Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE : I Love MINIMLIST drawings ! Initially I saw it as a FLEA escaping from the hair and sliding down her NOSE : The denoument is in the eye of the beholder ! Love the POEM we do hear subliminally in our sleep : expecially the bloop-bleep of a tapping drip !
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check my PEACE POEM : Thanks A !

February 24th, 2019 03:50

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orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Miss Berles do any painting?

February 24th, 2019 03:01

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful minimalist artwork Michael, really like this.

February 24th, 2019 01:20

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Goldfinch60 said:

The mystery of hearing these things in your sleep, are you sure it wasn\'t a dream. Good one Michael.

February 24th, 2019 01:19

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Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Love the Elephant!

The first haiku made me laugh!
The second one not so much!
( I volunteer at a rehab facility and see the effects of addiction!)

~Laura~



February 23rd, 2019 15:20

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Neville said:

unfortunately, even here in what we consider to be a first world country, life is cheap.. you need to find a new dealer Michael.. and a new wrist watch too maybe... N

February 23rd, 2019 10:15

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FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Thank you for this poignant and good write.

Life is precious and priceless sadly drugs do have a very expensive price attached and a tragic one.

Keep writing FineB.

February 23rd, 2019 05:10

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the minimillist ELI ! Bit like the Cheshire Cat : soon just the trip of his tunk ! Love the Haiku !
Just as important to keep ones watch ticking as ones Heart.
Yes its the price that keeps me drug free. In NZ to get a HIGH one just has to breath in (not @ POOY NOOY to much H2S) and look around !
Love in the MEWS : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM it includes Scotlands favourite Painting bought for £8200 in 1952 now worth millions !

February 23rd, 2019 05:06

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I thought The Elephant looked familiar I\'m sure he winked at me but that might have been the cheap drugs...

Morning smiles gratefully received well done again Michael

February 23rd, 2019 03:17

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orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. Miss Berles said to me - Do a minimalist poem - we\'re in short supply of syllables. Used up 99% of them by saying \'minimalist\'.

February 23rd, 2019 02:48

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Goldfinch60 said:

Two more good ones Michael.

February 23rd, 2019 01:22

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Michael Edwards said:

Second version of the elephant having reduced the linework to a minimum .

February 23rd, 2019 01:12

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS NOS ONCLE MIKE ! Love the androgenous sillhoette !
No 1. You cant improve on nature ~ ask Dolly Parton !
No 2. Flat pack = Plat flack !
Thanks for sharing ~
Mas manana por favor ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

February 22nd, 2019 12:18

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Fay Slimm. said:

Oh MIchael -- that flt-pack haiku had me nodding my head in agreement and as for vanity-surgery - well those who have too much cash find it useful perhaps - - methinks the inside core of the heart never needs beauty treatment from any other than self.

February 22nd, 2019 11:17

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Suresh said:

Plastic Surgery- vanity, unless as you say warranted

Flat pack furniture gives a commoner a sense of completion

Enjoyed

February 22nd, 2019 10:40

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dusk arising said:

LOL @ gobbledegook instructions. I bought a set of timer plug ins on ebay... instructions the size of two postage stamps... hi-res scan and enlargement sorted it
Plastic surgery? I think i\'lll just stay ugly rather than uglier..

February 22nd, 2019 07:10

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Neville said:

welcome back... a couple of good uns I see to celebrate with , cheers.... N

February 22nd, 2019 06:28

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Excellent Michael
I do feel the second one
I winced at the first

Sorry could ressist the 575 response
Welcome back!

February 22nd, 2019 03:32

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orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. I thought you was stuck in that building yesterday - the \'Fire Doors - Keep Closed\' one?! Did Miss Berles hear the fire alarm and rescue you? Excuse me while I be sick - saw KK, Kim Kardashian, worse than KP, in a pic. Some would say swoony pic. I just retched!

February 22nd, 2019 03:09

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sylviasearcher said:

Oh I have to confess how I secretly love making flat pack furniture!
It’s because I got a D in craft at school.
It’s a bit like building Lego.
Awesome.
(That’s a quote from the Lego Movie- awesome)!

February 22nd, 2019 02:36

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Goldfinch60 said:

Glad all is fine.

1. Don\'t understand why people have
plastic surgery unless there is a health problem.

2. My one claim to fame in my family is that I have never been to IKEA!

Two more good ones Michael.

February 22nd, 2019 02:07

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Michael Edwards said:

Apologies for not posting or commenting yesterday - a busy day - anyway I\'m back today.

February 22nd, 2019 01:25

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love the mimimalist sketch almost LOWERY !

No 1. Avoid at all costs : give you the VIND ~ makes you go to the LOO !
No 2. A lady would never do that : always a spare pair in my handbag !

Thanks for caring & sharing :
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

February 20th, 2019 17:46

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orchidee said:

Miss Berles have vindaloo?

February 20th, 2019 10:48

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Fay Slimm. said:

Love the fun behind your 575 smiles - - another chuckle to last me all day my friend.

February 20th, 2019 08:11

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dusk arising said:

It was probably the occupier turning themselves inside out after a vindy-\'loo\' session which required the tilling of the soiled garment.
Fun.

February 20th, 2019 07:41

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Neville said:

The first one makes ya think... maybe too much .. the second makes ya stink, too much... nice one two sir... N :)

February 20th, 2019 07:38

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Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Thunderpants turn themselves inside out...
Thank you AGAIN Mchael for the first belly laugh of the day
Don\'t ever change!
Andrew

February 20th, 2019 03:50

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orchidee said:

Oh lol good writes M. I try to get them to save money too - add water to tipples. Dilute them, so they will last longer. No one does though. They only want to shoot me for it!

February 20th, 2019 02:56

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Goldfinch60 said:

I do turn them inside out, once a week is more than enough!

February 20th, 2019 01:40



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