Comments received on poems by Christina8
Adrenaline--Part 2
malubotelho said:
Awesome conclusion to part 1 Christina. Great writing on fantasyland.
September 26th, 2017 14:56
malubotelho said:
Awesome conclusion to part 1 Christina. Great writing on fantasyland.
September 26th, 2017 14:56
Adrenaline--Part 2
FredPeyer said:
That guy is soooo lucky to live in a fantasy world! Losing girlfriend and wife the same day would have been tough! :-)
Great sequel, Christina!
September 26th, 2017 12:05
FredPeyer said:
That guy is soooo lucky to live in a fantasy world! Losing girlfriend and wife the same day would have been tough! :-)
Great sequel, Christina!
September 26th, 2017 12:05
Adrenaline--Part 2
Simple-Man87 said:
\"can\'t believe I fell for your kiss.\" I loved this line. A kiss says so much yet its intention is often misconstrued. I loved this (and pt1) Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2017 11:51
Simple-Man87 said:
\"can\'t believe I fell for your kiss.\" I loved this line. A kiss says so much yet its intention is often misconstrued. I loved this (and pt1) Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2017 11:51
Adrenaline--Part 2
WL Schuett said:
Fitting good bye to the liar ... well done Christina
September 26th, 2017 09:38
WL Schuett said:
Fitting good bye to the liar ... well done Christina
September 26th, 2017 09:38
Adrenaline--Part 2
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sequel and righting a wrong.
September 26th, 2017 08:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful sequel and righting a wrong.
September 26th, 2017 08:11
Adrenaline--Part 2
Pintu Mahakul said:
After last we met, you can be glad. Because this is my final good bye. Brilliant poem is shared here is really very amazing.
September 26th, 2017 08:10
Pintu Mahakul said:
After last we met, you can be glad. Because this is my final good bye. Brilliant poem is shared here is really very amazing.
September 26th, 2017 08:10
Adrenaline--Part 2
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRIS ~ you told his Wife ! I\'m glad I\'m not a married Man ~ but of course our liaison is Academic (Poetic) and Spiritual which is why our Collaborations & Fusions are always so innocent & perfect. ANGELA knows all about you and knows you stimulate my ............ MUSE ! Also because you are a Nurse she knows you are an ANGEL ! Thanks for penning the sequel glad you found out he was cheating on his Wife before he got in too deep ~ even in Fantasy Land ! HUGS in the Spirit & MPS ~ BRIAN Hombre de Fe ! @@@@@@@
September 26th, 2017 07:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRIS ~ you told his Wife ! I\'m glad I\'m not a married Man ~ but of course our liaison is Academic (Poetic) and Spiritual which is why our Collaborations & Fusions are always so innocent & perfect. ANGELA knows all about you and knows you stimulate my ............ MUSE ! Also because you are a Nurse she knows you are an ANGEL ! Thanks for penning the sequel glad you found out he was cheating on his Wife before he got in too deep ~ even in Fantasy Land ! HUGS in the Spirit & MPS ~ BRIAN Hombre de Fe ! @@@@@@@
September 26th, 2017 07:39
Adrenaline--Part 1
Simple-Man87 said:
Oh..noooo.. That was so beautiful and romantic. Then the twist at the end. If this is true, his loss. I can\'t imagine someone letting go of someone who has this kind of beauty in their heart.
September 25th, 2017 17:31
Simple-Man87 said:
Oh..noooo.. That was so beautiful and romantic. Then the twist at the end. If this is true, his loss. I can\'t imagine someone letting go of someone who has this kind of beauty in their heart.
September 25th, 2017 17:31
Adrenaline--Part 1
FredPeyer said:
OK, Christina, now you did it! You ruined it with the last line! :-)
You got me going, I felt good, imagined myself to be this super hero you are describing here, and then....bang! We finish with a lowlife good looking cheater!
September 25th, 2017 17:09
FredPeyer said:
OK, Christina, now you did it! You ruined it with the last line! :-)
You got me going, I felt good, imagined myself to be this super hero you are describing here, and then....bang! We finish with a lowlife good looking cheater!
