Comments received on poems by Christina8



Bad Dream
Accidental Poet said:

Dreams can be so confusing. My dreams usually make no sense. But I always seem to want to try to make some sense out of it. Great write Christina.

April 17th, 2018 18:33

Bad Dream
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

You know me CHRISTINA ~ La Mia Hermana Preciosa ! I can\'\'t just read a serious and subjective Poem and say NICE POEM ~ A POEM with a title like BAD DREAM requires some introspection OK ! We all Dream and Dreams are important in the BIBLE ~ so an analysis is requisit not necromancy ! Our dreams are fashioned by experience & our subconscious so they do reflect our status quo ! Dreaming of INJURY or DEATH is often a warning of an immanent event ~ a forewarning ! The presence of deceased in the Dream reinforces its intensity to make us take notice ! I have had such dreams and they have been incidences and warnings of impending doom ! In essence it prepares the heart & mind for the event and to that extent it softens the blow. However DREAMS and their interpretation is a big subject ~ BUT ~ They should never be ignored ~ OK You are not DELERIOUS ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ! Tu Hermano Precioso ~ BRIAN ~ like Daniel ~ An Interpreter of Dreams !

April 17th, 2018 18:01

Bad Dream
Michael Edwards said:

Head on pillow, out fast in deep sleep, wake early still in the position I went to sleep in, and rarely can I ever recall dreaming let alone the content of it. Anyway it\'s a great write Christina.

April 17th, 2018 14:06

Bad Dream
Fay Slimm. said:

Those kind of dreams always give a shock when waking and hoping by now you feel a bit more settled Christina - - the rhyming you used is superb and I enjoyed the flow which takes readers between the waking and sleeping..

April 17th, 2018 13:54

Bad Dream
orchidee said:

I had a dream of someone who had a birthday recently. Somehow they were telling me they were going to die soon. But then they were driving me somewhere in a car. Don\'t know if they were dead or alive then!
Our mind can go into over-drive, and we have to \'snap out\' of nightmarish dreams, and tell ourselves it was only a bad dream. They are not all true, nor signs of what\'s about to happen.

April 17th, 2018 13:36

Bad Dream
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

I do take some nightmares too seriously, think they are foreboding Sth bad to happen but then calm down when things go on as usual. I liked your superb poem, how u expressed your angst so rhyming awesome. Creatively done, I like how u said unnerve, ah that made me smile . Kudos.


Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others. No pressure.

April 17th, 2018 12:38

Sixteen Years
ron parrish aka wordman said:

well,hoping for 50 more

April 14th, 2018 19:37

Sixteen Years
Laura🌻 said:

Such a beautiful poem, Christina!
Happy anniversary! As the years go by and your children grow, the bond and love between you and your husband will also grow! You’ll appreciate each other forever more! So blessed!

~Laura~

April 14th, 2018 10:01

Sixteen Years
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CHRISTINA ~ A Perfect Love Poem with lots of Rhyme & Rhythm for a couple perfectly in LOVE ! Angela & I ~ love your Love Poems because You & Your Hubby prove that your love ~ despite 16 years (and 2 kids) your Love is stronger & deeper & more fulfilling than the day you first met ~ AMEN It\'s not LUCK SISTER ~ it\'s Divine Providence and I know you acknowledge that ~ AMEN Love in the Spirit from US to You ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ Another perfect MATCH ~ AMEN Please check my Grand National ~ Thanks B !

April 14th, 2018 07:55

Sixteen Years
Michael Edwards said:

A loving and sustained relationship - a wonderful institution to which we both belong - super write Christina.

April 14th, 2018 02:40

Sixteen Years
Fay Slimm. said:

A beautiful tribute to marital love and congrats. for reaching sixteen years of togetherness Christina -- - may that closeness ever grow and thank you for sharing such poetic and positive happiness with us .

April 14th, 2018 02:04

Sixteen Years
orchidee said:

Ahh lovely write Christina.

April 14th, 2018 01:38

Sixteen Years
Goldfinch60 said:

Great, great love poem. That love will continue into eternity.

April 14th, 2018 01:23

Closed Door
lasergraph said:

I loved this, I think she is just on the other side of the door, waiting for you to knock.

April 13th, 2018 15:50

Closed Door
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that door is still open as she is still looking down on you with her love.

