Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Neville said:

most chucklesome sir...

April 29th, 2019 06:18

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Angela & I have missed your Droll Ditties and Periodic Pictures ! Im 6 feet 1 inch and Angela is 5\' 7\" so we meet in all the right places except when were 11,500 miles apart ~ even we cant stretch to that ! Loving the TREES !
Please enjoy our Posting on Mount Cook
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

Its 11:30pm here ~ just catching up on MPS
We are in Glacier Caravan Park waiting for DAWN !

April 29th, 2019 05:28

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
orchidee said:

Yez - fings like \'I woz ere\'. Woz I? Bit swoony write M. Woof? It\'s OK Fido, no need for 18+.

April 29th, 2019 02:18

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Fay Slimm. said:

Good to have you back posting again Michael and what a laugh the fun-verse raised for my first read of the day - - - talk about the long and short of being in love !!

April 29th, 2019 01:45

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Goldfinch60 said:

Like the artwork, was the fence done with a wheel or something like that?

April 29th, 2019 01:16

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write.

Plese do nott get me starrted: on gramer; and, punctuition; it\' is somefing that anoys@ me wen peple dont\' get it\' write?

April 29th, 2019 01:15

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
dusk arising said:

I laughed out loud at \'her lips were never long enough\'. Thank you for this hilarious start to my week.
Yes one foot, two feet etc. But language is a plastic thing continually changing.... those youngsters use it in way it will continue to be used long after we are dead..... verily i say unto thee.

My punctuation, poor grammar, typos and lack of capitals are a symptom of my accepting and adopting sloppy practice... but most accept it nowadays. After all said and done, writing is just a way of putting the spoken communication onto a screen or papyrus innit?

April 29th, 2019 00:46

ONCE I HAD A LOVER
Michael Edwards said:

Did you see that I wrote 4 feet nine and not 4 foot nine - why do so many get it wrong? One of life\'s irritants.

April 29th, 2019 00:21

THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR
Suresh said:

The solemn sadness of her being is so well equated to the midnight hour


P.S. I travel back, to capture moments missed, the moments so beautifully displayed in your arts.
I hope you don\'t mind.

April 28th, 2019 19:19

MULTITASKING
Suresh said:

If we did
We won\'t be in such a fright

April 27th, 2019 21:42

THE UNKNOWN MAN
Suresh said:

Rejection without understanding
Leaves them tangled on barbed wire fences

Truly

April 27th, 2019 21:35

FARMYARD DARTS
Suresh said:

Should have knocked, before I entered
WTF!!!!!!

Jolly good

April 27th, 2019 21:30

A FULL HEAD OF HAIR
Suresh said:

Lock them up in a room
Till they learn how to groom
Or send them to a jail
If all else fail
Punishment for insulting our sight
A sight, a sight, of such fright

Thnx for the factual comedy

April 27th, 2019 21:26

PARDON ?
dusk arising said:

reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even there!\"


April 24th, 2019 08:03

PARDON ?
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

As I’m silently reading your written words, in my mind they’re beginning to sound like “Valley Girl Talk” from San Francisco, CA!
I enjoyed it!

Love the painting!

~Laura~

April 23rd, 2019 16:07

PARDON ?
Suresh said:

YOU ARE ......

Seems like I am there more and more now.

As always nicely done

April 23rd, 2019 11:23

PARDON ?
Goldfinch60 said:

That reminds of that message that he (or she) gave us, you know the one, the one about whats \'is name.

Great art once more Michael.
( I am off to the Ashmolean in Oxford today to see some more great artwork.)

April 23rd, 2019 02:50

PARDON ?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE ~ Even in our Thirties we can be forgetful ! love the PIC lots of Sea & Lake shores on this trip ! Its nearly 9pm just having supper (Soup and a Sani) before bedding down for the night tired after a long day ! Just room for two in the van ~ please check our POEM !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ~ Together Again ! 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 23rd, 2019 02:49

PARDON ?
Fay Slimm. said:

A very - - ummm - oh I forgot what the subject was in your whatsit.... hhmmmm..........

April 23rd, 2019 01:38

PARDON ?
orchidee said:

Did you get the message in the end? Was it from Ram Berles? He does go on and on.

April 23rd, 2019 01:32

BELLS
Neville said:

so very appealing & on so many levels..... Neville

April 22nd, 2019 11:06

BELLS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the Picture & Medieval Ladder & Achronistic Drill. You are deliberatly making us Home Sick for Essex Villages again ! Love the POEM miss local Essex Church Bells in NZ ! Epic ODE !
Bessings & Peace
Poetic Love A & B (both in NZ ) 🧡🧡🧡🧡

April 22nd, 2019 04:37

BELLS
Suresh said:

Love the pic, and the image your post created

April 22nd, 2019 01:47

BELLS
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Miss Berles practice bell-ringing?

April 22nd, 2019 01:38

BELLS
Nafis Light said:

I could hear the bells loud and clear.

April 22nd, 2019 01:36

BELLS
Fay Slimm. said:

The bell sounds go so well with the times depicted in your picture today - - - - I could spend an age just looking at the expertise you use in watercolour Michael - - love that bent ladder.

April 22nd, 2019 01:06

BELLS
dusk arising said:

Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his shirts.

Ah ringing the changes comes to mind.

April 22nd, 2019 00:25

BELLS
Goldfinch60 said:

The Bells! The Bells! Good one MIchael.

Yet another good artwork - thank you.

April 22nd, 2019 00:18

STILL LAMENTING
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun read Michael.

That artwork is outstanding!

April 22nd, 2019 00:10

STILL LAMENTING
Suresh said:

If only he was still around
Maybe he could have found
Rang the bells alarming sound
Saving roof from burning down


April 21st, 2019 13:00



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