Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



TEA?
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

An enchanting write. Tea, nothing like a good strong cuppa as a pick me up or a nice cream tea by the coast or tea at the Ritz.

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2019 03:35

TEA?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Ahhhh UNCLE MICHAEL : TEA nectar of the GODS ! I agree with UNCLE ANDY : The English Tea Ceremony : Tea Bags are another example that SATAN does exist. In these dark days one only sees Silver Tea Strainers on Antiques Road Show ! Love the painting very PAINTYFUL !

Blessings & Love - Joy - Peace
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 17th, 2019 02:14

TEA?
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Some say \'A pot of tea, please\'. A whole pot? Depends what size the pot is.
You coming over for a pot of tea with me and Miss Berles?

May 17th, 2019 01:59

TEA?
Goldfinch60 said:

Rwanda Burundi fine tea leaves into a china teapot, freshly boiled water poured into the pot, left to brew for two minutes. Milk into a fine bone china cup, tea poured from the teapot through a strainer and into the cup. That\'s how I would like it Michael.

May 17th, 2019 00:48

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Fay Slimm. said:

Top marks for the artwork and as for the sen. - gotta admit my shoulders found its meaning quite weighty today Mike - must be the peas I had in my salad lunch.............

May 16th, 2019 12:51

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Suresh said:

I see a soaring hawk.
Yes I like the English peas, goes well with \'mutter paneer\'

May 16th, 2019 12:04

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
dusk arising said:

Bring on the pie and eels

May 16th, 2019 06:43

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

everything is better fresh
Like the weather in the Pic Michael... looks bracing is it an acrylic? nicely textured if not

May 16th, 2019 03:52

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Ahhhhh UNCLE MIKE ~ I (BRIAN) have an allotment at College and Greenhouses for teaching BIOLOGY and the taste of PEAS fresh form the POD (Raw or cooked al dente) is indescribable my word is PEASY ! They do need FAGGOTS (a multimeaning word !) to support them but ironically they complements FAGGOTS (a Northern delicasy) as well !
FAGGOTS to GROW & FAGGOTS to GO !
Please check ANGELAS Poem today LA MIA ABUELA and you will learn a few more Spanish words ! It is so like English you can be semi-fluent in a Year already you know thousands of Spanish words ~ you just dont know what they are !

Always wear a HATINTHESUN ~ OK!
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 16th, 2019 03:36

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Poetic Dan said:

Ooo must remember my hat today, top man!

May 16th, 2019 02:42

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You podded and shouldered there now?!

May 16th, 2019 02:11

OBSCURE SENRYUS (6)
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope those peas will be split to go with the faggots.


May 16th, 2019 01:51

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
MendedFences27 said:

Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of beauty and peace leaps out at you. Terrific.

Senryu - It would have been much worse if it had been the apple tree that was bare. - Phil A

May 15th, 2019 13:38

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Fay Slimm. said:

Wow this one tells me a story - not so obscure to my eye Michael - - and that artwork must be one of your best - Ooooh what a hue of a sky.

May 15th, 2019 06:29

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Lorna said:

At least they left the be oooooooooo ti ful picture behind when they stole the clothes.

May 15th, 2019 05:24

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. It\'s Miss Berles fault. You hired her as a house-keeper and she put everything in the wash at once?!

May 15th, 2019 01:57

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING Uncle Mike (7pm here !) Love the Seascape : complements our DESERT ISLAND (please visit & bring some paints - paper - and easel !) Love the LYM (a Ladies nightmare) thank Heaven Ive got long Hair & a Horse ! Lady Godiva rides again : but dont tell BRIAN !

Blessings abundant & Joy & Peace & Love
Yours (shivering !) ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 15th, 2019 01:03

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
dusk arising said:

Oh my what a clanger
The missing coat hanger
and the dressing gown
over a chair

so deft was the gal with that scraper
she\'s ebay-ing her previous wallpaper
a skill not-to-be sniffed at
it comes with a gift pack
a weekend atop a skyscraper

whats going on?

May 15th, 2019 00:24

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Suresh said:

I don\'t know what the H*** everybody is talking about ...... OH! I get it - jibber jabber.

May 14th, 2019 09:27

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Poetic Dan said:

Hahaha, love it! Feels like my nose, recovering from surgery. No sun for me

May 14th, 2019 09:02

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Lorna said:

I love the daft little poem. But - and this is heresy because your paintings are amazing always - but I detest squishy brown bananas and that\'s what this painting is of (yes I know bad sentence ending) - up with which I shall not put. Perhaps there are more of us out here than you know and that\'s why it isn\'t selling.......... overripe banana phobia.

May 14th, 2019 05:11

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Would that be Oogie Berles, as A& B say? You met him/her?

May 14th, 2019 01:56

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
dusk arising said:

raspberry sauce
in banana ice cream
sundae bloody sundae

May 14th, 2019 01:10

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Now you don\'t see those greens evey day Michael
I imagine this is a piece the camera does not do justice to it looks very imposing and imressive
Great work again in both respects

May 14th, 2019 01:03

OBSCURE SENRYUS (5)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BANANAS IN PYJAMAS
IT 7PM HERE IN THE BAHAMAS
SORRY I MEANT AUCKLAND NZ !

Thanks for reprising UNCLE MIKE ~ great Abstraction ~ great Senryu. CONFUSIUS He say *A Banana a Day keep OOGIE OOGIE MAN away*

Keep them coming they brighten our Days & Nights
Tribute to the Late Great DORIS DAY today please visit !
LOVE & HARMONY : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 14th, 2019 01:02

OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Almost midnight here so just trawling MPSS before I retire to bed ! In the abstract i see :

YELLOW BIRDS HIGH IN BANANA TREE

I love all these SENRYUS so so ABSTRACT

Blessings & Love & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 13th, 2019 05:30

OBSCURE SENRYUS (3)
Lorna said:

Extract from udders! Oh ugh.......... and I drink that stuff!

May 13th, 2019 04:24

OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Lorna said:

Rude sheep...........pretty picture.

May 13th, 2019 04:22

OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
Fay Slimm. said:

Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ? Love the painting.

May 13th, 2019 04:09

OBSCURE SENRYUS (4)
orchidee said:

Good write and pic M. You seen Miss Esk - Berle Esqe?

May 13th, 2019 01:58



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