September 25th, 2017 17:09
Fall From Grace
FredPeyer said:
And what an imagination this is! Well written, Christina!
September 25th, 2017 12:28
FredPeyer said:
And what an imagination this is! Well written, Christina!
September 25th, 2017 12:28
Adrenaline--Part 1
malubotelho said:
Lovely write Christina. Luckily it is just your imagination because to find attraction on another man when one is married more than fun it can be dangerous unless one can keep the safe boundary. I love your run wild imagination.
September 25th, 2017 11:43
malubotelho said:
Lovely write Christina. Luckily it is just your imagination because to find attraction on another man when one is married more than fun it can be dangerous unless one can keep the safe boundary. I love your run wild imagination.
September 25th, 2017 11:43
Adrenaline--Part 1
WL Schuett said:
You are doing these well it seems to suit you , this was fun to read
September 25th, 2017 07:55
WL Schuett said:
You are doing these well it seems to suit you , this was fun to read
September 25th, 2017 07:55
Adrenaline--Part 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~ I adore your NAUGHTY side ~ The last line is a libido deflater ~ Most of the very fanciable Ladies I work with in \"Health & Beauty\" have Husbands ~ but like you I am more than satisfied with my current Partner. However we both have imaginations and sometimes they work overtime ! My fave line is \"He was so gentle and kind ~ They are so hard to find\" That is because like you ~ marriage has mellowed them ! You will love my poem tomorrow on DISJOINTED LOVE ! Brotherly Cuddles (an Oxymoron ?) BRIAN @@@@@@@@@@@@
September 25th, 2017 07:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SWEETHEART ~ I adore your NAUGHTY side ~ The last line is a libido deflater ~ Most of the very fanciable Ladies I work with in \"Health & Beauty\" have Husbands ~ but like you I am more than satisfied with my current Partner. However we both have imaginations and sometimes they work overtime ! My fave line is \"He was so gentle and kind ~ They are so hard to find\" That is because like you ~ marriage has mellowed them ! You will love my poem tomorrow on DISJOINTED LOVE ! Brotherly Cuddles (an Oxymoron ?) BRIAN @@@@@@@@@@@@
September 25th, 2017 07:54
Adrenaline--Part 1
Michael Edwards said:
Glad it\'s imaginary - great work C
September 25th, 2017 07:30
Michael Edwards said:
Glad it\'s imaginary - great work C
September 25th, 2017 07:30
Adrenaline--Part 1
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale of a would-be romance. Great read again Chrisitina
September 25th, 2017 07:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale of a would-be romance. Great read again Chrisitina
September 25th, 2017 07:18
Fall From Grace
Goldfinch60 said:
Metre is not required in a poem as good as this one.
September 25th, 2017 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Metre is not required in a poem as good as this one.
September 25th, 2017 00:33
Fall From Grace
Accidental Poet said:
Never mind the damn meter, it\'s just a great sizzling write Christina. ; )
September 24th, 2017 20:17
Accidental Poet said:
Never mind the damn meter, it\'s just a great sizzling write Christina. ; )
September 24th, 2017 20:17
Fall From Grace
dusk arising said:
Thats beautiful. Becoming totally smitten.... everything going ZZZIIINNNGGG inside for your lover.
You made me reminisce.
September 24th, 2017 17:25
dusk arising said:
Thats beautiful. Becoming totally smitten.... everything going ZZZIIINNNGGG inside for your lover.
You made me reminisce.
September 24th, 2017 17:25
Fall From Grace
malubotelho said:
Great writing Christina. Sensual but soft. Enjoyed reading it. Lately I\'m doing only free writings but I love cute rhymes. Need to write some soon.
September 24th, 2017 17:18
malubotelho said:
Great writing Christina. Sensual but soft. Enjoyed reading it. Lately I\'m doing only free writings but I love cute rhymes. Need to write some soon.
September 24th, 2017 17:18
Fall From Grace
lasergraph said:
Good job. My screen got a little overheated but an extinguisher fixed that.
