Comments received on poems by WriteBeLight
Achilles\' Heal
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! I wear my heart on my sleeve too. Also from childhood pains. I hope you feel better after writing this poem. Christina
March 14th, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! I wear my heart on my sleeve too. Also from childhood pains. I hope you feel better after writing this poem. Christina
March 14th, 2017 11:28
Achilles\' Heal
willyweed said:
So I guess in the end we are all only human, and open to hurt and pain and love and joy, I hope you feel better soon/ ISLU WW
March 14th, 2017 09:57
willyweed said:
So I guess in the end we are all only human, and open to hurt and pain and love and joy, I hope you feel better soon/ ISLU WW
March 14th, 2017 09:57
Achilles\' Heal
Hypothesis said:
I felt poetry always had that barrier breakage that let your heart flow and flourish others.
What you wrote here is very inspiring to not only others but yourself. A dedication to courage and belief to continue living no matter the odds. Yes, it may hurt or dwells around certain days of the year.
However, I want you to remember God is still with you even in the moments of our tribulations. Read Ephesians 6:12.
Keep writing scholarly poet. God bless you!
March 14th, 2017 06:46
Hypothesis said:
I felt poetry always had that barrier breakage that let your heart flow and flourish others.
What you wrote here is very inspiring to not only others but yourself. A dedication to courage and belief to continue living no matter the odds. Yes, it may hurt or dwells around certain days of the year.
However, I want you to remember God is still with you even in the moments of our tribulations. Read Ephesians 6:12.
Keep writing scholarly poet. God bless you!
March 14th, 2017 06:46
Achilles\' Heal
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks Brian. My feelings were hurt recently and I realized I still have that weak spot in my armor. So, I do feel better putting it to paper. I think that many can relate. I appreciate your care and kind words.
March 14th, 2017 06:35
WriteBeLight said:
Thanks Brian. My feelings were hurt recently and I realized I still have that weak spot in my armor. So, I do feel better putting it to paper. I think that many can relate. I appreciate your care and kind words.
March 14th, 2017 06:35
Achilles\' Heal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and sharing HONEY ~ I trust you found it cathartic for us to share and absorb ~ some of your angst ! Child abuse is the most heinous of crimes and can never really be fully forgiven ~ or alas forgotten. Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 14th, 2017 06:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing and sharing HONEY ~ I trust you found it cathartic for us to share and absorb ~ some of your angst ! Child abuse is the most heinous of crimes and can never really be fully forgiven ~ or alas forgotten. Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ Hugs BRIAN
March 14th, 2017 06:34
Achilles\' Heal
Pintu Mahakul said:
It was tough to do but I stood up with courage. Over time I felt their love. This is really very wonderful sharing. Inside inner place love did live for long.
March 14th, 2017 06:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
It was tough to do but I stood up with courage. Over time I felt their love. This is really very wonderful sharing. Inside inner place love did live for long.
March 14th, 2017 06:26
Sun\'s Out
MendedFences27 said:
!8-20 up your way, a little lighter here. I had thought it might be over. No!! Just nature playing havoc with our plans. Well at least you found a brighter side to it all. I\'ll try to remember it when I\'m out there throwing the stuff around I\'ll keep saying \"No water bans, no water bans.\" great take on the whole situation. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:42
MendedFences27 said:
!8-20 up your way, a little lighter here. I had thought it might be over. No!! Just nature playing havoc with our plans. Well at least you found a brighter side to it all. I\'ll try to remember it when I\'m out there throwing the stuff around I\'ll keep saying \"No water bans, no water bans.\" great take on the whole situation. - Phil A.
March 13th, 2017 18:42
Sun\'s Out
Augustus said:
I hear that the salt tears up the underneath of the cars. Are you in the snow storm? Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:14
Augustus said:
I hear that the salt tears up the underneath of the cars. Are you in the snow storm? Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:14
Sun\'s Out
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - just spent most of the day in Leicester University Botanical Gardens sketching - short sleeve shirt weather here. Thought I\'d rub it in !!
March 13th, 2017 11:58
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff - just spent most of the day in Leicester University Botanical Gardens sketching - short sleeve shirt weather here. Thought I\'d rub it in !!
March 13th, 2017 11:58
Sun\'s Out
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks honey for a classy poem ~ Neat quatrains and an xaxa etc rhyming pattern and good rhythm ! Love snow and loved the poem. I\'m coming to stay with you next Winter ! Due to Global Warming (don\'t tell TRUMP) we have had NO SNOW in S E England this Winter. Enjoy the SUN ~ Hugs BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem & fusion Thanks ~ B
March 13th, 2017 09:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks honey for a classy poem ~ Neat quatrains and an xaxa etc rhyming pattern and good rhythm ! Love snow and loved the poem. I\'m coming to stay with you next Winter ! Due to Global Warming (don\'t tell TRUMP) we have had NO SNOW in S E England this Winter. Enjoy the SUN ~ Hugs BRIAN ~ Please check my latest poem & fusion Thanks ~ B
March 13th, 2017 09:08
Sun\'s Out
willyweed said:
here comes the Sun its alright! I love it too Kevin but I think WBL wrote it or else I\'m losing it again. LOL Thanks WBL!
March 13th, 2017 06:48
willyweed said:
here comes the Sun its alright! I love it too Kevin but I think WBL wrote it or else I\'m losing it again. LOL Thanks WBL!