April 12th, 2018 01:03

Closed Door
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve lost two mothers Christina, one birth and one adoptive. I never knew my birth mother, and my adoptive I always knew, but wasn\'t as close as I wish we could have been. And I suppose I\'m at least partially to blame. But I miss them both more than any words can describe. After reading your poem here, I see your door is wide open for you and those who love you have faith that you\'ll find what you\'re looking for upon passing through that door.

April 11th, 2018 18:42

Closed Door
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

NICE NOSTALGIC POEM ~ Chris and 5 lovely comments (mine makes 6) from 12 views ! Your poems are always well received ! Angela & I both have our Mums (& Dads) and your Poem has prompted us to care for them more ! I know you will meet your Mum again in Heaven ~ which must give you much Joy also the fact that you were reconciled before She passed over to Glory ! Thanks for sharing a personal episode in your Life. Made us think ! Hugs in he Spirit ~ Sister Angela & Brother Brian @@@@@@@

April 11th, 2018 16:57

Closed Door
Fay Slimm. said:

Losing a mother can raise much uncertainty of how we may have handled family problems etc - - your honest verse will resonate with lots of readers Christina - - thank you for sharing it.

April 11th, 2018 16:47

Closed Door
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina.

April 11th, 2018 13:30

Closed Door
Michael Edwards said:

I lost my mum some time ago as well so this means a lot to me - thanks Christina

April 11th, 2018 12:50

I Thought I Knew
Laura🌻 said:

A great write, Christina!
It’s awesome that you found THE ONE that makes you so, so happy! I can certainly relate to your great poem! May God bless you and your family!

~Laura~

April 7th, 2018 19:54

I Thought I Knew
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we have bumps in the road and sometimes crashes but they can lead you to the right way and the right person. Very good write Christina.

April 7th, 2018 00:34

I Thought I Knew
Michael Edwards said:

Pleased you kissed your toad :) and a super work Christina

April 6th, 2018 14:44

I Thought I Knew
Fay Slimm. said:

Sometimes things work out which surprise us and later we see the sense and the blessings that true love can bring. A fine and honest write Christina.

April 6th, 2018 11:15

I Thought I Knew
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS CHRIS ~ Love the mixed Rhyme Pattern in this very retrospective Poem (16 or more years ?) Pleased Your MUM cried more than You ~ that\'s what Mum\'s are for ! When read out loud there is an edge to this Poem which suite the theme ! GONE & GONE FOR (YOUR) GOOD ! God has blessed with a loving Husband and Boy & A Girl a perfect genetic combination of all that is GOOD in YOU BOTH. In retrospect (as you indicate !) Mister Nomark ~ missed out on (the beautiful) YOU and the chance to be the FATHER of your CHILDREN ! Sometimes most Men are Fools ~ especially when it comes to LOVE ! Thanks for caring ~ hugs in the SPIRIT ~ Tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN @@@@@@@

April 6th, 2018 10:52

I Thought I Knew
orchidee said:

A fine write C.

April 6th, 2018 09:59

I Thought I Knew
myself and me said:

When looking back, we realized sometimes the worst situation at the moment could be the best thing ever happen in your life. Beautiful penned.

April 6th, 2018 09:16

My Girl
ron parrish aka wordman said:

such a beautiful tribute

April 5th, 2018 20:38

My Girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Children ~ CHRISTINA ~ are all \"A Blessing from the LORD\" So pleased you have a SON & A DAUGHTER ~ you are twice blessed ! Poems from all you Young Mums about your Babies is making ANGELA Broody ~ especially now she is 30 and betrothed ! Love the Poem and the sentiment ! My Poem today is about MLK because yesterday was the 50th Anniversary of his untimely death @ 39 a victim of RACISM . I hope all the publicity will make TRUMP reconsider his overt support of the KKK ! Yours as ever ~ Tus Hermanas Angela & Brian @@@@@@@

April 5th, 2018 09:01

My Girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Children ~ CHRISTINA ~ are all \"A Blessing from the LORD\" So pleased you have a SON & A DAUGHTER ~ you are twice blessed ! Poems from all you Young Mums about your Babies is making ANGELA Broody ~ especially now she is 30 and betrothed ! Love the Poem and the sentiment ! My Poem today is about MLK because yesterday was the 50th Anniversary of his untimely death @ 39 a victim of RACISM . I hope all the publicity will make TRUMP reconsider his overt support of the KKK ! Yours as ever ~ Tus Hermanas Angela & Brian @@@@@@@

April 5th, 2018 09:01



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