Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
MARCH 1st 2019
orchidee said:
You given up those choccie biccies for Lent there? What\'s Miss Berles giving up for those 40 days? Cue for a cartoon on Lent?!
March 9th, 2019 12:15
orchidee said:
You given up those choccie biccies for Lent there? What\'s Miss Berles giving up for those 40 days? Cue for a cartoon on Lent?!
March 9th, 2019 12:15
MARCH 1st 2019
MendedFences27 said:
Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and rhyme, blended to perfection. LOved this one to keeps. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:13
MendedFences27 said:
Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and rhyme, blended to perfection. LOved this one to keeps. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2019 12:13
MARCH 1st 2019
JaydeVictoria said:
The flow and format of this poem is breathtaking. I really enjoyed it and of course, brilliant imagery!
March 9th, 2019 07:37
JaydeVictoria said:
The flow and format of this poem is breathtaking. I really enjoyed it and of course, brilliant imagery!
March 9th, 2019 07:37
MARCH 1st 2019
Neville said:
when spring is sprung like this, you just got to smile.... N )
March 9th, 2019 05:59
Neville said:
when spring is sprung like this, you just got to smile.... N )
March 9th, 2019 05:59
MARCH 1st 2019
dusk arising said:
Forget those seasons
global warming\'s here
\'I\'ll be right back\' says Jack Frost
with a sideways sneer
Who needs hot water bottles now we have \'glow-ball\' warming? Turn your central heating off and prepare to bake.
March 9th, 2019 05:47
dusk arising said:
Forget those seasons
global warming\'s here
\'I\'ll be right back\' says Jack Frost
with a sideways sneer
Who needs hot water bottles now we have \'glow-ball\' warming? Turn your central heating off and prepare to bake.
March 9th, 2019 05:47
MARCH 1st 2019
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AH UNCLE MIKE ~ Better late than never ~ A melodius QUARTET of Rhyming Couplets to herald the incoming of SPRING ~ 21st March is the official day which is why Scotland is still experiencing BLIZZARDS ~ Snow from the West and Oval Hail from the South (WALES !).
Your cartoon reminded me of BETTJEMANS CHRISTMAS
No love that in a Family dwells
No carolling in the frosty air
Nor all the steeple shaking bells
Can with this single Truth compare
That God was Man in Palestine
And lives today in BREAD & WINE !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 04:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AH UNCLE MIKE ~ Better late than never ~ A melodius QUARTET of Rhyming Couplets to herald the incoming of SPRING ~ 21st March is the official day which is why Scotland is still experiencing BLIZZARDS ~ Snow from the West and Oval Hail from the South (WALES !).
Your cartoon reminded me of BETTJEMANS CHRISTMAS
No love that in a Family dwells
No carolling in the frosty air
Nor all the steeple shaking bells
Can with this single Truth compare
That God was Man in Palestine
And lives today in BREAD & WINE !
Blessings & Love as always
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 9th, 2019 04:09
MARCH 1st 2019
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensing each line of flow in your beautiful ode depicting change from cold into Spring gave a smile to my first read of the day dear Michael. My thanks for this lyrical read.
March 9th, 2019 02:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Sensing each line of flow in your beautiful ode depicting change from cold into Spring gave a smile to my first read of the day dear Michael. My thanks for this lyrical read.
March 9th, 2019 02:10
MARCH 1st 2019
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are still waiting for winter!
Super write Michael, wonderful imagery in your words.
March 9th, 2019 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Some of us are still waiting for winter!
Super write Michael, wonderful imagery in your words.
March 9th, 2019 01:59
HER VEINS
MendedFences27 said:
The cartoon is almost too close to reality.
The poem ; I like the imagery of the first and last lines especially.
Too much wine and it starts replacing your blood, temporarily one would hope. Nice work. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:05
MendedFences27 said:
The cartoon is almost too close to reality.
The poem ; I like the imagery of the first and last lines especially.
Too much wine and it starts replacing your blood, temporarily one would hope. Nice work. - Phil A.
March 8th, 2019 10:05
HER VEINS
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of an occasion in my youth when the doctor asked for a urine sample and invited me to pee into a bottle over a running tap in his consulting room. Holding my sample up to the light he remarked \"I\'m not quite sure whether i should test this or drink it Mr Dusk\".
