Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



STILL LAMENTING
orchidee said:

Sometimes I\'m not surprised if some places catch fire - candles with wooden pews - bit dodgy health and safety wise!
Miss Berles may have his candle.

April 21st, 2019 01:55

THE LUMBERING KINE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE MIKE ~ ITS 9am Sunday here seems like Ive dies & gone to Heaven (must be JET LAG) I was woken by an ANGEL this morning with Coffee and criosants ~ she loked just like ANGELA ! Thanks for all yiour nic comments on Angelas Poems ! I guess I ve arrived back in AUCKLAND ! Love the PIC ~ I can see COWS ? Love the POEM one of a KINE ?
Blessings & Peace
Yours BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 20th, 2019 15:14

THE LUMBERING KINE
dusk arising said:

constrained by numbers
from intent the poet blunders
restriction conquers


April 20th, 2019 08:37

THE LUMBERING KINE
Suresh said:

It\'s good to know that only humans but even kine are enjoying your landscape

April 20th, 2019 02:39

THE LUMBERING KINE
orchidee said:

I saw some kine in a field again recently. A lovely write and pic Michael.

April 20th, 2019 01:52

THE LUMBERING KINE
Fay Slimm. said:

Another super three liner and oh what a wonderfully clear watercolour - you have fantastic talent Michael.

April 20th, 2019 00:48

THE LUMBERING KINE
Goldfinch60 said:

There is a great deal said in these few words Michael.

Fabulous artwork.

April 20th, 2019 00:41

BOOK OF DESTINY
Suresh said:

Is this a sequel or a prequel?
Will need endless lifetimes, and when finally the end comes, somebody else will have to finish the final chapter, or the final sentence or at least put a period at the end.

Your thought only took eight words, and my ramblings still going on.....

April 19th, 2019 11:55

BOOK OF DESTINY
dusk arising said:

5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

Poetry or arithmetic?

April 19th, 2019 04:34

BOOK OF DESTINY
Fay Slimm. said:

Destiny\'s book will have no ending methinks dear friend. A profound three liner for the weekend.

April 19th, 2019 03:02

BOOK OF DESTINY
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Happy Easter UNCLE MIKE : Its 8pm here & Brian is in the AIR and will be here tomorrow. Your picture is very enigmatic and there could be a plethora of interpretation : its all in the mind ! My first impression (as orientated) is of a sunken & abandoned Sailing Dingy sticking out of the water ? That image related to the Poem : which I read as referring to all the MSS Brian & I have written but NEVER published ! At least on MPS ones Poetry is highlighted for 2 days and does solicit comment ! I do print ALL MINE & BRIAN\'S and share them with Family & Friends.
Thanks : Your Poems & Pics make us THINK !
Blessings & Joy @ EASTER
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 19th, 2019 02:14

BOOK OF DESTINY
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. the pic looks like a heart to me, with its two sides and four chambers.
I have many words waiting to be sung. Pity it\'s me singing them but that can\'t be helped! lol. Meoowwoo - hear me?!

April 19th, 2019 01:54

BOOK OF DESTINY
Neville said:

smashing

I got a signed second edition

Neville

April 19th, 2019 01:50

BOOK OF DESTINY
Goldfinch60 said:

I have many words waiting to go into books.

April 19th, 2019 01:34

LIVING IN A DREAM
MendedFences27 said:

Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there?
With \"closed eyes\" to see \"sunlight\" is truly a \"dream.\" Well said. _ Phil A.

April 18th, 2019 18:41

LIVING IN A DREAM
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening Uncle Michael : Im holding the FORT for BRIAN ! That is no Dream : Its the GLACIER in Taceys Arm in ALASKA (awesome sight !) and its falling into the SEA : its a NIGHTMARE ! Iguess in a snse we all increasingly live in a DREAM : AMEN ! Im dreaming BRIAN will be here with Me on Saturday having flown 11,500 miles : I just hope my DREAM comes TRUE !
Blessings & PEACE
LOVE : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 18th, 2019 15:29

LIVING IN A DREAM
dusk arising said:

Super shortie today. I transposed the first two lines as soon as i read it. My mind plays games with words as you would expect.

Amazing picture too.

April 18th, 2019 05:20

LIVING IN A DREAM
Lorna said:

It\'s a sun lite fjord and evening is coming on and I love the picture even with my eyes closed.

April 18th, 2019 04:46

LIVING IN A DREAM
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

The color scheme of your painting could not have been better...
to enable the voyeur to...
‘live in a dream’!
Remarkable!

~Laura~

April 18th, 2019 04:33

LIVING IN A DREAM
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. I thought you was writing about me, and my attempts to sing, with that title - otherwise known as Cloud Cuckoo Land?!

April 18th, 2019 01:57

LIVING IN A DREAM
Suresh said:

You saw it in your mind, before the brush dipped into the first color.
A beautiful composition

April 18th, 2019 00:42

LIVING IN A DREAM
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dream never fail you.

April 18th, 2019 00:41

LIVING IN A DREAM
Fay Slimm. said:

What a lovely morning surprise - picture and words most engaging. Thanks for this great first read of my day Mike.

April 18th, 2019 00:20

LIVING IN A DREAM
Neville said:

a sight for sore eyes indeed.. I feel a smile coming on... nice one Michael......... Neville

April 18th, 2019 00:18

WOMAN IN BLACK
dusk arising said:

Just as it should be, unless the widow wishes to look attractive.
In all, sadness portrayed. Very powerful piece. Less is more.

April 17th, 2019 06:28

WOMAN IN BLACK
Fay Slimm. said:

Three good words you use here for describing the colour of mourning in this country - - - it certainly can look woebegone and ungainly too on some forlorn people. Love the mist in your picture today Mike.

April 17th, 2019 04:28

WOMAN IN BLACK
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the Pic n\' Poem ! BLACK is an almost Universal Coulour of Mourning ! I often add a touch of PINK to my BLACK SUIT for a FUNERAL !
Blessings & Love to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 17th, 2019 03:02

WOMAN IN BLACK
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles wear black?

April 17th, 2019 01:59

WOMAN IN BLACK
Suresh said:

Tragedy is draped in different colors around the globe - in India, it is white

Your art is always mesmerizing

April 17th, 2019 01:55

WOMAN IN BLACK
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing picture; how to you get that out of focus effect?
I can do it with a camera time and time again (and deliberately).

April 17th, 2019 01:05



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