Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Goldfinch60 said:
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with it.
Another super abstract Michael.
May 13th, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
The sheep we had for lunch yesterday only had droppings of mint sauce with it.
Another super abstract Michael.
May 13th, 2019 01:33
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
dusk arising said:
No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
What then shall dance upon them?
May 13th, 2019 01:17
dusk arising said:
No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
What then shall dance upon them?
May 13th, 2019 01:17
OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
At least they fo hard
Great write and pic Micahel
Too big for a stamp this time
May 13th, 2019 01:08
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
At least they fo hard
Great write and pic Micahel
Too big for a stamp this time
May 13th, 2019 01:08
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
dusk arising said:
A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite things\'
Crumpets in toasters
and fresh milk from udders
poems in my head
and onscreen from others
music from Goldie
pictures from M.E.
these are a few of my favourite things
worra larff!
May 12th, 2019 13:31
dusk arising said:
A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite things\'
Crumpets in toasters
and fresh milk from udders
poems in my head
and onscreen from others
music from Goldie
pictures from M.E.
these are a few of my favourite things
worra larff!
May 12th, 2019 13:31
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Suresh said:
Lactose intolerant, but what the hell, I\'ll have it with mini wheats today.
Always a treat
May 12th, 2019 11:34
Suresh said:
Lactose intolerant, but what the hell, I\'ll have it with mini wheats today.
Always a treat
May 12th, 2019 11:34
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Super write.
Crumpets in toasters mmmm....
I like a good croissant in the morning for breakfast heated or unheated.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 04:23
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Super write.
Crumpets in toasters mmmm....
I like a good croissant in the morning for breakfast heated or unheated.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 04:23
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.
Lovely picture too.
Keep writing FineB
May 12th, 2019 04:20
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
Cute poem. Ah life in all its simplicity.
Lovely picture too.
Keep writing FineB
May 12th, 2019 04:20
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Thank you for this superb write.
Always keep the creative process going.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 03:36
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Thank you for this superb write.
Always keep the creative process going.
Keep writing FineB.
May 12th, 2019 03:36
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Hot milk with honey and hot crumpets with butter. Old English bedtime treat ! Its 10pm here and one can buy CRUMPETS in Auckland !
Blessings in all you do
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check SUNRISE - SUNSET : Thanks A
May 12th, 2019 03:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Hot milk with honey and hot crumpets with butter. Old English bedtime treat ! Its 10pm here and one can buy CRUMPETS in Auckland !
Blessings in all you do
Love through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check SUNRISE - SUNSET : Thanks A
May 12th, 2019 03:05
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -- not so obscure to me....good one Mike.
May 12th, 2019 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - -- not so obscure to me....good one Mike.
May 12th, 2019 03:00
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I see you\'ve started your postage stamp range Michael?
Hope the days goes well!!!
Less is more
May 12th, 2019 02:11
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I see you\'ve started your postage stamp range Michael?
Hope the days goes well!!!
Less is more
May 12th, 2019 02:11
OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry if I don\'t comment much today - busy with Open Studios.
May 12th, 2019 00:22
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry if I don\'t comment much today - busy with Open Studios.
May 12th, 2019 00:22
SIMPLISTIC COMPLEXITY
Suresh said:
Poetry is an enigma
For simple minds, like mine, it\'s complex
For complex minds, it\'s simple
Pleasant image, nicely penned
May 11th, 2019 14:42
Suresh said:
Poetry is an enigma
For simple minds, like mine, it\'s complex
For complex minds, it\'s simple
Pleasant image, nicely penned
May 11th, 2019 14:42
IN TRANSCENDENCE
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful write.
I love the picture accompanying your poem the colours are a stunning combination.
Keep writing FineB.
May 11th, 2019 12:03
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A beautiful write.
I love the picture accompanying your poem the colours are a stunning combination.
Keep writing FineB.
May 11th, 2019 12:03
DAY MONTH YEAR
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful poem. Every moment in our lives has its order.
Keep writing FineB
May 11th, 2019 11:59
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A wonderful poem. Every moment in our lives has its order.
Keep writing FineB
May 11th, 2019 11:59
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
MendedFences27 said:
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home), \"Sun rays\" (daytime) , \'Chicken in oven\' (lunch or supper). \"open windows\" (they burnt the chicken).
An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
Abstract by Phil A.
May 10th, 2019 21:39
MendedFences27 said:
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home), \"Sun rays\" (daytime) , \'Chicken in oven\' (lunch or supper). \"open windows\" (they burnt the chicken).
An elderly couple in their old home, either fell asleep or forgot about the chicken they were cooking - .
Abstract by Phil A.
May 10th, 2019 21:39
Dreamers
Suresh said:
I can see myself walking down that familiar avenue - dreaming of days past.
A serene image
May 10th, 2019 13:31
Suresh said:
I can see myself walking down that familiar avenue - dreaming of days past.
A serene image
May 10th, 2019 13:31
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Suresh said:
It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to \'dusk\'. So I wasn\'t a total fool.
Loved the colors in your works today.
May 10th, 2019 11:01
Suresh said:
It taunts the reader to think, but being a simpleton I deduced and then read your response to \'dusk\'. So I wasn\'t a total fool.
Loved the colors in your works today.
May 10th, 2019 11:01
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
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