March 8th, 2019 05:30
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of an occasion in my youth when the doctor asked for a urine sample and invited me to pee into a bottle over a running tap in his consulting room. Holding my sample up to the light he remarked \"I\'m not quite sure whether i should test this or drink it Mr Dusk\".
March 8th, 2019 05:30
HER VEINS
Fay Slimm. said:
A good lesson in moderation from our talented word-smith and along with the chuckles at your sense of humour in that sketch I have noting but wonder at your constant good output.. Great stuff again my friend.
March 8th, 2019 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A good lesson in moderation from our talented word-smith and along with the chuckles at your sense of humour in that sketch I have noting but wonder at your constant good output.. Great stuff again my friend.
March 8th, 2019 04:18
HER VEINS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : In Auckland the Weather can get quite warm in Summer (Dec Jan Feb) so they do serve Cold Drinks & ice cream as well as Coffee & Biscuits. I have been in Church in the UK for a film evening and in the interval they did come round selling ice cream for 50p ! Love the POEM : Some Elderly Scots Ladies I visit in the UK : have GLENFIDDICH in their veins which requires a zimmer for upright posture (Sounds like a Stanley Holloway Poem) Thanks for scaring : ANGELA (now 10 pm ! Saturday again tomorrow !)
Blessings in Love :
Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : In Auckland the Weather can get quite warm in Summer (Dec Jan Feb) so they do serve Cold Drinks & ice cream as well as Coffee & Biscuits. I have been in Church in the UK for a film evening and in the interval they did come round selling ice cream for 50p ! Love the POEM : Some Elderly Scots Ladies I visit in the UK : have GLENFIDDICH in their veins which requires a zimmer for upright posture (Sounds like a Stanley Holloway Poem) Thanks for scaring : ANGELA (now 10 pm ! Saturday again tomorrow !)
Blessings in Love :
Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 8th, 2019 04:09
HER VEINS
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Did she add water to the wine?
A church was not \'raffling\' wine, but, ahem, \'accepting donations, it being a Sunday. It seems one Vicar had a stage in his Vicarage, and not for Communion purposes. Oohh!
March 8th, 2019 02:54
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Did she add water to the wine?
A church was not \'raffling\' wine, but, ahem, \'accepting donations, it being a Sunday. It seems one Vicar had a stage in his Vicarage, and not for Communion purposes. Oohh!
March 8th, 2019 02:54
HER VEINS
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope the wine was as good as your words.
As for the cartoon - you\'ve been to our Church then?
March 8th, 2019 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope the wine was as good as your words.
As for the cartoon - you\'ve been to our Church then?
March 8th, 2019 02:08
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess. But if you twist your tongue and ask for Coffee Toffee they probably won\'t have any. We shy away from Toffee, but we have lots of Taffy, and you can get Caffy Taffy....Oops, now I\'m doing it. Well you sure made me smile today. Thanks - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:34
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess. But if you twist your tongue and ask for Coffee Toffee they probably won\'t have any. We shy away from Toffee, but we have lots of Taffy, and you can get Caffy Taffy....Oops, now I\'m doing it. Well you sure made me smile today. Thanks - Phil A.
March 7th, 2019 22:34
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
dusk arising said:
That\'s beyond a choke!
My coffee is either mocha beans or kenyan.... i don\'t like the bitterness of most beans. Oh yes, i once had blue mountain beans which are four times the price... it wasn\'t four times as good though.
March 7th, 2019 15:01
dusk arising said:
That\'s beyond a choke!
My coffee is either mocha beans or kenyan.... i don\'t like the bitterness of most beans. Oh yes, i once had blue mountain beans which are four times the price... it wasn\'t four times as good though.
March 7th, 2019 15:01
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
Neville said:
I take mine very strong and black.. no sugar.... I like turkey too, I might add and with loads of sage and onion stuffing and gravy and roast potatoes and and ........ N
March 7th, 2019 06:30
Neville said:
I take mine very strong and black.. no sugar.... I like turkey too, I might add and with loads of sage and onion stuffing and gravy and roast potatoes and and ........ N
March 7th, 2019 06:30
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha- your witty sketches have me chuckling again Mike - -- I love the expressions on those surprised faces - -- and as for the verse tis a pleasure to see the juggle of words rhymed to perfection........ a fave for sure.
