Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



EARTH
dusk arising said:

I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off.
Provider of big holes for the dead to give life.
Once again your short pieces inspire.

June 19th, 2019 01:34

EARTH
Goldfinch60 said:

Such truth,
so few words,
for us to know.

June 19th, 2019 01:26

MY STAFF
dusk arising said:

The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great composition.
Put it upon a plaque and sell it by the thousand.

June 18th, 2019 12:35

MY STAFF
Suresh said:

\"Lean on me\", says the staff, and if you can hear that then you are truly listening to your inner voice.

June 18th, 2019 10:58

MY STAFF
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Village Scene makes me Hungry to get on the Housing Ladder with Angela ! Its OK for Folk like you to talk about Staff. In my post as Head of Applied Science I have four Academic Staff and Two Technicians working under me ! So like MOSES Im leaning on MY STAFF ! I inherited TWO Academics and a Technician and the others I appointed ! We all work well together and they are satisfied with their Grades (SO FAR !) Together with me thats a perfect number SEVEN STAFF ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check BALANCED DIET !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 18th, 2019 10:42

MY STAFF
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I love this poem and painting!
‘The strength of self-belief’
has pulled me out of many perilous situations!

~Laura~

P.S.- If this painting is not available, I’d like to commission you to paint one just like it for me! Thank you!

June 18th, 2019 02:20

MY STAFF
orchidee said:

A nice write and pic Michael. I dunno - I thought of the song \'My faith it is an oaken staff\' first sung at Primary School - millions of years ago then! I understand the need for self-belief, but I wouldn\'t want to rely entirely on me.
Meanwhile - Is Miss Berles on your staff work-team?

June 18th, 2019 01:48

MY STAFF
Neville said:

I am a great believer in relying only on oneself......

nice words and a great painting Michael..

June 18th, 2019 01:17

MY STAFF
Goldfinch60 said:

May that self belief always be with you Michael. I am sure that it will.

June 18th, 2019 00:31

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
dusk arising said:

And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you - to see you nice\".

June 17th, 2019 05:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Neville said:

I rarely look at what my reviewing peers post.. but on this occasion, I have come to rest firmly on Goldfinch60\'s perch... and I aint talkin fish.. I reckon if we aint careful we could be up the creek without a decent paddle.....

June 17th, 2019 04:43

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the RURAL SCENE ! Back @ work again today : its 10pm and Im shattered after 2 clinics and AQUAROBICS ! Your Poem sounds PAINFUL ~ They would need a bit of Chiropracty and Spinal manipulation after that anal manouvre !

BLESSINGS & Love to you and Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY !

June 17th, 2019 03:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
orchidee said:

Oh lol, a fun write, and good pic M.

June 17th, 2019 01:59

From \'A COLLECTION\' (13)
Goldfinch60 said:

Now I wonder who you are talking about, I have two people in mind and it could be either of them.

June 17th, 2019 01:01

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE MIKEY : ANGELA here nearly 10pm here NOW THE DAY IS OVER in Auckland ! FELIZ DIA DEL PADRE ! I hope to make BRIAN a Daddy very soon ! Love the Cottage there are lots like that in Essex : We may BUY one like that ! When we settle on a HOUSE (good to get on the Ladder) Our two DADS have promised to give us the Deposit as a WEDDING PRESENT ! My PAPA is still in Los Angeles promoting RIOJA (much better than Californian Reds) and the Hispaniscs love it ! BRIAN is taking His Parents out to lunch today to the Steak House. We are fortunate because my Parents LOVE BRIAN & BRIANS PARENTS adore ME ~ AMEN
Love the DOUBLET : very true ! BRIAN & I have both studied NUTRITION so we both EAT & DRINK sensibly. My JOB keeps me thin : Did you ever see an Obese Physiotherapist and Brians Job keeps him focussed and Aqua-Therapy keeps him TONED !

Blessings & Joy To YOU & YOURS
Have fun with your FAMILY today
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 16th, 2019 04:04

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Nice shortie!
I love the painting!
Is it for sale?

HAPPY FATHER’S DAY!☺️

~Laura~


June 16th, 2019 02:26

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
dusk arising said:

Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.

Take that as definite from this old fart.

June 16th, 2019 01:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
Goldfinch60 said:

I am on two diets, one doesn\'t give me enough to eat.

Love the view of the artwork. were you hiding in the grass Michael?

June 16th, 2019 01:33

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic M. Why are farts always old?!

June 16th, 2019 01:25

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
dusk arising said:

Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.

Take that as definite from this old fart.

June 16th, 2019 01:19

SUMMER IDYL
Suresh said:

In my hunt for piece left to time, I landed on this today - it reminds me of one I have been formulating for a week, and thus - your poem resonates.
A fine description of a day to daydream and I shall love to lie down with your pic, under a shady three on field of green grass.

June 15th, 2019 12:19

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A good write and a bit naughty too.

Ha! Ha!:Good stuff!

Arabella, the name conjures up for me a woman who\'d appear in a Thomas Hardy novel.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:42

MILE OVEN DYE
Neville said:

splendid.. I like everything about this little pearl of a poem.... nowt lost in translation neither.... Neville

June 15th, 2019 08:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A super write with a superb picture too.

Lovely.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:38

FIVE THIRTY PM
Suresh said:

A simple moment in time, yet so poetically expressed

June 12th, 2019 11:08

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Neville said:

Twixt or tween if ya know what I mean...
Ah\' our Arabella was fair
when she let em come up for air... there\'s nowt like a sensual interlude, is there....... N



June 11th, 2019 17:17

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Suresh said:

The innocence of Arabella and the town are both evident as displayed here.

June 11th, 2019 16:13

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Fay Slimm. said:

Love it - your rhyming in this four liner is perfect - the watercolour makes me want to move into the house on far right - -another delightful read and view Michael.

June 11th, 2019 11:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BON APRES MIDI ~ Mon Oncle Mike ~ BRIAN HERE ! Love all the Village Scenes ~ so so Cotswoldy ! Give me Rubenesque Ladies ~ Plenty of Places to lay my weary HEAD ! Size ZERO & Anorexic Ladies do NOT reflect the ample proportions of EVE ~ Earth*s Eternal Mother ! What is ANGELA like ? Well she is a PHYSIO and has to subdue MALE ATHLETES ! She is very Beautiful and also very FIT ! For Men your age think GINA LOLLABRIGIA ~ OK

Blessings & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check TOOTHACHE ~ Thanks B !

June 11th, 2019 10:09

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
MendedFences27 said:

Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured village street? The art is idyllic and causes one to want to be there, likewise the poetry.I\'m guessing Arabella lives in the red house second on the right. A very invigorating morning greeting for me. Thank you. - Phil A.

June 11th, 2019 09:27



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