September 24th, 2017 14:40
lasergraph said:
Good job. My screen got a little overheated but an extinguisher fixed that.
September 24th, 2017 14:40
Fall From Grace
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRISTINA ~ I never knew you felt like this ~ I even booked a Flight to LA LA Land ~ but it was RYAN AIR so it never took off ! Then I read the SMALL PRINT (I always do !) FANTASY ~ FANTASY ~ FANTASY ~ I just knew it couldn\'t be true because You & Jeremiah are far too too Happy for you to taste Forbidden Fruit ! So i will have to be Happy going on just being your LOVING BROTHER ! (which is much better than just being one of your 120 MPS Friends !) Love & Hugs BROTHER BRIAN XOX
September 24th, 2017 11:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRISTINA ~ I never knew you felt like this ~ I even booked a Flight to LA LA Land ~ but it was RYAN AIR so it never took off ! Then I read the SMALL PRINT (I always do !) FANTASY ~ FANTASY ~ FANTASY ~ I just knew it couldn\'t be true because You & Jeremiah are far too too Happy for you to taste Forbidden Fruit ! So i will have to be Happy going on just being your LOVING BROTHER ! (which is much better than just being one of your 120 MPS Friends !) Love & Hugs BROTHER BRIAN XOX
September 24th, 2017 11:17
Fall From Grace
Michael Edwards said:
As requested I\'ll be gentle with you Christina - great stuff.
September 24th, 2017 11:06
Michael Edwards said:
As requested I\'ll be gentle with you Christina - great stuff.
September 24th, 2017 11:06
Fall From Grace
orchidee said:
I could not bother about the metre, as I often do. I swooned before I could check it out! heehee.
September 24th, 2017 09:33
orchidee said:
I could not bother about the metre, as I often do. I swooned before I could check it out! heehee.
September 24th, 2017 09:33
Growing Pains
FredPeyer said:
Christinie, thank you for this poem. It reminded me again how thankful I should be to live in peace, on a beautiful island, with electricity, enough food, enough work, enough money. Sometimes we, in the USA, forget what a sheltered life we have. But, it could all come crashing down, especially considering that we are well within reach of these rockets from North Korea. A sobering thought.
September 23rd, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Christinie, thank you for this poem. It reminded me again how thankful I should be to live in peace, on a beautiful island, with electricity, enough food, enough work, enough money. Sometimes we, in the USA, forget what a sheltered life we have. But, it could all come crashing down, especially considering that we are well within reach of these rockets from North Korea. A sobering thought.
September 23rd, 2017 22:03
Growing Pains
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written Christina, so much horror in the world and it is now being enhanced by two meglomaniacs.
September 23rd, 2017 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written Christina, so much horror in the world and it is now being enhanced by two meglomaniacs.
September 23rd, 2017 00:31
Growing Pains
WL Schuett said:
I\'m with you I feel it too it effects all of us with no end in sight , you expressed yourself well !
September 22nd, 2017 19:24
WL Schuett said:
I\'m with you I feel it too it effects all of us with no end in sight , you expressed yourself well !
September 22nd, 2017 19:24
Growing Pains
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the beginning of the end,read the bible,it`s all there
September 22nd, 2017 18:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
the beginning of the end,read the bible,it`s all there
September 22nd, 2017 18:12
Growing Pains
kevin browne said:
a very well covered and wise poem. I love the thoughts you share.
September 22nd, 2017 17:38
kevin browne said:
a very well covered and wise poem. I love the thoughts you share.
September 22nd, 2017 17:38
Growing Pains
Accidental Poet said:
The two overgrown kids having temper tantrums threatening throw his big bad toys at each other. Wish I could tell them both to just grow up and act like the leaders you are, not the children that they\'re not. Excellent expression of what everyone is thinking Christina. ; )
September 22nd, 2017 16:33
Accidental Poet said:
The two overgrown kids having temper tantrums threatening throw his big bad toys at each other. Wish I could tell them both to just grow up and act like the leaders you are, not the children that they\'re not. Excellent expression of what everyone is thinking Christina. ; )
September 22nd, 2017 16:33
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