Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
The SCARECROW ~ waved arms
smiled at all the Passers by
wishing it was JUNE !
TOUCHE ~ Angela & Brian 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 10th, 2019 10:40
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle and aging gracefully.
May 10th, 2019 04:29
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
I warn you, you have started something now!
May 10th, 2019 01:10
OBSCURE SENRYUS (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
My first smile of the day Michael, thank you.
May 10th, 2019 01:09
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thank you UNCLE ANDY ! Thursday (Wursday) good day for OBSCURITY. Always commendable to get a FIVE SYLLABLE word into the last line of a SENRYU ! Love the Picture ! We had a talk last night (at College) about the TITANIC by a Lady whose relation had *Gone down with the SHIP !\" In you obstract I saw the TITANIC in the mist & the lifeboats leaving !
Blessings & Joy & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 9th, 2019 06:50
OBSCURE SENRYUS (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Obscure Senryus,
Emotionally untrue,
Abominable.
May 9th, 2019 00:57
INCOMING TIDE
Suresh said:
You paint a beautiful picture here - in both art forms.
Do we not like to pick up treasures brought in by them those waves
May 7th, 2019 10:29
Suresh said:
You paint a beautiful picture here - in both art forms.
Do we not like to pick up treasures brought in by them those waves
May 7th, 2019 10:29
IN TRANSCENDENCE
MendedFences27 said:
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed you \"Beyond the Weir\" into the \"mist\" and \"vapors\' (translation). I climbed \"high\" above the \"waves\" and made a decision. I\'m putting this one into my favorites. No more despair for me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 14:54
MendedFences27 said:
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed you \"Beyond the Weir\" into the \"mist\" and \"vapors\' (translation). I climbed \"high\" above the \"waves\" and made a decision. I\'m putting this one into my favorites. No more despair for me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2019 14:54
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is rendered extinct. Great read Mike.
May 6th, 2019 11:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is rendered extinct. Great read Mike.
May 6th, 2019 11:11
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Neville said:
what a lovely set of words you have left a trail of wonder with today Michael.... Neville
May 6th, 2019 11:08
Neville said:
what a lovely set of words you have left a trail of wonder with today Michael.... Neville
May 6th, 2019 11:08
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Suresh said:
Time is ripe to ride the shadows and finally extinct those thoughts.
Read it a few times to extract all it had to offer.
May 6th, 2019 11:05
Suresh said:
Time is ripe to ride the shadows and finally extinct those thoughts.
Read it a few times to extract all it had to offer.
May 6th, 2019 11:05
IN TRANSCENDENCE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Mike ~ You sure have waxed lyrical today ! Your elegant ODE and bleak landscape reflects how I feel inside separate from My Angel after being so so close. The AGONY is amplified by the ECSTASY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace
Love through ART & POETRY ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 07:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing Uncle Mike ~ You sure have waxed lyrical today ! Your elegant ODE and bleak landscape reflects how I feel inside separate from My Angel after being so so close. The AGONY is amplified by the ECSTASY ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace
Love through ART & POETRY ~
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 6th, 2019 07:58
IN TRANSCENDENCE
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna ramble beyond the weirs then. I never knew there was so much beyond them. Well, I know now, from this fine poem!
May 6th, 2019 02:11
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna ramble beyond the weirs then. I never knew there was so much beyond them. Well, I know now, from this fine poem!
May 6th, 2019 02:11
IN TRANSCENDENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words create a visual image in my mind Michael, that image is mine as others will have their own image in theirs.
Love the artwork.
A great start to the day in both words and art - thank you.
May 6th, 2019 00:53
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
Neville said:
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical point.. there is likely to be some blurring of this from one individual, or culture , to another... well said, say\'s I.... Neville
May 5th, 2019 11:27
SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
Suresh said:
I\'m glad I read the comment first.
You really served this one well
You meant without meaning to
I smiled without knowing why
One day I\'ll catch up, maybe!
May 5th, 2019 11:08
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
I swear, this will make even the Queen smile.
I immediately thought of the event when in my high school, in the mid sixties, an English school in New Delhi, run by Brothers, when I used the word \"bloody\" for the first and only time there, how I was sternly admonished physically and verbally.
WOW! how times have changed.
May 5th, 2019 10:45
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
Poetic Dan said:
What A awesome read on a Sunday
Inspirational words from a one of a kind!
Much appreciated
With peace and respect
May 5th, 2019 05:50
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE Im safe and sound in the UK. Please check ANGELAS POEM (nothing vulgar just one line about COMANDOS !) Angela & I dont like VULGARITY ~ but inuendo and double entendre (a la Caryy on Films and Ken Dodd and Les Dawson etc) is the essence of British Humour and Best Man Speeches are a MINEFIELD ! WE know you would never dishonour your ARTISTIC LICENCE in VISION or in VERSE. We both love BERYL COOK and she is a fine example of an ARTIST who draws a fine line between INUENDO & VULGARITY ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY in all your WORK
Love through Art B & A 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 5th, 2019 03:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing UNCLE MIKE Im safe and sound in the UK. Please check ANGELAS POEM (nothing vulgar just one line about COMANDOS !) Angela & I dont like VULGARITY ~ but inuendo and double entendre (a la Caryy on Films and Ken Dodd and Les Dawson etc) is the essence of British Humour and Best Man Speeches are a MINEFIELD ! WE know you would never dishonour your ARTISTIC LICENCE in VISION or in VERSE. We both love BERYL COOK and she is a fine example of an ARTIST who draws a fine line between INUENDO & VULGARITY ~ AMEN
Blessings & much JOY in all your WORK
Love through Art B & A 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
May 5th, 2019 03:46
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes yes vulgarity smarrity
Upon the licence 04/02 to 04/16 is this period 14 days or 14 years Michael
... and I am concerned about it being awarded by A DAP
I.m not convinced
May 5th, 2019 03:44
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Yes yes vulgarity smarrity
Upon the licence 04/02 to 04/16 is this period 14 days or 14 years Michael
... and I am concerned about it being awarded by A DAP
I.m not convinced
May 5th, 2019 03:44
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
orchidee said:
A good write M. Fido is at hand to bark at any poems that are too much! lol.
May 5th, 2019 01:45
orchidee said:
A good write M. Fido is at hand to bark at any poems that are too much! lol.
May 5th, 2019 01:45
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is that word draws the line where acceptable reading ends for me. Thanks Mike for this well needed reminder and you sure are an artist of distinction.
May 5th, 2019 01:26
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is that word draws the line where acceptable reading ends for me. Thanks Mike for this well needed reminder and you sure are an artist of distinction.
May 5th, 2019 01:26
SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One thing that surprised me many years ago was my father, a very placid man, while my brother and I were growing he only used mild swear words, b\'s mainly but one day when I was in my later teens/early twenties we were going up the pub for a pint when he used the f word for some reason, I think that was the only time I heard him use that word - I was most surprised.
May 5th, 2019 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be surprising how peoples ideas of vulgarity are drawn.
One thing that surprised me many years ago was my father, a very placid man, while my brother and I were growing he only used mild swear words, b\'s mainly but one day when I was in my later teens/early twenties we were going up the pub for a pint when he used the f word for some reason, I think that was the only time I heard him use that word - I was most surprised.
May 5th, 2019 01:04
FROM COMMENTS (3)
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and heard his music being played backwards coming from it, I asked a gardener about it and he said \"Oh yes, he is decomposing\".
May 5th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, thank you.
\"I was passing Beethoven\'s grave and heard his music being played backwards coming from it, I asked a gardener about it and he said \"Oh yes, he is decomposing\".
May 5th, 2019 00:25
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