Comments received on poems by Christina8



Wedding Day
FredPeyer said:

Nice and sweet and so full of beautiful memories! As you pointed out, there is no such thing as a \'perfect\' marriage, but there are so many perfect moments!
Great poem, Christina!

October 2nd, 2017 13:36

Wedding Day
Tony36 said:

Sweet and beautiful write

October 2nd, 2017 10:39

Wedding Day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ I love you because you are such a ROMANTIC ! I am pleased the Wedding stirred your Happy Muse ! I\'ve never been married but I always get misty eyed if I am attending with a LOVER ! I am pleased the Wedding reminded you of yours (a few years ago) with DREAM MAN ! Especially as your relationship is lasting and still sizzling ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Romantic Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@@@@@

October 2nd, 2017 08:36

Wedding Day
Michael Edwards said:

For the love of my life and me it\'s forever - lovely words Christina.

October 2nd, 2017 08:16

Wedding Day
orchidee said:

A fine write Christina.

October 2nd, 2017 08:12

Wedding Day
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, \'til death do us part is so true.

October 2nd, 2017 07:58

Wedding Day
Jeff said:

Very nice...great write

October 2nd, 2017 07:58

Wedding Day
SunSearcher said:

Very sweet poem! Sometimes we just need that reminder of how it was in the beginning.

~SS

October 2nd, 2017 07:55

Clipped Wings
Edward Charles McDevitt said:

Wow Christina! It was almost as if she had you tied to her \"Apron Strings!\" That\'s hard when a Parent can\'t let go of a child or vice-versa. A very nice write. I enjoyed it immensely!

October 1st, 2017 07:51

Clipped Wings
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and powerful write but be assured your wings are free now and they can fly you anywhere throughout your life.

September 30th, 2017 00:49

Clipped Wings
WL Schuett said:

Nice progression though this poem love the confident defiance then the forgiveness at the end

September 29th, 2017 19:49

Clipped Wings
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a difficult subject to write on and you do it with empathy despite past experience - thank you Christina for sharing the best way to move forward .

September 29th, 2017 16:10

Clipped Wings
lasergraph said:

We can sometimes be overbearing in our attempt at protection. We would like to encase in a cocoon, but life is meant to be lived.

September 29th, 2017 15:53

Clipped Wings
skyebellasario said:

This poem is beautifully written Christina! I admire you for managing to forgive her, I would have struggled

September 29th, 2017 14:56

Clipped Wings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS SISTER CHRISTINA ~ Thanks for sharing this harrowing experience ~ I trust you found it CATARTIC. In my experience ~ when we are Young ~ Pardoxigally those who love us most ~ by over protection end up hurting us most. An excellent Poem in both Structure and (despite its angst) Subject. Thanks for caring & sharing Hugs ~ BROTHER BRIAN @@@@@@@

September 29th, 2017 14:28

Clipped Wings
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 29th, 2017 13:15

Clipped Wings
Simple-Man87 said:

Christina, you have a way of bringing out emotions in me i never thought possible, just by reading words on a paper. Your poems beam with subtle lights of redemption. I love your words. Thank you for sharing.

September 29th, 2017 13:08

Clipped Wings
FredPeyer said:

Christina, this is such a lovely poem, written from the heart. It must be hard growing up with a needy and maybe overpowering parent. But the last stanza tells all, you not only survived, you maybe became a better person for it. It is the challenges and hardships in our lives that make us who we are, and there are always two choices. You become negative, or you soar above the problems. Judging from how high you soared, maybe the clipping helped to grow your wings!

September 29th, 2017 11:37

Clipped Wings
rrodriguez said:

Christina, thanks for sharing your experiences. Although it was a difficult time, you matured and have become a loving person. This certainly is shown in your writing. Thanks, great great!

September 29th, 2017 09:40

Clipped Wings
w c said:

Thanks Christina. You\'ll fly again some day!

September 29th, 2017 08:56

Clipped Wings
orchidee said:

Good write S. I wonder if I would probably \'smother\' my children, if I had any. Over-protective?

September 29th, 2017 08:36

Clipped Wings
malubotelho said:

Awesome write and seems you are talking about your mother. It is nice that you understood that she wanted to protect you and sometimes we do want to clip a wing just to keep the person close by. It is difficult to love without attachment.

September 29th, 2017 08:06

Drama
Poetic Dan said:

I love this so much, and reflects my journey from the last two years. Not only do I have what you have but I understand for my self that I could one day be alone again and my lady has shown me I could cope with that, like I have all the rest of the times.
To be set free with this love but with no over attachment, from my self, due to my childhood pain, is helping in all aspects of my life. I still have a away to go but a breath of air you give with your words to help me on this road.

Thank you for being perfectly you!

September 28th, 2017 18:14

Drama
malubotelho said:

Christina, love is truly what makes life special. When you know you have love from your husband, your partner, friends and family that you can count on then life gets to be lighter. Lovely reading here. You are a special person one can tell by your writings.

September 28th, 2017 16:55

Drama
rrodriguez said:

This poem is nicely written. You are really blessed to have your love next to you.

September 28th, 2017 14:42

Drama
FredPeyer said:

I really love this poem, Christina! There is nothing we can do about our past, it is water under the bridge. And just like that water flows downstream, we have to let our past go. You said it so beautiful. The last stanza touched me. We always talk about love in our heart, but you reminded me that love is also beside me, ready to step in whenever help is needed. Great poem!

September 28th, 2017 14:06

Drama
WL Schuett said:

Glad you are able to write such a comfortable poem , good writing

September 28th, 2017 09:38

Drama
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is the best cure all any of us can have, good write.

September 28th, 2017 08:24

Drama
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Love your poetry ANGEL ~ always full of Rhyme & Rhythm and always a story to tell. You are a Natural Poet and if you DON\'T come on we all get withdrawal symptoms ~ and if our Poems don\'t get a CHRISTINA S HUG we die again. Love the resolve in this Poem ~ You are Loved ANGEL because you are LOVELY and my best MPS Sister ! BIG HUGS 24/7 ~ Your ever Loving Brother ~ BRIAN CS\'s No. 1 Fan ~ @@@@@@@

September 28th, 2017 08:16

Drama
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one Christina

September 28th, 2017 07:29



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