March 13th, 2017 06:48
Sun\'s Out
kevin browne said:
yay.! I love this willyweed. already I have been out for an hours walk this morning and the sun is beaming alongside a chilly breeze as I ruffle up the leaves with my feet through the farmers fields. so as winter turns reluctantly to spring the fresh warming air fills our lungs with love.
March 13th, 2017 05:34
kevin browne said:
yay.! I love this willyweed. already I have been out for an hours walk this morning and the sun is beaming alongside a chilly breeze as I ruffle up the leaves with my feet through the farmers fields. so as winter turns reluctantly to spring the fresh warming air fills our lungs with love.
March 13th, 2017 05:34
Tears
Augustus said:
With every poem you write I want to say it is your best yet. Let\'s just say that you just keep getting better.
March 12th, 2017 15:48
Augustus said:
With every poem you write I want to say it is your best yet. Let\'s just say that you just keep getting better.
March 12th, 2017 15:48
Tears
Christina8 said:
Beautiful presentation. i love how you show this particular life cycle and end it with growing old with grandchildren. A great poem!
March 12th, 2017 13:25
Christina8 said:
Beautiful presentation. i love how you show this particular life cycle and end it with growing old with grandchildren. A great poem!
March 12th, 2017 13:25
Tears
Michael Edwards said:
Such a great bit of writing - trouble with growing old is that I still feel so young inside and have so much I want to put to put down on paper (brush as well as pen) and the time to do it decreases by the day.
March 12th, 2017 12:08
Michael Edwards said:
Such a great bit of writing - trouble with growing old is that I still feel so young inside and have so much I want to put to put down on paper (brush as well as pen) and the time to do it decreases by the day.
March 12th, 2017 12:08
Tears
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM and BEAUTIFUL PRESENTATION ~ for an equally Beautiful Lady ! Honey your POEM always makes my day ! \"Tears for souvenirs are all you\'ve left me ~ Memories of a love you never meant ~ I just can\'t believe you could forget me ~ After all the happy hours we spent ~ TOGETHER ! Thanks for caring ~ thanks for sharing your tears ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 12th, 2017 10:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM and BEAUTIFUL PRESENTATION ~ for an equally Beautiful Lady ! Honey your POEM always makes my day ! \"Tears for souvenirs are all you\'ve left me ~ Memories of a love you never meant ~ I just can\'t believe you could forget me ~ After all the happy hours we spent ~ TOGETHER ! Thanks for caring ~ thanks for sharing your tears ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
March 12th, 2017 10:47
Tears
rrodriguez said:
Beautiful poem... \"Growing old...\" I loved this part. As I grow old my tears easily flow... for many things. As I write and listen to music, my tears flow... is it that I\'m getting old? Great write young lady. Be blessed.
March 12th, 2017 10:34
rrodriguez said:
Beautiful poem... \"Growing old...\" I loved this part. As I grow old my tears easily flow... for many things. As I write and listen to music, my tears flow... is it that I\'m getting old? Great write young lady. Be blessed.
March 12th, 2017 10:34
Tears
willyweed said:
many a tear have to fall , but its all ?
very tender happy, and sad~! wonderful work. ww
March 12th, 2017 09:07
willyweed said:
many a tear have to fall , but its all ?
very tender happy, and sad~! wonderful work. ww
March 12th, 2017 09:07
Hidden In The Views
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand, time seems to race away. Good write.
March 12th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understand, time seems to race away. Good write.
March 12th, 2017 02:06
Hidden In The Views
Augustus said:
You are that number that stands out. Nicely done. I feel,the same way at times
March 11th, 2017 16:23
Augustus said:
You are that number that stands out. Nicely done. I feel,the same way at times
March 11th, 2017 16:23
Hidden In The Views
MendedFences27 said:
WBL, I get it, we don\'t live on here, we actually have lives and real people to attend to, so it\'s not always possible to add a comment. It sounds so much better the way you\'ve said it. Great write. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:38
MendedFences27 said:
WBL, I get it, we don\'t live on here, we actually have lives and real people to attend to, so it\'s not always possible to add a comment. It sounds so much better the way you\'ve said it. Great write. - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:38
Hidden In The Views
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ I always read yours (and comment when I can) and i know you visit mine ~ because we are Poetic Mates (like Soul Mates but with more rhyme and rhythm !) Always love you comments ~ Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN.
March 11th, 2017 11:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks HONEY ~ I always read yours (and comment when I can) and i know you visit mine ~ because we are Poetic Mates (like Soul Mates but with more rhyme and rhythm !) Always love you comments ~ Thanks for carin\' an\' sharin\' Poetic Hugs ~ BRIAN.
March 11th, 2017 11:39
Hidden In The Views
Tony36 said:
I work on a farm. I understand how it goes. Great write
March 11th, 2017 08:19
Tony36 said:
I work on a farm. I understand how it goes. Great write
March 11th, 2017 08:19
Hidden In The Views
willyweed said:
I somehow know you read my work even if you don\'t comment although you mostly do
and I always read your work Always!!! it\'s that good! WW
March 11th, 2017 08:08
willyweed said:
I somehow know you read my work even if you don\'t comment although you mostly do
and I always read your work Always!!! it\'s that good! WW
March 11th, 2017 08:08
Hidden In The Views
kevin browne said:
WriteBeLight, I love reading your work which is too beautiful just like you. I\'m sure your counter will sky rocket today with this one. great write. now go read my stories and rhymes..x.
March 11th, 2017 07:36
kevin browne said:
WriteBeLight, I love reading your work which is too beautiful just like you. I\'m sure your counter will sky rocket today with this one. great write. now go read my stories and rhymes..x.
March 11th, 2017 07:36
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