write my friend.

February 24th, 2017 22:41

Shades
janetaylor said:

A very deep and brilliant write!✨

February 24th, 2017 22:33

Tracks
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the humour in these few lines - - when I take a walk my own tracks are nearly always on a surprise path.

February 24th, 2017 14:49



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