March 7th, 2019 06:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha- your witty sketches have me chuckling again Mike - -- I love the expressions on those surprised faces - -- and as for the verse tis a pleasure to see the juggle of words rhymed to perfection........ a fave for sure.
March 7th, 2019 06:23
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
sylviasearcher said:
Although I’m not that fond of toffee nor coffee they have both got stuck in my mouth. lol
March 7th, 2019 04:02
sylviasearcher said:
Although I’m not that fond of toffee nor coffee they have both got stuck in my mouth. lol
March 7th, 2019 04:02
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE : We\'re both on a food kick today but I\'ll wager my Lamb & Claret against your COFFEE / TOFFEE any day !
Your cartoon reminded me of BEN ZEPHANIAS : Be kind to Yo Turkey : This Christmas ! Thanks for sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 7th, 2019 03:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE : We\'re both on a food kick today but I\'ll wager my Lamb & Claret against your COFFEE / TOFFEE any day !
Your cartoon reminded me of BEN ZEPHANIAS : Be kind to Yo Turkey : This Christmas ! Thanks for sharing
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
March 7th, 2019 03:52
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael. I seen a couple of cats in church, but they were not the \'church cats\', so they didn\'t catch the church mice.
March 7th, 2019 02:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael. I seen a couple of cats in church, but they were not the \'church cats\', so they didn\'t catch the church mice.
March 7th, 2019 02:45
TOFFEE AND COFFEE
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant fun write Michael and great cartoon.
Some years ago at our Church I was on duty and arrived early and a swan was waiting by the entrance to get in. I enticed it back to the river with biscuits. I also wrote a poem about it, if I remember I\'ll put it up tomorrow.
March 7th, 2019 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant fun write Michael and great cartoon.
Some years ago at our Church I was on duty and arrived early and a swan was waiting by the entrance to get in. I enticed it back to the river with biscuits. I also wrote a poem about it, if I remember I\'ll put it up tomorrow.
March 7th, 2019 02:27
YOU DO NOT SEE
Suresh said:
Whether it\'s in the form of a cartoon or words, in the worst moment possible look for something to make you smile.
Thnx
March 6th, 2019 17:04
Suresh said:
Whether it\'s in the form of a cartoon or words, in the worst moment possible look for something to make you smile.
Thnx
March 6th, 2019 17:04
RICIN\'S NICE
Neville said:
raisins are nice sultanas are too but currants can be shocking, whereas prunes will make you .. ...best not go there maybe.... nice one Michael... N
March 6th, 2019 12:21
Neville said:
raisins are nice sultanas are too but currants can be shocking, whereas prunes will make you .. ...best not go there maybe.... nice one Michael... N
March 6th, 2019 12:21
RICIN\'S NICE
MendedFences27 said:
To the point, shouldn\'t there be \"Up\" and \"Down\" arrows. At least for the faithful.
As to the Ricin, just put it in the \"Marmite.\" No one will notice. Another good chuckle and cartoon. I think your soul may be in danger though. -Phil A.
March 6th, 2019 09:15
MendedFences27 said:
To the point, shouldn\'t there be \"Up\" and \"Down\" arrows. At least for the faithful.
As to the Ricin, just put it in the \"Marmite.\" No one will notice. Another good chuckle and cartoon. I think your soul may be in danger though. -Phil A.
March 6th, 2019 09:15
RICIN\'S NICE
dusk arising said:
Whatever next... congregational traffic wardens ?... coned off \'aisle works\'?... traffic Altar-ations?... One way worship?.... Prayers merging from the left?..... no parking on the vergers?
Youve put me off my breakfast bowl of ricin crispies... snap, crackle and pop-ya-clogs came to mind.
March 6th, 2019 04:28
dusk arising said:
Whatever next... congregational traffic wardens ?... coned off \'aisle works\'?... traffic Altar-ations?... One way worship?.... Prayers merging from the left?..... no parking on the vergers?
Youve put me off my breakfast bowl of ricin crispies... snap, crackle and pop-ya-clogs came to mind.
March 6th, 2019 04:28
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